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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jossiebabyahh,
I just finished reading your piece "The Secret Life of Daydreams". it was well written. yet tragic. I felt sorry for your female charater. Yet she was borderline obsessed. The long string of women would have done it for me. Never continue to hold unto something you know will never be again. i enjoyed your read. It was well organized. it told a great story however sad. I hope your character is over it by now. For her own sanity. Think of herself. Forget Micky. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of The Hidden Path  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello druidstorm,
I just finished reading your piece "The Hidden Path". You have an original rhyming scheme. It was a sad piece. You long for her to return. i hope she does. From your writing, I can tell you are truly in love. Your piece was very well written. Your words painted a good story. Though tragic, I hope everything works out for you. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of The Heart in Me  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Enolsegb,
"The Heart In Me" is a good piece. It is very romantic. it is one I would wished I have written myself. You did such a good job. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. The last line says it all. "Nobody else, just you and me.' What a wonderful picture that is. You have done so well with this piece and the pictures that you drew with your words. Great job. Keep writing. And all the best to you.
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Review of Pure  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello xhalfaheartx,
I just finished reading your piece "Petals". There was alot of symbolism in it. I did see a Christian undertone. Eventhough I am not religious, this is a good read. At first I did not understand. But the petal made it all too clear. This piece is very well written. It shows depth, and a solid structure. It was very pleasant and uplifting. Bless you. And all the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Marvel & Might  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello AvaAva,
I just finished reading your piece "Marvel and Might" . I am assuming you have been through quite a bit in your life. Judging from your piece. You sound just a little bitter. I think you would have a right to be bitter. Your piece is well written. It was very sorrowful and tragic. I hope things improve for you. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Two Words  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Machina,
I just finished reading your piece "Two Words". I found it to be very touching and heartbreaking at the same time. Mommy, Daddy, Who am I? must have broken their hearts to have heard that. Everyone knows you dont' have to be a biological parent to be a good mother and father. I hope you are doing well now. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of Drip Drop  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello J. Baie,
I can't find the rebellion in Drip Drop. It was a well organized piece. At times I couldnt' understand it. That's my problem not yours. I'm not exactly sure what this is about. Technically, it is very sound. it is a well written piece. Email me and explain if you would please. I hope I do not offend you! That is not my intent. As a fellow writer, I have the most respect for all other writers. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of Your voice  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Danny,
Hey, great rhyming scheme. is her voice really that bad? Your piece was well written. it seems you've been thinking about this for a while. I;ve met some girls and guys with disturbing voices. Like you say they can be very attractive but their voice does it in. I found your piece to be humerous. After all you have to laugh about it. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of The Perfect Kind  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Harshal,
I think this is a great piece. It is to a woman/lady right? You see so much in her and it shows. My friend thought you were speaking about God being the one for whom you were mentioning. Either way it is a great piece. You have done a good job. The structure is good. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. Keep on writing. All the best to you.
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Review of Fate  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Nikki,
I just finished reading your piece"Fate". It was hard for me to understand at first. Its late and I've already taken my sleeping pills. So, I'm a little hazy. Pardon me. It was an interesting piece. Very well written. And a wonderful read. The ending was very depressing. Which I am sure was your intention. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of In the darkness  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear sissy,
I just finished reading your piece "In The Darkness". It was a real tear jerker. This guy should be shot. There are other women who have been in yourf position. Men are just dogs. I know I am one. Although, I would never do to a woman what this man has done to you. Your piece is very well wriitten. It flowed well. With a nice read. You know you will carry on. There is no forgettring. Bless your heart. I hope you had someone there for you. A friend, a relative, just someone. I believe this is your first piece on WDC. i'll be looking for more of your material. All the very best to you, Beeline!!! Keep up the good work!
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Review of Eternity  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Lovestrucken,
"Eternity" i finished reading your piece. It was a very touching story. I enjoyed the read. You sure know how to write romance. You should get a job at Harlequen Romance. You certainly have a way with words and you are truly love struck. You are a lucky man/woman. It would be nice if I could find what you have. You have a very well written piece on your hands here. I wish the both of you the best of luck. Continued success. Beeline!!!
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Review of Dreaming of Annah  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Tezzy,
I just finished reading "Dreaming of Annah". Boy you sure do like Annah. I think it is very touching. So you have other versions of this? When will you be posting them? i enjoyed this short piece. But this is a song? Correct? Where is the rest? I can easily hear a melody. I am a song writer myself. I'm used to longer songs. Lyrical. But its very well written. You certainly got your point across. Looking for the next version. All the best to you and Annah. Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Xena,
I just finished reading "My Troubled Friend". I found it to be very touching. Very sweet. Extremely emotional. Your friend is lucky to have you there. There are so many people going through rough patches suffering from mental illness, all alone. If there were people like you I believe the suicide rate wouldn't be so high. You wrote this piece very well. Excellent work. All the best to you and your friend, Beeline!!!!
