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Review of You  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hi queen.dimples and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I do so hope that you are having a blessed day, as I am having on this day.
I found your poem, "You", while I was searching for something to raid. I thought it was very sweet.
I also thought it was good to write down what is in your heart. I did see a couple of mistakes, but they are very small and easy to fix.

You hold me tight
and i bury me face
i think i'm in love
but i got nothing to say

first of all the pronoun I should always be capital, even I'm.
also in the second line it should read "bury my face"... not me face
I would also change got in the last line to have...


as you can see they are minor mistakes and can be easily fixed.


Thank you for sharing and God Bless You... have fun!

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Review of Master Artist  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello PAPA CASON ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed and beautiful day, as I have had today. I am just enamored with this quite beautiful piece of writing. It was a blessing to read. I thought that first of all the title was excellent and very appropriate for this nice poem. I also thought that the item description was quite good and helpful. The poetry was well rhymed and had a great rhythm the subject was perfect in my mind, as I love spiritual writing. You are an excellent writer an d I would have given you more that five stars had I been able to. I give you five *Thumbsup**Thumbsup**Thumbsup**Thumbsup**Thumbsup*
I would most definitely suggest that all people of all ages should read this lovely and well written piece of writing. It is BEAUTIFUL!!!



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Review of Dad  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello pooholla ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day, as I have had thus far. I wanted to read this little story that you wrote called, "Dad", I was very close to my dad before he died and I loved the relationship we shared.
I try to read all about the father , daughter relationships that people encounter. I find yours to be quite curious, you don't really come out and say that you are miserable though you do show that you are quite angry with him for drinking. I'm sure he probably loved you, but for many reasons people develop drinking problems and when they do, they often hurt those closest to them. Usually never even realizing that their actions have such a negative effect on those near to them. This is what you had to contend with and for that I'm sorry for you and your family.



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Review of The Workshop  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Stuckintime , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed and beautiful day, as I have had today. I was really taken away with your wood carving story called " The Workshop". I found it to be just thrilling and interesting.
with a surprise twist at the end. You have a really good talent for telling a good story. That is a real treat to read especially a thriller, this close to Halloween also. You really amazed me with your ease of writing. My favorite part of this story was the following:

The toymaker almost froze to the spot when he turned to run away from the talking head. Behind him a marionette, his own creation, was moving toward him. The strings floating in the air as though it was being controlled by the invisible arms of the jester.

It was holding his knife, waving it in his direction in puppet like swings of the arm.

“How could you,” The jester’s head continued to call out. “That was my wife!”


I liked this part the best because it was surprising and thrilling. I really enjoyed my read.
I thought that the title of the story was appropriate for the item and I also thought that the
item description worked well.

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Review of Choices  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello The prodigal son returns 2023. ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. I thought that this poetry was very important and carried with it a very powerful message, Of how humans can spare the lives of tiny living creatures if they just would. I believe it takes more courage to allow an entity to live rather that to kill it just because you can. I believe the most power is achieved by giving rather than taking.
We as Humans have dominion over all of the creatures given to us by God Himself. But we show more strength in allowing a bear to live than we would in shooting him dead I think. all creatures have a right to life just as we do. It is important that we do not kill more than we need to feed on. actually we need not kill anything as we could survive solely on fruit and vegetables.



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Review of The Cowardly Wolf  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello QueerlyAsexual ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today, as I have had. I liked the title of this item it is what initially attracted me to read this piece. I also believe that the title," The Cowardly Wolf", is very appropriate for this item. I find that the item description is also very helpful to the reader/reviewer. I can see the resemblance to Li'l Red Riding Hood idea. I so much enjoyed reading your poem and I also felt as if you did a great job creating and writing this little story poem. I think that you have a real knack for telling the story of a relationship. You seem to relish a good fight an d to discuss differences in your writing. It is always an interesting thing to have a writer who is so open and free with their writing.



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Review of empty heart  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello logan ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. I liked what you wrote in your poem, "Empty Heart", I did see several tiny mistakes with some of the writing so I am copying your poem as you wrote it and beneath it I will make corrections, your words will be in red.


