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Hi Choconut and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
Wow! what a great idea to allow people to enter their poems or stories that were previously entered in another contest in the second time around contest to win prizes. They are allowed to enter one of each into each category in the contest.
There will be four winning three winning places in each category and honorable mention plus an overall winner, that is provided there are ten or more entries.
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Review of Forever Dark  
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Hi BIG BAD WOLF is 35 on June 3 and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Reviewers Group!
This is an awfully frightening poem to me, I believe there will be a total eclipse following a nuclear war and we will see that probably in our lifetime, I would imagine. Though I do hope that I am just being an alarmist. I am awfully quick to jump to conclusions. What do you think?

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Hi Maryann and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! When I was a child, I used to love balloons, I recall one time my father and I were coming home from a carnival, where he had bought me a helium balloon, I was so tickled with it, but I accidentally let go of it and it floated far away and I watched it as it floated in Heaven. Your writing is very good and makes me recall so many great memories.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hi Maryann and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! How beautifully stated! You are such a terrific writer, I love the ocean and the way you described it makes it sound like a wonderland. I would have never have thought of the rainforest and the ocean together you are very creative. I like to read your poetry it is ve4ry interesting.

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Hi Lilli 🧿 ☕ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group! The Rising Stars Is a great and fantastic idea and way for black suitcases to be recognized for their achievements in writing. I think it is commendable for you to take over the group and become the new leader. It has now been in existence for thirteen years and I think it is a great group.

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Hi rblakely5 and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I chose this item because I liked the title and I do think the title is appropriate for the poem. You have captured my attention with your beautiful and frightening words. I love my freedom and I am one of the Americans who has suffered loss for our freedom, as my father died for his country. sometimes it makes me angry but I know that if he had it to do all over again, he would. He was a special blend of American, one that served at home and overseas and loved all of his fellow man.
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Hi Maryann and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I really enjoyed your triquint poem, "mighty oak so tall" This form of poetry is so fun to write I think, don't you? I thought this firn was inspired by nature and the beautiful old oak trees, which tower in the outdoors all around us. I think you did a wonderful job creating this poem and I loved that title and feel as if it is very appropriate for your poem.
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Hi LegendaryMask❤️ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I just loved your writing, I thought that it was just beautiful. I love the way it made me feel inside, it was romantic and it made me close my eyes and daydrean about my husband holding me in his strong arms and kissing my neck ever-so-gently. Your title was just perfect and appropriate for this writing.


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Review of IRON and STEEL  
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Hi LegendaryMask❤️ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
This a real rough and tumble piece about working on the railroad all the livelong day. It has a great title, which is very appropriate for the writing. I really liked this item, it is an unlikely subject for which to write a poem and you did it so well, The railroad is so important to this nation, I think it is important that our young people learn of its importance to our way of life.
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Hi LegendaryMask❤️ and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
I think your writing is very good it is nice to be inspired by another writer's writing. There is no telling where or what will inspire our own writing, I personally believe that it is a compliment to be inspired by another's words.
I think that your title is a good one and it works well with this writing. I as a professional writer, myself can identify with what you have said.
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I am giving this review today as an item for our raid at The Power Reviewers Group!
ThisThis is a piece of writing which I liked very well, I think you had fun writing this little poem, which is an absolutely delicious piece. The item description wasted no time letting you know who was the most important to the test. The two of them will waste time fooling around until the door closes and we're sad. The audience is always angry with the cast, even though it is' I recall driving down the road and passing out while driving, it made me wreck, as I hit a tree, it flipped my car over on its side.I was nearly killed. sorry for rambling but your poem, brings so much to my mind.
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Review of Wake up and Think  
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Hi Nixie and welcome to Writing.com, a place where we can all come together with one goal... helping each other improve our craft.
I found this little poll in your portfolio while I was searching for something of interest to read. I realize you know we are having a member to member review raid today and tomorrow, so that is why I chose you and Maryann to do and some other captains as well, because you all are The Power Reviewers Group, you work so hard and do so much, every one of you. You wrote a nice and very interesting poll question, I took the poll and chose other, which was the third place item.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello JM Jr. , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I think that this was a well written piece of writing.
I was touched deeply by the words you used. It makes me wonder if this is a poem of a dying person or what? The title is good, The rhyme was perfect and the rhythm was also very good. You had all the right stuff to create a winning
poem.



Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Hello Vanishing Vapor , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I loved your story poem, it was really so very good. I enjoyed what you had to say about it. I hate that a cat came and ruined the boy's dream and killed the little rat, though I hate rats, the way you told the story it seemed more like a hamster or something cute like that. Your title was good and appropriate for the item. I can easily see how you won a contest with this piece of writing. It was so very good.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Phantom , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful afternoon, you have been a valuable member of writing.com for eight years now. I thought that this was a very strange question for your poll.
I took it, I chose the Greek goddess and god robes. I was shocked that the most chose choice was to be nude, and then with a bathing suit.



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Hello Avid Writer ~ God is My Agent , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this beautiful October afternoon, you are celebrating your sixth anniversary today, congratulations. I enjoyed reading your little weather report nearing the spring of whenever you wrote the item. I see you were saying it was unseasonably warm for the winter. I do not know where you are from but in Kentucky of the USA, It is October 3, and is in the 90's still. I'll be glad when we get a break from the heat myself. Now that is unseasonably hot.
good writing.



