Hello amandag,
I just finished reading your poem 'JUST BECAUSE'. That's it in a nutshell. Just because I cry. Nothing wrong with crying. I partake myself occasionally. Just because you cry doesn't make you a whimp. Just because you cry doesn't make you anything but a good person. it shows you have true emotions, care, love, you hurt, you hate, you feel all these things and more. Your love shows. Nothing wrong with that. This was a very good poem. It was a good read. And very solid job well done. All the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello merrystrife,
I just finished reading your piece "ALCOHOL'. Up until a few years ago, I was a social drinker. I didnt drink and drive. Just like any other drug, alcohol can be abused. There are drug users, and drug abuser. The same way with alcohol . Alcohol is a drug too. I know only a few friends who have had problems with alcohol. But for some of them, it has destroyed their lives. Your liver cannot take it. I enjoyed your piece. I agree with everything you've said in it. This piece is written nicely. It was a nice read. Solid job. Wishing you all the best. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello RagerEdge,
I just finished reading your piece 'SHE IS LIKE LOVE'. What a wonderful piece! Your words were so eloquent. The piece flowed lovely. Very romantic. "I had loved her like I had known her since time began" That is a beautiful beautiful line. it sounds so sincere. Which I am sure you are. The piece was very well written. Organized nicely. Solid job. Keep up the good writing. All the best, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
hello Volley balllover,
I just finished reading your piece. "I WISH'. He must have changed drastically. i am assuming this is a female. If I am wrong, please correct me. HE really hurt you. There is much pain in this piece. She doesn't see the pain she is causing you. perhaps she doesn't care. Perhaps she is blind to it. Either way I see the situation must change. This is a well written piece. For someone to have written it on a whim. Very good read. Well organized and a solid piece. Job will done. All the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Amanda,
I just finished reading your piece 'FOUR-BEST FRIENDS.' It was endearing. I recall when I was in highschool my friends and I saying that we woudl always be together. We would always be friends. We would stay in touch. Unfortunately life doesn't work that way It is sad that we all have to part. So is the circle of life. All the very best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello rickrivera,
I just finished reading your piece 'WHAT DOES GOD CALL IT'. What does God call it? I say messed up. We are ruining the paradise God gave us. Pollution, war, famine, natural disasters, it is not an exactly beautiful place to live in anymore. But God calls it love. His favorite word. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!!!{image;1644262}.
Hello prncsjsmn,
I just finished reading your piece 'THE HEART'. i am in total agreement love finds a place anywhere it is needed. Love can mend a broken heart. Love can heal almost anything. Most notably a broken heart. your poem was quite well written. Very well organized. And an equisite read. I enjoyed it very much. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Jason,
I just finished reading your piece "MARINE LAND'. This was a very different and interesting piece. You dont' find many poems about fish. Though i know there is more to yo8ur poem than that. You are speaking to the people who are polluting our rivers, streams, lakes. and ocean. Water is one of our most precious natural resources. After all, the human body is perdominantly water. its terrible what the huge corporationis are doing. Massive oil spills, chemical spills, etc. I enjoyed your poem,. It was very well written. Nicely organized. It was a very good read. All the best to you and to our friends under the sea. sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello MsLaurie,
I just finished reading your prayer. ST. JUDE NOVENA'. I thought it was a lovely prayer. Did you write it yourself? if so, BRAVO! You did an excellent job. I agree may the sacred heart of Jesus be adored. This is a lovely piece I would love to have framed to give to my mother. All the best to you. God bless you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello charieboystani,
'NO FRIEND OF MINE". I just finisned reading this piece. I cannot say enough to tell you how much I enjoyed this piece. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful. It just flowed and ebbed. It rolled right off your tongue. Your use of words were lovely.. It is one if the best pieces I have read since I dont' know when. You said so much in so few words. It was beautifully written. Thank you for the good read. Job well done. BRAVO! I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Michael,
I just finished reading your piece. 'GIVE IT AWAY". I believe it is a lovely sentiment. If everyone followed your advice there might not be so much evil in the world. it was nicely written. I loved the repetition. It is overall a genuinely good piece. Good job. Keep up the good writing. all the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello slarg,
I just finished reading your piece 'WHERE'D THE TIME GO'. It was a very lovely piece. Full of what a mother should be. Consider yourself lucky. As I am sure you do. Continue to thank your mother every single day. Not only did she carry you for nine months plus labor she gave birth to you. You seem to appreciate your mother very much. That is a beautiful thing. Your piece was well wriitten. Nicely organized. Overall solid. Keep up the good writing. All the best to you, sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Chris,
'SHAMEFUL SINNER, SHAMELESS LOVER'. I just finished reading this piece. HERE HERE! I am so glad tha you are proud of yourself. And you are all those things. You should be proud of yourself. I am proud of you. You seem to be well rounded fella. I loved the way you organized your piece. it is nicely written. No kind of mistakes at all. You should be proud of this piece. I thoroughally enjoyed it. One of the better pieces I have read in a while. Self love isn't it wonderful! All the best to you. I hope this finds you well. sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Dear WovenLife,
