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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Beaureguard Schmeltzer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, A response to Charley.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read reaching out from the grave will find this an interesting tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That Terra isn‘t going to take her death lying down. That she‘s going to make Charley‘s life misable.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Glad. Terra is going to get even.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!

1. Dear Charley, As you know I am writing you from the grave situation you have placed me in. -- You need to move As you know onto a separate line.
Dear Charley,
As you know…

2. After all the deep emotional turmoil that ensued when I left you. I knew I would never feel the same about any thing. --Anything is usually one word.

3. I will never feel the same about you about myself about relationships or even about life itself. -- I think you need to add some commas to this. I will never feel the same about you, about myself, about relationships, or even about life itself.

4. Forever and ever amen,
It will never end!
Terra
PS Have you seen my sandals. -- You need space between these sentences.
Forever and ever amen,

It will never end!

Terra

PS Have you seen my sandals.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Dear Angela  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi tYpO 5 Years WdC!,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

What an interesting picture prompt at the top of the page.

I just read your wee tale, Dear Angela.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read serial killers will find this an interesting wee tale.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: You let the reader know that Charley is a serial killer without coming right out and saying it.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit afraid for the new girlfriend.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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The Darkblade Chronicles Sam Shepard

Hi Sam Shepard,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read the beginning of your novel, The Darkblade Chronicles.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read stories about vampires.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s a vampire tale with a different take on the world of vampires.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES/TITLE: Your used a variety of names for your characters making it easier to keep track of who’s who.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is a bit hard to read. You might want to put a space between each paragraph.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*DESCRIPTIONS/DETAILS:

*UmbrellaP*LENGTH: If the piece is overly long, then I am more reluctant to read it, but if it's intriguing, I still might.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
1. On that one terrifying, fateful night, I came face to face with these one of these wives’ tales. -- take the first these out.

2. Food was very scarce most were starving. -- I think you need a comma after scarce.

3. I turned rushed towards my door, snatching my sword from my table, gripping it tightly in my hand and raced out side after him. -- Outside is usually one word.

4. As I raced from my house, I saw torchlights assembling in the village square I rushed towards them. -- separate torch lights and either put a comma or period after square.

5. As I entered the square, I pushed my way towards the middle of the crowd suddenly I felt a strong grip on my shoulder; I turned anxiously to see it was my father a muscular man deep dark tan skinned and a square-jawed face. -- Place a comma or period after crowd.

6. I turned anxiously to see it was my father a muscular man deep dark tan skinned and a square-jawed face. -- place a comma after father.

7. “Father, I am a man, when are you going to stop treating me like a child” I said looking straight into his face. -- You need a comma after child.

If you’re like me, rereading may or may not catch all the wee mishaps. I suggest having someone you trust read your stories to help catch the mishaps. I had my brother do this during high school for anything I wrote for English class. I’m a rotten speller and have a bad habit of mixing tenses.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Winter Solstice  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Winter Solstice.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about winter and snow shall find this wee poem a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s about the magic of winter.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Joker spidey sig  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi spidey,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your Joker spidey sig.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The mirror image of the lady joker, and she‘s wearing my favorite color of purple.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi turtlemoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, When White Wind Sang.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read wind and snow shall find this a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s about snow and I love snow.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Pat,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Shadows of Darkness. WOW! What powerful words.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry about feeling lost or not sure of one’s self shall find this an interesting poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It describes the way I feel many times about myself.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of PURE WATER  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Itchy Water,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Pure Water.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry about faith shall find this a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It speaks to the heart.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: a bit sad.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Red Teacup  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi Vicky,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Red Teacup.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read murder mysteries shall find this intriguing.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: You told a murder mystery in so few words. I’m jealous.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Curious.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Paragraph 3: She looked around again hoping that it has magically reappeared. No the table and kitchen counter were as empty as always. -- has should be had. Place a comma after No,.

Paragraph 4: She tries to remember when last she used it. She didn’t drink her coffee out of it. The red cup is her husband’s favourite. The red reminds her of blood. She prefers the pretty blue one that looks like the ocean on a summer day.
Tries should be tried. Prefers should be preferred.
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Review of Storm  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Storm.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s a picture of the sea breaking over the rocky shore. The sea has always fascinated me. I‘m drawn to it like a moth to a flame. Excuse the old phrase.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, My Silly Cow Haiku.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read Haiku poetry will find this a charming and delightful wee read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s short and sweet.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile and brightened my rainy day.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


What a beautiful image at the end. A pretty blue butterfly nestled among the flowers. How charming.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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for entry "J'nak'" 
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Prosperous Snow,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Week 9: Easy - Jánakú

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry will find this a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: You explained what a Jánakú poem was.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug
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Review of Kilauea Lava Flow  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi BeHereBook,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Kilauea Lava Flow. WOW. What a neat picture.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s makes one stop and realize just how powerful our planet truly is.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*This image conjures up all sort of writing ideas.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*Mother Nature shows one of her many sides. It’s beautiful and deadly at the same time.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug
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Review of Dragony Sig  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Beck the Boilerlady,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

Your port was full of so many different things to read and look at, I had a hard time deciding what to review first. I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your Dragony Sig. I love everything about dragons.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Pat returns to porch,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

Your port if full of so many things to read and look at. It made it difficult to choose just one item to review. So I followed my gut.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at She's a Rock Image.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The hint of mystery that the river suggests. Where does it go? What will the explorer find along the way? It‘s quite inspiring.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Review Image  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
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Hi Dawn☆Embers,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your Review Image.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The lady is sitting under a star filled sky and enjoying the beauty of the night. The image is quite inspiring. It‘s filled with mystery and wonder.

*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jack P Tollers,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Forest of Fading Secrets.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about mystery and the unknown shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way it make me feel.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of mystry and wonder.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Soldier  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Soldier. WOW! What a powerful picture that stirs the emotions.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The image of the angel behind the soldier as he prays.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Simply Rain  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I love your name in flowers at the end.

I just read your wee poem, Simply Rain.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about rainy days will find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: You center the poem which gives it some flare. The blue catching the eye and draws the reader in.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It brought a smile.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SoCalScribe,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Castles in the Sand.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read the beach and sand castles will find this a charming read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love the picture of the sand castle. It looks like a real castle.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Carefree and full of energy.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Goddess  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi HuntersMoon - Gone4Awhile,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Goddess.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The hypnotic lure of the eye.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The blue gives off a hint of magic.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Island  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi mela,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Island.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about secret love with a stranger shall find this a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It gave me a sense of mystery and adventure. Searching ancient ruins, then meeting a mysterious stranger.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: As if anything can happen.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about. I like the names Maria and Nicola.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
The divorce and the ugly events that led to it were the reasons that I decided that the island was the perfect place to spend my summer vacations and leak my wounds. -- I believe you wanted the word lick not leak.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*UmbrellaP*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of A Song Of Time  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi bumblegrum,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, A Song of Time.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry shall find this a delightful one to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The extra space between each line. It makes this easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: As if I was lost then found myself.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Geisha  
Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at The Geisha.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The fan held in front of her face gives her a hint of mystery and makes one wonder what she might be up to.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi BScholl,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, Magical Mayhem .

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about leprechauns, magic, elves or Santa shall find this tale delightful.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That you put a twist on the typical leprechaun tale.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It brightened my day and made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this tale was about. I love the way your character, the leprechaun talked. His speech pattern made him stand out from the others.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug
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