Hello Miss L A,
I have reviewed this before and felt that having read it again that it deserves a 5.0. It is hoped this will put a smile on your face. I just finished reading this piece called "BLIND LOVE'. there is alot of romance here. You did an excellent job. The structure was solid. It was a good read. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Quinn,
I just finished reading your piece "CHAPTER 1 IN THE TREES'. It was action-packed. i think your title is fine. It is Chapter 1 after all. you painted some cool pictures here within your words. I got it that there were two sisters who was going up into the tree house. By way of a harness nonetheless. it sure was a sight to see. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Aren,
I just finished reading your piece. "CALVORY'. The right title is Calvary. However, I am here to praise you not blast you. You have done great. It was so true and right. Yes, the Savior went through it all for us on the tree. It is miraclous as to what happened then when He arose. He is the first one and only One to raise from the dead. I agree with you. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Ariveria,
I just finished reading your piece. "HIDEAWAY". It was a beautiful story. it is in the fom of a poem but I call it a story for it told of what you did. There was a certain enchantment about your Hideaway. The pictures were beautiful from the words you used. Your choice of words were right on. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Miss L A ,
I just finished reading your piece. "ETERNAL PROMISE". This is very romantic. i am sure you meant for it to be. There is much to be said for a piece like this and one of those is that it is good. the pictures you drew with your words were beautiful. It is truly hoped that there is someone in your life and making a difference for you. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Dear sssam,
I just finished reading your piece on "THINK, what else should our lives be". it was great. There is much for us to think about and act upon. I liked the last line where you say to 'ENJOY" since that is the mission of life." You have done well in bringing this here to WDC. I hope that all is well with you and that this finds you well.
Dear The StoryMaster,
I just finished reading your piece on HELP US TO HELP YOU". As everything you do is a great work of art. I am glad that you have this for us to read and act upon. I am a newbie to Writing.com and want others to find us and for them to rate, and review my work, as well as the others here. Your information was insightful and a great help in achieving our goal of bringing others to Writing.com. I hope thisfinds you well and all the best to you and your family.
Dear Retsced,
I just finished reading your piece "MY IGNORANCE'. This is a perfect job you have done. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a good read. The structure was solid. It spoke to me about believing in other people's ideas about things. i have been ignorant to in this respect. it is for sure that I have my own opinions about things as well everyone does. Good job I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Nom,
i just finished reading your piece 'WHEN IT RAINS'. It was a sad story. To say the very least it was sad. Your poor brother passing away in a tractor accident is no way to get out of this world. However, that is what happened. According to the story I mean. Well, it is great to know that your mother finally cried and got it out into the open. You sure made a believer out of me. I hope this is fiction. I hope that I am right about this. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Gravante,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece "CONCRETE'. it was a sad piece. The characters were having a time of disagreement it seems. It is always bad when a dad and son can't see eye to eye about something. Being in silence is something else again. Breaking the trust one have in someone is bad, too. i hope this is fiction. I hope I am right about that. Still is sad though no matter. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Lauralolleee,
I just finished reading your piece. LISTEN. It was a good and sad piece. There was the connection between the two of you. I thought it was mother and son but it must have been boyfriend to girlfriend. Any way it was a sad piece. The crying really got to me. I have cried but not in about four years now. I felt the sorrow in your piece. it was a good read. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Kathleen,
I just finished reading your piece. SPIRITS IN THE NIGHT. It was a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There were pictures to be seen without the use of colors for your words made them come to life. It was kind of errie. It seems they were dancing about and wanting the souls of people. I hope I am wrong but I don't know for sure. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Set In Stone,
I just finished reading your piece. "CREATOR?'.. it wasn't as it was expected to be. I thought you were going to give the Creator praise for this and that. I didn't know you thought of yourself as the creator. I got it from the reading that it was like that. I may have misinterpreted it wrong. As if I have then I am sorry. Please forgive me. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello NickOfNoblesville,
