Hello ddrforever,
"My Cure For Madness". I just finished reading this piece. it was somewhat tragic. I understand you had a rough breakup. But cutting yourself didnt' solve the problem. This sounds like borderline obsession. Think about yourself. Perhaps you are already over this. That would be wonderful. Concentrate on getting better. This is a very good read and it was written well. Thanks for your time and all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Nicole,
Sounds like you are a lucky woman. I just finished reading "Before I Met You". it was a lovely short poem. Written well and a good read. The only problem I had with it was that I wish it was longer. your words flowed well. I think they would have been even better in a longer poem. Well, what I read was nice. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello FlipthePaige,
"Fairytales" I just finished reading your piece. I found this to be a cute one. Cliche maybe? But it wasn't corny. I found it to be written well. It was a nice read. Your use of nature made it all flow together. I'm not saying you're going to win a Pulitzer Prize just joking. But I enjoyed it. And that's all that counts. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
dear slarg,
"With you by my side", THIS WAS A LOVELY LITTLE POEM! It was sweet and romantic. it was well written. it was a nice read. he must be a very lucky man to have someone care for him so much. That is a luxury in this day and time. Well, I wish you all the best. both of you. Thanks for the great read. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Eltease,
I just finished reading your piece"Random Thoughts". I found it to be very philosophical. It was a great piece. it was written very well. Sound and solid. it was a good read. Your use of metaphors was excellent. I enjoyed it very much. Sometimes it seemed cynical. But that was probably my mind playing tricks on me. Good job! All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Kyran,
I just finished reading your piece "Sign of the Times". What a great piece of sarcasim. In these days of niptuck it easy to get any flaws corrected. Botox is a wonder drug. People are getting Botox injecttions in their 20's. I don't know about other people but I can tell when someone has a face lift. it looks so fake. Collegen injections in your lips I could go on and on. This was a great read. And written well. it is really a sad state. All the best to you, Stay away from the plastic surgeon. I hope things are well for you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Sam,
so life is a journey you are absolutely correct. In my opinion. Which doesnt' count for much. Your poem was well written. I liked the rhyming scheme. I too dream of going to a distant land. Where happiness flows for ever. That is a great line. This is an excellent poem about life's journey. It was a very good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Dee,
Love is a very personal thing when it comes to the Lord Jesus Christ. I don't know why He left the earth only to say that He had to return back to Heaven to take His blood He shed on the Cross. There are many t hings about Him that is not known. But the one constant thing is that He loves you and me. He loved the whole world past, present and future. Good write. You had good insight in this and it shows. GREAT job. all the best to you.
Hello simplesimplicity,
I just finished reading your piece"things I hate about you". i can see the resemblance only slightly to the ten things I hate abotu you. But only sligthly. This was actually a tender and sweet piece. Surely you don't have the perfect relationship but it sounds pretty close. it was written well. The only mistake I saw and it was trivial to mention it. You spelled it nknow. My grammar is not so great either. this was a good read. And a job well done. I hope this finds you well. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
Dear Colby,
I found your piece to be very interesting. it was written well and a good read. It seems your parents tell you everything you can do. Then they take it all back. Been there. My mother was not strict whatsoever. Parents can be a thorn in your side. I enjoyed your piece. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Morbid Duck,
Wilbur must have had a wonderful time that day. For all he viewed he couldn't possibly take it all in. Your words described the forest beautifully. It sounded like a lush paradise. Your story was neatly written and a great read. Your words painted a beautiful picture. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Laurennichole,
Boy, English class must be hell. It is true that they dont' teach you any style or personality. They're more worried about crossing their t's and dotting their i's. They want this format. That want it written in this way. You're right Kill Me Now. Luckily most people go onto find their own style. The piece was quite funny and written well. All the best to you, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello ohheycolby,
This was a cute nifty little piece. I loved the rhyming scheme. yet there is a touch of sorrow for your love has been missed. It was written very well. And I enjoyed reading it. But you pleased your case to no avail. Maybe one day she'll wake up and notice you. All the best to you,, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello ItsOnlyMe,
i enjoyed your story, "The Valley". it was written well. it flowed like the river you described in your story. it was an excellent read. I enjoyed the three parts to it. I liked the way it was up and down emotionally. and that nature told the story. All the best to you, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
Hello Silverwindghost,
I just finished reading your poem about the "Patchwork Quilt'. I found it to be verywell written. You chose your words carefully. it was a great read. At first, I didn't quite understand it. It took a couple of readings for me to grasp it. it was good writing. I enjoyed it. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Michael,
I just couldn't understand this piece. Except it was for your true love. You're not really on a ship at sea. This is just metaphors right? In any event it was written well. And it was a good read. Structurally solid. I apologize for not being able to comprehend. I need a nap. Im' half awake. Once again, I'm sorry. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!Please feel free to email me and explain it to me.