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Review of Left Behind  
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Hello IMarie9008 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful October evening, this is your first anniversary so congratulations for being a valuable member of writing.com. I thought this was a very uniquely written poem. I liked the way you faded the font into a smaller and smaller size. you did a good job and I thought that the title was appropriate for the item.



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Review of Strings  
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Hello Elliot , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful October Morning, Today is your three years anniversary. I read this item and I think you are probably having trouble dealing with an ex partner. That must be terrible, I can't imagine how horrible it must feel. Your poem was very explicit, I do think you went a bit far by taking the Lord's name in vein, we could have understood how upset you were by you just saying damn.



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Review of Assumptions  
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Hello bertadez7138 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October evening, You have now been a member of writing.com since October 3, 2018, a full year, congratulations a milestone, your first.]
Your poem is about how a relationship can end over a partner assuming facts which you both have not discussed. Or that was my take on it anyway. The title is appropriate for the item and I get the item description as well. good writing.



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Review of AUTOPSIED  
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Hello Duke. Raoul , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October Evening,
You have now been a valuable member of writing.com since October 2, 2017, for two sweet years. glad to have you. I found this little acrostic poem in your portfolio this evening and thought I would give it a read. I thought it was descriptive of what it was I guess, it was hard for me to follow or read. But I chose the subject so it is my fault I should have known by the title what it would be like. The title was appropriate for the writing. If I were you though, I would change what you wrote in the Item description and describe the poem. we all ready know that it is a poem so just say an acrostic about .....
and then follow by telling in your own words what your poem is about. I think you did a fine job creating this piece just go back and create a new item description.


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Review of Rule the world  
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Hello Amar ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary on this wonderful October evening, I see that you have now been a valuable member of writing.com for three short years, since October 2, 2016. Glad your with us.
The title is strong and very good and appropriate for the writing of this poetry.
Also, The item description is very helpful to the reader of your writing, which is very good because this is what makes a person decide whether they will continue on reading or not. I thought the poem spoke of great achievements and pride which is just wonderful, I don't like it when we feel underachieved. It is a sad feeling, don't you think? The thing that stood out to me the most is that you used the lower case of the pronoun I, you should always use the upper case when referring to yourself as I.



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Review of Growth or Shrink  
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Hello mike , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October evening,
You have now been a valuable member of writing.com for three short years since October 2, 2016.
I came across this little poll in your portfolio, so I thought I would take it and see what it was all about. I am afraid to say I really did not get it--- It was confusing to me and I am sure to many others as well. I voted for magic, but to tell you the truth I don't know why? I don't know if I wanted it to be as large as a planet or as small as whatever--

Growing size

Greater than one city

More than one earth

Greater than a universe

Or greater

Shrink the size

How small you want

you got five votes for magic, which is 50%; three votes for pill, 30%; two votes for Laser remote control, 20%; Zero votes for laser Laser, zero votes for potion; with a total of ten votes, 100%
I really did not understand the poll even though I voted.




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Hello Muppetz ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this fine October evening,
I see that you have been a valuable member of writing.com since October 2, 2015 or for four years.
I enjoyed reading your writing, I love reading poetry, especially poetry that is about good vs. evil, and spiritual or religious type writings. I do have a question for you however in the following excerpt:


Aristrotel called it fate
Heaven and hell contend
Visceral and obstreperous
Yet grandiose
A celestial triumph I commend.

should the name you are speaking of be Aristotle instead of Aristrotel?
I'm really not too sure who you are speaking of, but if it is who I think it is you misspelled his name.
I think you should speak in more simple terms so that the general public can understand what you are talking about, the words you use are fine but most people would have to look up a few of these words.



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Review of Echo  
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Hello sean_hayes,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this wonderfully beautiful October evening, I hope you are blessed today, You have been a valuable member of writing.com since October 2,2010, for nine short years. I read your stuff before and I have to say you are quite talented at writing beautiful and meaningful poetry. I really enjoyed reading this item although it was a very sad ending to the poem. Did I understand it correctly, did the man hear his own voice echo back at him and then get mad and jump from a high cliff into the deep ocean below? That is what I think you mean anyway. You should by all means feel proud enough to sign this piece it has a story and is very ingenious. I think that the title is very appropriate for the poetry and I liked it. I also think that the item description should contain a bit of information about the poem to entice your readers to keep reading.

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Review of And Shadows Dance  
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Hello Brittany L. Engels , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful October afternoon, I see that you have been a member of writing.com for ten short years, you are a valuable member of the site. I thought that this was a wonderfully delightful piece of writing, I really enjoyed it and loved it very much. I know these are strong words, what makes me like it is your inclusion of God in the creation of the poem. You give Him credit for being near always and the wind is His breath and the thunder His voice. I thought you showed much talent when you wrote this piece of work. I the title was excellent and very creative, it is appropriate for the item I also thought that the item description was also very creatively written. You really show so much promise, please keep writing as you do show such talent.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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