There's and emptiness inside my heart to tell the story i don't know where to start

i met a girl who's eyes sparkled like the night skye.her hair flowed like a waterfall in

a bright blue stream she brought peace and joy to me my eyes filled with so much glee

but alas my heart broke i grew too close and she drifted away my life once filled with happiness and warmth now drew cold and dark my heart once full is now sad

with nothing to fill my empty heart.

There's an emptiness inside my heart, to tell the story I don't know where to start.
I met a girl, whose eyes sparkled like the night sky. Her hair flowed like a waterfall in a bright blue stream. She brought peace and joy to me, my eyes filled with so much glee, but alas! my heart broke, I grew too close and she drifted away. My life once filled with happiness and warmth ; now drew cold and dark, my heart once full is now sad, with nothing to fill my empty heart.


If you will notice I corrected a few misspelled words like sky, and I capitalized the pronoun I. I also changed all of the punctuation by adding several commas and others. It makes quite a difference.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Mary ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today as I have had. You are a fabulously terrific writer of poetry. I love to read poetry and I read a lot of it, so I know what I like when I read it and I seem to have taken a shine to your poem, "A Poem for Writers". I liked the fact that you dedicated this poem to all writers. I enjoyed reading your poem and I thought that the title of the poem was very appropriate for this particular writing. I also thought that the item description was a perfect place for a dedication to writers. I find that you show a great aptitude for writing poetry and You have a good talent for writing period. I bet that you enjoyed writing this poem and then dedicating it to your fellow writers.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello thea marie ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. Your poem, which is a revision of "Alone is Not Lonely", which you wrote is a very entertaining and enlightening piece of literature I thought.
You did a wonderful job writing about this an d I enjoyed reading it for sure.
My favorite part of the writing is the following:



By myself for a time
Not lonely at all,
Just alone.

I thought that this part was so telling and very meaningful. You are by yourself yet you are not at all lonely your just by yourself. You did a very lovely job creating this poem which I thought was very powerful and also it was very important. The revision was noticeable and I thought it was a very telling difference in each poem.


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Review of Lonesome Gods  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello dclowe ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day. This was a very nice and well written piece of literature. I enjoyed the read and would highly recommend it to everyone. Your title, "Lonesome Gods" , is very original as well as being very creative. I am a Christian, therefore I believe only in the one true God, the Creator of Man. I always enjoyed reading Mythology and learning about the ancient Gods. I found it to be so entertaining as well as being interesting. The stories were always very creative, which I did always enjoy greatly. This poem was very well written and also very enjoyable for me to read. I would suggest all people who like Mythology or Poetry should certainly read this piece of writing. You did a very fine job creating it.



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Review of Smell the flowers  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello rjsimonson ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day.
I surely was taken with your pretty and thought provoking piece of writing, called "Smell The Flowers", it was a simple title for a very interesting read.
I thought that the title was very appropriate for this particular item. I also think that the item description said it all, and it was very important and helpful to the reader. I enjoyed reading your beautifully written piece of poetry, You did a fantastic job creating this thoughtful poem. I especially liked the way you changed colors in the poetry it added an interesting flair to the writing. I think this writing was so simple but held with it an exceptionally strong and powerful message. to not miss what life has to offer.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Squeekachu ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have had a blessed and wonderful day today. I chose to read and review this item because I was interested in what New Horizons is teaching you. I have to admit I am lost and confused as you do not tell the reader what the purpose of this exercise is about. I did recognize many of the names you chose, as they were taken from a variety of television shows. I do not understand what you are trying to accomplish with this assignment. The writing or the variety of sentences are well written, however as I do not know what you are doing I'm lost. You have chosen to write about the television show NCIS, and I also recognized several of the names; such as Alex P. Keaton from the '80's sitcom. If I were you I would write in the item description what the purpose of this exercise is.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Bill Kinahan ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I do so hope that you have had a blessed and wonderful evening today.
I enjoy reading poetry and when it is of a spiritual nature I love it even more.
I believe wholehearted in God. I admire anyone who writes of their love of God,
Religion and of a spiritual feeling. To share one's feelings about such things proves a love of Christianity. I thought that you wrote a well balanced and sweet poem. The title was very appropriate for the poem and I also think that the item description was somewhat helpful to the reader. You seem to like to share your feelings through your writings. I enjoyed reading your writing and I commend you for the subject matter in which you chose to write on. I believe that you have written a very lovely piece of writing.



