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Review of Dragonfly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your prose. A good write and well crafted prose poetry. Imagery: is good with vivid descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of this beautiful garden that we see through your eyes. Flow: is good, smooth and rhythmic. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your delight of nature very well in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of Buzz  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your story. A good write and well crafted story and message about addiction and the death it can bring. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a tragic picture with this short piece. Flow: is good. Nice rhythm. Tone: expresses the darkness of addiction and the resulting pain. Word choice: is good. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Waves of Pain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. A very nice short piece, concise and succinct. Imagery: is nice as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of pain that is seen through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the pain of your heart very well. Word choice: is good. Write on.
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Review of Lost Souls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good dark write. Thought provoking, an interesting way to view the soul. Nice metaphor. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done; nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; bleak and gloomy. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and nice assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of The New Earth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Nice use of simile. Uplifting and encouraging. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; nice mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling. you express your faith in the new earth beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nice question in to be answered by the reader in your final two lines. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Choices  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of our poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Thoughtful. Nice use of repetition. Very nicely crafted couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express yourself about choices thoughtfully with just a bit of humor in your final couplet. Word choice: is good and nice assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Why Do You Ask?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write, heartfelt and dramatic. Very good use of repetion for emphasis of feeling. Nice form and use of predominantly rhyming triplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique rhyme scheme. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts well in this poem in asking why this person asks about how you feel and what caused it. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of The Watermelon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good write. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of the watermellon, it's taste and refreshment during the summer season. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your enjoyment of love for this fruit, something I can relate to. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Morning Light  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Romantic. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good; very nice descriptives. You paint a lovely picture that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for this special person with tenderness. Word choice: is good, nice simile. Nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of New Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. A well crafted haiku. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 form. Imagery: is nice as are the descriptives. Nice image of sunset as day is done and the world sleeps. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of A Distant Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that suits the subject of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and romantic. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme utilized very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love tenderly and though you are apart for the moment you look forward to being reunited, love shines. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned and a most enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of what family means  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and loving. Nicely crafted free verse. Imagery: is good with vivid descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of your memories of your family and the fun you have with each other that extended through the years. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically place comma or two will smooth out the flow and rhythm, but this is just my opinion. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; the love you have for your family shines brightly in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and strong assonance. Very nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of I Am A Cornfield  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good short write. Nice humor. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptive. You paint a picture of a cornfield and scarecrow that any reader can see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good, line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling, with the twist of this being the farmer's cash crop. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Give me this...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice title. A very good write and skillfully craft prose. Romantic and sensual. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is good with very nice descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of this special moment at sunrise of waking up with your beloved, looking upon her through the lens of love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your feelings for her shine in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, you have a typo at the end of your first line, 'im' should be I'm. Other than that, this is well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of New Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and skillfully crafted free verse. Concise and succinct. Imaginative. Nice use of metaphor and simile. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; a very nice way to describe new life. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of I Stand Alone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A lovely poem which is predominantly free verse with
a bit of rhyme mixed in. Very nicely creative.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Is very good; vivid descriptives. You paint a beautiful
picture of the world and how you relate to in through the
lens of your eyes.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done.
Very nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Metaphor or Simile:*Star**Star*
Strong use of simile. You use it skillfully comparing
yourself to trees bending on a breeze, sunshine emitting
its light and stars in vast night sky. Poetic.
Nice use of metaphor 'a small fish in the great sea'.

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Nice use of rhyme. When used it is perfect masculine end
line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling; calm and serene and at the same
time rejoicing in the life you lead. I can relate.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Is good as is the alliteration and assonance; excellent
use of repetition for emphasis on how you live your life.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
A delightful poem that I enjoyed very much. A most
enjoyable read.


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Review of Trees, Antebellum  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that suits the subject of your poem. A good write. Concise, precise and succinct. Nice use of personification. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a scene that we can see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling. Word choice: is good with nice assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and heartfelt tribute to our soldiers. Flow: is very good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme every other line which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; a beautiful way to honor and thank our troops for the freedoms they secure for us. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Faith  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your prose poem. A good write and message. Thought provoking. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your faith beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Twas the night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt rendering of Christ's birth. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of worship of our Lord's birth. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your faith beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. There is a typo in line two of your second stanza, 'angles' should be angels. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Listening  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write; lyrical, heartfelt and introspective. Very nice use of simile and repetition for emphasis regarding your thoughts. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your thoughts and feelings to someone close to you, a cry for them to listen. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Encouraging. A skillfully crafted rhyming acrostic. Nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line and transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme in unique rhyme scheme. Tone: good depth of feeling, a message that we can all relate to. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Soothing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write and skillfully crafted Cinquain. Perfect form. Imagery: is nice as are the descriptives of a soft breeze. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the beauty of soft winds caress on a serene day. Word choice: is good. Well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt and encouraging. Well crafted couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second line of each couplet is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed beautifully. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the joy a smile can bring to a person. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Well crafted free verse. Very nice metaphor of time, its moving through the ages. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a creative picture of time that is viewed through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line the line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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