I just finished reading your piece. WAKE UP AMANDA JANE. it was a good piece. You did an excellent job with it. It was like a play. I enjoyed it very much. the characters were all named and you didn't have to figure out which one was which. That is very good. It is a dream that Amanada had. A dream or a nightmare. to be more precise. you made it believeable. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Lauraalolieee,
I just finished reading your piece. "BROTHERS'. it was a good one. it kept me on the edge of my wheelchair. It was so very good. You have some imagination that is for sure. it was sad and dark for a time. In reading this piece I got the feeling that there was more up to the boy than just what he was telling. However, I was wrong. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello lehzer,
I just finished reading your piece. MY ENTRY--BREAKUP. i thoght it was a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a good one. It is so sad that one doesn't know how to communicate with another. He was feeling love for the lady and he couldn't bring himself to tell her until it was too late. I liked the ending. I hope the two of them patched things up. I know it is fictional but I can't help but think there are real people out there like this. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Easycruz,
I just finished reading your piece 'WOMAN'. I was agreeing with everything you said up until the last line. I don't believe that a mother is God. God is God and that is all there is. Mothers are a necessity in our lives. That is for sure and certain. Mothers are the framework of God. I believe that wholeheartedly. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Tara,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece. "I DON'T KNOW HOW'. Friends are the core of everyone's existance. Without friends we wouldn't have a life to ourselves. At least I feel this way. We must have friends in order for us to live freer than what it would be for those who have no friends. You did a good job. Be proud of this piece. You did well. I hope this finds you well. all the best to you.
Hello Miss LA,
I just finisned reading your piece "TELL ME'. I thought it was very romantic. You are wanting to spend the rest of your life with this one so dear to you. He is the reason you wrote this piece. It is wonderful. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done a good job. I only wish for you two the best of everything. I hope this is a true piece. I would feel like a fool if it wasn't. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello intheventofire,
I just finished reading your piece. "WELCOME TO THE UK AITHORS GROUP'. I think you are doing a good thing. It isn't everywhere where people can share their experiences and all the other things that comes along with them. You are a part of WDC? I think that is good. I hope many will come to your forum. I am not of the UK but I have been published there four times. So, I have had some experience with the way they do things. I like it. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Dear KookieChik,
I just finished reading your piece "THE MYSTIFYING CASTLE'. It was a good piece. I liked the boldness of the lettering for it made it easier for me to read. you did a good job in chosing that. I liked it that it was only 500 words. You mentioned about a castle. Then you mentioned about a park. it was a castle wasn't it? Then it was a park, right? if so, I got the message clearly. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Dear Eltease,
I just finished reading your piece 'EARLY MORNING THOUGHTS'. I thought it was a good read. There is nothing like waking up in the early morning hours and feeling the day is yours. The birds are singing and making melody. The sun is about to rise and you prepare for a good day ahead. This is what I got from reading this piece. Solitude and comfort was abundant. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Dear Joon,
I just finished reading your piece of "ODE TO TWILIGHT'. it was a good but short piece. Just the way I like them short and sweet. Only in this case, it wasn't sweet at all. It was about two vampires. Now I love a good horror story every now and then and this this one was it. you have done well. I liked the last tine "As two vampires running wild but free.". Sure said it all. you have a great imagination. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Stark,
I just finished reading your piece "SOUL'. It was a good and short piece. Just the way I like them. I didn't see any characters name here but I am assuming there were two of them. I liked the line "All I see in there is gray.'. Why that particular line I dont' know why I like it but I do. I guess because the soul is gray when you think about it. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello Jody,
I just finished your piece of 'THEY ALWAYS COME HOME'. It was a good story. There was love in the greatest sense of the word in this piece. It was graphic as to what he was doing to her and it was an enjoyable read. You have done a good job. It is sad that he was killed in the end. Though, it seemed he was very much alive the night before the letter came. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
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