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Review of Precious Youth  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Stendhal,
"Precious Youth" I just finished reviewing this piece. It was very inspirational. And I agree you should cherish as many days and as much time as you possibly can. Though things aren't always cookies and milk. Somethings in life we cannot control. I suppose then to make the best of what you cannot control. I enjoyed your piece. It was very well written. I caught a couple of rhymes. They were nice. The piece flowed beautifully. Keep up the good attitude. Maybe it will rub off on me. All the very best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of Never let go  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Robert,
I just finished reading "Never Let Go". it was very sweet. This girl is for real? Or is she just someone you made up? If she is real she is a very lucky girl. If not, her imaginary loss. Your poem was very well written. I liked the few rhymes that I saw. Your poem was very structurally solid. As is most of the work I have reviewed of yours. You got a good one here. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Devil  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jackie,
I just fnished reading "Devil". You had me until the very end. Your story was well written. Although, it didn't solve the question. Was there a Devil? OF course I don't expect you to know the answer to that. But I was looking for a little more debate. I am not a relatigious man. But the Devil means something entirely different to me. I wish you would change the ending. Aside from that trivial wish I enjoyed your story. It was a good read. All the best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of Love, real Love  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello gizmo,
"Love, Real Love" is a very cynicail poem. Though very well written. it would seem you've had your heart broken if this is true to life. The structure was very solid. it was a pleasant read. Why are you so down on love? I myself feel the same way. For reasons we won't get into here. I did enjoy your poem. Then we make the same mistake again. My favorite line from the poem. Keep up the good work. all the best to you, Beeline!!!!
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Review of Good bye  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Julia,
I just finished reading your piece "Goodbye". I really want to hate you. But then you have to be logical. You cannot change your feelings. You can't make yourself love him. You can't make yourself hate him. So what do you do? You treat him the way you did. Keep writing. All the best to you.
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Review of We were eternal  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello RWR,
"We Were Eternal" is a good piece. Though short it was well written. it was very harsh. Your characters were determined. Though I liked the piece, and there is nothing wrong with resolution and courage it seemed a bit gung ho. Like your characters were taking pleasure in death. Nothing wrong with that. I have written similar stuff. it just caught me off guard. From your description and title, it was an excellent read and very solid. I apologize if I have misinterpreted your piece. I am sure you will let me know. Keep up the good writing. And all the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of Rusting Memory  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Jerboy,
I just finished reading "Rusting Memory". It was quite well written. It was somewhat puzzling as well. I wonder who was stabbed and how many years ago it was. Was it a woman, a man? A group of drunk teenagers? As the title says there are many memories. Your piece was very solid. And an excellent short read. Perhaps I have misinterpreted the piece. If so, I apologize. Keep up the good writing. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review of My Jesus  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Trey,
I just finished reading your song, "My Jesus". I am a song writer myself. Your song needs to be organized. Where are the choruses? Songs generally go verse, chorus, verse, bridge, chorus the end or verse, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, etc. You get my point of course. You are a song writer yourself? Your lyrics are excellent. I am not a religious man. I do believe in God. Your rhyming scheme was very good. I like alot of rhyming in a song. With just a few changes this could be a great Christian song. I can hear the choir in the background. All the very best to you, Beeline!!! PS Bless you.
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Review of Thinking  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Eloop,
"Thinking" I just finished this piece. It was well written. Well structured. And I can totally identify. My mind goes 15,000MPH. Constantly. The only time it stops is when I am sleeping. Thank God I dont' remember my dreams. These thoughts do not bring me down to the point of suicide. I have a bad case of Writer's Block now. So you'd think this would help. NOT! Oh well, I enjoyed your piece. It was short andsweet. Just the way I like them. Keep them coming. I'm going to have to raid your port. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Lynn,
"Nothing is Allconsuming" I finished reading your piece. It was very interesting. You slept the day away. Bad girl! You got some well deserved rest. The piece is quite well written. You had a very good structure. But you didn't find the cause of life. I think its caused by a head cold. ha Ha Ha. This is very good work. No mistakes. and your words made me feel I was in the same room sitting in a chair watching you sleep. That sounds creepy. Didnt' mean for it to sound that way. Sorry. All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Sonal,
'Imagination's Run Free" Uh where is the rest of the piece? Girl falls in love with neighbor finds out that he is not the one. Give me something to work with here. Or am I misinterpreting this? Am I suppose to use my imagination? Because I have a very vivid one. I wish I could give you a review. But? All the best to you, Beeline!!!
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