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Review by Beeline
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear Sesheta,
Why did you leave him that way? I just rfinished reading your poem. It seemed like he tried a tear on his cheek? That is so sad. Though I don't know what you went through. Your poem makes you look bad. Kind of heartless. A little bit of a bitch. No offense intended. Your character seemed like a bitch. Your poem was very well written. It was an enjoyable read. You did a great job on it. Definitely keep writing. You're good at it. All the best to you, Beeline!
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Review of Never Again  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Christy,
I just finshed read ing your poem. It was very sad. I hope you won't let one person destroy your faith in love. Everybody at one time goes through what you did and its very depressing. It could damage your heart forever. meet the right person and it will all be healed. Your poem was very well written. Your rhyming scheme was different and I liked it. It was an enjoyable read. I hope you will write something upbeat that I can read. All the best to you, Beeline!!
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Review of For My Love  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Lew,
I just finished reading your poem. It was fabulous. I enjoyed all of it. i saw no mistakes. Your rhyming scheme was great. It was a beautiful story. And a very well written story. it reminded me of my style of writing. I'm happy to know you have someone. Once again, a great poem. All the best to you, Beeline!! P.S.: I loved the line: As his love for her and hers for him" Good going!!!!!!
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Review of For My Beloved  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Ghost Shadow,
I just read your poem. I thought it was wonderful. And I am not overstating that. it really was well written. Very romantic. Bits of love Bits of tragedy. You miss her when she is gone. You would do anything for her. "Your soul weeps for her when you're alone." Hence, the tragedy. I wish I could find a love to match it. I should be so lucky as you are. keep writing. You know you're good at it. All the best, Beeline!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear LA Angels,
Your poem was very well written. I just finished reading it. You arranged it so neatly. Your rhyming scheme was perfect. You're a good writer. I found it touching yet tragic. It was something I wish I could have written. I too have been through similar experiences. Met people becomes friends and lose them in the chaos. It is sad. But as you said," no better hours were ever known." All the best, Beeline!!
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Review of Miles Away  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Cherry012,
I just finished reading your poem. It was very nice and short. I can understand what you said and are feeling. it must be tragic to long for someone and not know how to get them in your arms. Your poem was very well written. Though short. I'm sorry I just need longer work. Nothing wrong with the poem. I like them short and sweet. All the best, Beeline!!
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Review of Morbid Muse  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Ghost Shadow,
I just read your poem. I agree with the morbid. I don't see the muse. I don't see and happiness at all. Which what I suppose you were going for. Abuse of any kind is crimiinal. It saddened me to read the poem. It was tragic, dark. But the poem was very well written. I can't say I enjoyed reading it. But it shows the dark side of mankind. You are a good writer. Keep it up. Write something happy next time. All the best, Beeline!
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Review of Pen and paper  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear immortal,
I just finished reading your poem. Its true pen and paper can bring your world to life. I know it has for me. In my darkest hour I could grab my pen and journal and write down all my emotions. Or simply what my day is like. or maybe how my day was. Its true pen and paper is a wonderful thing. Your poem is written well. I enjoyed reading it. You are a good writer. I can tell. I am impressed. All the best, Beeline!
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Review of The Journey  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Lew,
I just finished reading your poem. I found it sad yet inspirational. I myself have been in that position many times and currently going through that situation. I am under more stress than anyone should have to be under. Your poem read nicely. It flowed very well. Structure was excellent. Grammar was excellent. I'm trying to let it inspire me to crawl out of this hole I am in. I would love for you to email me with any tips to help me along. Keep on writing. You do it well. All the best, Beeline!
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Review of Illusional Life  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I cannot do anything miraculous. I can't send you to a tropical island with the perfect woman but I can do is tell you when you get this way break away leave it all it will be there when you get back. Your poem was heartwrenching. Though well written. And a very good read. I love the structure you made total sense out of chaos. Hope everything has worked out for you. This is a good piece. Please keep writing. You're very good at it. All the very best, Beeline!
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Review of Wakey Wakey  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. It tells of a young girl who doesn't much want to do anything but sleep. What's worse is that she goes for the bottle of pills. That is not the answer to the question of doing something. She is heading for more trouble than needed. There were pictures and smells one could sense at the beginning. Your structure was very well. You had a good write/read All the best.
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear luvtoread95,
I'm hoping this is a true story. It makes it easier for me to comprehend what I already know. This story was true to life for me. I too had a friend who abandoned me for the cool crrowd. Luckily, I found the nerd. I became the cool nerd. I was king of the nerds. Though my GPA was horrible. I was still king of the nerds. They worshipped me. They saw the influence I had over the nerds They worshipped me. . You can always find a niche for yourself. Your piece was very well constructed. This piece is very well written. Sorry I had to raddle on. All the very best, Beeline!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear alexusnicole,
I quiite enjoyed your piece. I remember high school well. And everything you said is true to the bone. There were the popular kids with their name brand clothes, designer hair styles, granted this was the 80's. Still things have not changed today. Your piece was structured very well. Very well written. And an excellent read. You will make it through once your liberated from prison you begin college. You will be in a whole new prison. New rules, new popular kids, new nerds, etc. etc. I wish you all the luck in the world. All the very best, Beeline!!
