Hello Bacia,
I just finished reading your piece I AM AN ORPHAN. it was a good and sad read. It is a shame that you have no recollections of who your parents were. It is also sad that you know that you exist without having them in your life. It is hoped that one day you will find out who your parents are or were. Until then, I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Pat Nelson,
I just finished reading your piece of HERITAGE LOST. It was a good read. There are many things about my grandparents I dont' know either. The only thing i know for sure is that my Paternal grandmother was a Cherokee Indian. My Paternal grandfather was a German. That is what I know of my family. You have a lot of questions here but all needed to answer them one day in your search. I hope you find it . I would be interested in knowing what you found out. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello midsiffy,
I just finished reading your very short piece. KNOWLEDGE. I know that I can't dispute this. For it seems I don't know that much either. I do know that it was a piece that had very few words. It was a piece that did have a picture there for us to see. I think it is true to a point for all of us that we dont' know much Though some people would differ with me. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Tink,
I just finished reading your piece on TEEN TARGETS. It is an exceptional read. One can understand and appreciate where you are coming. It is a matter of what gets the teenager first in their lives. Sadly the violence of the video games and such is a tragedy. There wouldn't be that if there would have been prayer left in the schools in my way of thinking. Too much of abad thing is there for them to see and participate. I agree with you wholeheartedly. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello arthury,
I just finished reading your piece CRYS FROM A SHEEP. It was a short and good read. it was a plea wasn't it? I liked the part where you said "care for the lost, believe, my callings from the shore'. The sad part is where you said 'You never did listen. That is sad. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello lav_ish,
I just finished reading your piece of HURT. It was a good but sad read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did an excellent job. it was sad that he had abused her. She had taken so much of it she wanted to die. And according to the piece that is what she did. How sad this is. You did a good job in writing it. I enjoyed the read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello denaa,
I just finished your piece of TWO WORLDS'. It was a hard time for me to try to understand what you were saying. You used text messenging and that doesnt' work for me. I am sorry but I can't deal with that. Your piece made sense and everything like that but it was a piece that was hard to understand. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Retsced,
We meet again. I am glad that you wrote this piece. It is a piece worth writing. I just finished your piece of HONEST VULNERABILITY'. You cry inside too as you cry outwardly. But you are afraid to show it to others. your tears are a wake up call to you. Change what you can change and let the rest be. it is all in the mind and the heart of what it is that matters. You said so yourself. I think you did a good job with this piece. I enjoyed the read. I hope all is well withyou. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Tim Stone,
I just read your fine piece called "UNTITLED POEM'. It was a fine piece as I said. I don't know why it doesn't have a title. However, it is a good read. The structure was solid. There was some rhyme in it wasnt' there? If so, then it was good, too. I liked the part where you said "When all is relative". How true how true. It is all relative and it does matter. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!{image:1644262].
Hello Infra_black,
We meet again. I was pleased to have read your story. YESTERDAY AND TODAY. it was a good read. it was sad to see the man fall to his death. Though for you it was great to see the man fly. I am sure he did fly off the building into the sky for a time and then hit the ground. It was a picture that was easy for me to see within your words. you did a good job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!{image;1644262}.
Dear Luca,
I just finished reading your piece of 'I USED TO BUILD HOUSES." It was short, very short. However, it was a good read. You spoke volumes in this short piece. It is hard to see a house or building fall to the ground isn't it? Especially since you used to build them. Good job. Keep on writing. You're good at it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Wingman,
I just finished reading your piece of "AS A MAN". It was very descriptive. I wish I could review this piece. However, I am not able to for the simple reason I didnt' understand it which is my fault not yours. I think it has something to do with the man you've become not what you were. If so then i understand it. i HOPE ALL IS WELL WITH YOU. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Luca,
This is my first time of reading your work. I liked your piece 'FRIEND". It was a good story. There are some things that can't be taken away from others without them wanting them back. I think of those cookies you want. I wondered if you were able to get them. I hope so. I liked your piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello almost alice,
I just finished reading your piece "AND HE CRIED'. it was a sad story. the long distance type love affair is hardly ever an answer to it being close by. The distance itself can be a hardship and especially on those who love from afar. You did well in doing this story. it is hoped that you are doing well. And i wish you all the best. Beeline!!!{image:1644262].
Hello Thebest,
I just finished reading your piece of "THE SLAVE'. It was a sad piece. it was a short piece, too. But in that it was short it spoke volumes. A slave and his family wanting better is nothing wrong with that. It is sad that the man was there with his gun. I know the picture all too well. You painted it dark. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!{image:1644262].
Hello Quinn,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of 'IN THE TREES CHAPTER 2.". It was as good as the first part. i was hoping there'd be more to the story and I was right. I am very glad. The two girls are really something else being in the harness and all. Makes one think of their younger days when they could climb trees. I could not ever climb a tree. So I missed out on a lot of things. Good job. i hope this finds you well. All the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Easycruz,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of 'ONENESS'.. It was a good piece. There was romance within the piece. You have done a good job with no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a piece that you should be proud. I hope to be reading some more of your work in the days to come. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello perdono,
I just finished reading your piece of "THE ENDLESS SONG". It was a romantic piece and a good one. you put a lot of time in this piece I can tell for it to be sounding so pretty. You have done a good job. There are many pictures to be seen here within this piece. I hope this finds you well. all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Thebest,
I just finished reading your piece of :LOVING YOU'. It was a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you have done a good job. it was very romantic as you wanted it to be. it is hoped that you have someone in your life that makes you happy. I wish you all the best. Beeline!!!
Hello Miss L A,
'SOMEONE TO LOVE'. I just finished this piece. It was a romantic piece and one that is worthy of your writing. It is a good piece in other words. You have done a good job. I hope that you find the love you want and for it to be with someone special. i hope this finds you well. all the best to you.
Hello Set in Stone,
I have reviewed this piece before and rated it a 4.5 stars. I feel through reading it again that it is a 5.0 material. I hope this will put a smile on your face. There is romance in the piece. You are telling your love that you are honest and truthful. You want out of a relationship what you put into it. That is love unconditionally. I think you deserve it too. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Faith,
I have reviewed this piece before and rated it a 4.5 stars. I feel from reading it again that it should be a 5.0. You have done a good job. It seems that you are either a lesbian or that you are a self mutilator. I can't decide. Either case it seems that you are standing alone here. People dont' understand you. if you are gay then I applaud you. If you are a self mutilator then I beg you to stop. There is help out there and you can seek it out for it will be there. I wish you well. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello ppmusic2010,
I just finished reading your piece. "LONG AGO". it was a good read.
the structure was solid. it flowed well. It seems you are talking about coming out of the closet. I hope that I am right about that. It is always good to come out of the closet so to speak. Be who you are really and the world will look at you in a different light. if you are a gay man, then I am happy to meet another for i am one myself. thank you for the piece. All the best to you. I hope this finds you well.
Hello Ryder,
I just finished reading your piece. "WOULDN'T IT?" It was a good read. The structure was solid. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a piece you should be proud. The question Wouldn't it? is a fair question to ask. there are alot of wouldnt' it's out there. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Dear Guliver,
I just finished reading your piece 'MID DAYS DRAW'. It was a good read. You did well with it. I just dont' understand it. I was hoping you'd email me and give me the meaning of this piece. The only part I got out of this was your line "Nothing that could be made from gold." That I understood. it makes perfect sense to me. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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