ShelleyA~13 years at WDC's (shelleya) Reviews

ShelleyA~13 years at WDC

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#3271139

Review of Time of Trial

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write. Introspective. A prayerful supplication to the Lord. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb defe aghg accc. Every second/fourth line of each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. Prayerfully you implore the Lord to make your life lesson clear; to learn to understand your purpose. You ask Him to give you strength and courage. You express your trust in Him, even when the road gets bumpy. I can relate to your thoughts very well.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3270455

Review of Sin

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write that is short, concise and succinct. Introspective as she deals with her longing as it clashes with her virtue. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Nice use of enjambment.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: aa bcb dee. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express the tension she feels and the contrast between modesty and sensuality. I can relate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of who she is. Good alliteration, assonance with nice consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3270442

Review of Creed

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about why you write. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse couplets.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express your thoughts about writing, its release it brings you and the freedom it gives you. This is something all writers can relate to.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, good assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3270412

Review of God's Love

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about God's love. Heartfelt and uplifting. Skillfully crafted free verse that's short, concise and succinct.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of God's creative hand in nature and humankind.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. Your faith in God shines brightly in this piece. You express God's character through His creation beautifully.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3270261

Review of Wolf Dreams

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official First People's Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good fantasy write about the dream of being transformed into a wolf. Skillfully crafted free verse that I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye in your dreams you paint a vivid picture of a wolf roaming in an ancient forest as she howls under a glowing full moon.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'howling at the pregnant moon' very good descriptive/comparison.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. You express the power seen in the alpha female wolf. Almost magical.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3270245

Review of Aging Cat

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official First People's Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write about your cat. A skillfully crafted Haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of your cat that the reader can see in their minds eye.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. You express the beauty of your cat as she grows older beautifully in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of your cats grace as she ages. Good alliteration and nice assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3270236

Review of Summer Solstice

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official First People's Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about the summer soltice. A skillfully crafted Pi poem. Perfect form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the sun and its parts through every season; the heat of summer on the soltice, the longest day of the year.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about this time of the year and its connection to humanity and civilization as the sun stands still.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3269905

Review of Best Friend

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and message about our Lord, His character and love; our true friend upon whom we can depend. Skillfully crafted free verse which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. A beautiful hymn of praise and adoration to our Lord. Uplifting and encouraging. Your faith and trust in Him shines in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3269895

Review of We Come to Praise You Lord

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and message about worshipping God. A beautiful hymn of praise and adoration to the Lord. Skillfully crafted free verse with a tinge of rhyme.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. Your faith, love and trust in the Lord shines in this piece. Prayerful. You express the love and power of God beautifully in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. write on.

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#3269845

Review of Lift This Curse

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about your search to find true love and end your loneliness. Introspective. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is nice as is the rhyme scheme. Every second/fourth line of each stanza is near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your hope to find this special woman to share your love and life with. I can relate to these feelings.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, consonance with nice assonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3269307

Review of Brave Enough

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt, introspective and lamentful. Skillfully crafted free verse that is short, concise and succinct.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm and use of enjambment.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'I lived a picture my brushes were never meant to stroke' very nice descriptive/comparison about not being yourself.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express the hurt and pain of not being yourself and losing out on love that broke two people's hearts. Poignant.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance with nice consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3269298

Review of I Found the Love I'd Always Wanted

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about changing love. Introspective. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm and nice enjambment.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abccdb. A good mix of feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling as you express what this love meant to you and how it changed.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3269285

Review of That Night in 1963

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and dedicatory tribute to your wife. Heartfelt and romantic. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of these memories; of a sunset shared with the woman you love, the sounds of frogs croaking and crickets chirping all around you on this special evening.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb defe gehe. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in line three of the second stanza (there, share).

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your love for her beautifully in this poem and your thankfulness in sharing your life with her through the years.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3269260

Review of The Words

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about your need to be understood. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abab cdcee. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling as you try to make this person understand who you are, to see you as you are.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3269216

Review of The Dragons Gain

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good fantasy write about dragons from its point of view (I like poetry about these mythical creatures). Nicely crafted free style metered rhyming couplets.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is nice. A good mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. You express the feelings of the dragon with understated fierceness as he will protect what is his own and feast upon those who trespass in his domain.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned story poem and a good read. Write on.

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#3269212

Review of Missed,

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable for the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about unrequited love. Heartfelt. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb defe ghig cjkj. A nice mix of perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece (say, day; sea, me; Everest, best; Mist, missed).

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your love for this person beautifully in this piece. Passionate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3269162

Review of Two

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A nice title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about how you view your life. Heartfelt and introspective. Nicely crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion. Also, if you change There's in line one to 'There are' the first two lines flow much better.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. You express your feelings about how you live your life nicely in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is nice as is the use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Nice masculine end line rhyme in lines seven and eight (fall, all).

Overall:

Nicely penned, write on.

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#3269020

Review of Faith

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write to your friend that is uplifting and encouraging. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: aa bb cc. Perfect masculine end line rhyme is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express your faith and trust in God beautifully in this poem. This is a lovely reminder to Tina that God will guide her and see her through every trial.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3268456

Review of my wish

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Lamentful. Well crafted free verse with a tinge of rhyme.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. Dark. You express the pain and anguish you feel, the depression of life when all you wish for is to feel numb, feel nothing.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned. Write on.

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#3268450

Review of Hello my love

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about the one you love and who loves you. Heartfelt and romantic. Well crafted free verse which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express your love with poignance and passion in this piece. The joy of love and trust in it shines in your poem. You are blessed.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration and assonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3268436

Review of virgin

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and message about making your mark in the world so that others will know that you were there. Introspective and heartfelt. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry that is short, concise and succinct and a form which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abccb. A nice mix of feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. You express your sense of worth as well as adventure in making your mark in life. I can relate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in line two, 'I' should be capitalized.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3268207

Review of "Skies" - Poem

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write that is short, concise and succinct. Encouraging and uplifting to the spirit. Well crafted free verse which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, if you add a comma at the end of line two and change the period to a semi-colon at the end of line four, the flow and rhythm will be even better in my opinion.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'the ice cold fires of hatred yield to the blinding light of real love.' Nicely stated descriptive/comparison of emotions.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling about the freedom of life and love and how it can make us soar.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3268196

Review of "One & Only Grace" - Poem

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, short, concise and succinct. Heartfelt and introspective. Thoughtful. Well crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. A lovely chestnut of wisdom pondered about on how you see your road to life. Thought provoking and deep. Something all of us can relate to.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3268178

Review of Tomorrow

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and message about living life through its ups and downs. Uplifting and encouraging. Well crafted free verse. Good content.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. Inspirational. Very nice words of wisdom that is good advice for all of us in living life, always looking for the best in it and thhe hope for tomorrow.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; strong use of repetition for emphasis of feeling about a better tomorrow. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3268172

Review of Spring

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about spring, rebirth and renewal. Skillfully crafted free verse which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptive. You paint a vivid picture of spring that we see through the lens of your eye. The beauty and the blossoming of the season shows its light and warmth in all its surroundings.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thoughts as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Metaphor/Personification/Simile:

Nice use of personification: 'mother earth, her melodies of sweet flora and fauna'.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express the joy of the season beautifully in this piece. I can relate its hope.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of the season. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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