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Review of Hero Lost  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, you have been a member since july 10, 2015, that is three years today. I hope you have had a very blessed day today.
I wanted to review this item as a gift for you today. This is a very good and creative piece of writing and I think you did a fantastic job creating and writing it. The title is so perfect for this particular item, as it is what is being discussed in the writing. I think the title is appropriate.
However, I do think the item description should discuss what the item is all about, it should describe the poem for the reader, I believe you should give a teaser to let the reader decide whether or not they want to continue on reading the item. I think this item was powerful and really was creative and original, it really did tell a story I thought.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello ireay , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, I hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day. It must be so rewarding to be a teacher but it must also be very difficult now days.
This poem was very wonderful and I think you did an excellent job creating this poem.. I liked the title of this poem and I think the title was very appropriate for this item. The item description was both appropriate and helpful for this item. I live in the mountains and witness much beautiful wonders of nature and wildlife. I thought the ending of the poetry was surprising as well as cute. The ending was my favorite lines. I thought the rhyming was subtle, which is always a very good thing for poetry I think.
You did a great job with this poem and I did not see any mistakes with this item.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of The Lost Ones  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Agent-409 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, You have been a member of writing.com since July 7, 2005, that is for thirteen years, Wow! is that a long time. I have been a member since January 29, 2012, myself, so you have me beat by a long shot. I liked the title of this item and I think it is very appropriate for this particular item. You did a fabulous job creating an d writing this piece of writing. I think that the item description was very helpful. You used many different kinds of poetic devices in creating this item. This poem was so very well written and original as well.
you used assonance which is to use words that are alike in their sounding.
I enjoyed reading this piece of writing. I do not believe I have reviewed anything for you before, though maybe I did, But I don't really think so.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Wenderoo! , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I hope you have had a blessed day today. You have been a member since July 7, 2002 that is sixteen years. wow is that a long time!
I think that you did a wonderful job creating this poem as well as writing it.
The title is very appropriate for the item. the item description is also very helpful to the reader as it speaks of a child's fear of the things that goes bump in the night. You used several of the poetic devices in creating this poem.
You use a good rhyme as well as having a nice rhythm. you used assonance which is using similar word sounds. I really enjoyed reading this nice little poetry.
I believe it is a wonderful thing that a parent can always be there to comfort a child when he or she is afraid, as many children are especially at night time.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Sand Castles Shopgirl 739 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I hope you have had a blessed day today, I know I did.
This is a very nicely written poem, I think that you did a wonderful job creating it. I think that you did a great job entitling this piece of writing.
The title is appropriate for the poem. I believe that the item description is well done and also it is very helpful. This is your third year anniversary.
I think the mountain seems to be mysterious as well as being a legend accordin g to your item description. I enjoyed reading this piece of writing and I think that you did a wonderful job both writin g and creating it. I live in the mountains myself and I can certainly tell you that they can be a spooky place to be, especially at night time. They are foggy and cool, and in the winter they are especially spooky. although I've never been to the desert I bet it is just as spooky.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Ari , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, this is a one year anniversary for you today july 6,
I hope you are enjoying being a member of writing.com. this is your first milestone as one year today, I hope you have had a blessed day today.
I was a little confused about this bulletin, I have always thought of Canada as being a very cold area of the world. I am from USA the middle eastern portion
of Kentucky, it is so humid in the summer and very chili in the winter. I take it that the bulletin you have written is not realistic. I see the date is surely fake. I really did like the title of your item, it is so cool, and I thin k it is also very appropriate. The item description is helpful as it tells about the item of which you have written. I can't imagine how the summers are in Canada, although I know the winters are very icy cold. I can only imagine how beautiful your country must be. The wilderness is always a wonderful place to live .



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Review of Leah  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello EscapisT ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,
I hope you had a wonderful day today. The title of this item is a woman's name, and for this particular poem, I believe it was appropriate. I am with the WDC power reviewers and I found this item in your portfolio, I wanted to read this item due to the fact that I love to read poetry. I thought this was a neat little poem, however, I saw a few things with it that didn't really sound so right to me. for in stance:

You dont easily falls in love but when you does..

the tense in this particular sentence don't really sound right to me, also you need to add an apostrophe' in the word don't. for example, it would sound better if you would have said.

