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Hello Ida Joy , I found this item while searching for something interesting to read this afternoon, I found it on the read and review pages.
This letter was so sweet, I still have my mother so I don't understand why this letter touched me so deeply. I love my mom so much and thankfully still have her. But your letter surely brought a tear to my eyes and choked me up a bit.
it was poignant and sweet. I loved it, I especially liked the repetition of
"she loved me with a bookend kind of love." I thought that just made it. Thanks for sharing and God Bless You.

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Hello Netty , I found this item on the read and review pages as it popped up as I was searching for something to read this morning.. I thought you did a fine job creating this poem about joy and happiness. The repetition was good in this particular piece as it really drove the message home. I think it is an important message for people to read, especially in this day and age with all the negativity that is around in our world. God Bless you and thank you for sharing this upbeat piece (peace) with me.

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Hello Mary Ann MCPhedran , I found this item while searching for something to read on the read and review page, I was surprised when this item came up because I recall seeing it on Dave's Café assignment for the Perspective discussion a short time ago.. I thought it was real cute then and I still think it is a nice little ditty. You did a good job creating this original piece you should be proud of it. I'm sure Dave was pleased with your work. Thanks for sharing this item with me. God Bless You.

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I was just searching for something to read on the read and review pages when I came across this informative and oh so interesting essay.
I am really in to finding out about our Planet and what will become of it in the future, I live in the Appalachian Mountains, where we have no shortage of trees.
However, I realize there are places in our country and in our world where trees are scarce, and global warming is affected by this I believe. I was so interested in the futuristic city of China in which all of the trees and species are being placed, I only wish that America and every other country on earth would do the same thing. Then we could come closer to solving the problem.
Thanks for caring about our world as I also do. God Bless You.

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Hello Rei , I found this item on the read and review pages while searching for something interesting to read. This chapter popped up and I liked the item description because it sounds as if it would be an interesting and different read for me. Your writing is very good it seemed to me to be polished.
I liked the fact that you did it in a larger and darker font, it helped poor eyes be able to focus better on the writing. I am curious to see what direction you take the story. Thanks for sharing this chapter with me, God Bless You.

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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I found this item on the read and review pages while I was searching for something interesting to read. I liked this item because it is about the acid that is destroying our environment and no one seems to care.
at least as you said it the politicians don't and they are the ones who need to help legislate laws to help protect our environment. well never mind that, your poem was simply good. It had alliteration, rhyme, rhythm and assonance, you utilized all of the poetic devices with this one. Good job. Amd God Bless You.

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Hello kay , I found this item while searching for something to read on the read and review pages today;. I thought this would be a nice little poem to read as it is about your feelings about your upcoming graduation. That is a special time in your young life actually it is the best days of your life believe it or not. I so long for those good old days of yesterday. Though we should look forward not back it is nice to remember. Your poem is poignant.
it is a well written voice of you. Thanks for sharing and God Bless Y:ou.

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Hello Sonia Zircon , I found this item on the read and review page while I was trying to find something interesting to read, this was entertaining,
it was beautiful especially the last stanza. I think what you said in that stanza is just amazingly beautiful. I think it shows strength of character on ;your part. Your free verse poem was just lovely and I appreciate your talent and say thanks for sharing it with me, God Bless You.

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Hello Tehuti, Lord Of The Eight , I found this little item on the read and review page, as it popped up while I was searching for something entertaining and interesting to read today;. This was so original and very entertaining, I liked the way all of the little characters were named after various colors. The rats appear to be in ;the military. I think that is so cute. a military rat, I've known a few in my life I'll tell you. lol just kidding. Your writing really made me smile, it was a continuing story about these little rats. the next part will be part p6 and I bet it will be just as entertaining and jovial. God Bless You.

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Hello freedom and nature , This poem popped up on my screen while I was searching for something to review and for an entertaining piece to read. I found it on the read and review pages. This is a nicely adapted poem about a caged bird taken from a more famous poem. I liked the title of this poem I think it is very appropriate, I thought the poem showed real heart, it was about freedom or lack there of. This was a sad and almost heartbreaking poem if you look at it from the bird's stand point, as it lost its freedom. Thank you for sharing and God Bless You.

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Hello Michaelmountain:spring hope , This item popped up on my screen when I went to the read and review pages. I thought I'd give it a once over because I loved the item description, I myself am a Christian and I live solely by Faith in the Good Lord. I believe so strenuously in Him that none other can ever touch my willingness to love, forgive, and learn of His great works and plans. He is my rock and my salvation I should want to be his daughter and trust Him my whole life through. Your writing is beautiful and the fact that you too live by Faith is a blessing, I love to see when others also love the Lord as I do. Thank God For brothers and sisters in Christ. May God Bless You, and yours.

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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item while searching for something interesting to read on the read and review pages today. I really think you did a fantastic job creating this one of a kind poem. it is so great. The rhythm was just perfect as was the rhymes. I think you did a great job and you show great talent, Thanks for sharing this item with me, and God Bless You.

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Hello IAMWATIAM , I came across this little piece of advice while searching the read and review pages for something to read. This is a great way to live your life, I have often stated pretty much the same thing in my own life.
You can't hold a grudge, it is important to forgive others for their wrongdoing
just as we want them to forgive us for ours. we all are guilty of something and in order to seek forgiveness it is important that we forgive. It is true that both family, and strangers will hurt you, but you must realize you have probably also hurt them along the way. Thanks for your wisdom and God Bless You.

