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Review of Worlds apart

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and poignant. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is nice as is the descriptive. You paint this picture of love for a sibling who passed in a lovely shower of moonlight and the calm of light blue ocean's tide.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. A good mix of near perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express love and pain you feel for the loss of your brother beautifully in this poem. The reader senses how much you miss him while you know that the love you shared with him is stronger than ever.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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#3233587

Review of Two Poems

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

Good titles that fit the themes of your poems "Belief" and "I'm a Clown"

Form/Style:

Both poems are written well and come from your heart. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

In both pieces flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

In "Belief" nice metaphor: 'travel through life's bed of roses' and simile: 'fly like the joyous dove' - both are good comparisons.

Rhyme:

In both poems, rhyme is good as is their rhyme schemes. In "Belief" near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. In "I'm a Clown" every second line in each couplet is near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this poem.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling in both poems. You express your beliefs with conviction, laughter and love.

Word Choice:

Word choice in both poems is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling in "Belief" and strong use of repetition for emphasis in "I'm a clown". In both poems nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Both poems are well penned and enjoyable reads. Write on.

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#3233575

Review of Lights of Darkness

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about people dear to your heart. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the seasons and being able to count on family and friends to make you feel better when you feel sad while traveling in this journey of life.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'windows of mind get opened,'

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good. Nice mix of near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about friends and family who encourage and uplift you beautifully in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233568

Review of My Music

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of music and how it soothes you when you're sad and depressed and after listening to it you are refreshed.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'through all darkness, sorrow's knife, music gives me breath of life.' A good descriptive and comparision in regards to music's affect on your life.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good. A nice mix of perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. Your love of music and its affects on you is uplifting and shines brightly in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233562

Review of God's creations

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and conversation between a lion and photographer. Imaginative. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming couplets which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of contrasts between the points of view of the lion and photographer. Through the lens of your eye we see predator, prey, hunger, the sounds of the jungle (in nature and in the city), in this world of no boundaries created by God.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. A good conversation between man and animal as you express their outlooks and feelings within this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned, write on.

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#3233553

Review of Deep in my heart

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and message. Heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy and prefer.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your thoughts about how you live your life with conviction in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition of 'I have to live' at the beginning of stanzas 1,2,3,4 and 6 for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233546

Review of For my friends

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write and dedicatory piece about true friendship. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion: in your second stanza line 4, a comma after own would give emphasis and make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abab ccaacd. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in stanza 1 line 4 (my, sky).

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express the importance of your friendship and love for these people with poignance in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233528

Review of If I had known

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry that I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is nice; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the unique rhyme scheme: abcdec afcdgc accdhc. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about understanding your friends better if you'd known that you were able to nicely in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; strong use of repetition for emphasis of feeling to overcome misunderstandings. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned. Write on.

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#3233514

Review of My plants and I

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about curiosity of growing things with child-like quality. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. The reader sees the awe and wonder in growing things that we see through the lens of a child's eye.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is nice. Nice mix of near rhyme and near perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you capture a child's enchantment about plants, how they grow and how they must live hand in hand with us.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233274

Review of Dark Angel

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about this 'dark angel' that is a joy in your life. Well crafted free verse.

Imagery:

Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye and the brush of your pen, you paint a nice picture of this person whom you card deeply for and is a light in your life.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts and will make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express the beauty you see in his character and the light of hope and love that you are blessed with in your relationship.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233261

Review of Just One Moment

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about your love and relationship with this very special person in your life. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry that I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically place comma at natural pauses will give emphasis of feeling and make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Every second/fourth line of each stanza is perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your feelings about your love and relationship beautifully in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233253

Review of In My Life

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry that I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcdc aceee afgcg ahibj. Near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your thoughts about your life with conviction in this poem as well as the love you have for this special person who means so much to you.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; strong use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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#3233232

Review of Perfection

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis and make the flow and rhythm of the poem even better in my opinion.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your feelings about being perfect and not being able to live up to the expectations of this person you care for with verve in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233215

Review of Painted World

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt words of love. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'through painted worlds you have shown me kindness, joy and happiness' simply lovely.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express the loving care this person has for you that brings you warmth and passion.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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#3233210

Review of Ensnared

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye, you paint a picture of your being pulled in many directions making you anxious and upset.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically place comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts and well as making the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'tangled in the bitter web of lies and deceit'

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your feelings about being pulled apart in a powerful way in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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#3233200

Review of Someone Else?

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis and also make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your pain and heartache about his not really understanding who you are and although you loved him unconditionally, he wasn't able to do that for you in return.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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#3233197

Review of The Reason

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about the man you love. Well crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your love and desire for him with passion. The reader can sense how important he is to your happiness.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration and assonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned. Write on.

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#3233188

Review of The Tides

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about the moon and its control over the tides. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry that I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the tides of the ocean that ebb and flow with each quarter of the moon.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: aabc ddee ffgg. Nice mix of perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece.

Tone:

Nice depth of feeling. You express the beauty and power of the moon which will calm the tides or cause storms in nature.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of the moon's power. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3233173

Review of The Crossroads

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and empathetic. Well crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your compassion for your friend as you stand by him in an encouraging and loving way as he is at a crossroad that is painful.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned, write on.

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#3233099

Review of Friday

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about Friday, the last day of the work week. A skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming acrostic.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: ababcc dedeff ghghcc. A mix of perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express the happiness that Friday brings especially the fact that at the end of the day you start the weekend. Your love for Friday's shines in this piece and I can relate to it.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling about Friday's. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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Review of Sky Flowers

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and skillfully crafted rhyming Rictamter. Perfect form. Lovely presentation and aesthetics.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of these 'sky flowers' that give excitement to those who ride within them.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice simile: 'an amazing bouquet, in a new guise, as flowers of the sky arise' a lovely comparison and descriptive of colorful hot air balloons.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Nice depth of feeling; you express the astonishment of these travelers beautifully in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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Review of I am here for a reason

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write. A well crafted quatrain, free style metered rhyming poetry.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abab. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for this special person beautifully in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned. Write on.

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#3232603

Review of In Search Of My Stolen Heart

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about falling in love. Skillfully crafted free verse that is short, concise and succinct.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Just a note, you don't need the semi colon at the end of line four. If you remove it the flow and rhythm will be even better in my opinion.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for this person who has drawn you to her, capturing your heart.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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Review of I will always be there for you.......

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write. Heartfelt and compassionate. Nice blend of free verse and free style metered rhyming poetry.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is nice as is the rhyme scheme in the first stanza: abcb. The second/fourth line of the first stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion; you express your love for this person, your empathy for her and willingness to always be there for her.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned. Write on.

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Review of The Wooded Path

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about your walk in the woods lost in thought. Well crafted free style rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of leaves falling from trees on your Autumn walk while chilly winds blow and at the same setting your soul free.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Nice mix of near rhyme and near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about living and the things that bind us together in our journey of life.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned. Write on.

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