You don't easily fall in love, but when you do...

would sound better and it would be more correct in the tense.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Angel's Tears  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello foster231, I am Lisa Noe *Cat*, I'm with the WDC Power Reviewers Group.
I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages this early morn. I thought it was a beautifully written piece of poetry and I really adored what you had to say, I love anything which someone might write about angels.
Angels, which I do believe with all of my heart; really exist, are such beautiful creatures. I just love the message which your piece of poetry conveyed. This is a sad little poem where the angel is crying. I personally believe that angel tears is what creates the rain, pretty dumb some might say, but who really knows what goes on behind the scenes in Heaven. I did see a couple of little mistakes in your poem.
the first one is below, you transposed the a and b in the word back.

They want you abck soon"

also you made another mistake below where the u and the a are transposed.

time since we met speak
her voice so clear and beuatiful

Those are two mistakes which anyone could make so don't worry, just correct them and you will have a beautiful little poem. Thank you for sharing this item with me and God Bless You.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello prosperous Snow, I really enjoyed your entry it was a really well rhymed poem and the rhythm was excellent. The subject was interesting as I believe mother nature is pissed due to the greed and selfishness of mankind. I think this was a good story. good luck sorry for the delay. God Bless you.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hey Walkinbird, this was a wonderful fantasy poem. I thought it was just beautiful. I thank you for your entry and due to the large number of entries this month I'll leave a brief review.
I wish you good luck with the contest. God Bless You and sorry for the delay.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hey Ruwth, I think this sounds like a wonderfully terrifying ordeal for you to go through. I am so glad an angel was looking out for you and your trip turned out good.
I wish you luck in the contest, and I'm sorry for the delay. but I'm overwhelmed. God Bless You.

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Review of Blank Pages  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello w0lfbane , I came across this sonnet about writer's block while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I saw the title, "Blank Pages", and immediately I could relate, as I often have writer's block and end up staring at an empty screen on my computer.
If you really think about it, It is very sad, a writer who has nothing to say.
But I believe we writers have all been there at some point in our writing careers. I think the title is appropriately written and I also believe that the item description is very helpful to all of your readers. If I were you I would add an apostrophe' to the word Writer's when you say writers block, because it is showing possession of something. That is no problem and I can't believe anyone would take away points for that. You did a fantastic job creating and writing this item. I thought the rhyme scheme of : abab was suitable for this poem. The rhyme itself was great and so was the faint rhythm. I think you did an excellent job.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this sweet little item while I was searching for something of great interest to read on the read and review pages here at writing.com. I will tell you I found it! This poem was amusing, and fun filled,
It made me laugh right out loud, and it is seldom I read one that makes such a great impact on me like this one did. I really think it was brilliantly written.
The rhyming was right on the money every time, in my favorite rhyme scheme of ab,ab, etc. I also thought the rhythm was as a concerto which a famous conductor would write, as it was perfect and matched the poem wonderfully.
I have read much of your writing in the past and I want to tell you, that you have really outdone yourself this time. I loved this poem and I would strongly recommend it to everyone young and old. It is the Perfect poem I think. I will have to say my favorite part is:

We’ve met these people, known them for years,
Who finally got lucky after kicks in the rears.


These lines made me laugh out loud, and I felt kind of foolish sitting in a room by myself laughing at my computer screen. But I do thank you for the entertainment tonight, Please write more along these lines, it was great!
The title was appropriately titled and the Item description was helpful.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Her Nose Knew  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello ♥Hooves♥ , I am your judge,Lisa Noe *Cat*, of a story poem contest. I am so glad you decided to enter my little contest. It was a true blessing to read your little story poem about your sweet dog. I just adore dogs. The rhyme was perfect as was the rhythm, the story value was also adorable. I'm glad you shared you special little story with me, There is a tight race to place in this contest this month as there are dozens of entries.
I wish you good luck and God Bless You, I hope you enter again next month.



