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#4473856

Review of HOME

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Rated: E

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Hello Afficiando , I came across this little item while searching writing.com for something of interest to read and review. I liked the title to start with, I think it Is warm and very appropriate for this piece of writing.
I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/reviewer.
Home is where the heart is that's where you lay your head. I think where you are accepted and loved for just who you are. If I am away from home I feel uneasy I love to be home where I feel safe and comfortable.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4473855

Review of in a tangled web

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Rhyssa ,I came across your item while searching the site for something of interest to read. I liked your title and I also thought that it was very appropriate. I do believe the item description is lacking a good description of the poem. You really do need to write something of interest to the reader describing this poem, The item description makes a person decide whether or not they want to continue reading this item or go on to the next item.
The item is original and imaginative a very well thought out creation.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4473854

Review of To the love of my life

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Rated: E

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Hello Njoki kamau ,I came across this item on the read and review page of writing.com. I thought that it was a powerful poem about love which fizzled out in the end. It began very passionate and lovely, and ended with your broken heart. The item description is ok and the title is very appropriate for the item. You shared your feelings and opened your heart in this poem and I thought it was so well done. My favorite line was the following:

I dreamt dreams, dreamier than any I had had.

I can say that this is a well thought out line.

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#4473272

Review of The Holocaust

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Schnujo's Doing Homework ,I came across this item on the read and review page this afternoon. I thought that the subject matter was perfect for our times. I am glad you wrote this thought provoking poem. It is truly very haunting,, I am handicapped so I guess if I lived in that time in Germany, then I would have been killed too. That is a terrifying thought for me. I love all people and I'm very sensitive It makes me cry to think about what was done over there and how many people had to die, including our soldiers who went to help free the people. Your poem was nice however it was filled with facts and a little hard to follow. but I loved it anyway and I hope you are fine with four and half stars.

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#4473267

Review of Howdy

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Rated: E

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Hello NicChang ,It is so nice to meet you I am a power reviewer which means I read and review quite a bit. I love it when we have someone new, you are a newbie and I welcome you to writing.com, there is so much to do here I think you will become addicted to it like most of us do. I've been here since 2012. I am already a moderator. If you are interested in joining a group, I would suggest . We have lots of fun there and the leaders are the best. I made friends here and so can you. You should by all means write a story or poem or a biography it would be great for you and be sure to post it in the shameless plug page. Do you know how to get around here. to post an item is not very hard if you need directions go to "A Story-Poem Contest!!!" and scroll down until you see the directions for posting a static item. I do hope you have fun!
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#4472755

Review of Rendezvous with me

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Rated: E

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Hello +dollzell ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day. You have now been a valuable member of writing.com for nine wonderful years as of march 5.
I think that the title of this item was just perfect and also appropriate for the writing. I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/ reviewer. The poem was very romantic in feeling, it was filled with emotion, which I believe is a great thing. The rhymes were very good and helped with a bit of rhythm. I can feel what you are saying and that is the mark of a real author. You communicate well with the reader. I loved the last stanza the most. The following was my favorite part of your lovely poem.

Yes we had moved on with our lives and families
At least we had love laughter wonderful memories
If the time comes when both of us are suddenly free
Beam yourself to twilight space,rendezvous with me.

The only thing that stands out is the last sentence on the above stanza.
If you would please notice there needs to be a space aftedr the comma and before the word rendezvous...

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#4472617

Review of Dear Future Children

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Rated: E

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Hello Caroline Scott ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening. I hope you have a blessed day today. You have been a valuable addition for writing.com. This poem or letter to your future kids is just a wonderful idea. It is original and imaginative I agreed whole heartedly with the things you will teach your future children. I am a devout Christian and I believe this world has so much to offer and it is wonderful a true gift from God. I did see on tiny error with one of the lines here is the following:

Because, sweethearts, your maternal grandparents mostly likely did
And look where it got them
You are my children
And you are flipping brilliant!
I'll repeat this time and time again
Don't be afraid to cry in front of me
Mommy understands
And she will try her best to cry in front of you
EAT YOUR STUPID VEGETABLES!

if you notice in line one above you say mostly likely did...
I believe it would sound better if you said Most likely.

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#4472413

Review of An Old Friend's Fix

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Rated: 13+

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Hello ..LetMeThink.. ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I see that you have been a member of writing.com since March 3, 2010, you have me beat by two years as I became a member in 2012. I thought that you did a very good job creating and writing this particular poem. I really liked it. I am sorry that this happened to you. I wonder what they said about you though, because you did not say. It must have hurt you deeply for it to bother you still today. People can ruin your life with lies you know. I think at some point in our lives we've all experienced being lied upon. It must have really been bad it your so called friend turned on you like that. I think you did the right thing confronting her with it. Your title was great and a really good and appropriate title. Your item description was helpful to the reader / reviewer as well.