Dear Starg,
I just finished reading your piece "If You Ever left". I'm not sure I have everheard anyone quite so in love. Your entire world mentally and physically would collapse This poem is very romantic. Soft and sweet. Like a box of chocolate. i'm sure the feelings are returned You are a lucky lady. I can tell you appreciate what you have. your rhyming scheme was wonderful. it was written well. And a great read. All the best to you, Beeline!!!{image:1644262].
Dear wrulfgunkl,
I just finished up "Turquoise NIght'. I thought it was very lovely. Beautfiul in fact. Although I did not see in the piece too much male to male love. Are you using metapors to describe the male to male love? I am a ding bat I'm not sure about those things. I only know it was well written. And I enjoyed the read. I'm going to check out your port to see some of your other material. I hope this finds you well. All the best, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello the Reaper,
I just finished reading your piece 'Present Is Death". This is a very dark piece. However, well written. I think you have a good idea here. I just don't think it would materialize. it was a good read. And your piece was without mistakes. Just delve a little deeper next time. It was still a good job. I hope you are well. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Beansy,
Beeline here, long time no review. "Disappointed" your piece i didnt' quite understand. it was like a short clip out of a teenage soap opera. I wish you would email me and explain this to me. I would do the same for you. it is well written. it is a nice read. I just need some clairity. all the best. looking forward to hearing from you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Mediasurgeon,
I just finished reading your piece
Death Penalty" Personally, I do not see things as black or white. I see a grey area as well. i see that grey area with the death penalty. I believe there are some men and women who deserve to die for their crime of murder. However, sometimes there are extenduating circumstances. As the old saying Eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth. Karma always catches up with you. Spending twenty three hours in a locked cell can be serious punishment. In any case, your piece was written nicely. you got your point across well. it was well organized. And a good read. I hope I have not offended you. If so, I apologize in advance. I hope this finds you well. All the best, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
:Hello wrulfgunkl,
I just finished reading your poem "Ahoy". I couldl not quite grasp it. Perhaps it was a little too mystical for my brain. It takes alot of explaining for me to understand. I am not criticizing yur poem it was very nice. Written very nicely. And an overall good read. Though short. I knew it was gonna be 35 words when I chose it. It isn't quite what I expected. That's my fault. As I said it was nicely written and well organized. The structure was fine. it was a good job. Wishing you all the best, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello The Reaper,
I just finished reading your piece "The Dragons Gain". It was almost like a minuature fairy tale. I enjoyed the read. it was well organized. Very solid. Told a nice short tale. And written nicely. You got your point across without being forceful or arrogant. Keep up the good writing. All thebest to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello Sigh,
I enjoyed your piece "A Call" it is well written and well meaning. if the world could be that way, it would be a much better place to live, of course. But I am not naive. It is human nature to fight. Can't we change human nature? We are separated by different nations when one of those nations has a disagreement with another and they cannot settle it wtih deplomacy war is the final step. it is only deplomacy by other means not that I am condoning war if some nation attacks the United States i would be the first person calling for mobilazation. You would hear war cries everywhere. Now this would be something beyond our control. We would be forced to defend ourselves. Conflict as i see it is unavoidable. I do wish the world could be the way you want it to be. But all nations got along there was no more wars it would be Utopia. I did enjoy your piece. As I said it was well written. I apologize for my rambling. That's a bad habit of mine. Your piece was also well organized and a very good read. Wishing you all the best, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Robert
"Religion" REligion to me is more than opinion. it is superstition. I agree 100% with everything you wrote in your piece. Most people are Christians because their parents were and their parents parents were and so forth and so on. Also fear plays into it. You may die and burn in Hell. That is what they tell you unless you go to church. They believe in the Lord God and Jesus. Well, that is pretty much my opinion. I hope you are well. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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