Hello Corina,
I just finished reading your piece of MUCH MORE THAN JUST SKILLS. It was a good read. Volleyball used to be my favorite sport that I liked to play. So you have brought up some good memories for me. I am glad for you in doing so well. Your determination got you to where you wanted to go. I am proud of you. Listen at me you may be an adult now but it was so true about yourself earlier in life being what you wanted to be. That is why I am proud of you. You worked hard. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
This is a great thing you are doing. there are many people who would love to have a raid done on their portfolio. It is really great that it isn't any rules or anything that dictates what a person can do or not do. it is left to the individual if they can do the reviews or not. I think that is really super. You have done a good thing here. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Aren,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of A LONG DAY. It was a good piece. It was an excellent read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was about being in school and the teacher finding you were not paying attention. I say you meaning your character. The next worst thing was the store. I guess your character had to go work in a store. Anyway, it was a good read as I said. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Miss LA,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of IF BEING IN LOVE WAS . There are alot of similies in this piece. you have done an excellent job with it. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a good read. The structure was solid. I liked the part where you said if love was a taste it would be chocolate. Chocolate is my favorite anything. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Juju Beans,
I just finished reading your piece of SHAMBLES. It was a good read. It was an excellent job done. Tthere were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It is about your character being a regular mom and doing things that one does. But there was a hidden part of her that was worthy of prison time. that is the sad part about this piece. I hope this findsyou well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Sarah Elizabeth,
I just finished reading your piece of REAL . It was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you did an excellent job. it was romantic. it was a sad piece, however. The person you loved betrayed your trust if I am correct. And now you are wondering if you would ever love again? I hate to read something like this but it was a very good read. I hope this finds you well. And I wish you all the best. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Ladi D,
I just finished reading your piece of UNTITLED. The title should be Abused. I have never before read anything like this and have to say it was very graphic to start. The pain you must have gone through with is terrible. No woman should have to go through this much pain. it was a sad piece to be sure. I only wish you the best of everything and hopefully for you to leave this guy that is causing all the problems. He isn't worth the staying for you to go through this kind of actions anymore. you deserve better. I know you must deserve better than this. Go to a shelter and get help from anyone you can. I hope this finds you well and happier. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Bella,
I just finished reading your piece of PREFACE PROMISE. It was a sad piece. It was a good piece, too. It is sad when one of our parents have to die. I know I lost both my parents in my 50's. So, I know the pain associated with their loss. You told a beautiful story though it was very sad. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!![image:1644262}.
Hello Quinn,
I just finished reading your piece of CHAPTER 5. IN THE TREES. it gets better and better wtih every chapter. I look forward to reading more about the girls in this piece. Ray is something of a go getter isn't she? Anna is the level headed girl. i was paused to think of what would have happened to Ray if she fell. She did fall but she didn't get hurt. That is the good part. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Aren,
I just finished reading your piece of TODAY. It was a piece I wish I had not read. There were so many mistakes in it that it took away from the story you were telling. it was a good effort and onethat you could have been proud of had you spelled the words correctly. Such as thoughs meaning those. There were other words too that was like that. I am not bomblasting you. I just think that you should have done better wtih the spelling of these words. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Eva,
I just finished reading your piece of WARM SUMMER SUN. It was a read that I had wished I hadn't of read. it was good and all of that but there were some words in there that I never use and those that I abhor from doing so. it told a good story. It was sad about the lady being shot. You have some imagination. I will say that to you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello newbewriter4u,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of THE STAND (1st Attempt -emotion). IT WAS A GOOD READ. There is something in the fact of someone belittling someone else that doesnt' sit well with the one to whom is was addressed. i am glad that you stood up for yourself in this piece. You sure made a believer out of me. It ishoped that it is fiction. I hope so anyway. You did a good job. I hope all is well with you. And I wish you all the best. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Set In Stone,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of GRACE. It was a good poem. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you have done an excellent job. You did this for the people you have made friends with on the site. Well, they should be flattered that you thought so highly of them. it was a good read. I hope this finds you well. And I wish you all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello LauraM,
I just finished reading your piece of THE RAGING STORM. It was about abuse as you said. it was a good but sad read. There weren;'t any characters by name in this piece and you equated the sky and the sun to a person and it was all put together well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Miss_Niurka,
I just finished reading your song and it was a good one. NO FALLING IN LOVE AGAIN isas it should be. verse chorus verse chorus verse. You did it well. I am a song writer myself. So I know the ins and outs about a song. You have done well. I hope this findsyou well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello C. Martin,
I have just finished reading your piece of OPEN WOUNDS. It was a good read and one that is well done. I do have a question though what do you mean by all of this? I didn't understand it at all. I hope you will email me and let me know the meaning of this piece. I hope that this finds youwell. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Gabriel,
I just finished reading your piece of OVERLY INTELLECTUAL HIP HOP ARTISTS. It was a good read. It seems you have put some time in doing this piece. It shows. It doesnt'l leave anything open. I liked what you said in these words "We fall in love in each other.
We fall in love in the world.
We walk into each other.
We close out the world.
We fall in love.
it is so true about all of this. you have done a good job. It was a great read. I hope all is well with you. And I wish you all the best. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Hannah,
I just finished reading your piece of ORDINARY. it was sad all the way through it. The poor woman had suffered enough of his abuse to begin and then he gave her some more.! I don't think that is loving and caring to me. You made a believer out of me for I am pulling for the woman in this story. I hope all is well iwth you. And I wish youall the best. Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
Hello midsiffy,
I just finished reading your piece of MONOTONY'. It was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I dont' see any room for improvement. I just don't give out 5.0 for everything. I hope you understand. I do have a question. What is tedium? I don't know the word and haven't ever seen it before so that is why I am asking. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello LA,
I just finished reading your piece of DEATHBED. It was a sad but good read. It is so sad when a parent dies or anyone for that matter. You made it so true to life. I don't know if this is fictiion or not. I hope it is. I just know when my own dad passed away it was the last time I cried. I can't cry anymore. I hope this finds you well. And I wish you all the best. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
Hello Jeff,
We meet again. I just finished reading your piece of A FEELING OF WARMTH UNDER THE COVERS. It was a great read. It was romantic to say the least. It was a piece that you should be proud. Tender, loving, and caring thoughts fill this piece. You did well. ihope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Jeff,
This is a beautiful piece. I just finished reading your piece of WHILE I DAYDREAM YOU LAY AWAKE AND LIVE. It is sad in a word and in another way it is a warm piece. you want to be close to someone special. I believe that is what I am getting from the piece. I do hope that you find that person and if you have them already then I wish you all the best with that person. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Nanibaby,
I just finished reading your piece of 'I AM NOT OKAY'. It was a sad piece. it was a good read, though. You were the main character in this piece. I am right aren't I? Well, It seems like you have been left out in the cold for something you wanted to do and didn't get it done. If I am right that is. And yes you were a victim . I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!!{image:1644262].
Hello Miss LA.
I have reviewed this piece one time before. However, I feel in reading it again that it deserves a 5.0. HOLD ON is the piece and it is a good one. There is sadness in this piece. It is dark in a word. The pictures are there to see. And when you mentioned the girl in this it got my attention. It is hoped that she didnt' have to grow up not knowing who her daddy was or anything like that. It is hoped that she knew him and that there is still love for her. I hope that this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Rusty,
I just finished reading your piece of HEARD WITH NEW EARS. It was a sad but good piece. It is always sad when there is a break up that has to happen. It is so hard for the children left behind. Even in adulthood it is still hard to deal. You made yourself heard within this piece. You did a good job. I hope that all is well with you now and that I wish you all the best. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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