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Hello Tim Chiu , I have read quite a few of your works of poetry in the past, now this one popped up for me to read on the read and review pages. I think you did very good creating this item. Your poetry is always above average.
It rhymes really well and has a good rhythm. in this poem I can really tell that you liked rhyming . The title is good and it is appropriate for this work.
The item description is also very good and helpful. I want to thank you for sharing this poem with me, And God Bless You.

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Hello edgework , I found these contents on the read and review pages.
I thought I would give them the old once over this evening and see what I thought about what you are working on. Someday you will have big plans for the woks you have listed. The one thing I see that you need to do is to create a title for the second one. other than that you have good and helpful item descriptions and for the most part the titles are descent except of course the second one, which has no title, good luck and God Bless You.

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Hello ss_writings , I read your entire poem, however I failed to understand it or to be able to communicate. I had a hard time knowing how to pronounce the words. I think it is admirable of you to write a poem about the patriot in India and the Soldiers. I think you misspelled soldiers in the Item description.
I do think since so many English speaking people will be reading you poem It should also be translated into the English equivalent. Than people could really rate your poem in their own language be it Hindi or English. and always capitalize Hindi and India. Thank you for sharing this item with me and God Bless You.

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I found this item on the read and review pages. it was randomly chosen for me as I searched for something interesting to read.
I thought this was a well written piece of literature. The title was clever and appropriate for the poem. You used the prompt for the item description. In this instance it worked, and was very helpful. I only saw one tiny little mistake with your writing. it's hardly even worth mentioning.

Please, for give my self-preservation,

in the above line you need to close the space between for and give, it is just one word, forgive. Other than that there were no mistakes, and I feel you did a good job. Thanks for sharing this item with me, God Bless You, and I hope you have a blessed evening.

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Hello Fyn , I found this item while searching for something interesting to read on the read and review pages. I was a little confused at the title but after reading the poem I kind of get it I think. I believe the item description is helpful. I think the title is appropriate, and the poem itself is well written. I thank you for sharing this very original and creative short poem with me. God Bless You, and have a blessed day.

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Hello ColeenIsFine , First of all I would like to welcome you to writing.com, we are all just one big happy family here, we thrive on helping each other become a better writer. I found this item as it was randomly chosen for me at the read and review pages which is located at the left hand side of the screen in the drop down menu. I liked the title and I found it to be appropriate for the item. Also I found that you did a good job creating an item description.
The poem is about a young woman who experiences online love and is confused by it. I thought you did a good job writing this poem. It was highly emotionally charged. I enjoyed reading it, Thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless You, and have a blessed evening.

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Hello Emma Faye ,first I'd like to welcome you to writing.com, I found this item on the read and review pages. It is about the end of time, as the Bible tells it and your poem captures the essence of the subject. This is a very interesting subject, one that many people have written about. I thought you did a good job, The title is appropriate and the item description is helpful. I only saw one miner mistake.

The airs waits for the words to be spoken.

I believe it should read the air... not the airs...

but that nonetheless, is just a tiny little mistake which anyone could make.
I think you did a fine job creating this item. Thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless You, and have a blessed day.

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Hello w0lfbane , This item was randomly chosen for me to review today by the read and review pages. I found this to be a cute and adorable little poem.
I liked the rhyme scheme, I thought the rhymes were good, and I equally thought there was a good rhythm. The poem was a form I'm not familiar with. But it looks like a good poem and I can appreciate your talent. There was one tiny mistake and it was not in the poem but on the author's note.

Originally written for the Ping Fluffy Unicorn Contest but unfortunately I missed the deadline by one day. Enjoy!

if you will look on the first line, you should have said...Pink Fluffy Unicorn...
It's alright though we all make these sort of mistakes. I want to thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless You.

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Hello w0lfbane , I found this item as it was randomly chosen for me on the read and review pages. I thought this was a very lovely poem. It was sad to know your feelings are so hurt by the disappearance of your special person.
I think this is a well written item and I commend your ability to create such a nice piece of poetry. I only saw one mistake with your work:

Every time I wish to see you, I lust look into the mirror.
Then I spend the next hour or two wiping away the tears.

in the first sentence above if you notice, you said...lust instead of must...
That is an easy fix however. We all make these mistakes while writing because we get into a sort of trance while writing. Thank you for sharing this item with me. May God Bless You.

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Hello Jeff , I found this item on the read and review pages.
I don't usually do a lot of stories, I normally review poetry, articles or essays. Your story wasn't very long but then again that was probably the limit.
Your story was kind of cute, It a volcano which was about to erupt I suppose.
It was a story of about 99 words, it must be hard to keep the word count under 100 and still have a good clear story,. as yours is. You did a good job I did not see any mistakes with your work thank you for sharing this item with me,
God Bless You.

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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I found this poem on the read and review page this evening while I was searching for something of interest to read. I think your day was a smart guy. He always warned you about things. It is important to listen to your father always. You'll find he's right. Your poem was good. the title was perfect it was very appropriate for this item because you are talking much about the red pink sky. boy if I close my eyes I can just see it. If I were you though I would erase the item description and rewrite it. It is an important part of the poetry process. You need to tell what the poem is about or give a teaser. Thanks for sharing this item with me and God Bless You.
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Hello Ida Joy , I found this item on the read and review pages this evening. It is a letter to your sister on her wedding day, the day she will remember fondly for the rest of her life. I recall my wedding day, it was so special I recall it so fondly and clearly 32 years latter. Johnny, my husband,
is the love of my life, my soul mate. it is so wonderful to remember it and now it is so wonderful just to see his loving face. I cant forget that day because I love him very much and my fairytale will never end till death do us part, but even then we'll meet on the other side. thank you for sharing this item with me
this evening, God Bless you.

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Hello Sum1 , I found this item on the read and review pages,
I was searching for something interesting to read and found this. what struck me in the beginning was the shape of the poem., it seemed to make a shape of some sort. The title was appropriate and the item description was helpful as it told of the fact we all need a candle some times to light the way in our lives. I would surely like to know how you created this design in the poem.
The poem was powerful in its message. You did a fantastic job creating this item. thank you for sharing and God Bless you Jim.

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Hello Tim Chiu , I found this item on the read and review pages and I thought that I would take a look at it for you this evening. this prose poem was a little difficult for me to discern. I really had a hard time figuring out what you were talking about.l I don't know if it was just me or if it was just that it was unclear. I only realized after I re read the Item description.
I will try to re read it and see what I think. if I come back you'll know I still don't get it. Thanks for sharing this item with me. God Bless You.

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Hello John Fronnto , I am with the poet's place and I found this item on the read and review pages as I was searching for something of interest to read.
Your poem popped up and I thought I'd give it a read. It is a nightmare for sure to be bored, to have a day; with nothing to do. It seems like the day is endless. I just hate having days like that. Your poem really does hit the right note. It has a good rhythm and rhyme. The title is appropriate for the poem. The item description is helpful as well. Thank you for sharing this item with me this evening. God Bless You.

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Hello A.J , I found this item on the read and review pages as I was searching for something to read this evening, This item popped up and I thought I'd give it a look see. This was an excellent sample of your work. I thought you really hit the nail on the head with a hammer, this was just right.
the way one feels as they meet their soul mate. Our souls know more than we
what we are feeling. and if it is love we are pushed towards our soul mate.