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#4472323

Review of Fear

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Rated: E

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Hello KyshaNycol ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today, as I am having. I really liked this little poem I thought that it was just great. first of all, the title was appropriate for the writing, and the item description was both, helpful to the reader/reviewer and very well written.
I hate fear, I believe it is one of those feelings that drags us down, but I guess we need it because if we didn't have fear the whole world would go crazier than it already is. Fear keeps people in check, if you know what I mean. I thought you had good rhythm and good rhyme with this poetry. I did see two small mistakes however.

You voice is dark and heavy, like a storm carried in the wind.
You've streaked me of my freedon, to your calling I gave in.
You taunt me with my failures, and feed me with your lies;
Preying on my weakened spirit; you are burden in disguise.

I think it would sound better if you said stripped me of my...in the second line.
Also in the second line you put freedon it should be freedom. but other than that it really is a quality poem.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.

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#4472029

Review of Did You Know?

for entry "A Poet Is Released From Prison"

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Rated: 18+

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Hello Joey's Summer Sparkle ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This evening, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since March 1, 2011, a total of eight years. I have you beat by one year, as My anniversary is January 29, 2012. I like the idea behind this item I love learning little known facts especially about famous people. I did find this item to be very interesting. I also thought that your item description is helpful for the reviewer/reader. I have read some of your items before and I think you are an accomplished writer for sure. I am glad that you entered this poem in your item. I found it to be very sweet. I love the formal wording of the age . We have lost our ways in speech I believe. Thanks for the entertainment this evening, as I love learning new poems and new facts.

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#4472027

Review of Chuga Chuga Varoom

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Rated: 18+

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Hello a Sunflower in Texas ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since March first, 2002, which is about eighteen wonderfully glorious years. I thought the title was very appropriate for this particular poem, I also thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader/reviewer. You really have been a member much longer than I have been. I thought this was a pretty insightful poem about the city train. I only rode on a city train one time, when I visited Washington DC, and I must say that I truly enjoyed it very much.

People go by, seated in cars with windows that pass
To quickly to see,
So I pee with an unadorned window,
So the city and I seldon sleep.
Allowing seeking eyes,
But the train goes too fast....

I only saw one very tiny little mistake in your poem. If you will look above you will catch it for yourself. The word should be seldom not seldon.
That is an easy mistake just a little type O.

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#4472025

Review of And

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Rated: E

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Hello Fyn ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today, as I am having. I thought that the title, "And," is a very appropriate title for this particular poem. I also think that the item description is very helpful to the reader/reviewer. This is an odd subject for a poem but I believe that you state your case very well. You have been a member of writing.com since March 1, 2005, you have me beat by a significant amount if time. I think that you are a very valuable member of writring.com "and" we are glad to have you as a member for the past fourteen years. I have read your writing before "and" I think that you are consistently a talented writer. I don't know why but this item feels like a winner to me "and", I give you Four

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#4470807

Review of My secret Love....

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Pora ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do hope that you have a blessed day. I can start with the title.
The title was very good for a title for this particular poem. Next, the Item description does tell us what to expect from your writing, However in the description you always need to capitalize the letter "I" as a pronoun.
Now the poem itself is good and you have successfully made your point.
I did see an error or two, towards the end. Below I will show you your mistakes or at least I believe them to be mistakes.

Where size “godlike” fits you like a glove,
This admiration, adoration and infatuation with this goddess, this dove,
Would remain your cross to bear,
Your secret love

if you look above in the first sentence, You will see the word Godlike, you need to always capitalize a word that contains God.

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#4469503

Review of Not the Right One for Me

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Rated: E

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Hello Kat , I came across this item on the read and review page, I was immediately taken with the title, "NOT THE RIGHT ONE FOR ME", I felt that it was appropriate and great work for this poem. I also think that you did a wonderful job with the item description, It is very helpful to the reader.
I am so sorry that things did not work out for you both. I bet it broke your heart and also made your blood boil over, when you saw him with another person.
I would go home and probably cry. Though I don't know because I married my only boyfriend I ever had and we have been married happily for thirty-five years.
Good luck in the love department, we all need someone to love and someone to love us.

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#4468989

Review of Insanity

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Rated: E

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Hi Angel

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I do so hope that you had a wonderful Valentines day today and I hope you spent it with your love. This was a strange poem about Insanity. I thought that it was a good look at a person's thoughts on the subject. I liked the title
and I thought that it was very appropriate for this particular poem. The item description was also very helpful to the reader/reviewer. You did a good job creating this poetry about one's feelings about the mind.

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#4468818

Review of Broken Pieces

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Rated: E

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Hi Healing Minx

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day, I hope you are spending the day with your valentine. I think this was an excellent poem, I love the way you have strong faith in God and you know that He is always on your side, because He Is.
I also have strong Faith, I could not exist if it were not for my love of God.
Your title is very appropriate, and the item description is also very helpful to the reader. My favorite part of your poem is the following:

My yoke is easy and my burden is light.
I’ll hold you through the long, dark night.
The battles of your mind I’ll help you fight.
In place of confusion and doubt I’ll give you strength and insight.