I just finished reading your piece. 'WATERS OF LOVE'. it was very romantic yet tragic piece. There were elements of a lot of emotions. It was a very good read. At times sorrowful. I assumed you intended to bring these emotions to life. If I am wrong please correct me. it was organized well. And very well written. I enjoyed it much. All the best to you. I hope this finds you well. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Christof,
I just finished reading your piece '...?' Disgusting, aye? I somewhat agree with you. This could be a complicated mess. I don't see any problem with the rating system. It really just means nothing. I look for what the writer has said. Who cares about a rating? your piece is nicely packaged. You got your point across well. Your piece was written well. Job well done. all the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Christof,
I just finished reading yhour piece "THE EDGE OF SOMETHING LUCRATIVE'. I found this to be an interesting little piece. Do you truly believe you are insane? The piece seemed perfectly lucid to me. However, GREAT EVIL TOOK PLACE. Was is something usual? Or are you really insane? it was a nice read. Well written. Considering the content. And it was a job well done. Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Twilight's Madness,
I just finished reading your piece 'SCARS OF HEAVEN(revised). I found it to be a very good read. The wording is lovely. Very well organized. And an excellent piece and very well written. Every heartfelt beat, every loving gesture, is and will remain faithfully yours
This was my favorite line in the piece. it touched me. I don't know what else to say except good job. I don't believe that I have read the previous unrevised edition. This is superb.!!! All the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Easycruz,
'CHARACTER'. I found this piece to be very introspective. It was quite well written. But somewhat cynical. If that is the word. It was a wonderful read. Very well organized. A solid piece. I found no mistakes whatsoever. But who am I the world's critic? Your words painted a dark picture. Nothing wrong with that whatsoever. I thoroughally enjoyed it. All the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .PS. I'll be looking for more of your material. Maybe I'll raid your port. Thanks.
Hello Bretton_Woods,
I just finished up your piece "SICK JOKE'. I truly enjoyed all three stanzas of your piece. BRAVO! I wish you were a politician. All three stanzas were written very well. they were organized excellent. And I have no problelms with the jokes. Especially the one about the priest. All three were an excellent read. It was one of the best written pieces about society, war, and financial system that i have ever read. You hit the nail on the head. I could not have agreed more. This is a job well done. Keep up the good work. All the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
hello Sinceretragedy,
I just finished reading your piece 'ANGELS CRY' it was truly a sorrowful piece. It saddened me. And I felt tragedy. it was also very well written and original. it was a solid piece. The idea of angels crying is horrible. I know it is of course a metaphor. it still added saddness to it. I truly enjoyed the read. it was a nice piece overall. Job well done. It touched me. All the best to you. Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello WovenLife,
I loved the wording of your piece, "CIRCLE OF REPETITION(LIFE)." It was very well written. Well done. The rhymimg scheme is original. The piece was solid. How did it become the circle of repetition? Instead of the circle of life? perhaps mans reliance on the seven deadly sins. I enjoyed your piece it was a good read. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Mel,
"THIER REALITY'. I just finished reading your piece. I found it to be tragic, and sorrowful.Child abuse is something I don't understand. Why would anyone would want to hurt a child:? Go to a bar and take it out on each other. Adult to adult. Leave the children out of it. I was a victim of abuse myself. This piece was well written. It was dark and sad. It was organized well. And solid. A job well done. I know this must have been a hard topic to write about. The question remains why did they do it? They are bullies. They know a child cannot fight back. All the best to you. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Alice In Neverland,
I just finished reading your piece "CRUEL SUICIDE.' I couldn't find much in the piece that was really about suicide. Am I not reading between the lines? It was well written.and a good read. Am i missing something? I obviously am. You were trying to tell your story in a different way. Please email me and explain it to me. I feel really stupid right now. All the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Miss_LA,
THE UPSET SOUL bless your heart. You are getting it from all sides arent' you? I just read your piece. it is pretty good. Well written. Soild and organized. Onething I don't understand is why people say I can't live without you. You wont' die physically anyway. Your heart may die, your mind may die, to use of metaphors. Because even then they technically dont' die. Your piece was sorrowful and sad. You should find someone who appreciates you. and that loves you and will be there when you need them. Once again, I enjoyed your piece. Keep up the good work. all the best to you, Sincerely, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Miss_LA.
I just finished reading your piece 'HOLD ON'. You definitely get your point across. it was a nice read. The ending was nice. Hold onto your beautiful baby girl. That line really got me. I loved the organization. it was quite well written. Keep up the good writing. Job well done. All the best to you, Beeline!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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