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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SHERRI G ♥ WDC ♥,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at I couldn't have said it better.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The winter scene with the wolf. I am fascinated by wolves and write tales about good werewolves not the monster Hollywood has created.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well. The words speak volumes.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug
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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Magnitude of Stars.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about stars, perhaps with a touch of romance shall find this a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: How the rhymes give this poem a nice pace.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of wonder and delight.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of WRetopia  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Gervic,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your group page, Writopia.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: How it grabs the reader‘s attention.

*UmbrellaP*The picture at the top of the page makes me curious as to what this group is all about. She suggests fantasy and mystery.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*I like the seven links on the page that explains more about this group.
*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
"Instant Millionaire Raffle Contest" will soon to close. Visit it now and grab the big promo! --it would read better this way: “Instant Millionaire Raffle Contest” will soon close. The to isn’t necessary.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi StephB,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

There were so many wonderful things to choose from that I had a hard time deciding what to review. I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Review image 2/2010. I will definitely be back.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The mysterious feel this signature has to it. It inspires all sorts of possibilities.

*UmbrellaP*The title doesn’t quite fit the image.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
{e:umbrellaPWho designed this signature?

{e:ThumbsUp}Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, .

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The unique active picture that are eye catching and colorful.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*The only word count is a minimum of 15 words which is great.
*UmbrellaP*What type of item to write is left up to the write which leaves plenty of room for inspiration.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
*UmbrellaP*The past image prompts doesn’t work.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.
OR
OOPS!

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi NickiD89 ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Open Line Friday Contest Banner.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words are bold and stand out nicely against the background. They do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Pat,

I just dropped in and filled out the survey for How Was Your SAJ Shower? *UmbrellaP*The page is easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*I love the garden gate with the welcome sign at the top of the top. It’s so inviting.
*UmbrellaP*The pyramid of colorful umbrellas is a nice touch at the end.
*UmbrellaP*The boxes are large enough to write one’s answers in.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Shy Turtle  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Hi Who Me???,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Shy Turtle

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way the wee turtle‘s eyes keep blinking.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug
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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Witches' Dance.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about witches, magic and Halloween shall find this a delightful read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The fast pace and beat the words create.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of energy and positive thoughts.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Imaginary Friend  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Ryanne Raven Starr,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Imaginary Friend.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry about lost and finding one’s way.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The way it made me feel.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad. It left an ache in my heart.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS! I felt like I was out of breathe by the time I reached the end. I think this needs a bit more punctuation. With only two commas this reads like two extremely long sentences.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SublimeRhyme ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Ocean's Canvas .

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poems about the sea will love this one.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: How it made me feel as I read it.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Awe inspired. I wanted to go and take a look at the sea as it rolls onto the beach then flows back out.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about. Anytime I see the word sea in a title, I‘m going to take a peek.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. I love when a poem is centered. It gives it a unique shape.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Canvas  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi optimistic writer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Canvas.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry will find this interesting.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It has a nice pace to it.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad. I felt a lost.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi keikei,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read the beginning of your novel, Sins of a Woman.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about self-discovery and over coming temptation will find this interesting to red.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That the main character recognized evil was trying to corrupt her.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit afraid that evil would go after someone so young.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to understand. Yet many of the sentences are a wee bit to long. You need to break some of them down. Rewrite them if necessary to get your point across. A few super long sentences are okay.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Sins of a woman -- Woman should be capitalized in the title.

Then shall you call upon me and you shall go and pray unto me and I will hearken unto you and you shall seek and find me, when you shall search for me with all your heart. -- Whoa! This sentence has 36 words in it. It’s a bit long and probably needs to be broken down into at least two sentences, perhaps three. Maybe something like this:

Then shall you call upon me and you shall go and pray unto me. I will hearken unto you. You shall seek and find me, when you shall search for me with all your heart.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in. You did a good job staying in the first person.

*UmbrellaP*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order.

*UmbrellaP*BACKGROUND: There‘s really no background here, hopefully that will come as the story moves forward.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Itchy Water.

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your Reviewed by Itchywater.

THe fairy with the flowers is adorable. I love it.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It made me smile and brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Princess Dreamer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, Fairy Tale Twist Contest.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of History Contest  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Princess Dreamer,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, History Contest.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: You chose a different type of contest. History is full of wonderful stories that can be awe inspiring.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated or if it’s poetry, the line count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.
*UmbrellaP*It states whether or not an entry fee of gift points is required.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Prizes
1st place-- 10000 gps or a 10,000 award -- a 10,000 what?

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi fyn,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, A Shallow Sea of Dark.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the sea and writer’s block.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That you compared writer‘s block with the vastness of the sea. Both can seem more than one can handle, yet somehow we always find a way.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: That I‘m not alone with facing writer‘s block. That it can happen to the best of ys.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The colors add a bit of flare to the page.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: This just a thought.
No more to sink below the waters -- I think wave sounds better.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi silverfeathers,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I like your user name.

I just read your wee poem, Memory of a Memory.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry shall enjoy this. It’s quite powerful.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It made me reflect on my life.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit sad. It brought a few tears.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Wolf Guide  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Wolf Guide.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love how the wolf is in the clouds and looks as if he belongs there. Wolves fascinate me.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Sweet Dream Fairy  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at your Sweet Dream Fairy.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It gave me a feeling of cam and peace, and made me a wee bit sleepy.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Little Jack's Day  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Little Jack's Day.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read Nursery Rhymes and poetry about kids.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s short and sweet. The use of color grabs the reader‘s attention and brightens up the page.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It brightened my day and made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your contest page, Daily Flash Fiction Challenge.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The cool Gothic picture at the top of the page.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated or.
*UmbrellaP*Contest states whether you can write a story or a poem.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Curves  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ander,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Curves.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about finding one’s self.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The repeating of Straight away. It give the poem a neat beat.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Inspired to rediscover myself.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Hourglass  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Hourglass.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about death and dying shall find this quite interesting.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The repeating of the two lines: The sand softly falls, sparkling in the light,
We’re swept up in the flow toward final night.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It gave me a sense of peace and calm.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to find out what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
In affiliation with The Central Bank  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi lilypad,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Marigold Among the Clovers.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about magic, gold, dragon or leprechauns shall find this delightful.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The spacing made it easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It made me smile and feel like dancing. It lifted my spirits.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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