This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Lornda, My Friend.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about friendship will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:It‘s written from the heart with lots of love.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:thrilled to know you appreciate your friend, Lornda.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. I love the use of color and that you centered this poem. To me centering and adding color give the poem some character.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Unicorn Calling Card.
WHAT I LIKED:The mysterious hint of magic, plus the colors. Purple is my favorite color.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Remember me.
APPEAL:Those who like to read dying shall find this an interesting poem to read.
WHAT I LIKED:That dying isn’t a bad thing.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:OOPS!
Remember me -- Me should be capitalized since it’s part of the title.
You missed capitalizing “I” several times throughout the poem.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, the gleaming lights.
APPEAL:Those who like to read poem will find this an enjoyable poem to read.
WHAT I LIKED:That the reader loses take of time watching the gleaming lights and perhaps forgets all her troubles for a few moments.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It gave me something to thing about. That life‘s too short for just thinking about our problems. That once in a while we need to think of something else.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:
OOPS!
the gleaming lights -- In English class I was taught the title of a poem, story, etc. should be capitalized. The Gleaming Lights
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at
WHAT I LIKED:It has a hypnotic pull to the image. The fairy dancing in the moonlight.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is. You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I was poking through your port and found many, many wonderful things to read. It made it hard to decide what to check out first. I’m definitely coming back to poke around. I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at full moon in libra.
WHAT I LIKED:The magical aura surrounding the lady in white.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
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