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Item Title: Dreamless

Author: Elisa: Middle Aged Stik

type: Lyrics

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Elisa: Middle Aged Stik , I came across these lyrics on writing.com's read and review items list. I think it was a very sad song. The title is appropriate for the item. I think that the item description is helpful for the reader of these lyrics. my favorite part of this song is the following:

EXCERPT:
There you held me
after all this time,
and we wandered 'round
like close friends do.



Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and I have no suggestions for improvement for you.



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Dismay

Author: Beholden

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Beholden , I came across this poetry on writing.com's read and review items list. I think you did a great job using this word in the poem of twenty-four syllables. You are a winner of the contest which is great.

EXCERPT:
How harsh you are
to speak so brusque.
Have we come so far
from serenades in the dusk?
I am dismayed.


Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and have no suggestions. Good Job


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: FRIENDS

Author: kalsoom naz

type: article

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello kalsoom naz , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I thought this was an article that had a great subject matter. I think it is important that we all have friends in this life, and we learn from these friends and they from us. We learn to love from each other. my favorite part of your article is the following:

EXCERPT:
Friends who care about you are the most precious gift which God has bestowed upon us.Sometimes friends can be the worst chapter of your book but still it gives some kind of lesson.


Suggestions: If I were you I would put more spaces after the periods or question marks or end marks of the sentences. I would also double space the lines to make it easier to read for your readers.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Melody of Wings

Author: Kåre Enga in Montana

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Kåre Enga in Montana , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I thought the title was just beautiful I really liked it and I thought that it was appropriate for the writing. I felt that some of the words were hard for me to pronounce, like the name. But it was a well written piece and I liked it.

EXCERPT:

Here Zdeña sings to the stars,
faint orbs glittering above the lake.
She sings of longing for her missing mate;
she'll sing long past his passing.


Suggestions: The above item was my favorite stanza of the poem. I didn't really see anything out of order I don't believe.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Why It's You..?

Author: Sankiii12

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Sankiii12 , I came across this item while I was reviewing items on writing.com's read and reviews items list.
I thought this was a nice little poem with a highly emotionally charged meaning behind it. I am sorry for you that you do not believe in God, I think people who have God in their lives are happier. Not that you are not happy and not that people who believe in God are always happy, but I think it would make you have deeper, richer feelings for life. Nevertheless, I liked your little poem. but there were a few mistakes with it.

EXCERPT:
I always hate when anyone comments about me...
But why i always waiting for your comment?
Why i always cared about your opinion abt me...?


Suggestions: First of all It is important to always capitalize the pronoun I. I also notice that you failed to spell out the word about in the last sentence above. If I were you I would go back and look through the whole poem as I saw numerous little mistakes, especially in the last stanza.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Give Me Dessert

Author: Cobwebby Space Reader Reindeer

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Cobwebby Space Reader Reindeer , I came across this item while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list.
I see that this is an entry for the twenty-four syllable contest. I think you did a pretty good and yummy job creating this little piece. I think the title is appropriate and I think you need to tell about your item for the item description not say it is a contest entry. but I did like your piece, you did a good job coming up with something clever to say.


Suggestions: I would just say to write something about the item for the item description location. like telling that it is about delicious deserts and you can eat it up in 24 syllables for a contest. That way you get in that it is about a desert and that it is for a contest. even if the item explains itself it is important to write about it in the item description.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Winter Wisdom

Author: n.lea

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello n.lea , I found this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I enjoyed reading this piece and I thought that it was a well written piece of poetry. you really used the poetic devices to your advantage, especially the alliteration which I think really help to push the poem on well.


EXCERPT:
August whispered
Winter words of wisdom
Blowing softly in my ear
"Nestle me close
For the frost is near,


Suggestions: The above was my favorite part of your poem. I did not see any mistakes with your writing. you did very good.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Where The world bleeds white

Author: Prosperous Snow celebrating

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I really enjoyed reading this piece of writing. I especially liked the way you use a refrain in the poem.
I thought it was a well written piece of writing. my favorite part was the following:


EXCERPT:
Where the world bleeds white,
I embrace the memory of your love,
as I look for your star shining bright.


Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing, I thought that it was just plain awesome! you deserve three



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: The Silent Poetry Collection

Author: Bubblegum Jones

type: Poetry Collection 3 poems

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Bumblegumjones, I am fulfilling your auction win for my part this is the three poetry reviews, I wasn't expecting you would have all three together in one collection. if you want another review just contact me, I'll be glad to do another poetry review for you. I thought the first poem about the girl who died was exemplary. I think it was so sad and I really think it was strongly emotionally charged. it really tugs on the heart strings. my favorite part of the poem was the following.

EXCERPT:
With love, people have nothing to lose and everything to gain.
Eventually the world would be spared of hate and ease all of its pain.



