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Review of Not Able  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear angelina,
Not Able I just finished reading this piece. So much sorrow. So much tragedy. He must have hurt you really bad. And I suppose he is not coming back. My heart goes out to you. Most of us have been in a similar situation before. Your piece was well organized. It was well written. And the rhyming though sparce added to the piece. I hope you will be able to recover from this. Just have a little faith. I hope this finds you well. All the best, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Love Poem Track 2  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Stamp,
"Love Poem Track 2", this is an unusual piece. It seems to be feeling sorry, lonelines; and heartbreak. it was depressing but well written. There were no mistakes in this piece. it was a great read. it left me not knowing what to say. So, I'll leave it at this. Great work. All the best, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Emma,
The Hurt He has Caused, I just finished reading your piece. I'm not sure I understand. Has he hurt you in some other way than simply smoking the pot? I'm not justifying what he is doing. But he could be shooting up heroin. You don't describe any other thing he has done to hurt you. Obviously you have confronted him, and he denied. Your piece is very well written. it was an excellent read. The structure of your piece was solid. I only wish you would have elaborated on what else he has done. You really should get away from this man. If it is pot smoking is really causing you that much hurt. I hope this finds you well. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Ashlely,
I just finished your re-write bullet of life. I read and reviewed it the first time. The second is better than the first. With the exception of the typing is really pretty bad. I don't fault it because I can still read it. its the words that matter as long as I can see past the mispellings. This is a very good effort on your part. please do not be offended by this review. I am only being honest. Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of talking to myself  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Meenoo,
I just finished reading your piece "talking to myself'. I am so glad that you relief that others would need valium for. Occasionally, I talk to myself unfortunately I am not able to talk myself out of depression. That would be nice. You will have to tell me your secret. Your piece was well written. Organized well. And a nice read. You must be llke me. My mother always told me "I wore my heart on my sleeve." This is still true today. You have a good piece on your hands here. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Empty Fields  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Malcolm,
"Empty Fields", was a great piece. It was extremely well written as usual. And the deathly violent. you painted such a picture that I felt i was in the middle of the battlefield. it was a good read. You're a very prolific writer. it takes me weeks to come up with a piece. It seems magical to you.Once again this was a very well written piece. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Malcolm,
I just finished reading your piece "The Stillness of Love". You write of such sorrow. I do hope in reality your life is a happy one. This was a good piece. A great read. Though tragic, and sad. It was still very well written. I enjoy your writing. I try to review every piece of yours that I see. You have a unique style. it is refreshing. You have done very well for yourself. Keep up the good work. I hope all is well with you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of mY sPeCiAl OnE  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Black_ Girl,
I just finished reading My Special One. it has a lovely sentiment. it is obvious you're in love. You are very expressive about that. I hope you don't lose it. As you said: "that would break your heart". The poem was well written. And it was organized well. the only problem I saw with the poem were some typos. And why the use of the number 1 instead of spelling it out? other than that you have a good poem on your hands. I hope this finds you well. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello woven yarn,
I just finished reading your piece "Love Must Be Forever". It was a great piece. it was very uplifting. Very accurate and very well written. I totally agree with your piece. Love should last a lifetime. the structure was solid. it was well organized. Geuninely beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of 40 Acres  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Tezzy,
I just finished reading your song "40 Acres". i agree with you wholeheartedly. Like today cutting down the rainforest. How many species of plants and animals we have yet to see they have destroyed. There is no stopping them. They wont' stop until the planet can't breathe. And they will all die wealthy men. This is a very well written song. I like the chorus. it is nice to read about social conscience instead of Brittney Spears Bubble Gum Pop. Once again, you really have a good song here. I hope all is well with you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of stealing kisses  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Rain,
I just finished reading your piece "Stealing Kisses". I found it to be a very good read. I liked your choice of words. The structure was solid. The words painted a picture as if I were right there in the kitchen watching you put his plate on the stove and in your housedress. This is not how it is supposed to be. I find it a little sad and tragic. But it was good writing. In factt, it is a very well written piece. I hope all finds you well. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Running Blind  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello AJ,
I just finished reading your piece "Running Blind". I thought it was very insightful. Very well written and a nice read. I agree with you. "Fear is the absence of faith." Many times my faith has helped me through. Just believe. It will all be all right. You're a pretty good writer. I am assuming you are still in school. That is why I said pretty good instead of great. BEcause you have many years of writing ahead of you. So, once again, you have a good piece here. You should be proud of it. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking for more of your material. All the best to you, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello AJ,
I have read your piece "Stress-filled State of Mind". I find it to be a great read. So, you really think that Dickens was unto something? I agree. Who wants to live with regrets? Like you said:"Could've should've maybe so, maybe not. you get the point. This was a well written piece. it seems you have taken your time with it. It has a little polish to it. The structure was great. It left me wanting to read some more. But "it was worth it". All the best to you. Keep up the good work. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello japret,
