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#3699010

Review of Take Me To Darkness

Review by Ladybug

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi StormyRaven,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Take Me To Darkness.

APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry will find this interesting.

WHAT I LIKED: The use of the two colors add a bit of flare to the poems.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: I notice that you missed capitalizing many of the “I”s.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3699003

Review of The Devil's Masquerade

Review by Ladybug

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi GregRyan,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Devil's Masquerade.

APPEAL: Those who love to read poetry shall find this one quite charming.

WHAT I LIKED: It‘s a different twist on love and vanity.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: This poem made me smile and brightened my day.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3698997

Review of The little mouse didn't say a word

Review by Ladybug

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The little mouse didn't say a word. It’s a unique form I’ve never come across before.

APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry.

WHAT I LIKED: The repetition of the lines repeating created a nice rhythm.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile and brightened my day.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to want to discover what this was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: I didn’t spot any mishaps with grammar, spelling, or punctuation.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3698493

Review of Lost in Time

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with TGDI Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi clmccready,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Lost in Time.

APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry.

WHAT I LIKED: It‘s short and sweet.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Warm and fuzzy inside.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3698489

Review of SP Group Leader Sig

Review by Ladybug

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Lonewolf,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures.

WHAT I LIKED: I love the wolf. I‘ve always been fascinated by this powerful animals.

The image matches the title quite well.

The colors used are eye catching and appealing.

The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.

The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3696794

Review of Hourglass

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with TGDI Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Sum1,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Hourglass.

APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry shall find this one quite charming.

WHAT I LIKED: The shape of the poem like a hourglass. It‘s quite eye catching.

HOW THIS POEM MADE ME FEEL: It lifted my spirit on this grey morning here in Kansas City.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made curious to discover what this was about. I have a fascination with hourglasses.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3696322

Review of Scars

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi Ninja Squirrel!,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

Interesting handled.

I just read your wee poem, Scars.

APPEAL: Those who like to read self lost and secrets.

WHAT I LIKED: It‘s simply written and straight to the point.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad to think this lost soul believes cutting themselves shall solves their problems.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3696316

Review of Our Generation needs to change.

Review by Ladybug

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Jessica,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, Our Generation needs to change..

APPEAL: Those who like to read standing up for one’s rights.

WHAT I LIKED: You tells how it is without being insulting or rude.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: That‘s there‘s still hope for this crazy world we live in.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. it made me curious to discover what this was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3696314

Review of Immortal Fairytale

Review by Ladybug

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Ryanne Raven Starr,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Immortal Fairytale.

APPEAL: Those who like to read about love and death.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: I didn‘t spot any mishaps in grammar or spelling. Yet it‘s a bit hard to read without hardly any punctuation. It leaves the reader out of breathe by the end.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3695905

Review of Yummy Funny Girl

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Pamela-Scott,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Yummy Funny Girl.

APPEAL: Those who like to read about love will find this charming.

WHAT I LIKED: Your unusual take on love.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit old and how reminded me of how wonderful love can be.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious about what this was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3695898

Review of Does Life Matter?

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Lady Foxx,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee .

APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry shall find this one a bit different yet it’s a pleasant read.

WHAT I LIKED: Your take on living one‘s life and not worrying about what might be or not be.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me stopped and reexamine my life and it made me a wee bit sad to realize I spend more time worrying than living.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3694939

Review of Curiosity Killed the Cat

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi TheDreamer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale,Curiosity Killed the Cat .

APPEAL: Those who are cat lovers or love to read tales a bit on the scary side will enjoy this tale.

WHAT I LIKED:This wee tale has a mysterious tone to it. A pyramid shape tomb in a small town instead of Egypt. This definitely caught my attention and set my mind creating another different tale. Perhaps the pyramid could be a doorway to another place or time. I love the twist at the end. Aaron pretending to be scare when all along he was bringing dinner for his master.

HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL:This wee tale made my skin crawl.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this tale was about. Aaron and Amanda are great names, yet it might be a good idea to change Aaron or Amanda to something else. Too many names starting with “A”.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

DESCRIPTIONS/DETAILS:I can see the monster and hear him as he chases Amanda to her death.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3694925

Review of Forever and More

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi Kaelhyn,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Forever and More.

