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Hello cheshire, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a blessed day today.
I love veterans day, because my daddy was a veteran of 24 years of the Vietnam war, He served both in the air force and the army at different times. He died as a result of agent orange, which was a chemical used to kill weeds in the jungle of Vietnam. It ended up giving him cancer of the lung. I miss him, He so loved this country of ours. I appreciate all of those who recognize his service to our country.
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Hello C. Don ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day today.
I used to work in a nursing home when I was training, it is such hard work. It is, however rewarding in so many ways. People are so bad to overlook the aged and the handicapped, and forget about them, they are jewels in our crown I believe. Your poem is so wonderful I thought it was well written and very interesting it was also highly emotionally charged.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello checkmate! ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day today.
I think that this must have been a tough task to create such a long going metaphor between love and math... Not two things I would ever connect since I really do terrible in math. You did an awesome job though. I really thought it was perfect even the title was MATH ENVY lol. It was v ery appropriate for this poem. I also thought that the item description was very appropriate and helpful to the reader.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Write-fully Loti,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, As of August twenty -seventh, you will be a member of writing.com for eighteen years, wow that's really something! what a milestone. I loved this beautiful little love poem, written for your valentine. It put's me in mind of a Poem by a well known author by the name of Helen Steiner Rice, The poem is called, "Love's Magic" . .
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Hello Max Griffin 🏳️🌈, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, As of august firfth, you will be a member of writing.com for around
eighteen years, that is really impressive. I love this contest I recently entered it for the first time and was pleasantly surprised by how much you taught me in reviewing my item, I learned to engage the reader more I think because of your review. This contest is an excellent way to practice your skills in writing for audiences who want to feel as if they are a part of the story.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Quick-Quill ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, as of the twenty-seventh of August, you will be a member of writing.com for around eighteen years, wow! That's powerful stuff!
I enjoyed this little item Your superpower is to control gravity, that's great...
I like your plot. it is very imaginative and creative.
Keep up the good work reviewing and I'm sure you'll be flying high!
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Hello Winnie Kay ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month, As of the sixteenth of this month (August), You will be a member of writing.com for ten sweet years. We are so happy to have you as a member of our wonderful community of writers. I liked the title of your poem, I found it to be appropriate for the item and the subject is very interesting...
the form
[The Neville Form]
heptastich (a poem in 7 lines)
metric: L1, L4 & L7 are iambic tetrameter and L2, L3, L5 & L6 are iambic trimeter
rhyme scheme: abbacca.
Is very unique and a perfect choice for this poem I thought.
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I would like to wish you a very happy one year anniversary today, I hope that you are having a blessed day today.
I thought that the title was very appropriate and that it was one that would draw the readers in to read your poem. I also thought that the item description was helpful.
If I could tell you one thing
It's that I've learnt alot
For an 18 year old girl
I know much you do not
In the above item a lot should have a space after a.
I also think it would sound better if you wrote...
learned a lot...
Thank you for writing this item it is very well written and highly emotionally charged. Lisa Noe
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
Hello Mark Mark Tiwo , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this early morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day this day. I loved your poem, I thought that it was very well written and very comprehensive. The title is appropriate for this item. The item description is very helpful for the reader I thought. I loved the part where you show the vast difference between the various people who travel this road such as; the soldiers to the toddlers, to the elderly and so on. You did a very good job on this item.
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Hello Mark Tiwo, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this early morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day this day. I loved your poem, I thought that it was very well written and very comprehensive. The title is appropriate for this item. The item description is very helpful for the reader I thought. I loved the part where you show the vast difference between the various people who travel this road such as; the soldiers to the toddlers, to the elderly and so on. You did a very good job on this item.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Maria Mize , I came across this little item while I was reading writing.com's read and review list. "Love is" The title sounded familiar to me, but that is because I have a similar poem by the same name. Though my poem compares love to various other things; the two are very much alike. I liked your poem, I feel it, you used emotion in writing this piece.
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Hello G. B. Williams, I came across this item while searching for something of interest to read, I found this item to be of great interest. I think everyone, both black and white should read this item called "Black and Blue".
I empathize with you and your history and all of those like you, but you are exactly right... there is absolutely no way on earth I could ever possibly know what type of life you have lived as a black person in America. I do not know what it would be like nor can I guess what it must feel like to have people look at me as something less. Or to have some police suspect me just because my skin is a bit darker than theirs. It is a sad state of affairs and it is not just in America but in the world. I pray that God in his wisdom will find a remedy for this injustice in our world. I know that we are judged by the company we keep, and I think unfortunately all blacks are judged by a handful of people as being bad or less than, which of course is absurd. I am sorry for your issues, which you have had to endure. I ask you please, in the same vein, do not judge all whites as those who have brought forth this infectious hate.
