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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, I think that you have a good sense of humor or you wouldn't have written this cute little poem. I think that the title is appropriate and that the item description was also helpful for the reader/reviewer. You did a fantastic job creating and writing this item. I really enjoyed it. I always seem to enjoy the poetry that you write.
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Hello isokarifrancis , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, I think this is a strange quote I understand the last line however the first line is a blur in my mind. I think that by applying cosmetics, means trying to change who you are. The title of the item is appropriate as this is a quote and if you say so it's words of wisdom. I think that I need the first line explained to me.
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Hello Brooooks ,I found this little sample of your writing on the read and review pages of writing.com. I think it is a really nice example of how you write. I found one thing about your writing a little peculiar. The fact that the whole item is written in present tense. I found it to be very different, not wrong per say but just a little off putting if you know what I mean. I'll give you an example:

The little girls looks to her grandmother with watery eyes. “Life will get better, you remember that.” Her grandmother holds her tightly.

The above example is good but I would think it would be like:

The little girl looked to her grandmother with watery eyes. "Life will get better, you remember that." Her grandmother held her tightly.

Do you see the difference? also you don't need the s on the end of girl, because it is not plural. I think you write well, and it is not incorrect to write in present but it is just a little different and sounds better in past tense. But by all means write it the way you feel most comfortable it is your work and you should feel happy with it. I think the title is appropriate and very creative. I also understand that this is just a scene from a short story therefore you go back and read it out loud and see which sounds better.


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Review of Autumn Passage  
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, This is a wonderful Triquain chain poem. I like that you tell what type of poem it is and give a definition. It helps the reader to learn. I loved this poem about nature and the beauty from season to season. The wonderful colors of Autumn and Spring. I look forward to both seasons and summer as well with all the floral colors. Winter even has color if you take in to consideration the white snow and the beautiful red of the cardinal against the snow.

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Hello Antheia ,I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com this afternoon. I really thought this was a solemn piece, I had a little bit of a hard time following the idea behind this item. Is he dead or not? I'm sorry but you spread his ashes in the ocean but then you tell him he was never really gone... I don't understand unless you mean he is still alive in your heart, and if so you need to write that somewhere in the item. I like the idea of your item and think it is well written but I just got lost a little bit at the end.

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Hello Ran Maeve , I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on writing.com. I thought that this was a fabulous piece of writing, it was short and sweet but very well written. The title of the item was perfect and appropriate for the item. The item description was very helpful to the readers. I liked this item , especially how the words were shortened and contracted. You did a fantastic job *Thumbsup*

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Review of Barrier  
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Hello Jack Ferguson , I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com, I was looking for something of interest to read and Here I found it. I liked the title and I thought that it was appropriate for the item.
I thought that the item description was somewhat helpful as it tell the reader that it is about a person you thought you knew, but really did not.
I think that the poem was very curious , why did the girl seem to shy away from the man in the poem. The way it is written we think she was badly hurt emotionally by a man in the past.



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Review of Softly now  
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Hello Antheia ,I came across this item on the read and review pages on writing.com. I would like to welcome you to writing.com and tell you that we are a tight nit community of writers. You will probably find that you become addicted to this site. We all do! I want you to know if you need any help with the site to just let one of the moderators know. This is a wonderful little piece of writing. It is short but it is also from your heart, which makes it lovely.


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Hello Antheia , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com.
I thought that this was a well written item, which shows off your love of your partner. I saw a couple of mistakes, which are just tiny little errors. First I believe it would be best if you capitalize your title of the item. I would also suggest that the item description should describe the item. Then finally, You should always capitalize the pronoun I and all of it's contractions such as I'll, and I'd and so on. But you did a great job creating this piece and these are such tiny errors that it really isn't a big deal at all, for you did a good job with your writing concept. The title is good and appropriate for this item.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi LazyWriter and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I would like to welcome you to writing.com and tell you that you are a valuable member of our writing community. You should not worry if your writing is good enough, this is a place to learn. None of us are professional, though a few have books out there. I would be willing to learn about an Asian girl, I believe your story may be interesting. Keep trying, perhaps start with some poetry, even if you have never written poetry before. It is just a bunch of words from your heart, it don't have to rhyme it can be free style. good luck!

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Review of The Struggle  
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Hi Jaded La Morte and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I would like to welcome you to our great writing community today.
You are a valuable member of our community. I thought that this item was very alarming and somewhat sad. I hope that you have written this for creative purposes and not from biography because it sounds as if you had it rough.
The title is very appropriate for the item and the item description is helpful for the reader/reviewer. You have suffered from depression and I understand.

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Review of little boy.  
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Hi nancnancrevolution and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Welcome to our writing community at writing.com. You are a valuable member and I truly hope you become addicted to this community like so many others have. Your fill in the blank story was excellent. I truly enjoyed reading it and I felt sorry for the little tyke... It must be horrible to have a mother who is addicted to alcohol. I like the ending of the story however. The way she loved him and snuggled with him, it was just great.


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Hi Anjelique and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! first I would like to welcome you to writing.com, it is great to have you as a new member. I liked you Woman's Blessing, I thought it was a very nice item and you thought of all the right things to add. This is a very nice piece.
the title is appropriate and the item description is also very helpful to the reader/reviewer.

