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Review of Meditation  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi S. R. Hawkins,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Meditation.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about what the future holds for us all.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It speaks to my heart.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A gave me a sense of wonder.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The green color was an excellent choice since the poem is set in a forest setting.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Arendelle  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bertiebrite,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Arendell.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about mythical realms and magic shall find this delightful.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It speaks to my inner child.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Pat,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Pat's Poetry Parlour Image.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It has an old fashion feel to it. It reminds me of my childhood. Some good things along with some bad things.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jace,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

WOW! You have some really great photos of Pearl Harbor in your port from World War II.

I just read your wee poem, Nature's Conspiracy.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about nature and how it makes one feel.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way it made me feel.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It gave me a sense of peace and calm.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The larger font is easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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505
Review of Dragon's Wish  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fyndorian,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Dragon's Wish.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the magic of love shall adore this poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: that it spoke to my heart.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It brought tears of joy to my eyes.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Jace,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, Paradise Cove Writing Challenge.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The romantic picture at the top of the page. The dividers are nice, too. The larger font draws the reader‘s eye.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*Contest states whether you can write a new story or use an old tale.
*UmbrellaP*I wish the contest stated whether or not an entry can or can not be edited once posted.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Princesses Desire  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi S. R. Hawkins,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Princesses Desire.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about love shall enjoy this very much.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That you centered this poem. To me it gives it a bit of flare.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A sense of peace and calm.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of blog banner  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Dawn,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your blog banner.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The Gothic look to it. Plus the two shades of purple stand out great against the black.

*UmbrellaP*This is a cool image and the title matching it.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Thundersbeard,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, The Detailed Writing Prompt Comp.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The cool picture at the top of the page. It looks like a steam punk keyboard. I also like the fact that you gave a definition of what steam punk is.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count: It only says it has to be at least 500 words. IS there a length requirement.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is inspiring and makes me see a unique world running on steam and clockworks.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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510
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi moon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Nursery Rhyme:Ding Dong Bell.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry shall enjoy this.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: If reminded me of my childhood.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It brought a smile.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Secret of the Sea  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi spidey,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Secret of the Sea.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the sea or who like to read poetry shall find this a delightful read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way the words make me think of the sea and all her mysteries. I‘ve always been fascinated by the sea.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: it lifted my sinking spirits and made me smile. Thanks.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what the secret was.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Clowning Around  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi lightbringer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, Clowning Around.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about clowns.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That it holds my attention from beginning to end.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad that no one wants to take him serious.

*UmbrellaP*This wee tale has the potential to become a great short story. You already have the plot: a guy who wants to be taken serious, yet everyone including himself only see a clown.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ledan,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your page, Reviews by Ledan Dark.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s simple and straight to the point. I also like your rating system.

*UmbrellaP*This is easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*I wish the font was a wee bit larger to make it easier on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug


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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi edgework,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your page, Writing Hurts: Review Forum.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It tell me in no uncertain terms that you won’t write a feel good review. That I’ll get any honest opinion on my tale.

*UmbrellaP*This is easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*The picture of The Scream at the top of the page grabs the reader’s attention.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi J.R. Hodgson,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, Psychological Story Contest.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Dark lover  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Dameon Alexander Walrath,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee chapter synopsis, The Dark lover.

Let‘s see that dark and stormy night. For example: The wind howled through the trees making them dance like demons in an uproar. Lightning races across the dark skies sending chills down my spine. You get the idea.

I found quite a few mishaps and it was easier for me to just show you the difference that a wee bit of editing can do.

Your version:
Chapter 1 falling for you

It was a dark night and I was walking dawn the street waring all black my hair was as white as snow and my eyes as red as blood.As I was walking I saw a book store it was over 300 years old it started when I was 5 but I could tell it change over the years I walk in and sat at the coffee shop when all of a suden I saw one of the girls working there almost fell. I use my super human speed to go to her and grabbed her.Her eyes were as blue as the Sarkashen sea her hair as black as the night its self she was waring black lip stick and eye liner. "um mam are you all right." I said in my british acsent which some times got on my nearves."ya I am now that you saved me." I smiled at her. "My name is Gabryel what is yours?" "Dorathy but call me D every one dues." I smiled putting her dawn gently. "Well D be more carfule." One of her friends walk up and asked d." Are you allright?" she asked. "ya I am fine thank you." she look at my with those blue eyes I could help but smile. "So Gabryel why are you here to day?" "I lived here a long time agoe and I use to come here all the time but so much has chang." "Ya but it was a good idea to put a coffe shop in the book store dont you think?"She asked me. "I guess but it is different much different." Her friend gave a strang look like she wanted us to be closer that is when her friend asked me. "Hay me and D were going out to a night club with my boy friend do you want to be D date." D blush bright red she had pale skin so it was oveyus. "yes I would be honored to." I said with a baw.



