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Review of love  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ashboo,
"Love" you have a well written piece on your hands here. Love and marriage is something I was never able to accomplish. Your piece was a nice read. it had a good structure. You character sure is eager to get married. The divorce rate is at 50%. If you can make it work you're very lucky. This was a sweet poem. And very tender. I hope I haven't said anything to offend you. if I have I apologize sincerely. Wishing you all the best, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Green,
"Another Year Gone By" I just finished reading it. You seem to be a very socially conscious person. There aren't enough of you guys today. I like to call myself one. But I do the same things over every year. I say I'm going to volunteer I say I'm going to make a difference and the best I do is putting my spare change in the Children's Miracle Network Box.at the grocery store. That's not going to cut it. Your piece was an excellent read. it opened my eyes even wider. it was very well written. Wish we could get the message to everybody. But, like you said we don't have all the answers. Wishing you the very best, Beeline!!!
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Review of Gravestone  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Skilz,
I just now finished reading yoru piece "Gravestone". it is really well written. Your words brought me right into the story. I too have lost a best friend. It is of the course something you wont' soon forget. it will leave a scar on your heart for ever. Your piece was both tragic and sad. The structure was solid. I wonder if this is fiction or non-fiction? If it wouldnt' be too much trouble email me and let me know either way. Once again, you have a well written piece on your hands. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Spitfire,
I just finished reading Part 4 of Bismarck VS Hood. Your detail is spectacular. I have studied this sea battle before. But it has been twenty years. I am enjoying your pieces very much. I tried emailing you to find out when Part 4 was coming out. I love history. Especially Military Histrory. I find no mistakes in this very well written piece. Let me know please when part 5 is coming out. All the best to you, Beeline!!! PS Where is Part 3?
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Review of Lost at Sea.  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Hey,
I just finished reading your song "No Name ...Yet". I wish you would have broken down the song, First verse, Second Verse, Chorus, Bridge if you had one It makes it easier for me to read and understand. I am a song writer, myself. I thought your lyrics were excellent. I understand you wrote it for your band. What is the name of your band? This is a very well written song. Your words painted a great picture. The structure was solid. I think this song would do well in your reportiere. I particularly liked the line, "Brought forth the perfect mistake, the symplicity so complex." Are you the lead singer? Guitarist? Keyboard? I hope your band succeeds. Continue on your track you're going and you will do well. When will you be posting any more ofyour material? Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Post-friendship  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear PenPen,
"Post Friendship", a very well written piece. We have all lost friends. And many of us have gone through all the steps you have pointed out here. I enjoyed the read. This reminds me of something my psychiatrist would explain to me. And that is a compliment. He is a good doctor. I loved the arrangement of the piece. Starting with step one. Keep up the good work. All the very best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of The Long Face  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear PenPen,
I just finished reading "The Long Face". I found this piece to be very insightful. You seem to know yourself very well. This was a good piece. Well written. Structure was solid. I could find no mistakes in it. AS opposed to my material. It gave me something to think about. I guess its amazing how much a simple smile can help someone's day. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lissa,
"This Precious Thing" I just finished reading your piece. I found it to be well written. Arranged nicely. it was a good read. Life is a precious thing. Sometimes we take it for granted. I suppose it is hard to comprehend. At least for me it is at times. You picked an excellent subject to write about. and it was a good job. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Answers  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Skillz,
I just finished up Answers. It was a little more than a short story. But it was a great read nonetheless. It was also very well written. Your characters were vivid. Your words painted a good picture. All in all I think it was a good piece. You're quite the young writer. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Skillz,
I just finished reading "A Place of Insanity". With the exceptoin of one typo there are no mistakes. it is very well written. It was also very sad and tragic. I feel for you. Most of us have had love in our hands at one time and dropped it. Now you can't pick it up. This was a heart wrenching piece. I hope you find a way to bring her back. I am assuming this is true to life. Bless you. Beeline!!!
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Review of Come down  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Talltale,
I just finished reading your piece "Come Down". This was a very well written piece. I enjoyed the read very much. This is a good piece. I think we can practially all relate. Everybody has had someone leave them. Whether it is for another person, or solitude, or money, or sometimes they don't' give you a reason. I love the last line "Give me my gun." I sincerely enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. Bless you. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of She's So Cute  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear DutchessBarbie,
You are a lucky lady. I remember when my son was less than one year old. Of course, that was twenty years ago, memories are still fresh. Children have to be the most precious gift on the planet. They are totally dependent on you and you dont' mind a bit. I thought your poem was sweet. You wrote the piece well. The structure was solid. Ibet she is the cutest girl in town. Bless you! All the best to the both of you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Emme,
I just read your piece on execution. I've always thought the electric chair was barbaric. I suppose at the time, they found it humane. I watched a History channel program on ways of execution. I think the gilouteine was more humane than the electric chair. Your piece was well written. the words painted a vivid picture of the execution. it was all in all a great piece. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lissa,
I can appreciate your situation. It is painful to do some of the things you have to do. You are working through chronic pain in order to get the things done. There is no let up at least that is what I get from the message of your piece. Keep writing. You are a good wrier. all the best to you.
