Hello sfttarget, You ask me to take a look at this piece today. I gladly read the item and I think it is just wonderful it has a solemn tone and the item is well written.
the only mistake I saw, and it was just a minor little overlook, you forgot to put a comma in the last line after the word over. but that's an easy fix, you did a great job. God Bless You
Hello VisonzOfDystopia, I am with the Poet's Place.
I found this item on the read and review pages.
I thought it was highly emotionally charged.
It sounds so very poetic. The wording is just great I liked following you on your journey.
Thank you for sharing this item with me this evening. God Bless You, and Have a blessed evening.
Hello ~NOBODY, I am with the Poet's Place, I found this item on the read and review pages this evening. I thought this draft held a great message and an excellent piece of advice.
You did a fine job letting your feelings be known. It is important, I believe, to be one's self. Thank you for sharing and may God Bless you and may you have a blessed evening.
Hello Fivesixer, I am with the Poet's Place, I found this item on the read and review pages this evening. This is a free verse poem without rhyme or rhythm. It tells of death.
I must be honest I kind of didn't understand all of what you are talking about in the poem, but I do like the way you worded it. It seems very poetic to me, Thank you for sharing this item with me and God Bless You and have a blessed day.
Hello Jay O'Toole, I am with the Poet's Place
I found this item on the read and review pages this evening. I really liked this poem it is spiritual in tone and I love that. The rhyme is perfect, it is written in the form of Rondeau, which I have had a little bit of experience with.
The rhythm is nice, but not always consistent but that is how the poem goes. it is the form.
I enjoyed your poem and thank you for sharing it with me, may God Bless You , and may you have a blessed day.
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am with the Poet's Place, I see we meet again, I found this item on the read and review pages. I thought it was a good free verse poem, You did a good job using the required words, which were promptly highlighted in hot pink. This was a nice poem and Being a spiritual person, I surely got a lot of value out of it. Thank you for sharing this poem with me. God Bless You, and have a blessed evening.
Hello sfttarget, I am with the Poet's Place. I found this item on the read and review pages. I thought you did a wonderful job creating this prose. It tells of how a relationship fell. The title is appropriate for this item, the item description is helpful some what. I think you told a story with your words and you did a good job of making yourself clear.
Thank you for sharing this item with me. God Bless You.
Hello Princess Megan Rose, I found this newsletter while searching for something to read this evening on the read and review pages. I thought this was a great newsletter, I wouldn't mind seeing more of them. I love black cats as well, I have a black cat named cloe, I also have a black and white cat named Panda and a gray cat named puma. They are my sweet babies. I've not seen them in a little while due to illness. I am sorry for angel's cat maxi, it is so sad to lose one.
The pictures you have are so excellent I just loved them, Thanks for sharing this newsletter with me, and God Bless You.
Hello Beth Barnett, I want to start out by telling you Happy Account Anniversary today, I hope you are having a blessed and wonderful day.
I chose this item because it is a poem of love written for God. I love spiritual poetry and your poem is one of the most original and heart warming I have come across. I think it is so inspiring that you used so many languages to profess your love and Faith. It is a wonderfully beautiful poem and you should feel proud of your accomplishment. Thanks for sharing all of this new languages with me and your true peaceful spirit. God Bless You.
Hello maravinschrebe, I am a little early for this but you have to understand I'll be going to go back in the hospital again in a few days and I'm afraid I might miss your anniversary. I want to wish you a happy account anniversary on the 21st. This is a special one a so called milestone ,5 years.
I loved this item and think you should be commended for writing about our Lord God. It is a special thing to spread the good news about Him. For God so Loved the world He gave His Only Son to die for our sins, that is a special thing that He did for us, it is up to us to spread His word and to Live in accordance to His
words. Thanks for sharing this item with me, and God Bless You.
Hello Yellow Rose, I just popped in to wish you a happy account anniversary a few days early. I may not be around on your actual anniversary day
so I thought I'd best go ahead and give you some well wishes now. This poem is so heartfelt and sweet, it has a good story value, I run the story-poem contest and this is the type of stuff I look for. you tell a fine story in poetic form.
I loved the little bird but most of all I love the fact that you show respect and care for our veterans. my dad was a veteran and died for his country. I am so proud of him for his service although I'd give it all to have him back again.
but this was just beautiful. Thanks for sharing, God Bless You.
Hello Ida Joy, I found this item while searching for something interesting to read this afternoon, I found it on the read and review pages.
This letter was so sweet, I still have my mother so I don't understand why this letter touched me so deeply. I love my mom so much and thankfully still have her. But your letter surely brought a tear to my eyes and choked me up a bit.
it was poignant and sweet. I loved it, I especially liked the repetition of
"she loved me with a bookend kind of love." I thought that just made it. Thanks for sharing and God Bless You.
