Dear Hobbit,
I just finished reading your introduction The Storm. I thoroughally enjoyed it. It is very well written. The structure was very solid. It flowed nicely. I'm looking forward to the book now. Got me wondering what happened in this town. You are a good writer. Better than many on WDC. All the luck with the novel/book. And all the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Strawberry,
I just finished reading your piece When Will I Learn. it was a very tragic piece. I can truly understand the part about moving. I myself have moved to the wrong place. And seriously regreted it. There is so much sorrow in this piece I hardly know what to say. It was a very well written piece. All I can say is I am so sorry. For your situation you went through. You have written a real tear jerker here. It was a very good read though sad. I hope things get better or are all ready better for you. All the very best to you. Bless you. Beeline!!!!
Dear Skillz,
I just finished reading your piece. it made perfect sense to me. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. it is something to seeing yourself in a mirror. I don't like looking in mirrors myself. I don't like what I see. The person that had his back turned to you was yourself. I got that all right. it is a sad piece. The structure was good. I think the piece deserves the 4.5 stars I gave it for it is genuine and good. Keep writing. You're good at it. All the best to you.
Dear Magnanimous,
I just finished reading your piece Auburn. I guess all poetry is open to interpretation. Mine of this reeks of skitsophernia. And some other serious mental health issues. It was very well written. And very colorful. Again, this is my interpretation. Sorry if I'm misreading your piece. I thought it was very good. It was an enjoyable read.. All the best to you, Beeline!!! P.S. Please email me if I am that far off the mark.
Dear Jacubs08,
I found your piece to be very charming. Though your male character was a bit of a prick at the end. It was very sweet and tender. It was also very well written. No rrhyming scheme. I like that. it was a great read. Babies are a great miracle. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Copygirl,
I just finished reading the piece All the World's a Stage. it caught my eye because its a line in a Madonna song. Take A Bow is the name of the song. After reading it, I found a very well written piece. I so totally agree with you. I've met many people like that. Keep the facade up. But at night, when there alone, I'm sure the tears fall. This is an excellent read. I liked it much. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Highhopes,
I myself right now am carrying a heavy burden. I will not shirk my responsbility. but daily the burden gets heavier. Sometimes I'm sure I can carry on. Though somehow Imuddle through. But I will not fail at this. A tender life is at stake. I don't always believe turning to God will help. I feel He sometimes lets us carry it alone. I dont know why. But it is something I believe. God bless you. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Robert,
I just finished reading Find You. I was just slightly disappointed in it. It wasn't bad. It simply wasn't as good as your previous piece. it was however very well written. it had an inspirational tone to it. It made me want to get up and do something no matter what it might be. "Be all you can be" used to be the Army's slogan. I liked your use of that. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next piece. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Dear Robert,
I just finished reading your piece This is It. I enjoyed this much better than the last piece I read of yours. Although it was very good. Your skills are improving. Not to say they were bad before. This piece is well written. The off and on rhyming scheme worked perfectly. It was a genuinely nice piece.. All the best to you, Robert, Beeline!!!"image:1574860}
Dear laughliveread,
I just finished reading your poem Oh My Love. You were looking to write a poem about love? You succeeded pretty well. The structure of your poem was very strong. But you had little rhyming scheme. I am a stickler for a good rhyming scheme. Though not all poems require one or need one. it was very well written. It was a good read. I hope its not true to life. Email me and let me know. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear level49,
I just finished reading your piece Privileged. I found it to be very interesting. I was never one of those teens that you described. The piece was very well written. The structure was solid. I think you hit the nail on the head. Describing the situation perfectly. Thirty years ago when I was a teen ager things were very different. Today things are out of control. As you so eloquently put it Keep up the good work. I always enjoy someone with a social conscience. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Dear Kathryn,
I enjoyed your piece Willow. However, I was rooting for the couple. It seemed they were going to be together. And then at the end it let me down. The world is not alwlays like the silver screen. The boy doesn't always get the girl of his dreams. But it was very well written. Your words painted a beautiful picture. I'm just sad they didn't ever meet. This was a lovely sonnet. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Dear Sebastian,
I just finished reading your poem The Angel. I think you made a mistake in the title which says Angle not Angel. You might want to correct that. Aside from that I saw no mistakes. You have a great rhyming scheme. But you also have a well written poem. It was a nice read. Good job. Keep up the good work. Don't let your 'Angel" keep you from writing. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