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Review of Mother  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Vandana , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, while I was trying to find something of interest to read.
I love your short little poem about your mother. I love my mother so much and I praise God that she is still alive and well. I love to be my mom's side as well as you do. My mother is a widow and It makes me sad that she lives alone and has nobody by her side now. Your poem was precious I thought and I thought it was an excellent read.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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hello Bedrock - The Lurker King , I am your judge, Lisa Noe *Cat*, for A Story-Poem Contest. I am so glad you chose to enter this month, I hope you enter next month as well. You did a fantastic job writing this very creative and imaginative piece. I loved it! I especially liked the repeated lines I thought that really added something to this powerful story-poem. It is well written and also I thought the title was very appropriate and the item description was helpful. I live in a place where mining is the sole type of jobs there is.
so I can really relate to your poem, I lost 2 uncles as a result of mining.
Thanks for entering my contest and Good Luck, God Bless You.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello LegendaryMask❤️ , I am your judge,Lisa Noe *Cat*, for A Story-Poem Contest. I am so glad you entered my little contest this month, I do hope you will enter again next month. This was a lovely story-poem. I thought it was very imaginative and so very beautiful. I feel for all of those lost souls you write about so beautifully. I thought having the flag crying was a very creative concept. The title was appropriate and the item description was helpful. I thought you did a fantastic job. Thank you for sharing this item with me, good job! Good luck and God bless.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Rhyssa , I am your judge, Lisa Noe *Cat*, for the Storyj-Poem contest. I am so glad that you decided to enter my little contest this month and I do hope you enter again next month for July's round. I loved your story poem, It was just wonderfully imaginative. It was very amusing I thought.
some of it rhymed well and it had a wonderful rhythm, I thought anyway.
I think you did a great job creating this item and the title was perfect for the story poem I thought it was appropriate for the item. Thank you for your entry and Good luck in the contest, God Bless You.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Rima... , I'm your judge for a story-poem contest, I am so glad you entered and I'm so sorry for the delay I must have overlooked your little entry.
I thank you so much for the 1,000 gps you donated. This little story-poem was so sweet I just adored it. I really like stories about fairies and little animals, I wrote a book about a fairy and some of her friends which were animals,
It's called "A Fairy's Tale". I like the ending where the get married I smiled broadly at the idea. I want to wish you well with your entry Good luck and Thank you for entering, I do hope you will consider entering again next month.

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Review of Yes it hurts!  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Arjun Adat , I came across this piece of writing while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages this evening. I thought you did a fantastic job writing and creating this item. I know it is hard to have a break up no body likes to go through something like that. It is a very important thing to have the support of a friend during a break up. I think you have a good talent for writing poetry you should continue this in the future. I thank you for sharing this item with me.
Good luck and God Bless You.


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Review of Tax Time!  
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Hello Dorianne , I came upon this piece of writing while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I think this Haiku is very different than most, but it works well I think.
Taxes are a bummer I hate that we have to relinquish our hard earned dollars to the government who waists it by billions. I don't mind paying teachers salaries, police officers, firemen and such but the government waists our funds.
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Hello Sharmelle's Expressions , I came across your writing while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages this evening. I thought this was an outstanding piece of writing, the poem is just the type that tugs on your heart strings. This is the perfect time of year to write and celebrate this poetry because it is almost Independence day here in America. I think it is so wonderful to pay homage to our troops around the world, they are so important to our lives as they supply us with our freedom.
You are right, many will lose their lives for this cause, My Father died as a result of his military service. That left me and my whole family heart broken.
They have to go through so much, their families do as well, many people do not understand all these people have to deal with. IT IS HARD FOR THEM ALL!
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Review of Freedom's Crown  
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review pages tonight. I liked the title and I felt as if it was very appropriate for this particular piece of writing. I also think that the item description was very helpful as it tells that this is a tribute to Maya Angelou's poem "Caged Bird". I think that you did a fantastic job creating and writing this poetry. This poem is about freedom and the importance of being free, poor birds in captivity have no freedom or peace because they are caged and I feel as if that is so very sad. I personally own a Parrot and she is so unhappy when she is caged, I only wish I could give her the freedom she deserves.
I really liked this poetry and I think it is great it deserves five stars.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Hello 💙 Carly , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you this evening. I hope you have had a blessed day today. This piece of poetry was frightening, because it is about the nether world or what we know as Hell. I thought you did a fantastic job creating and writing this piece of literature. I think it was a story poem about a person who made poor decisions and probably behaved in a bad manner. This is a result of not being a good person or living life the way God instructed us to do. By breaking God's ten commandments. You really wrote a thought provoking piece of poetry.


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Rated: E | (4.5)




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Hello w0lfbane , and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! We are here to celebrate you. I came across this piece of writing on writing.com's read and review pages. I really did enjoy reading this piece of poetry that you wrote to share with everybody. I think you really did do a great job creating and writing this poem I'm glad you shared it with us all.
It, for the most part, rhymed well and had a descent rhythm. It was a grand story of a fortune teller looking at the fortune of a person. I think you did a fantastic job with this item and I appreciate your talent. The title was perfect and also very appropriate, and the item description was helpful.



Thank you for sharing and God Bless You... have fun!

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Celebrating you! Congratulations!




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