Suggestions: I liked it the most because it was so positive. The other two poems were written for the oriental poetry contest...Did they place?
I thought they were well written, I wrote that type once myself but it wasn't as good as yours. I'll be sending you a merit badge to fulfill the auction ... I liked the first poem so well that I'm going to see if I can find a badge that is appropriate for it.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Quiet Moments With Thee

Author: Netty

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Nettie, I came across this little poem while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list. I just loved this poem, it was sweet and endearing. I love Jesus and I know He loves me too.
This poem just made me feel good and made me think of my Lord.


EXCERPT:
Quiet moments
with thee brings falling
tears from thy face,
because Jesus cares for you.



Suggestions: The above was my favorite part of your poem, I thought it was precious. Thanks for writing this, The quiet moments can be special.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Crayola

Author: Dave

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Dave, it is an odd thing for me to read something of yours and judge it...lol because I am your student. I found this on the read and review items list and I was struck by the title. It was so creative and I would never have thought of such a clever title. Anyway, I think this is such a beautiful poem and so well written, it could not be more professional. It is no wonder it won first place in the Poem a Day contest.
congratulations. I enjoyed reading this very creative and original work.

EXCERPT:
The colors of spring are everywhere.
The spirit of springtime is in the air,
bringing a very welcome infusion
of vitality, like a transfusion
of lifeblood required for the soul’s repair.


Suggestions: I have no suggestions, as this was a perfect piece of writing. The above excerpt is my favorite part of your poem because it speaks of the spirit of springtime and the lifeblood for the soul's repair. I liked that because it is spiritual and kind of brings God's glory to the beauty of Spring.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Death Came Knocking
Author: Scott Steven
type: Poetry
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: Hello Scott, This was a really unusual poem.
I really enjoyed it however, I never would have thought to laugh at death. lol
I liked the humorous edge you gave to such a very serious subject. You lightened the load for the angel of death...
I liked the title it was appropriate and I thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader as well. You did a very nice job with your writing.
I especially liked that you gave it a large font and lots of space, it made it much easier for us people, lets say us uh.... young folks to read.(lol).


EXCERPT:



I looked him in his hollow eyes to leave in him no doubt

"You looked like Death." I told him flat. We laughed as he walked out.



Suggestions: I thought the rhyme was really well done but it is spaced so that maybe some folks may not notice all of the rhymes. It is a well done piece.



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Anticipation

Author: Prosperous Snow celebrating

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item while reading things on writing.com's read and review items list today.
I really enjoyed your writing, you always have such interesting subject matter to write about. This was called a rictameter, I have never heard of this before.
You taught me something new in poetry today, so thanks.


EXCERPT:
Sunday
dawns bright and clear,
as the pale half-moon hangs
over the Rockies snowy peaks
like a half eaten donut waiting for
another cup of hot coffee


Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes which stood out to me, so I guess I will give you the old



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: From the Four Winds

Author: Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list while I was reviewing this afternoon. I do so hope you are having a blessed day.
I thought this was a very well written and very serious poem. It is profound and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the title, it is appropriate and the item description is perfect and helpful; plus I liked the way it rhymed.

EXCERPT:

A tornado howls, and then it's still
A hurricane it stirs and, round it spins.
Strong enough to scare and even kill
I'm four reasons that people count their sins.


Suggestions: I don't really have any suggestions for you, as you made no mistakes that I saw and your writing is very good.



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Captive of the Stars

Author: Emily Murphy

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Emily Murphy , I came across this item while I was reading things on writing.com's read and review items list.
I so enjoyed this delightfully original piece of writing. You show great promise, as I thought this was just a wonderful addition to our site. The title is perfect and very appropriate.

EXCERPT:
My eyes fluttered open, to see a small star, though i know this isn’t how they look when you are close to them, i could see it as a small light just floating right in front of me. I quickly emptied my mason jar filled with beads onto my floor and brought it around the star as it was now inside the used to be empty container as I placed it on my desk. My eyes studied the jar filled with light as i wondered how this would happen, but then I realize, i have captured the stars.


Suggestions: The only suggestion I have for you is to always capitalize the pronoun word I.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Prelude to Writer's Block

Author: Prosperous Snow celebrating

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this little item on writing.com's read and review item list. I thought this was a nice poem, you are a terrific writer, I have read many of your items and they are always outstanding. I did find one tiny little thing that tripped me up a little bit. in the following excerpt it will be in red.

EXCERPT:
How can I write?
My I thoughts echo
helter skelter
through a maze
of half-remembered movie lines
and positive affirmations
that merge


Suggestions: In the second line I do not believe you need the pronoun I in the sentence. It seems to be out of place.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Seaside memory
Author: SarraB
type: Poetry
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: Hello SarraB , I came across this item while I was searching writing.com's read and review item's list for something of interest to review. I Liked Your title it was very appropriate for this item.
I also thought that the item description was helpful to the reader of this poem.
This was a very brief poem there wasn't much to it at all. But what I read was good.