APPEAL: Those who like poems are about love shall find this delightful.

WHAT I LIKED: This poem speaks straight to the heart.

HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Your poem made me a bit sad. Love is such a wonderful thing, yet it can hurt as well as bring joy.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

DESCRIPTIONS/DETAILS:This line: Armor already in place conjures up a picture of a knight in shining armor ready to come to the rescue.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW:This poem moves along at a nice pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3694237

Review of Penelope, My Beloved Cat

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Penelope, My Beloved Cat.

APPEAL: Being a cat lover, this wee poem brought tears of pain and made me sad. Now my mood matches the stormy weather outside my dining room window, All cloudy and gloomy. This made me think of all the precious cats I have loved and lost over the years.

NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me it. It made me curious as to what this poem was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves with a nice pace.

The flower signature at the end adds a bit of flare to the page.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3694230

Review of Lore of the Leprechaun

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Renée,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Lore of the Leprechaun.

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about. I love this explanation of how a leprechaun came into being.{c}

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The larger print makes it easy on the eyes. The few words that are in italic give the poem a bit of flare.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves along at a nice pace.

Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3693567

Review of Through My Pillow...

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Andy,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Through My Pillow... .

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves at a nice pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3693562

Review of Phantom Lovers

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Paperandpen,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Phantom Lovers.

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves at a nice pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3693561

Review of Shadow People

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi arakun,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Shadow People.

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem has a nice rhythm and moves along at a nice pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3693549

Review of On the Edge of a New Dawn

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, On the Edge of a New Dawn. The picture at the end goes perfectly with the poem. Bravo..

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about. It even brought a few tears to my eyes.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The size made it easy on the eyes. The use of color adds a touch of flare to the page.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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#3692573

Review of Dreams

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Dark Rose,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

This is a Supernatural Group member to member review raid.

I just read your wee tale, Dreams. Bravo.

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about. It gave a lift to my rainy day here in Kansas City.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.I‘m glad you placed spaces between each paragraph. This makes it easy on the eyes to read.

SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: I didn‘t spot anything major in your tale. You missed capitalizing I a few times. A quick reread shall catch these.

FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. {c}

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3692569

Review of Witches Wrath

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi the last cicada,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

This is a Supernatural Group member to member review raid.

I just read your wee poem, Witches Wrath.

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about. It gave a lift to my rainy day here in Kansas City.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The large print makes it easy on the eyes. The color adds a bit of flare to the page.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves along at a good pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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#3692566

Review of Not Quite Seaworthy

Review by Ladybug

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Joto-Kai,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

This is a Supernatural Group member to member review raid.

I just read your wee poem, Not Quite Seaworthy.

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

SETTING: In a few short lines you created a vivid poem. I can see a hopeful lover walking along the beach staring dreamily into the sea.{c}

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves at a great pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3692564

Review of UNTOLD

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi StormyRaven,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, UNTOLD.

APPEAL: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: I didn’t spot any mishaps in spelling, yet I think it might be a good idea to added some punctuation to this wee poem. BY the time one reaches the end one is out of breath.

FLOW: Even though there‘s no punctuation until the very end, it moves at a good pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

Ladybug

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#3692562

Review of The Mother Who Never Was

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Central Bank

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi WriteStuffMom,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Mother Who Never Was. WOW! What an emotional piece.

APPEAL: The title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was all about. It brought a few tears to my eyes.

FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.

FLOW: This poem moves along at a nice pace.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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#3691910

Review of The Brainstormers Group

Review by Ladybug

In affiliation with The Coffee Shop for the Fantas...

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Itchy Water,

I just took a peek at your activity page for The Brainstormers Group. That's a great eye catching pciture at the top of the page.

The use of color gives the page a bit of flare and draws the attention of the reviewer.

The information is easy to read and understand.

I spotted only one minor mishap: We are here to shed light into some ones day, --

I believe it should read someone's day.

Great job.

The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak

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