I wanted to give you a few more reviews from our group.
What I wanted to tell you, is I love that all your folders have a Jewel name and image. I am always impressed when a personality shines in the portfolio and yours really does. But this entire folder is dedicated to your giving heart. I think that really needs to be celebrated! Thank you so much for all the sharing of your time and talent! We need you here!!
This review is part of a package that was ordered for you...
A simple moment in time, can be something so wonderful when you move your mind past the mundane and transform yourself to the mountains. I have heard something like this before to be present in the moment and to make the most out of it. I am just grateful I have a dishwasher! Thank you for shairng your calgon moment!
Wow, even I am crying at missing my parents. It's been seven years and still the days can't seem real that this much time has past. We are indeed lucky to be able to look inside and see the long lasting love of our parents!
I am thinking of you sweetie and sending you a ton of hugs! You are so brave and strong! Love you!!
Questions answered but no sunshine found. It reminds me of being lost in a church and begging to be understood! Excellent again your choice of words and expression. No suggestiongs, but why no punctuation? Is that part of this poetry form? Just wondering.
Thanks again for bidding on my package, I have enjoyed reading your powerful poetry.
This is not a poem that leaves you with a good feeling. In fact it is downright powerful. If I was a weak person this could bring on some serious depression. You really nail the dismal feeling of time wasted. Total acceptance of time.
No suggestions, but I am going to look for some sunshine!
This is your third review and I am so glad I read this. I actually laughed. I think you could make a few drug company's very happy with this public display of graditute. It is so clever and I wonder just how many people can honestly relate to this. I know I sure can! Thank you so much for sharing your poetry!
I am not sure what a scrapbook poem is, but I do know I love the imagery of this poem and the emotional tone of leaving behind something beautiful. Even if you don't know exactly what that is...
intersting word choices.
You are being honored with this review from your sister...Dawn Embers She won a package, that included 3 reviews for a friend. This is your first.
What I like about this, is that you have several revisions and honestly, I think they all work. I am not familiar with the form, but I get the message of being caught in a lie and how you can play someone for being a fool. The crow is harder for me to understand. I think I might be missing some thing. Again, I really have no suggestions on improvement. Poetry is such a personal thing.
I stand Amazed that God's power is spread from one person to the next. He does not work alone! It is when we believe and share that awe inspiring belief that we get to see the big picture of our world and what he has done for us, and what he will continue to do for us. Thank you so much for sharing your powerful words. You know what else I love about this poem, that no matter how long ago you wrote this. The message is still fresh!
I am laughing out loud! What a great little limerick and so funny too! Can you imagine hitting the keys that hard? LOL I know I can and have! The joys of writing and the hardship of selling!
Write on your so creative with this style of writing. Fun to read!
I so agree with your message here! I can't imagine a Therapist being that bold! There are so many wonderful kinds of therapy and writing is my number one choice and I am going to school to be a Therapist! lol
I have a saying about the rating here, the stars are free, they look good and everyone is perfect for writing and sharing. I am the worse with typos and spelling and forget poetry forms or rules, but my heart leads my pen and I love to write and read.
That is what this site is about. Sharing our love of writing and some do it for all different reasons, we are all right to be here!
I hope you enjoyed the shower!
Oh what a dream to read this poem. I know I shouldn't say this, but I really believe this poem is about me. I want so much to be this free spirit that can love endlessly and make that kind of impact on a soul. I loved this from beginning to end. It is pure beauty and your images only add to the over all joy of reading your words.
This so rocks with emotions, I can't even begin to review this. I miss my dad so much. I miss how he was there and how much your poem feels so real to me. Like I can still see the man and his strong hands. Wow what a blessing you are to create poetry that is so powerful and strong.
Congrats on your third place win in the Paper Doll Poetry contest, I am so glad I am not a judge!!!
I love the message here and I can feel the emotional toll of the tree with a heart, I think it is this form of poetry I am not thrilled about the repeating lines. I still think you did a wonderful job with this poem.
You know I can feel this poem. You know in my mind the images are played out in real life. This is stunning and I am not familiar with this poetry form, but your right...It is powerful or perhaps that is just the words you chose. Great job! No suggestions for improvement, unless you want to put the definition at the end of the poem and get right to the good stuff!
I try not to push away winter...but I think I need to find some red berries to renew my spirit. I love the image and I'm not sure what was created first your poem or the picture but together it is a complete package. I love the whole thought of lover's holding hands with gloves on. What a great imagery that is and the ice I can see it and feel it. I do wish I could snuggle with a fire, that would make this feeling complete. Wonderful job and I can't improve on mother nature and your writing!
Oh I am laughing and cursing cuz your dissin my man! I love Santy Claus, and his big red arse.
Please tell me it aint so! I want Santa to come with his lame toys! This is so clever and well done! I can not find one thing wrong with it...other then your messin with my man! Write on!
I am so in awe of your writing. I think this one by far is my favorite. I just love your opening line and that you bring me to the icy ocean and pluck me out of the sea of dreams. This rocks with imagery and emotions. I love this kind of poetry. I can feel and see it. You have awesome talent thank you so much for sharing it!
Write on!
Now this left me laughing and saying to myself, I LOVE IT!
It is so true, unless you are a writer, I am not sure you would really get this, but for me. I got it and I could not think of one thing to make it better, well unless I was talking to an editor!!
In three short lines you have wrote a book. It is so true how memories when looked over time can become the pages of our soul. This short message is very deep and meaningful. I am so glad this was my first stop to read your poetry.
I have to say this is my fifth review and I am so happy I ended it in the sea! What a beautiful image you have given my mind. I wish so much that the sunshine coming from the gleer off the snow was really the sun sparkling on a ocean! In my mind and through your words you have taken me to the beach to see the day wake up! I love it and wish I could smell the seasalt! Great job of bring your words alive.
I knew I was going to like this, just by it's title alone and your description of dreams not being tamed. It is true such words and flowers have much in common. You can express so much in your poetry. You always seems to know exactly what words to use to inspire and paint a picture. Perfect!
I am in awe of your talent! Keep writing and sharing your gift!
You make me want to go build a clubhouse in my backyard! A few rough edges and a nice day, sounds perfect! I can feel and see and smell this poem. Wow is all I can think of to add. This is great.
I must say, I am not one to know poetry forms, as most of my poetry is free style, but I did enjoy this style.
Sometimes it is the simpliest poem that can mean the most. You allow the reader to take what is here and apply it to their own life. How we all share but can be so different in our approach to understanding. We are all lost in some kind of way and that is why we want to express our words so someone, someplace can find us. I really enjoyed my brief tour of your poetry.
It has been a total pleasure to honor your winning bid.
Thank you and please keep sharing your talent!!
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You fooled me! I looked at your handle with the baseball and I thought this was going to be going on a feild for baseball. Yippee it was Football! My favorite all time college game! I am not into the pro's like I'm Michigan Football. So from beginning to end you had my attention and excitement. Damn you almost make me want to be a man! This rocks and I have no suggestions to make it better! Thanks for sharing your talent and write on!
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