I just finished reading your piece of Progressions of Love. I absoultely loved your rhyming scheme. It seemed you took a great deal fo time and effort on this piece. it shows. It was very well written. And a pleasure to read. it is one of the best poems I have read in a long time. Very tender and soft. Your words spoke volumes. They painted a beautiful picture. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Dear Ashley,
I just finished reading your short piece Untitled. It seemed confusing at first but after a second read I understood it. Or at least my interpretation. it was very well written. Good quality work. It was short. But less is more. it was an enjoyable read. Do you have any other pieces out there that I can possibly look at? Perhaps in your port. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Sally,
I just finished reading your piece Indifference. Found it just a little sad. But I know how you feel. A fake smile and all. This is very well written. Though short. But myself I have been writing short lyrics lately. They say less is more. I hate to hear the part about the mental exile.I myself suffer from mental illness. if you are having problems with this please seek help. There are good people working in the mental health field. Your piece had an excellent structure to it. And no rhyming scheme. I'm beginning to enjoy other pieces without rhyming schemes. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
I just finished reading your piece Baby. It was a very good read. Somewhat tragic. AS you said it was sad. Momma went a little psycho. Bless her heart Baby had to grow up faat. This is a very well written piece. With a solid structure. No rhyming scheme. But I enjoyed that. Even when your words do not rhyme it still fit together. it was a heartbreaker. Your words painted a beautiful picture. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Robert,
I just finished reading your p[ece Dave the Hummingbird. I genuinely enjoyed the read. Your words brought me right into Dave's world. It was the cutest of pieces I have ever reviewed. It was very very well written. the entire structure was great. You told a wonderful fale. Again, as I said, I genuinely enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!
Dear dif4us,
Your piece The Riverside I just finished reading. It was a very interesting read. You had an off beat rhymnig scheme I liked. Like you said Everyone takes away something different from this piece. It was very well written. Though confusing. I suppose that is how you intended it to be. It has a solid structure. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!
Dear JewelRose,
I just finished reading your piece Adventure of Living. I think it was very different. Not like most pieces I run across. At first, I saw it a jumble of words. After concentrating, I began to put it together. I agree. Dance, sing, live life to its fullest. Try to enjoy what you can. The piece was very well written. And a good read. Structure was sound. keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear caesurrupus,
I just finished reading your piece Young Last Words. It was very sad and tragic. No child should have to die. At such a young age. The world may not be perfect. The children should have the chance to experience it. Good or bad. Your piece was very well written and great read. It made me a little depressed. Because this could happen for real and does everyday. I really liked your piece. Your words painted your picture very well. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Neroscuro,
i just finished readyour piece Today is for Revolution. I find it quite inspiring. It was well written. and a nice read. The words pained a great picture. I found myself agreeing witih most of what you have written It sounds borderline anarchist. Withi a little socialism mixed in. Nothing wrong with that. That is my cup of tea. The structure of the piece was strong. I also detected a note of anger to say the least. Without anger there is no revolution. i think you should be a policitian. Hope that doesnt' offend you. Keep up the good work. I am behind you 100%. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
DEar MakeMe,
I just finished reading your piece, it was an enjoyable read. You seemed to be going through a tragic time. Everyone, practicly everyone can idenify with your situation. We all have had those bad relationships we can't seem to break free from. After the end the future always seems brighter. Your piece was very well written. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear Stamp Farkus,
I just finished reading your piece Death Can Wait. I liked it alot. It was well written. I love yourr use of metaphors. The story was a little hard for me to follow. But that was my problem. I assume there were references to God? Telling it was not your time. Though you were ready to go. It was an interesting story. The structure of the piece was fine. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
Dear smittee,
I enjoyed your piece Does It Exist. Personally, I only questioned that a few times. I do believe it exists. That place not the Christian Heaven. but a wonderful place you will go once you pass. Which I suppose could be the same thing as the Christian Heaven. Anyone having a problem with their beliefs I would defiinitely try to guide them. Not in one direction but to the many points of view. Your friend, I was happy to read found his direction. And probably is a much better person inside and out now. Your piece was very well written. It was an inspirational read. The structure was solid. And I found no mistakes.Bless you. And all the best to you, Beeline!!!
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