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Hello Tim Chiu, I found this item while searching for something to read and review on the read and review pages. It popped up and I thought I'd give it a quick review. This item was very good I love when people show respect for the Good Lord, I love the poem about the God-fearing . I thought you did a good job with the poem it made me feel proud that someone else felt so strongly about family values or any kind of values as far as that goes. Thanks for sharing this item with me and God Bless You.
Hello Netty, I found this item on the read and review pages as it popped up as I was searching for something to read this morning.. I thought you did a fine job creating this poem about joy and happiness. The repetition was good in this particular piece as it really drove the message home. I think it is an important message for people to read, especially in this day and age with all the negativity that is around in our world. God Bless you and thank you for sharing this upbeat piece (peace) with me.
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I was just searching for something to read on the read and review pages when I came across this informative and oh so interesting essay.
I am really in to finding out about our Planet and what will become of it in the future, I live in the Appalachian Mountains, where we have no shortage of trees.
However, I realize there are places in our country and in our world where trees are scarce, and global warming is affected by this I believe. I was so interested in the futuristic city of China in which all of the trees and species are being placed, I only wish that America and every other country on earth would do the same thing. Then we could come closer to solving the problem.
Thanks for caring about our world as I also do. God Bless You.
Hello Rei, I found this item on the read and review pages while searching for something interesting to read. This chapter popped up and I liked the item description because it sounds as if it would be an interesting and different read for me. Your writing is very good it seemed to me to be polished.
I liked the fact that you did it in a larger and darker font, it helped poor eyes be able to focus better on the writing. I am curious to see what direction you take the story. Thanks for sharing this chapter with me, God Bless You.
Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon, I found this item on the read and review pages while I was searching for something interesting to read. I liked this item because it is about the acid that is destroying our environment and no one seems to care.
at least as you said it the politicians don't and they are the ones who need to help legislate laws to help protect our environment. well never mind that, your poem was simply good. It had alliteration, rhyme, rhythm and assonance, you utilized all of the poetic devices with this one. Good job. Amd God Bless You.
Hello kay, I found this item while searching for something to read on the read and review pages today;. I thought this would be a nice little poem to read as it is about your feelings about your upcoming graduation. That is a special time in your young life actually it is the best days of your life believe it or not. I so long for those good old days of yesterday. Though we should look forward not back it is nice to remember. Your poem is poignant.
it is a well written voice of you. Thanks for sharing and God Bless Y:ou.
Hello Sonia Zircon, I found this item on the read and review page while I was trying to find something interesting to read, this was entertaining,
it was beautiful especially the last stanza. I think what you said in that stanza is just amazingly beautiful. I think it shows strength of character on ;your part. Your free verse poem was just lovely and I appreciate your talent and say thanks for sharing it with me, God Bless You.
Hello Tehuti, Lord Of The Eight, I found this little item on the read and review page, as it popped up while I was searching for something entertaining and interesting to read today;. This was so original and very entertaining, I liked the way all of the little characters were named after various colors. The rats appear to be in ;the military. I think that is so cute. a military rat, I've known a few in my life I'll tell you. lol just kidding. Your writing really made me smile, it was a continuing story about these little rats. the next part will be part p6 and I bet it will be just as entertaining and jovial. God Bless You.
Hello freedom and nature, This poem popped up on my screen while I was searching for something to review and for an entertaining piece to read. I found it on the read and review pages. This is a nicely adapted poem about a caged bird taken from a more famous poem. I liked the title of this poem I think it is very appropriate, I thought the poem showed real heart, it was about freedom or lack there of. This was a sad and almost heartbreaking poem if you look at it from the bird's stand point, as it lost its freedom. Thank you for sharing and God Bless You.
Hello Michaelmountain:spring hope, This item popped up on my screen when I went to the read and review pages. I thought I'd give it a once over because I loved the item description, I myself am a Christian and I live solely by Faith in the Good Lord. I believe so strenuously in Him that none other can ever touch my willingness to love, forgive, and learn of His great works and plans. He is my rock and my salvation I should want to be his daughter and trust Him my whole life through. Your writing is beautiful and the fact that you too live by Faith is a blessing, I love to see when others also love the Lord as I do. Thank God For brothers and sisters in Christ. May God Bless You, and yours.
Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon, I came across this item while searching for something interesting to read on the read and review pages today. I really think you did a fantastic job creating this one of a kind poem. it is so great. The rhythm was just perfect as was the rhymes. I think you did a great job and you show great talent, Thanks for sharing this item with me, and God Bless You.
Hello IAMWATIAM, I came across this little piece of advice while searching the read and review pages for something to read. This is a great way to live your life, I have often stated pretty much the same thing in my own life.
You can't hold a grudge, it is important to forgive others for their wrongdoing
just as we want them to forgive us for ours. we all are guilty of something and in order to seek forgiveness it is important that we forgive. It is true that both family, and strangers will hurt you, but you must realize you have probably also hurt them along the way. Thanks for your wisdom and God Bless You.
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