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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Storm Machine,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, The Amazing 55 Word Story.

The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
It states whether or not if an entry fee of gift points is required.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi StephB,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, The Best of the Rest.

The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
It states whether or not if there’s an entry fee of gift points.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Earl - April Blogging,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, 30-Day Blogging Challenge.

The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Pennywise,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page. Nice creepy picture at the top of the page.

The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Pennywise,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page. Nice creepy picture at the top of the page.

The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Quihadi,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page. I love the lighthouse at the top of the page. The hands with the dancing flame is quite eye catching.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SHERRI,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page. Great pictures on this page.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Mara,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page. WOW! What a hot and sexy picture at the top of the page.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Countrymom,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page. What a great set of pictures scattered throughout the page.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Leila,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Lone  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Lonewolf,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures. What a beautiful wolf with fiery blue eyes.

1. The image matches the title quite well.
2. The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
3. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. Lonewolf really pops. Some of the words are a bit fuzzy and a wee bit hard to read.
4. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is. {size}

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Fire and Ice  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Itchy Water,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Fire and Ice.

APPEAL: This shall appeal to those who love to read unusual poetry.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from line to line.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of A Mermaid's Tears  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bertiebrite Grindstone Nose,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, A Mermaid's Tears.

APPEAL: This poem shall appeal to anyone who loves to read/ It made me sad and made me cry. What a beautiful poem.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. I have a passion for the sea and read about it whenever I can. And mermaids are part of the sea.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem has a nice rhythm and moves smoothly from line to line.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi the last cicada,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, A Warning About Vampires.

APPEAL: This wee poem shall appeal to vampire lovers and those who read poetry.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The size of the print makes it easy on the eyes. The color is eye catching.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi WriteStuffMom ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Untitled (suggestions welcome). Might I suggest Love You, G-Pa as a title.

APPEAL: This poem shall appeal to anyone who loves to read.

NAMES: Your lack of title caught my attention and made me take a peek to see if I could suggest a title.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Changing Moon  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Alexia,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your lyrics, Changing Moon.

APPEAL: This shall appeal to all those who love supernatural things to read.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in.


FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Joto-Kai,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Prayer to the Night.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Stranger  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Xombigurl,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Stranger.

APPEAL: This poem made a wee shiver slide down my spine. This should appeal to those who like the dark side.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and made me curious as to what Stranger would be.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ryanne,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Dancer in the Dark.

APPEAL: This poem shall appeal to anyone who loves the night, the stars and a hint of magic in the air. I loved reading this.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and made curious so I just had to read this.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

FLOW: This poem has a nice rhythm and moves smoothly from line to line.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Why?  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Ninja Squirrel!,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Why?.

APPEAL: This shall appeal to those who have lost a parent for any reason. This made me sad as I read it.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and made me wonder what this poem is about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi WinterMistress,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures.

1. The image matches the title quite well.
2. The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
3. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
4. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
5. You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Without love  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Elizabeth,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Without love.

APPEAL: This wee poem shall appeal to any who have suffered a broken heart and seems to want to get even. It shall also appeal to those who like reading sad things.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Where my hears used to be -- I don’t understand this line.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi StormyRaven,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, THE MONSTER INSIDE.

APPEAL: Those who love scary and things that go bump in the night shall enjoy this poem.

NAMES: The title caught my attention and drew me in.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: CANT GIVE CHASE -- you left the apostrophe out.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of The Change  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi ZombieNeko,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee piece, The Change.

APPEAL: What a creepy wee tale you have started here. It sent a few shivers down my spine. For those who love zombie tales or tales about things that go bump in the night, they shall find this quite appealing.

NAMES: Your title caught my eye and made curious as to what kind of change you’re writing about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. I love the indigo color, yet I wish the print size was a tad bigger to make it easier on the eyes. You might want to make the sentences a wee bit shorter, too.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: It made no sense to him whatsoever, he's seen things like this in movies and in video games...but to happen in real life... preposterous!! -- It was pointed out to me in one of my tales that a space is suppose to go before and after the “. . .” and there should be a space between each dot.

POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Robert,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Serenity Through Hell.

APPEAL: What an unusual twist on love. This poem definitely made me stop and think about what some do in the name of love. This shall appeal to those who love a twist to their tales or poems. Or like somewhat dark themes.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem has a nice pace to it.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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