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Hello Dave , I am your judge, Lisa Noe , for the story poem contest. I am so glad you entered my contest this month. As usual you have entered a wonderful story poem. I always enjoy reading your entries. The title of this item is appropriate for the poetry. The item description is very helpful and you have captured my attention with your entry. Thanks for sharing and God Bless You.

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Hello paileykristine , I am your judge, Lisa Noe , for a story poem contest. I am glad you have entered my contest. Your entry is just lovely. It made me feel that I miss my husband when he is not around. I need to tell you, however, that when you write the pronoun I it should always be capitalized. but really it's no big deal, I just thought I'd mention it for next time. I thank you for entering my contest and I hope you will enter again next month. God Bless You and good luck.

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Hello horserider , I would like to start out by wishing you a happy account anniversary today, I hope you are having a blessed day an d a nice mother's day. I love acrostic poetry. This is an especially good poem I really loved it. it has alliteration which is just perfect. I think the title is appropriate for the item. You really did do a great job.
Thanks for sharing this item with me and God Bless You.

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Hello Mitts , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com. Your piece of literature popped up and I was surprised to see that it had no title yet, and that is what you named it. I came across a few little mistakes with your poem. first of all it should say does instead of do. Next you should always capitalize the pronoun I.
and next I think you really should think of a proper title for the item, even if it is not the best one in the world, a title is one of the most important parts of any writing. It captures the reader's attention and imagination, it makes them decide whether or not to continue on reading the item. I also would suggest something more appropriate for the item description as well, as it also makes the reader decide whether to read on. Thanks for sharing and Good luck in the future with all of your writing endeavors and God Bless You.

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this mystic love poem on writing.com's read and review pages, while searching for something of interest to read. I found it! This was a well written piece of writing. As usual I can figure that you will have some well written and beautiful literature for me to read.
You are a very talented poet and this proves it once again. I loved the poem it was terrific, The title is very appropriate for the poem and the item description was both awesome and helpful to the reader.
I thank you for sharing this item with me and I wish you good luck with all of your future writing endeavors, May God Bless You today and Always.

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Hello skeason , I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages today. I thought you did a great job on each part of assignment one.
However, most of the poems did not make a lot of sense. You did follow the directions, for Example, On the one where you were supposed to do alliteration , You did the alliteration very very well, However your poem did not make a lot of sense they were several sentences that were disconnected from one another and did not seem to fit together. The same for each part of the assignment. Your work on the directions was excellent but your poems should make sense as well. Thanks for sharing this item with me,
Good luck with all of your writing endeavors and may God Bless You.

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Hello s a m a n t h a , I came across this item today while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I thought this particular piece of writing was very interesting and very telling about what the main character thought of herself. I thought, myself, that this poem was very sad, It told of someone bulimic who is in bad trouble mentally and emotionally. You state that this is based on A book which is still in progress, it sounds very interesting. Good luck with your future writing endeavors and may God Bless You today and always.

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Hello T L SHUFF , I came across this item while searching writing.com's read and review pages today. I was in awe of your poem "Autumn leafs". However, I believe it should be "Autumn leaves". The title is very appropriate for the poem though, and the Item description is very helpful although once again it should be leaves. This is your writing and if this is the way you want to name it then that is your prerogative. The poem itself is breath taking I thought it was just beautiful. I wish you luck with all of your future writing endeavors, God bless You.

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Hello K. Ray , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages today.
I thought this was an awfully good poem I liked the idea of missing the little things about someone in your life, the past makes you so nostalgic or it does me any way. I am sometimes wheelchair bound so I can understand this poem very well. Though most people would be able to. I thought you did a fantastic job creating this little poem. The title is appropriate and good. The Item description is helpful and you did a great job writing the poem. Good luck on your future writing endeavors and may God Bless You.

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Hello Dorianne , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I just loved this item, I thought the title was perfect and it was very appropriate.
The item description was very helpful, which it is supposed to be. The poem itself was perfect, it was a free verse poem about visiting your grandma.
I loved the feel of the poem it was so sweet, if only kids now days could feel and see what we saw thirty plus years ago. or maybe a little longer, I don't want to tell on myself or my age. Good luck with your future writing endeavors
and God Bless You.

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Hello Pony Tale , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com. This was a great little poem.
I think you did an outstanding job creating this delightful poetry about the dinner foods we eat. I love desert. Sherbet is my favor, orange that is.
I thought your rhymes were excellent and the rhythm was perfect. You really did do an excellent job creating this poem. Thanks for sharing this item with me, Good luck with your future writing endeavors and God Bless You.

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Hello PookieFoof , I am here at your request to read and review your poetry called "Water Conservation". I am sorry but I only do poetry I don't normally review short stories, so I will only be reviewing this one and not the other. I think this is a very important piece of writing as most people don't know probably in the Appalachian mountains there is very little clean drinking water even in this day and age. much of the ground water has been contaminated with mine run off from the coal mines. some have descent water if they are lucky enough to get city water. But people who live outside the city limits have to live with well water which is mostly hard water with pollution in it. I realize that is not what you meant you were talking about conserving water all over the country. I just thought I'd add this as it is a sad thing that a rich nation like America still has people who do not have clean drinking water piped into there homes. Thanks for sharing and God Bless You.

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Hello PookieFoof , I came across your poem "A Look At A Book", on the read and review page of writing.com, while I was searching for something to read of interest. I thought you did a great job creating this piece of work about reading books and how they add to our lives. You seem to really love to read. and it appears you have many books which you love. I enjoyed reading your poetry it was very note worthy. Thanks for sharing this item with me, Good luck with your future writing endeavors. God Bless You.

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Hello jaya , I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, may you have a blessed day and enjoy your life. this was a wonderful poem. I also love little white flowers, I love white irises and white Dogwood trees. They are exquisite. Your poem was also exquisite. I think you did a fine job creating this wonderful poem. The title was excellent and very appropriate for the poem.
The item description was equally helpful and beautiful. Yes these flowers do make you happy. thanks for sharing this poetry with me, Good luck with your future writing endeavors and may God Bless You.

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Hello fyn , I found this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, while I was searching for something interesting to read today.
I really enjoyed reading this fantasy poem about a Spidragon, which is a spider and a dragon combined, you did a uniquely good job of sticking to the prompt of the contest. this was just great. I am afraid of both so I wood be terrified of your creation of a spidragon. You have a very creative mind it would appear.
I just thought this was a perfect poem you should think about entering it in to

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. It would make a great addition. perhaps for May. Good luck with all of your future writing endeavors, and May God Bless You,.

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Hello ridinghhood-p.boutilier , I came across this little poem, while searching for something to read on the read and review pages of writing.com today.
I thought this was a cool poem for Thanksgiving. You did a good job creating this poem. The title was everything it should have been, as I thought it was very appropriate for this poem. The item description I felt was also very helpful. You did a fine job, Thank you for sharing this item with me today. Good luck with your future writing endeavors and may God Bless You.

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Hello Curtis Sterling , I found this item on the read and review pages, while I was searching for something interesting to read today. I just loved this, I think the rainbow is a beautiful subject to write about. and your description of it and the symbolism of it was perfect. I never would have thought to add the freedom and independence that the rainbow makes a person feel. You did a wonderful job creating this poem. The title is great and very appropriate.
The item description is very helpful and adds greatly to the poem. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with me and Good luck with your future writing. God Bless You.