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Item Title: Forever in Time

Author: Tim Chiu

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Tim Chiu , I came across your piece of writing while I was reviewing things on writing.com's read and review item list. I thought that you wrote a very beautiful piece of writing. You seem to have been extremely emotionally charged while you were writing this piece.
I thought that the title was very creative and lovely, It was also very appropriate. You wrote a very romantic piece for someone you truly love and I think it is wonderful, I do hope that you shared this writing with her.
My favorite stanza is the following:

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A love that prospers for all time,
Our life of faith supremely prime
Is innocence serenely cued
By Godly passions now imbued.


Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you and there are no corrections to be made that I saw.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Teddy Bear Tea Time

Author: Princess Megan Rose 22 Years

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Princess Megan Rose 22 Years , I came across this wonderful piece of literature while I was searching your portfolio for something of interest to read. I am giving this review as a part of your party bag for the writing.com's birthday celebration. I thought that you did a fantastic job creating this endearing little teddy bear yarn. I just loved it, I recall all of the little tea parties I had as a child. It was a wonderful time indeed.
My favorite part or stanza of your poem was the following:

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Stephanie put her bears away and when she left, she
heard them whispering. She wasn't scared. She knew
that they talked. Tomorrow, she would plan another tea party
Her parents would be home from Europe tonight with more bears


Suggestions: I thought this was so sweet and cute. I just love bears they are adorable. I have no suggestion s for your improvements, as it is so well done.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Writers Block

Author: Tmtsaturn

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Tmtsaturn , I came across this item while I was reviewing on writing.com's read and review items list.
It was a nice read I thought, surely something which I could identify with, as I am sure most of us writers could. Writer's Block is a dreadful thing for a writer to endure. to stare at a blank paper or screen and be unable to form a thought is just miserable. The following were my favorite lines from your poem.

EXCERPT:
A black hole forms
Which sucks up
All the poetic melody in me
And leaves me behind with
A jumble of emotion and words
That do not harmonize.


Suggestions: The only real mistake I saw was that you left of the apostrophe before the s in the title it should be Writer's Block, as it shows possession of the writer so to speak.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: IMPORTANCE OF PRECIOUS PEOPLE

Author: kalsoom naz

type: Article

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello kalsoom naz , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it was really well written and you wrote it from your heart, which I just adored. My mother is the most precious person in my life as well as my husband,... I also have a sister who is so very special, and of course her family ...she has two kids and a husband which I love.

Suggestions: The only suggestion I would have for you is the spacing of the lines in your article, I feel that it would be easier for people to read it if it were double spaced instead of single spaced. but still it was really good and well written. I liked it.


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: The Tiger's Aim

Author: Tim Chiu

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~



First Impression: Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this little piece of poetry on writing.com's read an d review items list. The title is so appropriate for this item, it is taken right from the poem. I think that the item description is very helpful to the reader of the poem. You did a great job creating this poem and putting it together. My favorite part is the following:

EXCERPT:
But the stripes and the colors
Of this animal attacking,
Bear a resemblance to tigers
Whose aim has no backing…


Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes and there are no suggestions to be made for this piece.



Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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Item Title: Listening in Vain

Author: nordicnoir

type: Poetry

Reviewed by Lisa Noe~Kittylove~


First Impression: Hello {suser

EXCERPT:



Suggestions:


Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.

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