Having just finished your piece "How Does She Know", boy he was busted. Cold busted. and by his daughter at that. This piece has the most humerous ending. it is well written. Your words painted a perfect picture it was almost like I was there. I will he won't be seeing Tina anymore. And maybe his wife. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. All the best to you, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Spidey,
I just finished reading "In the Near Darkness". Boy, do you have a way with words? You are a smooth talker. This was a very well written piece. it was romantic,, sweet, loving and tender. You are a lucky man. Not many of us find this. This untainted love is wonderful. I enjoyed reading this the most. I hope all finds you well. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Sorry  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Jessica,
having just read your piece "Sorry", I find this to not be a song. But a poem. it is not organized into a song. The structure is more of a poem. It is way too long to make it a song. Your words are beautiful. Yet tragic and sad. You are a good writer. Your words sometimes cut like a knife. I enjoyed the read. For a poem it was well written. I think you have a knack for poetry not song writing. Where is the chorus. I could not distinguish the first verse, from the second verse and so on. Once again it was a great poem. Please do not take offense. i am only giving you my honest opinion. Iwish you well. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of A Little Bit More  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Jennieb,
Having just read your piece "A Little Bit More', I find it to be well written. Very solid. Very well organized. And I liked your rhyme. Materialism can be anyone's downfall. It seems to be human nature to always want more. Nothing is never enough. If only people would wake up and look at what they all ready have and learn to appreciate it because it can all be gone in a blink of an eye. Your writing is good. All the very best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Sometimes  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Jennie,
I just finished reading "Sometimes" . I found it to be a very well written piece. I enjoyed your rhyming scheme. it was organized well and structurally solid. Just an overall nice read. i agree with you. Sometimes things are not what they seem. And the way a person presents themselves may not be what actually is behind the mask. You are a very good writer. I'm going to raid your port and see what else you have hiding. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of A Short Excercise  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Michaelhicks,
I just finished reading your "Short Exercise". not so short buddy boy. It was an enjoyable read anyway. The piece was well written. I feel these are your opinions and I agree with some and not others. I believe when people say they are the same, they dont' mean it literally. When people have things in common, it tends to draw them together. Aka Friendship. Lovers. ETC., ETC. Groups of people want each other's company forthe same reason. It is true that none of us are exactly the same. Some are close enough to say the same. I hope all is well with you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of The Fears of You  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Emma,
I just finished reading your piece "The Fears of You". It was a very interesting piece. I liked the layout. It was well written. It was structurally solid. it was also very touching. Good vibes flowed all through the piece. There were sad moments. But I am an optimist. I always think things will work out all right. Once again, I enjoyed the read. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of The Key  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jessica,
I just finished reading your poem "The Key'. It is very well organized. And has a great rhyming scheme. It is all around well written. Love is truly a key. But with love there comes hate. Hate is the enemy of the world. Hate causes war, famine, pestulance, death and distruction. Love holds the key. The key to stop all of that. You are a good writer. Keep up the good work. And I hope this finds you well. Beeline!!!
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Review of War  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
hello Huevos,
I just finished reading your piece "War". Everyone knows warr is a horrible affair. it is simply deplomacy by other means. when two sides get together to talk and they can't come up with a solution they resort to their armed forces. No one loves war. War is necessary at times. Afer all avenues have been exhausted there is no other recourse. Your piece was well organized and well written. I enjoyed the read. I am a militray buff. But not pro war. All the best to you, thank you for allowing me to read your piece. Beeline!!!
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Review of Hallway Movie  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello SheaForever,
I just finished reading your piece "Hallway Movie". Can I ask how old the kid was? In your estimation. How old are you? The piece was put together well. It just scared me when you said you met the perfect kid. That's wonderful if you're a kid yourself. There were no mistakes in this piece. The piece was also well written. I am still curious about the age difference. You know there is a legal age limit. Of course, he'll be 18 and you'll be 25. Nothing wrong with that. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Without You  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jessica,
I just finished reading your song lyrics to your song "Without You". There is no rhyming scheme. There is no chorus. There is no organization to the song. It was pretty words to the song. However, musicians would have a hard time in making this a song to be played on the radio. Too many words and too long. It was a good effort on your part to come up with these lyrics. However, as we said it was too long and too many words. Try to shorten up some. Make a destinctive chorus. All the best to you. Try to put a bridge in it. I am only trying to be honest here with my opinion. Please dont' take offense to what I have said. Beeline!!!
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Review of Strength  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear muiskewed,
I just finished reading your poem "Strength" it was very touching. it was extremely well written. I can't say I know how you feel. But my heart goes out to all the families of the men and women serviing our country. If it was not for them where would our freedom be? I have the upmost respect for the armed forces. And I am a military history buff myself. The Marines are always the first ones there. And boy do they do their job! I'm glad that you got through it. The deployment that is. it brought the writer out in you. And it was good. God bless. And all the best to you both, Beeline!!!
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