Suggestions: I did not see any mistake, but it was so short there wasn't room for mistakes.lol


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Wind Spirit
Author: forgivness
type: Poetry
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: Hello forgivness, I came across this little poem while reading on writing.com's read and review item's list. I so enjoyed this little item, I thought that the title was unique and sweet quite appropriate for this poem. I am glad you decided to add this poem to your portfolio. It is a great addition. The item description Is perfect for the item.
I think you did a great job creating this little item.

Suggestions: I did not see any kind of grammatical errors or spelling errors, you did a fine job with this poem.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Forever in Love
Author: Tim Chiu
type: Poetry
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review item's list. I absolutely loved this item of Poetry. I thought that the title was appropriate for this item, and it was also very positive. Am I wrong or is this dedicated to an angel. If so I think that is just wonderful. More people should do this. I believe we all have an angel watching over us, those of us who believe in God that is. I love God and I love my Angel, I don't know if it is male or female and don't really care. Most of Jesus's angels were male I believe. my favorite stanza of your beautiful little poem was the following.


EXCERPT:

My hope for everlasting peace and harmony,
Enthralled so blessedly by your wondrous affections,
Shall multiply and prosper for all time
On God's masterful, gifted stage...


Suggestions: I too hope for everlasting peace and harmony between all races and religions. I love the respect that you show God.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: "Homage to Les"
Author: Beholden
type: Poetry/ tribute
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: I came across this wonderful tribute to a man or should I say a great Poet of Australia, on writing.com's read and review item's list. I thought that the title as befitting the piece of writing.
I thought that the item description was helpful but obvious to what it was about.
I am saddened by the passing death of a great writer of our time. It is always sad when a like minded individual leaves this world. We are all Poets or writers of some sort on this site, and when we lose a great one it hurts.
I commend you on this wonderful tribute you paid to Les Murray.

EXCERPT:
Could write of pigs in language
All their own, then draw a man
Weeping in terms divine
Sing of bush poems and thorns
Of city streets and a woman
Turning like a comet to the sun.



Suggestions:
This tells of the wonderful writings he was capable of and I am pleased to review this wonderful piece of writing.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Calla Lily
Author: ysaaaa
type: Poetry
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: I came across this sweet and very interesting poem while searching for something to read on writing.com's read and review item's list. I thought the title to be appropriate after some thought. I also think that the item description is helpful as it explains itself. I liked the poem, I found it to be thought provoking and it asks many outstanding questions.


EXCERPT:
Maybe we don't have full knowledge of what's yet to come or why most people would say, "We choose to love and get hurt."
The highly comical yet less comedic twisted facet of life is that we still choose to go through with it even if there's an existing 50-50 of success or probable failure.
And then we are faced with a two-way path, and encounter a new friend, regret.
"We should have gotten that house."
"I should have said yes."
"I should have chosen her."
With regret comes another monster named "fear." Fear follows regret when regret has already caused enough damage.


Suggestions: I used a large portion of your item as an insert because it asks the right questions and makes very powerful statements. Fear and Regret are two very important factors of our lives.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Distant Shadows
Author: Dr.M C Gupta
type: Poetry
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: I came across this piece of writing while I was looking over writing.com's read and review item's list. I thought that the title was appropriate for the item and I also thought that the item description was helpful to the readers. I liked the format that you chose to write the item in. 7-7-7-7 with a rhyme scheme of ABCB.

EXCERPT:
Such thoughts torment me and cast
In my mind, many shadows.
They darken as I walk through
These lonely woods and meadows.


Suggestions: I so much enjoyed reading your poetry especially, I liked the final stanza of the poem. We all sin and it does leave us feeling guilty and make us seem as if we are walking through a darkened fog or as you stated through lonely woods and meadows. I know that I am most definitely tormented by my sins.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: We Were Companions
Author: willwilcox
type: poetry
Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~

First Impression: I came across this item on writing.com's read and review item's list this afternoon. I do hope you are having a wonderfully blessed day today. I thought that this poem was just terrific. I really didn't think that it was all that dark. I was really close to my father, I told him I loved him everyday of his life, until he died. I still love him and decorate his grave annually. I thought the poem you wrote was touching. and had a strong emotional pull to it.


EXCERPT:
We were companions ‘til the end
When he said, “You're such a precious child,
remember how you used to say, ‘Daddy, I love you,’
why don’t you ever say that anymore?”



Suggestions: The above stanza was my favorite part of your poem because it shows the wonderful memory of the father recalling his son saying I love You.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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