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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Justin ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you and your family have had a joyously blessed day today. I found this item in your portfolio and I wanted to give you a quick review on it for your anniversary. I thought the title was so well done and it is appropriate for the item. Also the item description is so very helpful to the reader/reviewer. I thought that you did A terrific job creating this wonderful story poem. I run a contest which is starting on Sept. 1-7 It is :
I would love if you entered it. Something like this is exactly what I am looking for. not to say you would automatically place, but I'd love for you to enter. I thought that the rhyme was excellent throughout the entire story. It also had a great rhythm. This had a good story value as well. It was just all over good.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW
Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello R Vance ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you and your family have a wonderfully blessed life. I came by to give you an anniversary review since it is your first one year anniversary today. I liked this collection of Poetry which you have written. They are each one, very short and to the point. But each carries with it a valuable message, I think you are quite the poet.
There were several that I liked but one in particular caught my attention
it is my favorite one of your collection:
HOPE
When you have no Hope
Don’t give up
When Hope finds you
Don’t let it go
Only Hope
I liked it because it was all about hope, which is, to me, a very powerful and positive message. I also liked the one about the white knight. I saw no mistakes and have no suggestions for improvements.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello C. Yarn Weaver,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this lovely afternoon, I do so hope that you and yours are having a joyfully blessed day. I was very uncertain about this poem, it seemed so very sad to me. It is a poem about hurting someone you once loved or at least someone who loved you. I am not in the position to know the whole story so I will not take anyone's side. The title of the poem makes me think there was something bad going on somewhere. Where there is dishonesty there is trouble with love. The title was appropriate for this particular poem. The item description was well done and very helpful to the reviewer/reader. My favorite part of your writing of this item is the following:
You asked for love
I gave you comfort
You asked for A Bandage
I Gave you Scars
You asked for time
I gave too much
You beg for truth
To be torn down
I Dispatch you
With nary a frown.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello NipponFury ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this very lovely day, I do so hope that you and yours will have a lovely blessed day today. I usually don't read fiction but seeing as this one was not a really long and drawn out piece, I gave it a try. I thought that the writing was pretty darn good. The title was appropriate but it did make me think I was going to be reading a thriller and it was a romance so to speak. I see though that the item description does tell about the poem well and is very helpful to the reader. Your writing was impeccable, as I saw no mistakes with anything about the writing. My favorite part was the following:
“Ruddy three of them I tell ya. Three!” The father booms in disbelief, holding up some fingers. Owen gives a nervous laugh in reply, unable to process words. She merely rolls her eyes and shakes her head.
“You kids have fun now! He booms.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello kxs ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, I'm sorry but when I did the other review for you, I did not know that it was your anniversary today. You have been a member of writing.com since September 1, 2010, that's about nine years. a pretty cool milestone if you ask me. I think that you did a real neat job creating this little Bachelor's poem. I hope it is just creative writing and that you do not have to live with the stench of dirty, smelly dishes. I thought that the title of your poem was very appropriate for the item. I also thought that the item description was fair. My favorite part of the whole poem was the last stanza.
But no empty headed darling
Comes falling before his knees.
And the television helps him not,
Infecting him with brain rot.
So sits the architect of his pain,
And dirty dishes still remain,
And dirty dishes still remain.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Spiritscribe ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this lovely afternoon, I do so hope that you and yours have a joyously blessed day today. I found this piece in your portfolio and thought I'd review it for you. First of all the title was very appropriate for the story poem. I also thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader/reviewer.
I have a contest that this story poem would be perfect for, called:
You are more than welcome to join but it will end September 7. I can't promise you will win or place but it is exactly the type of story poems I look for.
I liked the wonderful way you rhymed the entire little story. It was quite a long story so it must have been difficult to keep up such a good rhythm. My favorite part of your poem was the following:
He got jobs for people and often stopped gang fights.
He volunteered to teach children about civil rights.
He befriended fatherless kids and tucked them in at night.
Sometimes, he chased the dope peddlers and gave them a fight.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW
Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello kxs ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this lovely afternoon, I do so hope that you have had a gloriously lovely and blessed day today. I loved your poem, I thought that it was so creative and well written. I thought that the title was perfectly acceptable and appropriate for the item. I also thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader or reviewer of your item. You are a very talented writer, A real Poet it would seem. Your writing comes out as being professional and polished. I especially liked the way you repeated the phrase ("share your bitter fruit with me"). The following passage was my favorite of your writing.
