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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Harry and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This was a wonderful little story poem, of which I loved. I ran a contest about story poems and so I really understand how precious this really is.
I found this item in a list of approved items for the raid of the Power Reviewers. I appreciate your writing it shows much talent on your part.
I think that this was so precious and I enjoyed reading this item.

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Review of The Fairy Kiss  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Riss Ryker and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item in a list of approved writings at the Power Reviewers.
I found this item to be very sweet a wonderful addition to our raid. I liked it very much I love story poems and you have written a doozy. I think that the title was very appropriate for the item, and I also think that the item description is very nice. the story is well written and I think that it has a wonderful rhythm.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Redtowrite and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think that this is a greatly written item and I found it at the Power reviewers list of approved items to read for our Raid Review this weekend.
The title is kind of scary I thought. I liked the item description, I thought that it was just wonderful and very helpful for the reader/reviewer.
I liked your writing and I think that you did a fantastic job creating this item for your raid.

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Review of ~Evil Fairies  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi StaiNed- and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found This in the list at the Power Reviewers, It was listed among others which were ok'd by the group to be reviewed during our Raid Review.
I think the title is very frightening and it is appropriate for the item.
The item description is also very appropriate for the item and very helpful to the reader/reviewer of the item. I thought this was a well written piece of literature and you did a very good job with it.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Choconut and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I found this item because it was an approved item for the raid at the Power Reviewers list. I really think this is a great idea to make points.
this is a tea Party Raffle and Auction Extravaganza which in part the proceeds go to the Power Reviewers, which is a very generous thing. I myself bid on three different items and also someone bought me a raffle ticket. These make great gifts. I do hope that I win one of the auction packages that I bid on,
they are really great.

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Review of Dublin Sunset  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi ♥Hooves♥ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think this is sort of a melancholy poem. It is a yearning for something, that is how I see it anyway. Your title was beautiful and appropriate for this poem, and the item description was helpful to the reader/reviewer. I think you did an outstanding job creating this poem, it is perfect for St. Patty's day. I've never been to Ireland but My ancestors are from there and I'd love to go.

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Review of Festive and Green  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Don Two and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I thought this item was very educational, where you tell that Saint Patrick brought Christianity to the people of Ireland. That is very useful information, some of the youngsters may not have known that. The title is appropriate for this item I believe, I thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader/reviewer.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! This little poem was very brief, what form is it? I do not recall the type it is. I love to read about Ireland because that is where my ancestors come from, or at least most of them. I thought that the title was ok and it was appropriate for the poem. The item description was also very helpful to the reader/reviewer. Your thoughts of Ireland and Saint Patrick's day are very well formed and I liked the overall poem it is well written.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Oldwarrior and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! May I just say I Loved this wonderful and beautiful poem about finding a lass and a pot of gold. It really was a well put together poem, I saw no mistakes and I loved the rhythm and the rhyme, It flowed wonderfully.
I thought that the title was rich and well chosen as it is appropriate for this particular poem. I think that the item description is also well written and helpful to the reader/reviewer.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I love a good limerick, They are usually pretty cute and humorous.
I thought yours was very good. I loved it and enjoyed reading it. I've read much of what you have written and I know that you have a lot of talent and I can appreciate it. The title was unusual but also appropriate. Since this was written in a book which holds several different items, you did not have a item description. I really appreciate your talent.

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Review of Sons of Erin  
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I see that you have written a nice little limerick about Saint Patrick's Day. All the various countries celebrate this as a Holiday to celebrate the Saint who brought Christianity to the country of Ireland.
I liked the title of your cute little limerick and I do believe you have a helpful item description. I can really appreciate your talent, I've read many of your works in the past so I know how talented you really are.

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Review of Irish Heaven  
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I think you are doing a really good job writing these cute little limericks, they are so much fun to read. This is the second one that I've read this evening. This was written for a contest, I hope you won or at least placed in the limerick contest. I love the title of this poem and I think that it is appropriate. The item description is very helpful to the reader/reviewer.
You are a talented poet and author so keep on writing.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Tim Chiu ,I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages. I must say, I never would have thought that jeans would be a subject for a poem. It works though.
The title is great and is appropriate for the item. The item description is also good and helpful to the reader, as it tells what the poem is about.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Mush , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read and review this evening. I thought that you did a fantastic job on this essay. Gandhi was a great man and you've chosen to pick him to write about, that says a lot about you. The title is very good and also very appropriate, I thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader/reviewer. My favorite part of this essay is:

.( For example in USA in 2008 there was a rate of 11.6 % of deaths from suicide while in 2017 the rate went to 14% )
So basically behind Gandhi's phrase: " Poverty is the worst kind of violence " is hidden a message of equality and of respect towards the human as a human and not the human as their yearly income.

