Hello Chris Breva , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you this afternoon, I hope you have had a blessed day today. I came across this piece of writing on writing.com's read and review pages. I thought this piece of writing was sad and quite maddening.
I think he should not have gone to jail since his father was so abusive, I believe it was self defense. This is the wrong thing to have happen but it is all too real to life. so often the bad person is not held accountable for the things they do to the innocent victim. I think the title is appropriate for the writing, and the item description needs a little bit of description about the song. These are surely some sad Christmas lyrics.
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Hello , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you this evening. I hope you have had a blessed day today. I came across your writing while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I enjoyed your cute little poem about eating apples. What is it that they say? An Apple a Day helps keep the doctor away, well give me a bushel then lol. Your poetry rhymed really well and it also had a very nice rhythm. I liked the title and I also thought it was appropriate for the writing. I guess the item description was somewhat helpful as it did mention that it was about apples.


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Hello Tim Chiu , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are Celebrating you this evening. I hope you have had a blessed day.
I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages today.
I thought this was a well written and nice poem you wrote. I enjoyed reading it.
I thought it had a good rhythm and excellent rhymes, I liked the rhyme scheme I thought it was most different. You did a great job creating and writing this piece of writing. Congratulations on a piece well done. I liked the title and I thought that it was so appropriate for this piece, I do think you could have told a little bit more about the poem in the poem's item description, but all in all you did great.


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Hello Writer_Mike , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are celebrating you today, I hope you have had a blessed day today.
I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages. I thought this was a very enlightening poem about the Month of February, which is the shortest and most loving time of the year due to St. Valentines Day. I love also the weather in February, where I live it is still quite chilly but it is the first month in many in which the sun shines bright and the crocuses and daffodils show their heads. Your poem is very nice and the title is appropriate for the poem.
the item description is also very helpful.


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Hi M.E.Cushman , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are going to celebrate you today, I hope you have had a blessed day.
I came across this poem while searching for something of interest on writing.com's read and review pages. I thought that this poem was very observant of your feelings of hate. I believe we should try to focus on love instead of hate and the things we love about life and ourselves. I believe also that If you lack faith that is an extremely sad and alarming thing. We all need to have faith in something especially faith in God. I thought that the title was appropriate for this poem, however I did think that the item description should tell a little about the poem, as it is important that the reader know something about it so that they will continue on reading your work.


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Hi Dr M C Gupta , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you today, I hope you are having a blessed day.
I came across this poem on the read and review pages of writing.com. I thought that this was a wonderfully great poem, you did a fantastic job creating and writing this poem about happiness and such. I thought that the title was a very good idea and that it was also very appropriate for this particular poem.
I also thought that you did a great job writing and creating the item description for this poetry, I felt that it was very helpful. The whole poem put together is worth five stars I believe.


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Hi Warped Sanity , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you today, have a blessed day hon.
I came across this poem on writing.com's read and review pages this afternoon.
These poems were very odd and original. The first one I had trouble understanding, I thought it was a bit confusing for its meaning. However the second one, which I personally liked the best, was easy to understand and I had no trouble to figure out what the poem was about. You did an exceptional job on the second one, or shall I say the first one you wrote. I would not have changed it had I been you, it was much easier to understand.


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Hi Jasmine Adler , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you today, have a blessed day.
I came across this item on the read and review page of writing.com.
I found this poem to be sad but then it turned happy, this was a very descriptive poem and I thought you did a great job describing everything in it.
You seem to really love the color blue, I do too, as it is a beautiful color.
I am sorry you lost your friend but you did find a new one, which is a happy thing. However, I don't understand one line, you said If you could go back you would. But you follow that up with but I found someone new someone better.
If you found someone better then why would you want to go back?

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Hi Just_Jordan , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We have chosen to celebrate you today, I hope you have a blessed day.
I came across this poem on the read and review page of writing.com. I think you did a wonderfully fantastic job creating and writing this poem. I love poetry about God and Spiritual things. This poem made me feel strong and powerful. I think it was a positive poem about what we can overcome in life. We each have hurdles to overcome or as you say a mountain to climb. You chose to listen to God, which shows the wisdom of your choices. This was such a good message for you to write about.

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Hi Sonia Zircon , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you this afternoon, have a blessed day.
I came across this poem while searching for something to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I found this poem to be very sad and disturbing. Any time you write about or talk about suicide it is unsettling. The man in the poem was so upset and it is no wonder that he is. His girlfriend has just taken her own life. Your poem was very good and you show much talent for writing.
I thought the title was appropriate for the item. I also thought the item description could have been a little more descriptive about the poem.
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Hi Jaiam , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We want to celebrate you today, I hope you are having a blessed day today. I came across this poem while searching for something interesting to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I really loved this poem. I love poetry of a spiritual nature. You show a real talent for writing spiritual poetry. I love Jesus and I believe He can save and sustain us He can also forgive us for our sins, and will. You have created a beautiful poem about the Christ. I thought the title was excellent and appropriate for the poem.
The item description was helpful as it told us the poem is about Faith.
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Hi mirtxx, and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are celebrating you today. I so much enjoyed this pretty little poem about life and nature. I think you did a great job creating this special little item. I've read much of your poetry in the past and I must say that this is one of the best that I've read. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages this morning. I thought that it was a well thought out piece, and I really liked it. I thought the title was perfect and was amazingly appropriate for this particular piece of poetry. I also thought the item description was perfect and helpful. You did a great job.
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Hi Celticsnow , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are celebrating you today. I thought that you did an outstanding job on your writing of this particular poem. It was just wonderful. I believe that this was a thought provoking poem which makes you slow down and enjoy all that surrounds you. It makes you stop and take notice of everything. This poem mentions each age group and Tells what each are doing. I think the title is very well founded and very appropriate for this poem. I also think the item description is simple but it works. You did a great job with this writing.


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Hi Twiga , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are celebrating you today. I surely enjoyed all of your little limericks, you must truly like to write them, I counted seven of them and my favorite ones were the first one and the one about the Lion. I think you did a very good job creating and writing these limericks. I think that the title is so very appropriate for these little limericks , each one had it's own title and each one worked well. I think the item description was Also pretty helpful.
The limerick form of poetry is a favorite of many people and is pretty easy to write. You did do an outstanding job creating them.


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Hi katherine dudley , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are celebrating you today. I enjoyed reading your little poem, It was so romantic. It seems as if you are truly and really in love with this man which you wrote this poem for or about. I do hope you showed him this most beautiful poetry which you wrote for him. This poem use references of outer space to compare your love and him to. I think that was unique and imaginative.
I believe the title was cool and very appropriate for this particular poem. The item description was brief and straight to the point, but it did tell what the poem was about. The only thing I saw that I would personally change is:

The fact that you used lower case when you wrote the pronoun word "I". You should always use the upper case when using this word.


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Hi Dorianne and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are celebrating you today and I hope you enjoy your review.
This poem, which is called an epulaeryu, was well written according to the definition you displayed it met all of the qualifications of the form.
This poem was about some food, you chose the banana Split, which I love.
The delicacy is a winner in my book, I think you chose something that everyone
can sink their teeth into and be happy with the outcome. Your title was perfect as it was the full subject of your poem. The item description is supposed to give a look see into what the poem is about, instead you told what type of poem it was. That is fine for this particular poem though, because the title and the poetry kind of speaks for itself.

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