I liked the little bit of alliteration in line 2.
Share your bitter fruit with me
Let me sip your wicked wine.
Camouflage your better manner
Let me see your darker mind.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Tim Chiu, I came across your piece of writing while I was reviewing things on writing.com's read and review item list. I thought that you wrote a very beautiful piece of writing. You seem to have been extremely emotionally charged while you were writing this piece.
I thought that the title was very creative and lovely, It was also very appropriate. You wrote a very romantic piece for someone you truly love and I think it is wonderful, I do hope that you shared this writing with her.
My favorite stanza is the following:
EXCERPT:
A love that prospers for all time,
Our life of faith supremely prime
Is innocence serenely cued
By Godly passions now imbued.
Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you and there are no corrections to be made that I saw.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Princess Megan Rose, I came across this wonderful piece of literature while I was searching your portfolio for something of interest to read. I am giving this review as a part of your party bag for the writing.com's birthday celebration. I thought that you did a fantastic job creating this endearing little teddy bear yarn. I just loved it, I recall all of the little tea parties I had as a child. It was a wonderful time indeed.
My favorite part or stanza of your poem was the following:
EXCERPT:
Stephanie put her bears away and when she left, she
heard them whispering. She wasn't scared. She knew
that they talked. Tomorrow, she would plan another tea party
Her parents would be home from Europe tonight with more bears
Suggestions: I thought this was so sweet and cute. I just love bears they are adorable. I have no suggestion s for your improvements, as it is so well done.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
This is a great little memory exercise. I really enjoyed reliving the memories I found in my head. I enjoyed reading the few other responses you received for this piece as well.
I think it is a wonderful day to recall 19 years ago and what we were doing. very interesting I think.
First Impression: Hello Tmtsaturn, I came across this item while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list.
It was a nice read I thought, surely something which I could identify with, as I am sure most of us writers could. Writer's Block is a dreadful thing for a writer to endure. to stare at a blank paper or screen and be unable to form a thought is just miserable. The following were my favorite lines from your poem.
EXCERPT:
A black hole forms
Which sucks up
All the poetic melody in me
And leaves me behind with
A jumble of emotion and words
That do not harmonize.
Suggestions: The only real mistake I saw was that you left of the apostrophe before the s in the title it should be Writer's Block, as it shows possession of the writer so to speak.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello kalsoom naz, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it was really well written and you wrote it from your heart, which I just adored. My mother is the most precious person in my life as well as my husband,... I also have a sister who is so very special, and of course her family ...she has two kids and a husband which I love.
Suggestions: The only suggestion I would have for you is the spacing of the lines in your article, I feel that it would be easier for people to read it if it were double spaced instead of single spaced. but still it was really good and well written. I liked it.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Tim Chiu, I came across this little piece of poetry on writing.com's read an d review items list. The title is so appropriate for this item, it is taken right from the poem. I think that the item description is very helpful to the reader of the poem. You did a great job creating this poem and putting it together. My favorite part is the following:
EXCERPT:
But the stripes and the colors
Of this animal attacking,
Bear a resemblance to tigers
Whose aim has no backing…
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes and there are no suggestions to be made for this piece.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Stik to My Own Beat, I came across these lyrics on writing.com's read and review items list. I think it was a very sad song. The title is appropriate for the item. I think that the item description is helpful for the reader of these lyrics. my favorite part of this song is the following:
EXCERPT:
There you held me
after all this time,
and we wandered 'round
like close friends do.
Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and I have no suggestions for improvement for you.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Beholden, I came across this poetry on writing.com's read and review items list. I think you did a great job using this word in the poem of twenty-four syllables. You are a winner of the contest which is great.
EXCERPT:
How harsh you are
to speak so brusque.
Have we come so far
from serenades in the dusk?
I am dismayed.
Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and have no suggestions. Good Job
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello kalsoom naz, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I thought this was an article that had a great subject matter. I think it is important that we all have friends in this life, and we learn from these friends and they from us. We learn to love from each other. my favorite part of your article is the following:
EXCERPT:
Friends who care about you are the most precious gift which God has bestowed upon us.Sometimes friends can be the worst chapter of your book but still it gives some kind of lesson.