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Review of don't care  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear lissa,
I thought this was to deal with chronic pain. It is a good piece so don't get me wrong. I was expecting it to be about chronic pain. Maybe there is note of it in between the lines. That there is a sense of not caring about this and that because of the chronic pain. Anyway, it was a good piece. Keep on writing. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear cootaloo,
Boy have you been a slut! I just finished the first part of "Don't Ask Don't Tell." Man my eyes were glued to the screen. I thought I had had some exploits. They pale in comparison to you. This was one of the best reads I have found since I was on WDC. It is very well written. Good wording and punctuation. Are you an English major or just a good typist? I cannot wait for part 2. I was really getting into it until I ran into" To be continued. " I really think you should write a book. Keep up the good work, please. I hope you're having a wonderful day. Beeline!!!
PS thank you for being open about your homosexuality. It is the same with me and my friend cubby/jblackgloves.
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Review of Life  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Beautiful Tragedy,
I sincerely enjoyed reading your piece "Life". Partically everything in it rang true. And I especially liked the line:" Everything comes with consequences" So true, so true, so true. Life is something most people take for granted. Until it is threatened. As you get older you tend to cherish life more. Your piece was very well written. I enjoyed reading it. It opened my mind. You should never take life for granted. You know? You are a pretty good writer. All the very best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Cootaloo,
I just finished reading your piece "tasting the rainbow". Boy you did more than taste the rainbow. You tasted all the weather preceding it. This is a very enjoyable piece. I found it very humerous and entertaining. it is also very well written. After all your exploits, I'm happy you found someone to be there. All the best to the both of you. Beeline!!!
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Review of Hole Heartedly  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear J.,
Your piece" Hole Heartedly" was foreign to me. It was hard for me to grasp but I caught up at the end. it was well written. it was a nice flow. it was a nice read. I apologize if I appear to criticial. I don't mean to be. I did enjoy it. it was a nice song. You really have it for this guy. I think he is the lucky one. Nonetheless, you did a great job. Keep up the good work. Beeline!!!
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Review of The Lakeside  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Stendhal,
I just finished reading "The Lakeside". I found it to be very romantic. Very well written. In fact, I can't find anything wrong with it. it was a lovely read. Your characters were painted very vividly. Of course, I had to use my imagination to a point. I need the brain exercise. If I can only find the spot that your characters found. Keep up the good work. all the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of thoughts&feelings  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Beautiful Tragedy,
I just finished reviewing "Thoughts and Feelings." I found it to be very interesting and thought provoking. It was well written. When I walk down the street and somene smiles at me whether it is fake or genuine it makes just a little part of my day happier. I don't generally walk down the street and analyze or try to analyze people's feelings or thoughts or facial expressions. At least, not all the time. I agree with most of what you said in your piece. It was a great read. The points I don't agree with are irrelavent. The piece was solid. Once again it was well written. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Beautiful Tragedy,
I just finished up your piece " What's good and What's Bad." All of it seemed to ring true. For someone reason I am much older than you are and have experienced this several times. This type of relationship Your piece is very well written. And a very solid read. With the exception of one typo. Aside from this you have a great piece onyour hands. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Beau  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear J Baie,
I just finished reviewing your piece "Beau". It was a great piece. It was well put together. A great read and very well written. I also liked your rhyming scheme. The situation you wroteabout at least half of the people on the planet could identify. Including myself. For other than the obvious reasons I particuarly enjoyed your piece. All the best to you, Beeline!!! PS God bless you. I am not a religious man. Something told me to write that!.
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Review of Confinement  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Amiman,
Aren't you glad that father hid that paper!! Your characters were great. Excellent short story. I would have been crushed if the little boy would have found out. your piece was short and sweet. That's the way I like it. You painted a vivid picture in a very small space. it was very wel written. With a happy not so happy ending. Thanks for the read. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of the Pier  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was some piece. It sure caught my eye. I liked the use of words. i liked the structure of the piece. It was all very good. There were pictures to be seen within the piece. I liked the idea that it was on a pier. Reminds me about fishing and all the fun we used to have. Keep up the good work. Keep on writing. All the best to you.
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