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Review of On the Pier  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear rofroooo,
I just finished reading your poem I picked it out of the Newbies coloumn. Is this your first piece? I found it to be quite interesting. You painted a lovely picture with your words. The structure of your poem was excellent. it was overall a very well written piece. I'm trying to swell your head. But let's get down to the nitty gritty. There were a couple of mistakes. Only my opinion. It was just a little bit hard to understand. Were you there with your lover? "Is your safety zone the pier"? Is that your safe sanctuary? Where is Eros place at? However, overall it is a colorful piece. I wouldn't listen to me and change anything. Just work on your structure. Only my opinion. Keep writing. You're pretty good at it.. All the best, Beeline!
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Review of Self Confidence  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear IrishLuv,
I just finished reading your poem. I found a few things about it odd. I do very much believe that believing in oneself and self improvement but you appear to be preaching and I maybe wrong self love. Again there is nothing wrong with loving yourself. I would definitely encourage it but not to the point to where you are stuck on yourself. That is just my opinion. Your poem was very well written. And I did enjoy reading it. You had excellent structure to the poem. Hope you continue writing. You're good at it. All the very best, Beeline!!
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Review of Unperfect  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear irishluv,
You have written a tragic but very good poem. Don't let him get you down. in my life I have met many men that have tried to belittle me and make me feel less of a person. You are better than this. You sound like an honest, sweet person. you deserve better. I am sure he will come to you. I am sorry for the pain and feelings you are left with. but you wrote an excelletn poem about the entire situation. Please be proud of this poem. I know I enjoyed reading it again. All the very best, Beeline!!
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Review of Do You Know?  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sally,
What a lovely poem! I can almost see fairfies and wood nymphs. It sounds so precious I could see you two on a blanket on a field drinking wine. Now i'm making your poem bizarre. I apologize. I'm not trying to basterdize your poem. It was very well written. It was an excellent read. I hope I haven't misintrepreted your poem. All the very best, Beeline!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very excellent read. I just finished reading it twice. it is very well written. As I am sure you are told often. It is very sad. That you cannot be with this person. It is always tragic when two people get together and think its forever but it suddenly falls apart. Broken hearts broken lives. The way you worded it is great. Not too much rhyme not too much silence. I'll be looking for more of your material. All the very best, Beeline!
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Review of Prom  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear elliott,
I read your poem this afternoon. I liked it alot. It painted a perfect picture of what you were trying to say. it is sad to lose a friend. Even if it is to death.
As sad as that may be, if they are still alive you may be forced to see them often. And all the harsh feelings stay with you. I believe you have a winner here it is sad and tragic but this is a good read. All the very best, Beeline!
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Review of My Best Friend  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear softballpiano17,
I just finished reading your truly marvelous poem. I haven't read something so sweet and so sincere in a long time. Friendships are truly special. To find a true friend, is to find a true person. it was written very well. I think I will be reading this again and maybe a few more times. I really, really liked it. Friendships are important. If you dont' have a significant other they are there for you. Not to replace your significant other, but to guide youi and advise you. Also I loved the rhyming scheme. It was perfect. Keep on writing. You're exccellent at it. All the best, Beeline!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Mr. Bradley,
I just read your truly fabulous poem, it was very interesting to read. Your use of words were very nice. They painted a lovely picture of what you were trying to say. it was very romantic. Whomever is the receipient of this is very lucky. Again, I enjoyed your poem. All the very best, Beeline!
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Review of I Miss  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just read your poem. It was so sad and tragic. I wanted to go to bed and lay down and not think of anything all day. It was beautiful and touching. At least there were good times. You can always hold tight to them. Try to think of her in the way you saw her before. Your poem was well written. All the very best to you, Beeline!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I just read your poem. I found it very nice. It was an excellent read. Your wording was superb. The only problem I have is the last two lines. it didin't quite fit the poem. Or maybe it was my own fault. I have a tendacy to misunderstand things alot. Other than that i found it to be quite good. I love the whole idea of being on the ocean. It is like you could read my mind. Keep writing. You're good at it. All the best, Beeline!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lorynmarie,
I read your poem this morning. It was very interesting. I know there is tragedy behind it. That makes me sad. I have never been involved in a situation as you. It must be heartbreaking. It was very well written. With the exception of your rhyming scheme. You started out nicely with the rhyme and slowly drifted off into a different type of rhyming. Other than that I see no problem with the poem. It was very beautiful. I will be looking for something else of yours to read. In the meantime, all the best, Beeline!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear Jay Bradley,
I read your poem this morning. It was nice written well flowed nicely overall a nice reading. But a couple things bothered me. The fact that I didn't quite understand any of what I was reading. I thought I had a grip on it then it would slip through my fingers. Not understanding it didn't stop me from enjoying it. The description of your poem wasn't like the poem. Once again that doesnt' matter. it was good reading and that is all that matters. All the very best, Beeline!
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