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Review of "Someone Better"  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear E,
We meet again. i just finished reading your song "SOMEONE BETTER'. I have to tell you that you know what you are doing when ti comes to writing songs. This is the exact format of a good one. You have done well. There were the verses and the chorus and the bridge and the chorus again. WOW what a good show! I hope you are proud of this piece. You should be. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of No Path at All  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello mbroscoe,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece 'NO PATH AT ALL'. it was a long but good piece. You travel the roads yourself wherever it may lead you and not the road less traveled. I am right in assuming that right? Well, you have made a career of traveling. It seems and a good one. Your piece was good and I don't see any room for improvement. You did just fine. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of acceptance  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Faith,
I just finished reading your piece of "ACCEPTANCE'. i thought it was very good. I didnt' like to read that you are a self-mutilator, though. it seems that you cut yourself all the time. I hope I am wrong with that assumption. If I am right though seek professional help. There are psychitrist that can help you. Not that you're crazy for you're not crazy. You just need some help along the way. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of Intro to a story  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello newbiewriter4u,
I just finished reading this piece 'INTRO TO A STORY'. It was a good piece. There were some mistakes found in the piece though. The word beginning isn't spelled begining. Nor is the word imagined spelled imagened. But other than these two mispellings the story was great. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Jaye,
"WHERE ARE THE SONGS?' I just finished reading this piece. it was a dark one for the fact that Jesse was now without Beth. It is sad to read. A guitar player and singer singing about his love of Beth and now it was over. It was something else for sure enough. You did a good job. It was a good read. The structure was solid. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Tara,
I just finished reading your piece of "BLANK ALWAYS WORKS". It was a good story. There were some moods in his cart after all. you made a believer out of me. I know this is fictional but it was so true to life or almost anyway. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of Dreams  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello mbroscoe,
I just finished reading your piece 'DREAMS'. it was a good piece. There were pictures throughout the whole thing. You did a good job. Everyone of us wants what you do and that is love. it is hard to understand that you don't have it now. You must be most attractive and all and with that you must have a kind heart. it is hoped that soon someone will come along and make your dreams come true. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of Bio  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello clee,
I just finished reading your piece of 'BIO'. it was a great piece. I am glad that you have faith in the Lord Jesus Christ. I am also glad that you have a wonderful home life. That your life is full with your cat and your dog is a good thing. I liked what you said about good triumphs over evil. For it does everytime. You are so right on the money with that line alone. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of We might be free  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ren,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of 'WE MIGHT BE FREE'. It is a beautfiul piece about the Savior. You did just a fine job on this. The Savior did die on a tree. Then laid in the tomb and came forth the third day. All factual and ever present inthe world of Christiandom. You have done good and I appreciate it so very much. I hope all is well with you. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Chrstof,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of 'MY BORDER OF BEING'. it was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. I liked the line 'nO EGO NOW TO FAULTER EACH PASSING MOMENT. NO BURDEN OF DEFINITION WITH WHICH TO JUDGE'. The last line was the hook as it were. You have done well. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Holiday33,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of 'A TRADITION PASSED ON'. It was about skating. The pictures you have within your words are excellent. It is as if I was right there watching you doing your skating. The little boy wanted to skate as quickly as his mother and his aunt. I can understand that. You did a good job here. It was an excellent read. The structure was very solid. You have done well, as said before. I hope this finds you well. all the best to you.
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Review of devil in me  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello frenzy,
I just finished reading your piece of "DEVIL IN ME". I think there is a little devil inside of us all at one time or another. The piece was with pictures one could see. You did a good job. "A devil in the form of a girl I am' you said was a line that really caught my attention. You have all rigths to be proud of this piece. I hope that you are. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you. There were no mispelled words in this piece. I dont' see any room of improvement.
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Review of Fear  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Gravante,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of "FEAR". It was a good piece.
There were so many pictures in this piece. One of being alone and another of wanting to be with happiness. It is as you said "Memories are not enough'. Memories can't hold you at night or keep you warm on a cold evening. You did a good job on this. Be proud of it. I can't see any improvement that needs to be made. It is just fine the way it is. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello E.,
I just now finished your piece of "YOU ARE MY FRIEND". it was a beautiful piece. There is romance all through it. You do love him very much and it shows within the words of your piece. It isn't offen that I read something so wonderful as this. You did a good job. To give God the credit for it is a wonderul thing. Yes, He is the one responsible for it all. I am most glad that you have each other in your lives. I hope this finds you well. all the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello LazyB,
I just finished reading your piece of "INTELLECT OR DESIRE'. it was a descriptive piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. So, you like conversation after lunch do you? It seems rather nice to do that. I liked it when you mentioned about the peanuts shells crunching on the floor. That was a nice touch. Good job. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of Binge Epidemic  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello ItsOnlyMe,
I just finished reading your piece "BINGE EPIDEMIC' You made some very good points here. It is sad when the youth of our land today has to resort to such measures as they do. This was a good solid piece. You have done well. it is a job well done. I don't see any need for improvement. You did it just fine. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello secretwords,
I just finished reading this piece. "DADDY TAKE MY HAND'. It was a good read. There were so many pictures in this that it makes one see the connection that the boy had or has with his dad. The child is urging his dad to take his hand and then he grows up to be a man himself. What a beautiful picture this is. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of "The Present"  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tonya,
"THE PRESENT". i just finished reading this piece. it was a good one. it is like a poem and all the things in it were wonderful. You should have written in poetry form. It would have enhanced the message by quite a bit. Your pictures were there too. You did a good job. I hope that you are proud of this piece. For you should be. I hope all is well with you. All the best to you.
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Review of remember  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ren,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece 'REMEMBER'.. it was short and sweet. Just the way I like them. It is better to remember people with smiles and laughter. Your advice is somethign else again. To not even remember you if there is going to be tears. You did a good job. It is hoped that you are doing well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello secondsight,
This is a good song. I have just finished reading your piece 'ITS NEVER ENDLESS'. There were the first verse the second verse the chorus and the chorus again. You did a good job with this. I would like to hear the music. It is one of those songs one doesnt' forget. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of A Bitter World  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Emmy,
I just finished reading your piece 'A BITTER WORLD'. it is a good piece. You have done well. It is written well. There is so much to what you have said. I know for I am a gay man myself and have had the stigma of people looking down on me. You did well in including Gays and also women and other things that are looked down upon. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of Thanksgiving  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ludwig13,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece 'THANKSGIVING'. it was a great one. I hope you did well in your class with this piece. One could see the whole thing happening before us. Your tasting of the turkey and the other things you put in your mouth. It was a feast for sure enough. You did an excellent job with this piece. I hope you are pleased you wrote it. You're good at writing. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review of Sweet Nothings  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Writer_tastic,
I just finished reading your piece 'SWEET NOTHINGS'. It was a dark and sad piece. There was the time of making love and all that but it was just sex to the boy. You waited for him and he went away. It is really sad that you had thought of one thing and that was making love to the guy and he says it was only sex. A downer for sure enough was this. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello rickrivera,
We meet again. it nice to read this piece. I just finished your piece called 'tHE BODY OF CHRIST". it was a very factual piece. You hit the nail on the head with this piece. there is no way a person who reads this will ever miss out on Heaven by following what it says. You have done a good job. It is gfreat to see someone serving the God of Heaven in the way you are doing. I applaud you for it. I hope all is well with you. All the best to you. God bless you.
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello reachingdream,
I just finished reading your piece 'REACHING TOWARDS LOVE". There are pictures to be seen here within the piece. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a romantic poem. it was a piece that made you feel for the writer or the leading character. You have done a good job. I hope all is well with you. All the best to you.
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