ShelleyA~13 years at WDC's (shelleya) Reviews

ShelleyA~13 years at WDC

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#3259958

Review of Running Blind

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and heartfelt message. Uplifing and encouraging. Skillfully crafted free verse poetry.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm. Nice use of enjambment.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. A lovely message of how faith can affect ones life. Your faith in God and His word shines in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3259955

Review of Stress-filled State of Mind

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers

Rated: E

| (4.0)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable for the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcbdeeffgc. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece (here, fear; mind, find; lost, cost). Nice internal rhyme in line six (will, fill).

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your thoughts tentatively about whether you made the right decision in this matter. This is something that we all have experienced at some time in our lives.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3259954

Review of Heavenly Kiss for My Angel

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers

Rated: E

| (4.0)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write of love for this special person in your life. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abab cded ffgh. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece (before, more; inside, hide; heart, part; kiss, miss). Nice internal rhyme in line one and two of your fourth stanza (this, kiss; forever, never).

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express your love for this person with tenderness and passion in this poem, this lovely vow you intend to keep.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in line one of your poem, should be 'occurred'.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3259950

Review of My Promise

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write of love to this special girl. Well crafted free verse with a tinge of rhyme.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is nice. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece (sad, glad; you, true).

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express the love you feel for her beautifully and with poignance in this poem. Tender words of romance that is touching to the heart.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3259947

Review of Love is

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and message about love. Well crafted free verse poetry that is short, concise and succinct.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give your thoughts emphasis as well as making the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express the eternal qualities of love, a light in the darkness.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good, strong alliteration. Good assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3259006

Review of Family

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about family. A skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming acrostic.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abccdd. A nice mix of dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express a love for family that shines brightly in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3258195

Review of " Creation "

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good short write; heartfelt, concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming quatrain.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express the awe of God's power in creation as seen in the waters, earth and air. Your faith shines in this poem.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3258186

Review of " Descending "

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and presentation. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming quatrain.

Imagery:

Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a very nice picture of a ray of sunlight showering down upon the earth.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb. Second/fourth lines are perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Nice depth of feeling as you express the peacefulness of the moment of light descending from the heavens.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3258174

Review of Ode To Words

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good short write about words that is concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted rhyming quatrain.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice simile: words are like fine wine as it ages. Very good descriptive/comparison.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abab. A mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express how words are savored when shared with a friend.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration and good assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3258168

Review of Stairway

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good short write and presentation. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb defe. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about this passage into freedom that is a stairway in a persons mind. Thought provoking.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis on the fantasies of ones dreams. Good alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3258153

Review of Starry Skies

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write about stargazing. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye you paint a beautiful picture of brilliant stars in the night sky, the wonder one feels as you wish upon them and the peacefulness that the stargazer feels.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abab. A good mix of perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your joy of stargazing and the peace it brings you.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3258133

Review of Storm

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about the storm. A skillfully crafted haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of a thunder storm and crackling lightning and the chill of the wind.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well.

Metaphor/Personification/Simile:

Nice personification of a breeze, that is caresses.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling. You express the vitality of the storm well in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and nice consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3258123

Review of Wheat

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write. A well crafted Haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of fields of wheat, golden in the sunshine that is being harvested.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'silent seas of golden grain' a good descriptive/comparison of a field of wheat.

Tone:

Nice depth of feeling.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3257390

Review of Somewhere She

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about the woman you dream of who holds your love and is waiting for you. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye and heart you paint a beautiful picture of this woman you'll love whom you seek.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Nice use of enjambment.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Every second/fourth line in each stanza is near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. Romantic. This dream of her lives in your heart.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3257384

Review of Contentment

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt and romantic. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the woman you love, the contentment and warmth she brings you.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Nice use of enjambment.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb defe ghih ajcj. A good mix of perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your love for her beautifully in this poem. The tenderness and happiness you feel for her brings you contentment that you delight in.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and nice consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3257020

Review of A Poet's Prayer

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official First People's Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good short write that is heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Inspirational and prayerful.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotions. You express how through writing poetry you have found peace, that it eased felt needs that seemed to go unanswered. I can relate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3256986

Review of I Am

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about how you see yourself that is short, concise and succinct. Nicely crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Nice use of enjambment.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is nice as is the rhyme scheme. A nice mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling as you express your love for this special man in your life who you know is the only one for you and your hope he will open his eyes and come to see that you are the only one for him.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration and assonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3256984

Review of The Rose

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good short write, heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse couplets that are concise and succinct.

Imagery:

Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the similarity between you and the life of a rose, wilting it shows your sadness; petals falling, showing your heartbreak and dying, your heart no longer feels as it is encased in darkness.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor of the resemblence between you and a rose.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your sadness poignantly in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned, write on.

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#3256968

Review of Invisible Perspective

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is fitting to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and introspective about how you view yourself among others. Well crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. Dark. You express your feelings very well in this piece as you watch from the sidelines locked in invisibility noting what others experience, having none of your own. The reader can sense the anger and resentment of being left out, wondering who you are as you reside and see yourself as 'a shadow to the world'. I think all of us have experienced this feeling at one time or another in our lives. I can relate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3256963

Review of Take Another Look at the Cross

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and message about how we should look at hardship. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming couplets.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express your conviction about the pain and suffering our Lord went through on our behalf and that when life isn't easy it is to Him that we should look towards, it's to the cross that we should look and remember when one thinks that the hardship in life isn't worth the cost.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3256885

Review of The Race

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about ones race to love. Well crafted free verse with a tinge of rhyme.

Imagery:

Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of love, a race between lovers running towards each other to the finish line where they meet and bond.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling as you express how the race to love affects the heart of lovers.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3256878

Review of Once in a Blue Moon

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the subject of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write and message about love and how special it is in our lives. Thoughtful. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express your thoughts about love and how it keeps one grounded and strong beautifully and with passion in this piece. Love shared is definitely worthwhile.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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#3256875

Review of No Meaning Just Words

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write that expresses the power of words that can cause hurt and pain. Well crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. Dark. You express the message of how words can be the death of someone and can leave nothing but unhappiness behind if one isn't careful how they utilize words--meanings can cut one to the heart.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned, write on.

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#3256864

Review of The Spider

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about fate that is like the web of a spider. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at natural pauses will give emphasis to your thought as well as make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor of fate as seen in the life of a spider.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express the darkness of the 'web' of fate that draws all into it at sometime in their lives, a snare that is always there waiting for you.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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Review of Alone

Review by ShelleyA~13 yea...

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that is suitable to the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write about being alone. Introspective. Skillfully crafted free verse poetry.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your fear at being alone, the emptiness of it, yet still you remain alone.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance. Just a note, there are a couple of typos: line nine last word should be 'veins'; line ten next to the last word should be 'becoming'.

Overall:

Well penned and a good read. Write on.

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