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Review of Dragonfly  
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Hello Spirited ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening and I do so hope that you have had a blessed and lovely day.
I loved the wonderful title of your prose "Dragonfly", I thought it was perfect and very appropriate for this particular item. I see that this poetry was created for "The Beauty Of Nature Contest", I do so hope that you placed in the winner's circle with this entry, as it was very lovely. I do believe that, although the item is pretty much self explained, I do think you needed to write a more fully developed item description, for many people this is what makes a reader decide to read and carry on with an item. Your writing was very creative and also very beautiful. it was a well written piece of poetry. I do think that you did a very good job creating this piece.



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Review of The Monster  
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Hello J. A. Buxton ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope you are having a blessed day, as I am having.
I felt as though you did a very good job creating a story about a real monster.
I thought that the title of your short story was also very good and also very appropriate for it as well. I also thought that the item description was helpful as well. You have written a well organized story, which I thought was very creative and also very good. I do not like monsters, I think most of us disliked them . You seem to have a really keen talent for creating no dialogue short stories. Some writers find that to be a very difficult thing to do.
I am giving you four and one half stars for this short story because I believe t hat you truly deserve it. I think that that is a good rating for this story.


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Hello Dorianne , I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages this evening.
I thought that this piece of writing was so well written and that you did an exceptional job creating it. I really did like this item. I am so very close to my mother and I guess I would just die if something ever happened to her.
I highly recommend this item for all of you avid readers out there.
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Hello ,I came across this item while looking for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages this evening.
I thought that this article or review of your local sci fi convention was very
detailed and informative. I especially found the part about the clothing of different periods. I think you did an outstanding job recalling all of the authors' names. I have personally never gone to one of these conventions before,
I live in a rural area and the only authors that come to visit here are the writers who grew up here.



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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages this evening. I thought that this was a very well written and interesting item on aging, which is, for some of us, a difficult thing, an d for others it is an ease. The title of your item is appropriate for the poem I thought. I also thought that the item description is very helpful.

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Hi Maryann and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I found this sonnet on an approved list of writings for our group to review for our review raid this evening. I thought this was just a beautiful sonnet. The title was perfect, and also very appropriate for the item. The item description was very helpful to the reviewer as it tells of what the poem was about.
I am glad that you gave an author's note, telling what a sonnet entailed. It was quite helpful.

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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I came across this item in a list of approved writings for our group to review for our review raid this evening. I enjoyed reading this interesting poetry about Qatar's Monoliths. I think that the title is very appropriate for this item as this is what the poem is about. I don't really get the item description however. I've never heard of these Monoliths before. It would appear as if you have done an enormous amount of research about this place and these objects.

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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I found this item in a list of approved writings for our group to review for our review raid this evening.
I have reviewed several of your writings the last day or two. You are a very talented writer and I enjoy reading your work. This poem is a Caccia form of poetry, which is one I personally can't recall doing myself. I've never visited Panama before it must be a very nice place to visit.


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Review of Moldova  
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item in a list of approved writings for our group to review for a review raid today. I thought this was a very interesting item and you must have done a lot of research on Moldova, in order to write such a thorough item about it. The title was very appropriate for the item. The item description was very helpful to the reader. You did a fantastic job creating this item.


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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item in a list of approved writings for our group to review for our review raid. I thought that this was just so beautiful, this poem about the Indian Ocean.. I have never seen the Indian Ocean before, I bet it is wonderful. I thought that you did a fantastic job creating this glorious poem, however I did see one tiny little mistake, but it can easily be corrected..

the Republic of Seychelles,
inviting tourist
form across the Earth
to see its unique flora and fauna,

in the third sentence above I believe it should read:
inviting tourist from not form, across the earth.

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Review of Trade Winds Sing  
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item on a list of approved writings for our group to review for our raid today. I thought this was a very talented piece of writing, This is so good and well written. I thought the title was excellent and very appropriate for the item. my favorite part of the item was:

Listen to the trade winds echo
the Brown Pelican56 call,
or the songs of 1767
bird species.

You did a great job.


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Hi Logan and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item on a list of approved wr8itings for us to review for our raid today. this was the most amazing poem. It really made me stop and think. It was surely some beautiful writing. My favorite part of the item was:

This writing above is just amazing, I am at a loss for words to describe how much I loved and appreciated it.


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