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Item Title: Forever in Time

Author: Tim Chiu

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Tim Chiu , I came across your piece of writing while I was reviewing things on writing.com's read and review item list. I thought that you wrote a very beautiful piece of writing. You seem to have been extremely emotionally charged while you were writing this piece.
I thought that the title was very creative and lovely, It was also very appropriate. You wrote a very romantic piece for someone you truly love and I think it is wonderful, I do hope that you shared this writing with her.
My favorite stanza is the following:

EXCERPT:

A love that prospers for all time,
Our life of faith supremely prime
Is innocence serenely cued
By Godly passions now imbued.


Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you and there are no corrections to be made that I saw.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Teddy Bear Tea Time

Author: Princess Megan Rose

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Princess Megan Rose , I came across this wonderful piece of literature while I was searching your portfolio for something of interest to read. I am giving this review as a part of your party bag for the writing.com's birthday celebration. I thought that you did a fantastic job creating this endearing little teddy bear yarn. I just loved it, I recall all of the little tea parties I had as a child. It was a wonderful time indeed.
My favorite part or stanza of your poem was the following:

EXCERPT:

Stephanie put her bears away and when she left, she
heard them whispering. She wasn't scared. She knew
that they talked. Tomorrow, she would plan another tea party
Her parents would be home from Europe tonight with more bears


Suggestions: I thought this was so sweet and cute. I just love bears they are adorable. I have no suggestion s for your improvements, as it is so well done.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Writers Block

Author: Tmtsaturn

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Tmtsaturn , I came across this item while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list.
It was a nice read I thought, surely something which I could identify with, as I am sure most of us writers could. Writer's Block is a dreadful thing for a writer to endure. to stare at a blank paper or screen and be unable to form a thought is just miserable. The following were my favorite lines from your poem.

EXCERPT:
A black hole forms
Which sucks up
All the poetic melody in me
And leaves me behind with
A jumble of emotion and words
That do not harmonize.


Suggestions: The only real mistake I saw was that you left of the apostrophe before the s in the title it should be Writer's Block, as it shows possession of the writer so to speak.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: IMPORTANCE OF PRECIOUS PEOPLE

Author: kalsoom naz

type: Article

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello kalsoom naz , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it was really well written and you wrote it from your heart, which I just adored. My mother is the most precious person in my life as well as my husband,... I also have a sister who is so very special, and of course her family ...she has two kids and a husband which I love.

Suggestions: The only suggestion I would have for you is the spacing of the lines in your article, I feel that it would be easier for people to read it if it were double spaced instead of single spaced. but still it was really good and well written. I liked it.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: The Tiger's Aim

Author: Tim Chiu

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this little piece of poetry on writing.com's read an d review items list. The title is so appropriate for this item, it is taken right from the poem. I think that the item description is very helpful to the reader of the poem. You did a great job creating this poem and putting it together. My favorite part is the following:

EXCERPT:
But the stripes and the colors
Of this animal attacking,
Bear a resemblance to tigers
Whose aim has no backing…


Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes and there are no suggestions to be made for this piece.



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Listening in Vain

Author: nordicnoir

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello {suser

EXCERPT:



Suggestions:


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Dreamless

Author: Stik to My Own Beat

type: Lyrics

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Stik to My Own Beat , I came across these lyrics on writing.com's read and review items list. I think it was a very sad song. The title is appropriate for the item. I think that the item description is helpful for the reader of these lyrics. my favorite part of this song is the following:

EXCERPT:
There you held me
after all this time,
and we wandered 'round
like close friends do.



Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and I have no suggestions for improvement for you.



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Dismay

Author: Beholden

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Beholden , I came across this poetry on writing.com's read and review items list. I think you did a great job using this word in the poem of twenty-four syllables. You are a winner of the contest which is great.

EXCERPT:
How harsh you are
to speak so brusque.
Have we come so far
from serenades in the dusk?
I am dismayed.


Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and have no suggestions. Good Job


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: FRIENDS

Author: kalsoom naz

type: article

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello kalsoom naz , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I thought this was an article that had a great subject matter. I think it is important that we all have friends in this life, and we learn from these friends and they from us. We learn to love from each other. my favorite part of your article is the following:

EXCERPT:
Friends who care about you are the most precious gift which God has bestowed upon us.Sometimes friends can be the worst chapter of your book but still it gives some kind of lesson.