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Hello flofree , I found this item as it popped up when I went to the read and review pages looking for something interesting to read. I think this is a good poem, The title is very appropriate for this poem. The item description is also good and very helpful as it tells about your conflict. The things I saw that could be improved upon are that some of the lines were very long and others short. You need to round out the lines and kind of make them the same or at least similar lengths. The following line needs a little work.

My heart races at the say of your name when someone asks about a 'familiar face'
I would say ...at the sound of your name...
also
On the third to the last line you say "bought me back..."
It should read "brought me back..."

other than that you did a good job, just watch the line lengths. God Bless You and thanks for sharing.

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I just found this item on the read and review pages, I thought I'd give it a quick read and review. I think you have a wonderful talent for writing poetry. I thought this was a sad poem, it tells of how someone in your life is battling a rotten disease that takes away their memory. This someone is your mother which makes it all the sadder, because the relationship a woman has with her mother is the most special in the world I think. I am so sorry for you and wish you all the best. I am fortunate enough to still have my mother and I hope to have her still for a while. The disease your mother had is an alarming and frightening disease I can't tell you how bad I feel for you. this poem is so nice it is a good tribute to her.

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Hello Robert Deimel , I hope that the good Lord rains down blessings upon you.
I must say that this is such a well written poem, It made me sit in awe of your poetic ability. I loved it, and I can't put it any plainer than that, I only wish that I could have written this item. It is beautiful. The rhymes are perfect and beautifully written, the rhythm is as if you are playing a fine violin. The title is good and very original, I loved the item description and I felt that it was very helpful to the reader. Thank you so very much for sharing this cool and sweet item with me. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I hope that The Good Lord rains down good blessings for you. I found this poem on the read and review pages, and I thought I'd give it a whirl. I've never been a big fan of zombies, werewolves or vampires or any of those kinds of creatures. However, your poem was well written and interesting.
An English Sonnet, uhm... I would not have thought to write such a subject.
But it does work and I even think you did it justice. You are a good and accomplished writer. I thought the rhymes were good, I think the title was very
appropriate, and the item description was helpful. You did an excellent job on this poem. Thank you for sharing this item with me, May God Bless You and Yours.

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Hello Jester , I would like to say may God rain blessings down upon you.
This poem is outstanding, it may be short but it is to the point and easily
understood. The title is awesome, and very appropriate for this poem.
The item description is very helpful and describes the poem perfectly.
There were no mistakes with this poem or at least none that I saw.
There was good rhyming and a great rhythm, the alliteration and assonance were very noticeable in the writing. I love when people use poetic devices in there writing, it add so much to the writing. Thank you for sharing this very lovely piece of poetry with me, And may God Bless You and Yours.

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Hello ali , I would like to start out by wishing you a very happy account anniversary today, May God rain down many Blessings for you.
I really did like your poem and I think you did a fantastic job creating it.
I love to read spiritual poetry, it makes me feel love I am a child of God as are we all so I feel that the spiritual poetry is simply wonderful.
The poem flowed well and I think you chose a perfect title for it, as it was very appropriate for this particular piece of poetry.
I thank you for sharing this item with me and God Bless You and Yours.

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Hello Rosevina , I would like to start out by wishing you a very happy
account anniversary today, May the Blessings of Heaven rain down upon you.
This poem is a well written piece for sure. I think that the title is appropriate for this particular piece of poetry. I do think you need to put more thought into the item description, as this is what makes many readers decide whether or not they want to continue on reading this item or not.
The poem is good and I think you did a good job creating it. I thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless You and Yours.

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Hello Gaby ~ Finding my way back , I first of all want to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, I do hope the blessings of Heaven find there way to you and yours. I looked over your entire port and couldn't find anything other than this to review. You really should write some poetry or stories or reality even an editorial would be good for us to be able to visit you more often. But I found this G.O.T or for those who haven't a clue The Game of Thrones. I have participated in them before so I know how fun but also how much work goes in to this activity. I see where the activity will resume for a final season in September 2018. I want everyone to know that if they donate 50k or 100 k there are special merit badges for them. !00 K is really nice, I have it myself. the 50k is a choice of badge that you don't have. Thanks for sharing and May God Bless you and watch over you.
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Hello Rojodi , I hope you are having a blessed and wonderful evening, I find myself sitting here in the dark reviewing my head off. I found this item on the read and review pages and thought I'd let you know what I thought of this item. The cast of characters have wonderful and believable names and who they are and what they do is a good addition. I have never written a character list, I think I should do this in the future as it is a swell idea. I thank you for giving me this idea and I will use it in the future with my own names of course.
Thanks for sharing and God Bless You.

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Hello Mr. Happy , I would first like to start out by wishing you a very happy account anniversary today and I wish for you all of the blessings in Heaven. This item is awesome, I enjoyed reading about Adam the perpetual man who lasts forever or until the end of time. This is a well written piece of prose. my favorite part was:
I smoke, I drink, I take copious amounts of drugs, I play deathly games in the rain, I do all that harms them, to no avail. What a bitter shell of a creature I now stand. Dehumanized, why would humanity even need such a word? Yet here I am, Adam, primordial, eternal.

I'll tell you why I liked it the best. I liked it the best because it sums up man of today or at least a great deal of the population. they are only looking out for those things that gratify themselves. ie. drugs,, alcohol, cigarettes,
gratuitous sex and violence and so on. It is a shame but tis the truth. however who am I to say things weren't equally bad in Western days, or other times. I have only the present day to judge by. you did a good job and I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing this item with me, God Bless You.