This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Immortal Fairytale.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about love and death.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad.
NAMES:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:I didn‘t spot any mishaps in grammar or spelling. Yet it‘s a bit hard to read without hardly any punctuation. It leaves the reader out of breathe by the end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee .
APPEAL:Those who like to read poetry shall find this one a bit different yet it’s a pleasant read.
WHAT I LIKED:Your take on living one‘s life and not worrying about what might be or not be.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me stopped and reexamine my life and it made me a wee bit sad to realize I spend more time worrying than living.
NAMES:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what it was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale,Curiosity Killed the Cat .
APPEAL:Those who are cat lovers or love to read tales a bit on the scary side will enjoy this tale.
WHAT I LIKED:This wee tale has a mysterious tone to it. A pyramid shape tomb in a small town instead of Egypt. This definitely caught my attention and set my mind creating another different tale. Perhaps the pyramid could be a doorway to another place or time. I love the twist at the end. Aaron pretending to be scare when all along he was bringing dinner for his master.
HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL:This wee tale made my skin crawl.
NAMES:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this tale was about. Aaron and Amanda are great names, yet it might be a good idea to change Aaron or Amanda to something else. Too many names starting with “A”.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
DESCRIPTIONS/DETAILS:I can see the monster and hear him as he chases Amanda to her death.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Penelope, My Beloved Cat.
APPEAL:Being a cat lover, this wee poem brought tears of pain and made me sad. Now my mood matches the stormy weather outside my dining room window, All cloudy and gloomy. This made me think of all the precious cats I have loved and lost over the years.
NAMES:Your title caught my attention and drew me it. It made me curious as to what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.
FLOW:This poem moves with a nice pace.
The flower signature at the end adds a bit of flare to the page.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Lore of the Leprechaun.
APPEAL:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about. I love this explanation of how a leprechaun came into being.{c}
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The larger print makes it easy on the eyes. The few words that are in italic give the poem a bit of flare.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.
FLOW:This poem moves along at a nice pace.
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This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
This is a Supernatural Group member to member review raid.
I just read your wee tale, Dreams. Bravo.
APPEAL:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about. It gave a lift to my rainy day here in Kansas City.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.I‘m glad you placed spaces between each paragraph. This makes it easy on the eyes to read.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:I didn‘t spot anything major in your tale. You missed capitalizing I a few times. A quick reread shall catch these.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. {c}
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
This is a Supernatural Group member to member review raid.
I just read your wee poem, Witches Wrath.
APPEAL:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about. It gave a lift to my rainy day here in Kansas City.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The large print makes it easy on the eyes. The color adds a bit of flare to the page.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:Since I’m not an expert editor and don’t know all the rules, I won’t comment on this area.
FLOW:This poem moves along at a good pace.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, UNTOLD.
APPEAL:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to see what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:I didn’t spot any mishaps in spelling, yet I think it might be a good idea to added some punctuation to this wee poem. BY the time one reaches the end one is out of breath.
FLOW:Even though there‘s no punctuation until the very end, it moves at a good pace.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your contest page, Echoes Of The Heart Poetry Contest.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your contest page, The Amazing 55 Word Story.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
It states whether or not if an entry fee of gift points is required.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your contest page, The Best of the Rest.
The rules are easy to read and understand.
Due date is clearly posted.
Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
It states whether or not if there’s an entry fee of gift points.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Since I’m not an expert editor I won’t comment on this.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
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