Chapter 2 Dedly dance

I sat alone geting ready for my date with D. I was waring a black dress pants and a white shirt with one butten undon showing my chest and I was waring a black leather trench coat. I sat dawn looking up at my portret and I smiled. "I am ready." As I walk to my car it eas a white catalack that I called daregist. I got in and went to the adress of D that her friend gave me. as I pulled up in the drive way I saw D looking at my car she was sitting in the drive way. "ha." "hello D I hop you dint wait to long." "No I gust got out

Edited version:
Chapter 1 Falling For You

It was a dark night and I was walking down the street wearing all black, my hair was as white as snow, and my eyes as red as blood. As I was walking I saw a book store it was over 300 years old it started when I was 5, but I could tell it change over the years. I walk in and sat in the coffee shop when all of a sudden I saw one of the girls working there almost fell. I use my super human speed to go to her and grabbed her. Her eyes were as blue as the Sarkashen sea, her hair as black as the night its self, and she was wearing black lip stick and eye liner. "Um mam, are you all right." I said in my British accent which sometimes got on my nearves.

"Ya I am now that you saved me."

I smiled at her. "My name is Gabryel what is yours?"

"Dorothy, but call me D. Every one does."

I smiled putting her down gently. "Well D be more careful."

One of her friends walked up and asked." Are you alright?" she asked.

"Ya, I am fine. Thank you."

She look at me with those blue eyes. I couldn’t help but smile. "So Gabryel why are you here to day?"

"I lived here a long time ago and I use to come here all the time, but so much has changed."

"Ya but it was a good idea to put a coffee shop in the book store don’t you think?" She asked me.

"I guess but it is different, much different." Her friend gave a strange look like she wanted us to be closer, that is when her friend asked me. "Hey me and D were going out to a night club with my boyfriend, do you want to be D’s date." D blush bright red. She had pale skin so it was obvious.

"Yes, I would be honored to." I said with a baw. (I don‘t sure what you mean with baw).



Chapter 2 Deadly dance

I sat alone getting ready for my date with D. I was wearing black dress pants and a white shirt with one button undone, showing my chest and I was wearing a black leather trench coat. I sat dawn looking up at my portrait and I smiled. "I am ready." As I walk to my car it’s a white Cadillac that I called daregist. (not sure with daregist is suppose to be) I got in and went to Ds address, that her friend gave me. As I pulled up in the drive way I saw D looking at my car she was sitting in the drive way. (this sentence doesn‘t make sense to me and I‘m not sure what it‘s suppose to say.) "Ha."

"Hello D, I hope you didn’t wait to long."

"No, I just came out.”

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Cloak and Dagger  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi BeHereBook,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Cloak and Dagger.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry and friendship will enjoy this very much.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The use of unusual characters as best friends.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It lifted my spirit and made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Hide and Seek  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Melissa,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Hide and Seek.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It moves at a nice pace.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad and lonely.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about. A game perhaps, something else?

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Long, Long, Long  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Elisa,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, Long, Long, Long.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s short and straight to the point.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi StormyRaven,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Take Me To Darkness.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry will find this interesting.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The use of the two colors add a bit of flare to the poems.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: I notice that you missed capitalizing many of the “I”s.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi GregRyan,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Devil's Masquerade.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who love to read poetry shall find this one quite charming.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s a different twist on love and vanity.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: This poem made me smile and brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The little mouse didn't say a word. It’s a unique form I’ve never come across before.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The repetition of the lines repeating created a nice rhythm.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile and brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to want to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: I didn’t spot any mishaps with grammar, spelling, or punctuation.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Lost in Time  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi clmccready,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Lost in Time.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s short and sweet.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Warm and fuzzy inside.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lonewolf,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love the wolf. I‘ve always been fascinated by this powerful animals.
*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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Review of Hourglass  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with TGDI Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Hourglass.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry shall find this one quite charming.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The shape of the poem like a hourglass. It‘s quite eye catching.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS POEM MADE ME FEEL: It lifted my spirit on this grey morning here in Kansas City.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made curious to discover what this was about. I have a fascination with hourglasses.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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