I really do think that you chose wisely in writing this piece.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com while I was searching for something of interest to read this evening.
I liked the title, it is appropriate for this particular item. I think that the item description is nice and helpful to the reader/reviewer. I liked the subject it was a romantic poem written for your girlfriend and I think she probably liked it very much if you showed it to her. My favorite part is:

You have touched my being
With emotions so rare
That my heart grows airy and light
With the captivating chorus
Of starstruck angels dancing overhead



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Review of Sun  
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Hello Joy I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read and review. I thought that the title of the poem was excellent and appropriate for this item. I do believe that the item description needs to describe the poem to some extent. I see that this is written for the Writers Cramp contest. I thought that you did a great job creating this particular piece of literature. My favorite part is the following:


how beautiful life can be
when through cracks your smile enters
lighting up the clouds
from a majestic distance
in celestial energy

It is a wonderful stanza .

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Review of amends  
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Hello nancnancrevolution ,I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read and review. I like the title I think it is appropriate for the item, However I think it should be capitalized. I think that the item description was helpful to the reader/reviewer. I am so glad that you have gotten your life together by getting sober. That is a hard thing to do so congratulations and good luck.

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Review of Moving On (LJM)  
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Hello Katdembickjy ,I found this item while I was searching for something interesting to read on the read and review pages of writing.com.
I thought that this was very unique and different. I liked reading it very much.
I thought that the title was appropriate for this item, However I do believe you should have written something more substantial for the item description because that is what makes the reviewer decide whether they want to continue on with reading the item. This was a very nice piece.


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Review of HOME  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Afficiando , I came across this little item while searching writing.com for something of interest to read and review. I liked the title to start with, I think it Is warm and very appropriate for this piece of writing.
I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/reviewer.
Home is where the heart is that's where you lay your head. I think where you are accepted and loved for just who you are. If I am away from home I feel uneasy I love to be home where I feel safe and comfortable.

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Review of in a tangled web  
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Hello Rhyssa ,I came across your item while searching the site for something of interest to read. I liked your title and I also thought that it was very appropriate. I do believe the item description is lacking a good description of the poem. You really do need to write something of interest to the reader describing this poem, The item description makes a person decide whether or not they want to continue reading this item or go on to the next item.
The item is original and imaginative a very well thought out creation.
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Hello Njoki kamau ,I came across this item on the read and review page of writing.com. I thought that it was a powerful poem about love which fizzled out in the end. It began very passionate and lovely, and ended with your broken heart. The item description is ok and the title is very appropriate for the item. You shared your feelings and opened your heart in this poem and I thought it was so well done. My favorite line was the following:


I dreamt dreams, dreamier than any I had had.

I can say that this is a well thought out line.


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Review of The Holocaust  
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Hello Schnujo's in the Falklands ,I came across this item on the read and review page this afternoon. I thought that the subject matter was perfect for our times. I am glad you wrote this thought provoking poem. It is truly very haunting,, I am handicapped so I guess if I lived in that time in Germany, then I would have been killed too. That is a terrifying thought for me. I love all people and I'm very sensitive It makes me cry to think about what was done over there and how many people had to die, including our soldiers who went to help free the people. Your poem was nice however it was filled with facts and a little hard to follow. but I loved it anyway and I hope you are fine with four and half stars.

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Review of Howdy  
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Hello NicChang ,It is so nice to meet you I am a power reviewer which means I read and review quite a bit. I love it when we have someone new, you are a newbie and I welcome you to writing.com, there is so much to do here I think you will become addicted to it like most of us do. I've been here since 2012. I am already a moderator. If you are interested in joining a group, I would suggest . We have lots of fun there and the leaders are the best. I made friends here and so can you. You should by all means write a story or poem or a biography it would be great for you and be sure to post it in the shameless plug page. Do you know how to get around here. to post an item is not very hard if you need directions go to "Invalid Item"  and scroll down until you see the directions for posting a static item. I do hope you have fun!
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Hello +dollzell ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day. You have now been a valuable member of writing.com for nine wonderful years as of march 5.
I think that the title of this item was just perfect and also appropriate for the writing. I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/ reviewer. The poem was very romantic in feeling, it was filled with emotion, which I believe is a great thing. The rhymes were very good and helped with a bit of rhythm. I can feel what you are saying and that is the mark of a real author. You communicate well with the reader. I loved the last stanza the most. The following was my favorite part of your lovely poem.

Yes we had moved on with our lives and families
At least we had love laughter wonderful memories
If the time comes when both of us are suddenly free
Beam yourself to twilight space,rendezvous with me.

The only thing that stands out is the last sentence on the above stanza.
If you would please notice there needs to be a space aftedr the comma and before the word rendezvous...



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Hello Caroline Scott ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I hope you have a blessed day today. You have been a valuable addition for writing.com. This poem or letter to your future kids is just a wonderful idea. It is original and imaginative I agreed whole heartedly with the things you will teach your future children. I am a devout Christian and I believe this world has so much to offer and it is wonderful a true gift from God. I did see on tiny error with one of the lines here is the following:

Because, sweethearts, your maternal grandparents mostly likely did
And look where it got them
You are my children
And you are flipping brilliant!
I'll repeat this time and time again
Don't be afraid to cry in front of me
Mommy understands
And she will try her best to cry in front of you
EAT YOUR STUPID VEGETABLES!

if you notice in line one above you say mostly likely did...
I believe it would sound better if you said Most likely.




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