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Review of Sin  
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Hi Chris Breva and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary. You are a valuable member of writing.com, and we are lucky to have you. I was surprised with this item I was expecting it to be a poem. It was listed as a poem.
I think you were quite honest about your views and what you say is God's views on sin. I am a Christian and as such I do not feel it is my place to judge another, even if they do what the Bible says is wrong. It is up to God to judge them Not I. God does not condone hate either. So I love my neighbors even if they are gay or sinful. I don't condone sin but I also do not hate people, even the man who robbed me and stole everything I owned a few months back.

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Review of Today  
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Hi Big Bear and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! May I wish you a very happy account anniversary today. I thought that this was a great philosophy to live by. I should adopt the same idea. you really have the right idea. This was a great subject on which to write a poem.
I thought that the title was appropriate and I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/reviewer.

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Hi Legerdemain and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
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I thought that this was a powerful look at history although it is terrible and very sad to know that this is what happened and happens in our country. Every day this still happens in this land; As a white I can not know what this must feel like, it must be horrible. I think it is a travesty. Your item is a commentary of our split nation may God bring us all together one of these days.


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Hi Preston and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this little item while I was searching for something to read on the read and review pages of writing.com. I am participating in the weekend challenge put forth by the story master, "Note: WEEKEND CHALLENGE : Reward Our Reviewers ..."
I do so hope you will join in with us in reviewing. I liked this item, I think it is an awesome idea for an item the subject is just wonderful. I did see several little mistakes in the item however. like the following:

“The Five Senses”
Sight
God gave men and women eyes to see
the wonderful gifts of God created. The stunning glaciers, the pillow like peaks and the deep green jungles.
Sent

I think above it would sound better if you say "that God created". Also if you will notice you spelled scent wrong it is with a c after the s.
in other mistakes I saw: song should be sung. pairs should be pares.
lims should be limbs. presios should be precious. and fairy should be furry.
I loved what you had to say, it was a wonderful concept, you just need to go back and do a quick edit to the item.

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Hi Murtaza Kaleem and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
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I do so hope you will join in and review with us. I thought that this was a fascinating article about storms and animals in a jungle. I liked the title and thought that it was appropriate for the item, I think also the item description was helpful. This was an excellent subject for an article. I saw a couple of mistakes like the following:

I have been taught and heared that even in jungles whenever their is any disaster or calamity , all animals right from the king of jungle to mice , hide and save one another .

I think you would also say learned instead of learnt. If I were you I would read over the item out loud and you will find a few other mistakes as well. but all in all it is a very interesting article and I liked it.
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Hi katwoman45 and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!n I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com as I was looking for something of interest to read and review. I am also participating in the weekend challenge set forth by the story master "Note: WEEKEND CHALLENGE : Reward Our Reviewers ..." I would like it if you would join in with us.
I thought that this was a well written poem that I really liked and enjoyed reading I love to be entertained by talented writers like you. I can certainly appreciate your talent. I thought that the title of your item was very good and appropriate for the item, I think however that you need to have a better item description.

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Hi Fairyll and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
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Review of Lament  
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Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com while I was searching for something of interest to read and review. I am also participating in the weekend challenge put forth by the story master "Note: WEEKEND CHALLENGE : Reward Our Reviewers ..." I invite you to join us. This poem was very good I have never seen this form before, however I love to learn new poetry forms so thank you for teaching me a new one. The form is Naani and it is four lines, which you wrote very well. I liked this form as it does not seem to be as difficult as some other forms.

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Hi Rhyssa and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com. I am participating in the weekend challenge put forth by the story master "Note: WEEKEND CHALLENGE : Reward Our Reviewers ..." we'd love for you to join us. I thought that this was such a steaming little poem and very romantic. I liked the title but I believe it would be better if it were capitalized. I do think that it is appropriate for the item though. I thought that the item description works well and is helpful to the reader of the item.

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Hi fyn and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review pages of writing.com
I was searching for something of interest to read and I am participating in the weekend challenge put forth by the story master "Note: WEEKEND CHALLENGE : Reward Our Reviewers ..."
I thought that your list of things you wish you had known in 2001 was great,
it is an unusual item which I really liked, and Identified with. My regrets are a little bit different but I think we can all think of five or six things we wish we could go back and change. I am glad you figured out that you don't deserve to be hit, no matter if they say they're sorry or not.

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Review of A Lover So High  
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Hi Tim Chiu and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read on the read and review pages of writing.com. I am also participating in the weekend challenge put forth by the story master, "Note: WEEKEND CHALLENGE : Reward Our Reviewers ...".
I enjoyed this love poem I thought that it was terribly romantic and I see it is dedicated to your girlfriend. I think that the item description tells it all and the title is so appropriate for the item. I have read your poetry before and I find you to have consistently good writing. I appreciate your talent.


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Review of BETTER  
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Hi Onyx: a PURPLE MANIAC! and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I came across this item on the read and review page of writing.com I was looking for something of interest to read and I am participating in the weekend challenge set forth by the story master "Note: WEEKEND CHALLENGE : Reward Our Reviewers ..."
I so enjoyed reading your item and I must say that change is something that I personally have a lot of problems with, I hate when things change and I know many others do as well. I thought that the title was appropriate for this item.
The item description works but it needs a little more description to it.

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