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item while readin g the list on writing.com called read an d review list. I have come across several items of yours on here this evening. I thought that this acrostic poem called Moderator was just perfect. I see that you are a moderator, as am I, so we do know what it means to help other members of this glorious group of writing.com authors with their writing skill.
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon, I came across this little well written poem while I was looking for something to read on writing.com's read and review pages.
This was a Christmas poem which chaos ensued... It is a Rhupunt form of poetry, which until this evening, I had never heard of this form. But now this is the second one I've come across this evening. I think you did an excellent job creating this perfect little poem...Which shows us great celebration of the Holidays.
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating ,I came across this little poem while looking at items on the read and review list of writing.com. I thought that you did a fantastic job with these wonderful "Winter Night Thoughts". I think the title was appropriate and the item description tells the readers how you are feeling as you are expressing that you are looking forward to spring. This is a Rhupunt form of poetry... I was not familiar with this form, so I am glad you gave it's definition. I think it was a big help to the readers.
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item while I was searching for something of interest to read on writing.com's read and review pages. I thought you did an excellent job incorporating all of the prompt word in this poem. I think the poem is about the new year and bringing it in on New Year's Eve. I love the New Year's celebration and I thought that your poem really added it all up together and made a big splash.
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Hello Netty, I came across this item as I was reading items on writing.com's read and review list. I loved the concept of your poem, The subject was just perfect and wonderful. The title was appropriate for this item, and the item description was helpful to the reader of the item. I thought you did a wonderful job with this poem, however, there was one mistake which I found:
Most of all the well overflows what's the soul is filled with
In the above sentence you do not need the apostrophe s.
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon, I came across this item on writing.com's, read and review list. I so much enjoyed this Triquain Swirl type of poem. I have read this form before, but have never attempted to write one myself yet. I thought that you used the required words just wonderfully, and that your poem really made sense. As you are finding solitude in life, according to this poem. I thought the title was perfect as it was the subject for which you wrote. The item description is very helpful to the reader and I thank you for giving the definition of the Triquain Swirl, it was quite educational.
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Hello Red Writing Hood <3, I came across this little ditty while I was reading items on the read and review list of writing.com. I surely appreciated and identified with your little poem, as writer's block is the most trouble for me. Your poem made good sense and good points. I believe the title is appropriate and also very cute. I also found the item description to be in tribute of your muse, which after getting on bended knee, helped you find the perfect subject matter. At least that is what I brought away from your endearing little poem.
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Hello Daft Punk, I came across this item while I was searching for something to read on writing.com's read and review items list today. I enjoy poetry so I really enjoyed reading your item which doubled for feelings an d weather. I thought that the title was very appropriate for this particular piece of writing. I also thought that the item description is very helpful to the reader of your writing. This is a well written piece of poetry, I liked it.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I came across this wonderful Parody song of Grandma Got Run Over by a Reindeer, on writing.com's read and review list. I think it is just wonderful. Grandma got flamed by a dragon, is hilarious and I think it must have taken a lot of work and a lot of imagination to write such a creative piece of literature. I love it, what more can I say, It is great and you deserve the big red ribbon that hangs on the title.
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Hello ruwth , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review random list. I absolutely loved your essay and agree with it 100%. I have had so many challenges in my 52 years of life, from near death a few times. to being robbed, and being used by people and taken advantage of because I am very trusting and quite innocent in my thinking. but I trust that God will always stand by me and bring me through these storms, and when it is my time to leave this earth then God will usher me in to the place I am to go and show me what to do. I truly believe this, He will be there for me always I know...
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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review list while I was reading and reviewing this evening. I have read your stuff many times, therefore I am not surprised by your profession of love to your sweetheart. She has really put a mark on your heart and I for one think that is just great. I too have a very special man in my life which I've been with for 35 years or longer...! I wouldn't trade my time with him for nothing. Your poem is just beautiful and the title is appropriate. It is an obvious writing as to what it is about.
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Hello E, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review list. I thought that this was an unusual item, It is an editorial about thinking and judging people. I think that we are all judged by our behavior whether it is good or bad. People tend to forget the good we do when we do something bad, that is all they recall, I think. But there are those people who are true Christians who believe in forgiveness, who will forgive you for the bad things you have done and will help you find your way in doing that which is right. I think each of us judge people according to how the person was raised. If they were raised. If they were raised with few morals then they tend to be on the bad side. and If they were raised in the church with values then they tend to be on the good side. but you must know that this is not always the case, and there are always exceptions to everything.
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Hello BIG BAD WOLF is 35 on June 3 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review list, I thought it was very well written. It reminded me of a poem in a literature book I had to learn in the eighth grade called "Chicago". You write like a professional and I mean that in the most sincere way. I enjoyed reading about your cab driver. I felt as if I could see him and hear him talking on the CB. The title was good as it tells us who you are speaking about. The item description is helpful to the reader. You did a fabulous job on this poem. congratulations.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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