Hello Fallen_Angel,
I just got through reading your piece 'REST IN PEACE'. It was a sad piece. I have a mom who has a cat and she loves Sammy Joe so much. I could just imagine Lover having the seizures that took her away from you. It is a sad state. You did well in writing this piece. It is a great tribute to Lover. I am glad that you wrote it I hope all is well with you now. All the best to you.
Hello Gravangte,
We meet again. I just got through reading your piece :WORDS'. it is a great piece. You should be proud of it. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. it was a good read. There were pictures to be seen within your words. There are alot of oxymorons. One finds it hard to dall with them. However, you did a good job as i said. I hope all is well with you. All the best to you.
Hello Miss LA,
I just finished reading your piece 'BLIND LOVE'. It was a good but dark piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. One wonders if there is anything going on between the two of them or not. It is hoped that the man loves her as she loves him. it is sad and dark as I said. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Hello chowbear,
This is a great piece. I just got through reading it. "A CLASSIC THREAT', was very descriptive. It was like I was there in the forest with the leading character. The fire was something else. And to further go on and smell human flesh was something that threw me for a loop. You did a good job. You made a believer out of me for writing this piece. All the best to you. I hope this finds you well.
Hello strongtogether,
I just finished reading your piece and was glad that I chose it. You did a good job. There is the question if he loves you or not. He may be settling for second best with the other girl. I hope that is not the case. I am sure you love him and want to be by his side. You have a terrific piece here. you should be proud of it. I hope you are doing well. All the best to you.
Hello dkennedy,
This was a romantic piece. It was a good one. You have all right to be proud of the piece. One could see the look on his face and also how he acted to her. It was nice that she smiled at him. There were so many other pictures that were seen within this piece. You did a good job. I hope all is well with you. All the best to you.
Hello Ren,
I just got through reading this piece. It was a sweet piece. It was hoped that she liked the poem he had for her. One should hope that it was a good one. There were pictures to be seen within your piece. I can see that he gave her the poem and that she took it from him. There were other pictures to be seen within the piece, too. Keep up the good writing. All the best toyou. I hope this finds you well.
Hello,
This is very romantic. You painted a beautiful picture within your words. I don't see why there was anything to do with being a Ranger that was so hard to understand. it is a very sweet piece of poetry. There were some mistakes found in the piece. However, it wasn't enough to mention. Though you could go back and edit the piece. I hope this finds you well. All the best to you.
Dear Ludwig,
I just finished reading your piece 'LIFE'S DIRECTIONS'. This is pretty ambitious for a 13 year old. It was a very interesting read. You make some great points. Everyone in life makes good and bad decisions. it is a simple part of life. Like your fork in the road, you may take the rigth one you may take the wrong one. You're very smart for a 13 year old. And I am not patronizing you. i really mean it. You've got a good outlook on life. The piece is written very well. Organized nicely. A job well done. All the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello LoveKrissie,
I just finished reading your piece. "WHAT i DISKLIKE ABOUT MYSELF'. All of God's children are beautiful and special. No one of us is exactly the same. Just because you dont' look like Jennifer Lopez, does not make you ugly. I am sure you are a wonderful, sweet, caring person. I know it is a cliche but it is what is inside that counts. You can look like Marilyn Monroe on the outside but if you dont' have a heart and you dont' care about anyone but yourself then you are ugly. Concentrate on your good points. Asyou said in your piece, your writing, You have a great man. Concentrate on the good things. And you may find that you are happier. it sounds like you have a lot going for you. Dont' give up. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello delilah,
I was just finishing up your piece and thought of what a wonderful piece this is. You have done well. Your words flowed. It was a great read. There is something worth the saying in this piece. You said it. How wonderful it would be to hold unto the person you are with and enjoy them. How wonderful it would be to be loved by that person and know that your heart was their's. I saw all of this in your piece and enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this with us on WDC. Keep up the good writing. You're good at it.
Hello Athly,
I just finished reading your piece. it was a sad one. it is always sad when someone has to go through life without anyone else beside them. You have painted a dark picture here with your words. There is hope for you out there somewhere and show you that I am right. You did a good piece It is a great read. I hope you all the best. All the very best to you for sure.