Suggestions: If I were you I would put more spaces after the periods or question marks or end marks of the sentences. I would also double space the lines to make it easier to read for your readers.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Kåre เลียม Enga, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I thought the title was just beautiful I really liked it and I thought that it was appropriate for the writing. I felt that some of the words were hard for me to pronounce, like the name. But it was a well written piece and I liked it.
EXCERPT:
Here Zdeña sings to the stars,
faint orbs glittering above the lake.
She sings of longing for her missing mate;
she'll sing long past his passing.
Suggestions: The above item was my favorite stanza of the poem. I didn't really see anything out of order I don't believe.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Walkinbird 3 Jan 1892, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a wonderfully blessed day today.
I thought that the title of this item was very appropriate for the writing.
I also thought that the item description was helpful for the reader of the item.
I felt this was a very formal type of writing, I liked it but I must admit I had a little bit difficult time following it. You did a wonderful job with this poem.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Sankiii12, I came across this item while I was reviewing items on writing.com's read and reviews items list.
I thought this was a nice little poem with a highly emotionally charged meaning behind it. I am sorry for you that you do not believe in God, I think people who have God in their lives are happier. Not that you are not happy and not that people who believe in God are always happy, but I think it would make you have deeper, richer feelings for life. Nevertheless, I liked your little poem. but there were a few mistakes with it.
EXCERPT:
I always hate when anyone comments about me...
But why i always waiting for your comment?
Why i always cared about your opinion abt me...?
Suggestions: First of all It is important to always capitalize the pronoun I. I also notice that you failed to spell out the word about in the last sentence above. If I were you I would go back and look through the whole poem as I saw numerous little mistakes, especially in the last stanza.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello SPACE COBWEBS @ 18!, I came across this item while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list.
I see that this is an entry for the twenty-four syllable contest. I think you did a pretty good and yummy job creating this little piece. I think the title is appropriate and I think you need to tell about your item for the item description not say it is a contest entry. but I did like your piece, you did a good job coming up with something clever to say.
Suggestions: I would just say to write something about the item for the item description location. like telling that it is about delicious deserts and you can eat it up in 24 syllables for a contest. That way you get in that it is about a desert and that it is for a contest. even if the item explains itself it is important to write about it in the item description.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello n.lea, I found this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I enjoyed reading this piece and I thought that it was a well written piece of poetry. you really used the poetic devices to your advantage, especially the alliteration which I think really help to push the poem on well.
EXCERPT:
August whispered
Winter words of wisdom
Blowing softly in my ear
"Nestle me close
For the frost is near,
Suggestions: The above was my favorite part of your poem. I did not see any mistakes with your writing. you did very good.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I really enjoyed reading this piece of writing. I especially liked the way you use a refrain in the poem.
I thought it was a well written piece of writing. my favorite part was the following:
EXCERPT:
Where the world bleeds white,
I embrace the memory of your love,
as I look for your star shining bright.
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing, I thought that it was just plain awesome! you deserve three
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Bumblegumjones, I am fulfilling your auction win for my part this is the three poetry reviews, I wasn't expecting you would have all three together in one collection. if you want another review just contact me, I'll be glad to do another poetry review for you. I thought the first poem about the girl who died was exemplary. I think it was so sad and I really think it was strongly emotionally charged. it really tugs on the heart strings. my favorite part of the poem was the following.
EXCERPT:
With love, people have nothing to lose and everything to gain.
Eventually the world would be spared of hate and ease all of its pain.
Suggestions: I liked it the most because it was so positive. The other two poems were written for the oriental poetry contest...Did they place?
I thought they were well written, I wrote that type once myself but it wasn't as good as yours. I'll be sending you a merit badge to fulfill the auction ... I liked the first poem so well that I'm going to see if I can find a badge that is appropriate for it.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello Nettie, I came across this little poem while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list. I just loved this poem, it was sweet and endearing. I love Jesus and I know He loves me too.
This poem just made me feel good and made me think of my Lord.
EXCERPT:
Quiet moments
with thee brings falling
tears from thy face,
because Jesus cares for you.
Suggestions: The above was my favorite part of your poem, I thought it was precious. Thanks for writing this, The quiet moments can be special.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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