Suggestions: If I were you I would put more spaces after the periods or question marks or end marks of the sentences. I would also double space the lines to make it easier to read for your readers.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Melody of Wings

Author: Kåre เลียม Enga

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Kåre เลียม Enga , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I thought the title was just beautiful I really liked it and I thought that it was appropriate for the writing. I felt that some of the words were hard for me to pronounce, like the name. But it was a well written piece and I liked it.

EXCERPT:

Here Zdeña sings to the stars,
faint orbs glittering above the lake.
She sings of longing for her missing mate;
she'll sing long past his passing.


Suggestions: The above item was my favorite stanza of the poem. I didn't really see anything out of order I don't believe.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Why It's You..?

Author: Sankiii12

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Sankiii12 , I came across this item while I was reviewing items on writing.com's read and reviews items list.
I thought this was a nice little poem with a highly emotionally charged meaning behind it. I am sorry for you that you do not believe in God, I think people who have God in their lives are happier. Not that you are not happy and not that people who believe in God are always happy, but I think it would make you have deeper, richer feelings for life. Nevertheless, I liked your little poem. but there were a few mistakes with it.

EXCERPT:
I always hate when anyone comments about me...
But why i always waiting for your comment?
Why i always cared about your opinion abt me...?


Suggestions: First of all It is important to always capitalize the pronoun I. I also notice that you failed to spell out the word about in the last sentence above. If I were you I would go back and look through the whole poem as I saw numerous little mistakes, especially in the last stanza.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Give Me Dessert

Author: SPACE COBWEBS @ 18!

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello SPACE COBWEBS @ 18! , I came across this item while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list.
I see that this is an entry for the twenty-four syllable contest. I think you did a pretty good and yummy job creating this little piece. I think the title is appropriate and I think you need to tell about your item for the item description not say it is a contest entry. but I did like your piece, you did a good job coming up with something clever to say.


Suggestions: I would just say to write something about the item for the item description location. like telling that it is about delicious deserts and you can eat it up in 24 syllables for a contest. That way you get in that it is about a desert and that it is for a contest. even if the item explains itself it is important to write about it in the item description.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Winter Wisdom

Author: n.lea

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello n.lea , I found this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I enjoyed reading this piece and I thought that it was a well written piece of poetry. you really used the poetic devices to your advantage, especially the alliteration which I think really help to push the poem on well.


EXCERPT:
August whispered
Winter words of wisdom
Blowing softly in my ear
"Nestle me close
For the frost is near,


Suggestions: The above was my favorite part of your poem. I did not see any mistakes with your writing. you did very good.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Where The world bleeds white

Author: Prosperous Snow celebrating

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I really enjoyed reading this piece of writing. I especially liked the way you use a refrain in the poem.
I thought it was a well written piece of writing. my favorite part was the following:


EXCERPT:
Where the world bleeds white,
I embrace the memory of your love,
as I look for your star shining bright.


Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing, I thought that it was just plain awesome! you deserve three



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: The Silent Poetry Collection

Author: Bubblegum Jones

type: Poetry Collection 3 poems

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Bumblegumjones, I am fulfilling your auction win for my part this is the three poetry reviews, I wasn't expecting you would have all three together in one collection. if you want another review just contact me, I'll be glad to do another poetry review for you. I thought the first poem about the girl who died was exemplary. I think it was so sad and I really think it was strongly emotionally charged. it really tugs on the heart strings. my favorite part of the poem was the following.

EXCERPT:
With love, people have nothing to lose and everything to gain.
Eventually the world would be spared of hate and ease all of its pain.



Suggestions: I liked it the most because it was so positive. The other two poems were written for the oriental poetry contest...Did they place?
I thought they were well written, I wrote that type once myself but it wasn't as good as yours. I'll be sending you a merit badge to fulfill the auction ... I liked the first poem so well that I'm going to see if I can find a badge that is appropriate for it.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Item Title: Quiet Moments With Thee

Author: Netty

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello Nettie, I came across this little poem while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list. I just loved this poem, it was sweet and endearing. I love Jesus and I know He loves me too.
This poem just made me feel good and made me think of my Lord.


EXCERPT:
Quiet moments
with thee brings falling
tears from thy face,
because Jesus cares for you.



Suggestions: The above was my favorite part of your poem, I thought it was precious. Thanks for writing this, The quiet moments can be special.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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