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Review of GROWING OLDER

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Rated: E

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day, I do hope you are having a glorious day with your Valentine. This poem grabbed my attention because of the title, I fear that I myself am "Growing Older". The title is very appropriate for this particular poem. I think that it explains itself therefore the item description is right on. I know what you mean about the greed, and the youth going wild. But in all honesty didn't we all pretty much go wild when we were young? This is a nicely written poem and I give it the old

. My favorite lines were the following:

Progress is still hampered by personal greed,
The world should be better for those in need.
An economy based on dollars alone,
Needs people put into the woeful tone.

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#4468809

Review of A Cry For Help

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Rated: E

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines day, I hope you have a wonderful time with your perfect partner. I thought that the poem you wrote was so sad, "A Cry For Help", was a wonderful choice for a title. It is very appropriate for the poem. Your item description is also very helpful to the reader. I felt as if this poem was about someone hurting down deep badly due to abuse, my favorite lines were The ones where you showed your faith in God. I really liked that and I say you are special and strong. I hope your the rest of your life will be blessed.

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#4468806

Review of On the path to forgiveness

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Rated: E

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines day, I hope you have a special someone to spend your special day with. I liked the title of your poem, "ON the path to forgiveness".
You know the person who gains the most by forgiveness is the forgiving person.
a person who holds a grudge or hates only gives themselves a heavy heart, which is harmful to only you. Besides God tells us to love our enemy and pray for them, always offering forgiveness. I think you did a good job on this little poem. My favorite lines were the following:

‘Forgive them ‘it said, ‘let go of the grudge’ it ordered.
For no grievance is peaceful to your tender soul.
‘Go, face your troubles,’ it commanded. ‘Go on’
Let not a drop of hatred overflow from your bowl.

I enjoyed reading this poem and recommend it to all of the readers.

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#4468805

Review of Breathe Turtle Breathe

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Rated: E

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day today, I hope you have a special someone to share your day with. I thought the title was a little cute but also very strange, as I don't think this was about a little turtle. I myself have COPD, I also got it from smoking at age thirteen. I too am on oxygen so I really can relate to your problems. I wrote an article that was both published in our local newspaper as well as in my portfolio here at writing.com, you should read it, I think it could help you. It is highlighted in my port, It is entitled "The terrible cost of smoking." I applaud your efforts at writing to keep others from going down the same path as you did, by smoking.

This turtle not only has difficulties walking
But now she needs Oxygen when she's up and about.
This turtle can take the Oxygen while talking
to all her, medical providers and she does not have to shout.

In the above stanza, I am a little confused by the last two lines.
I believe the comma in the last line is confusing, perhaps it could go after medical providers or remove it all together.

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#4468804

Review of My Best Friend

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Rated: E

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Hi Legendary❤️Mask

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day today, I do hope you have a special someone to share this lovely day with. I think you must, judging from this poem.
This was a very lovely and special poem and I do hope you shared it with your spouse. I liked the title and I thought that it was an appropriate title for this poem. The item description is very helpful to the reader.
my favorite line from your poem is the following:

Not in front or behind each other, but side by side as one.

I think that marrying your best friend is a perfect Idea, I did that and we have, so far, been married for thirty-four years. We could not be happier.

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#4468802

Review of Procrastination

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hi gocreate

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! Happy Valentines Day, I hope you have a special person to spend the day with. This poem was appropriately named, And the item description was helpful to the reader. I do not know why people feel the need to procrastinate, I love to rush through my chores so I can feel free when they are done, it makes me feel great to get the jobs done. My favorite part of your poem is the following:

And thus when I realised my folly, I wept
But wiped away my tears, and got up to do my best,
Never more did I keep work for another day,
Once a lesson, forever at bay.

I like it the best because you finally get it done.

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#4468801

Review of Choosing Happy

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hi LadyLeo

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I hope that you have a Happy Valentines Day today, I also hope you have someone special to spend it with. The title of your poem is very well set and very appropriate for this poem. I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader. Your poem made me smile as I am filled with happiness because I have my family with me. My favorite part of your poem was the following:

Having a happy life is a mindset,
You think it is hard but it's not;
It's always just around the corner,
Now go rediscover what you forgot.

You are so correct it is a mindset and many people do not remember how to smile.

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#4468800

Review of Stardust in the Heavens

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! I hope you are having a wonderful Valentines day and that you are spending it with you lady love. I thought that this poem was just wonderful.
I loved it! You are a talented writer and I have read your stuff before it is always quality writing. I thought that the title was appropriate for this perfect and lovely poem and the item description was very helpful to the reader.

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#4468798

Review of Awkward Moments

Review by Lisa Noe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! May I wish you a very happy Valentines Day today. I hope you have a special person to spend this day with. I liked your title and I feel that it was very appropriate for this particular poem. I also thought that the item description was helpful to the reader. I think we have all had these awkward moments in our love lives. I've been married for thirty-four years and my husband and I still have those types of moments in our marriage. But we are extremely happy with one another. the only thing I can say about your writing is that you should always capitalize the pronoun I when referring to yourself.

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