Hello vladimer,
"SCARS OF HEAVEN". I just finished reading this piece. It is written well. You used your words well. It was very organized. it flowed. There were some pictures to be seen within the piece. You painted lovely pictures with your words. Keep up the good writing. You're good at it.
Hello Gravanite,
MEMORIES OF A FIRST LOVE'. I just got through reading this piece. It was so good and warm. Loving to the ear and the eyes. It is a lonely time without her I know it must be for you and i am sorry that it is that way. It is hoped that she reads this and knows how much you care about her and returns to you. I will you all the best. I hope all is well with you. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
Hello jaylianw,
Great piece of work. I just got through reading this piece. 'TO A FRIEND'. It was a beautiful tribute to a great person in your life. It was sad to read that she has since passed. It was good to have you say that you would make him pay. I am sure you will. All the best to you. Keep on writing. I hope this finds you well.
Dear Kathleen,
I just got through finished reading your poem THE MUSE, it was very charming. it was also well written. Your words painted a beautiful picture. Me and my friend could see the willow tree. With perhaps the dancer dancing under it. It was a great piece. Job well done. All the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Jaylianw,
A NEW DAY I just finished reading this piece. I thought it was a lovely little poem. with good advice and the right outlook on life. it was well written. I loved your rhyming scheme. it seemed to flow so perfectly. it was also a great read. I''m sure it will stick in my mind the rest of the night. Job well done. i really enjoyed it. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Ren,
I just finished reading your piece. WHAT IS ONE LIFE. One life is sacred. One life is beautiful. One life is loved by God. And that is what we all strive for. God's love. Which I believe we already have. I enjoyed your piece. Especially the last two lines. "To God one day is 1000 years
And 1000 years is one day " it was very well written. And I believe it was a metaphor to choose God or otherwise. Otherwise not being a good place. It was a great read. Solid job. I wish you all the best. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Hello Kirsty Semple,
II Penitente. I just finished reading this piece just now. it was very interesting. Well written. And told a mysterious story. What was it that you did that was so terrible? Hum! Oh well. It doesnt' really matter it was a good read. You kept me on the edge throughout the entire piece. I hope you find forgiveness. If that is what you were looking for. all the best to you. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Morgan,
I just finished reading your piece 'THE FUTURE'. I am not sure why you fear the future so much. Although, you did explain why you fear it in your piece. Think happy thoughts. Don't dwell on the negative. You're young. You still have many ups and downs. Hopefully there will be more ups than downs. I'm sure you have a bright future ahead. Your piece was well written. Though self explanatory. it was a nice read. I wish I could do more to alay your concerns. All the best to you. Good luck. Sincerely, Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Gravante,
DARKNESS I just finished reading this piece. it was very interesting. Iam curious as to why you are always in the dark? It does not seem to be your choice. You choose the Gates of Greatness. Your piece is very well written. You said so much in such a short span. I hope your vision improves and you can come out of the dark. I know the feeling. This was an excellent read. And a solid job. All the best to you. Sincerely, Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Holiday 33,
THE STORM this was a lovely freestyle poem. I enjoyed it. It was well written. I can feel lthe raindrops now. I wish I could see her. But I can't get inside your head. Something like Mother Nature. This is a great piece. Well organized. And a good solid read. Your words painted a beautiful picture of a passing storm. Job well done. All the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Amanda G.
I just finished reading your piece 'LOVE". For such a short poem you said an awful lot. I thought it was a lovely sentiment. it was straightforward. And to the point. Which is love. And no there is nothing ever wrong with wanting it. This was nicely written. You did a good job. All the best to you. I hope this finds you well. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Almost Alice,
Just finished reading your piece 'BROKEN ATTACHEMENTS'. I thought it was a sad and sorrowful piece. You didn't want to leave but for some reason you had to. Breaking your heart and his. Continue to drive away. Finish what you started. And you did. This is a well written piece. Organized nicely. A solid job. And I loved the ending line. "After all, broken hearts still beat…right?"
Great line to end your piece with. Once again job well done. All the best to you, Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Joon,
I enjoyed your piece 'THE BEAT". I just finished reading it. It sounds like a song to me. A dance song. I am a song writer. So I tend to see songs in all poetry. Your rhyming scheme was great. Your piece was organized well. It was nicely written. A good job all around. Wishing you all the best. Sincerely, Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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