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Review of Stained  
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
More work inspired by CSI. The concept of the poem is certainly unique. Nice write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are all well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw one error for spelling: staine=stained. The rest is fine.

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I don't have any for this poem.

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Review of Golden Ghost  
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
I can't say that this is a bad poem but it doesn't seem like somehting I would write for children. The act of seeing one's brother or sister be killed I think would be quite traumatic.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are all ok.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I did see a few spelling errors: Untill=until, carful=careful.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None other than correcting the errors.

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Review of Never Leave  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Bullet*Overall Impression
Interesting concept for coping with death. Your perspective is quite unique. This is well written and your message is very clear.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I saw no problems with these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this piece.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Bullet*Overall Impression
With this poem you have given me a look into a life that is unknown to me. The perspective in which you wrote it in is quite unique. Great write!

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
No rhyme pattern exists, but the form and meter are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I didn't see any errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none.


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Review of John  
Rated: E | (5.0)
There are no words to describe how this story made me feel. My cousins husband also dies of Leukemia, which may not have been found if he had not injured his shoulder at work. It's tragic that this has to happen to such gifted young man. My heart goes out to you. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Damiana
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Review of Escape from hell  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is really a great story. Your characterization is wonderful, the flow and meter are well done too. I enjoyed reading this and my heart was racing as Rebecca was running. I would not want to have lived this for anything. I hope things work out for her. Great write, keep up the good work.
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Review of Hope  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Remarkable... really makes you think. This line for me says it all: Cost of life is always death,
live we do till our last breath.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I found no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem


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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
A touching poem that encourages us to be greatful for the things we have no matter how big or small. Nothing is more important than family. If you have that your life is full and truly blessed.

*Bullet*Form & Meter
Both are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this piece.


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Review of Dreaming  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This is terrific. It really made me stop and think about life and the things we can do to change it. Thanks for inspiring me.

*Bullet*Form & Meter
Well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I don't have any for this piece.


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Review of Emptiness  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This is very deep and sad. It's well written and evokes a strong emotion in the reader. At least it did with me.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I saw no problems with these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No mistakes were found in this piece.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this poem.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
How true this is. I agree with you whole heartedly about loving them because before you know it they will be gone. I have 4 and it seems like just yesterday they were babies. I wish I could have those days back.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

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None for this poem.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
What a lovely poem. It made me laugh and brightened my evening. I love coffee too, although it's not an addiction. Great write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I found no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I would suggest changing the content rating. The use of the word wh**e, is definately not "E".


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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
What a beautiful poem. Looking at death the way you have in this poem, doesn't make it seem so final. Great work.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I saw no problems with these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this poem.


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Review of Old Man  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Wonderful poem that encourages us to slow down and enjoy life while we have it. What are we in a hurry for anyway? Great write poet.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I like this poem as is.



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Review of Struggle  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Great work. I think more of us have struggles to keep faith than we are willing to admit. I think my favorite line in this poem is: my willingness to sin still remains

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
Fine

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I didn't come across any errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem.


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Review of Awake  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Simply beautiful! I agree that we need to take more time to see all the beauty that surrounds us. Thanks for reminding me.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
Wonderful.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
One spelling error: yoru=your. The rest is fine.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None.


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Review of Dream's Reality  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
I really like what you have to say in this piece. It sparks one's mind into thinking. It's deep and for me; profound. Great write!

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are all well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this piece.


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Review of Essence Of You  
Rated: E | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Great start, I think you have got something good here. I like it. Good Luck.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors found

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
Finish it and let me know! Please *Bigsmile*


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Review of Out of Despair  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
A very interesting concept for this poem. I can see how the issues surrounding it had the effects it did based on the description.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
No issues with these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem.


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Review of I am yours  
Rated: E | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This is a sweet expression of love. It's simple and easy to read.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
Fine

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
harts=hearts and they needs to be capitalized. No other errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem.


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Review of Unmoving,  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Short, simple and unique. I like the way you represented this man's connection with nature. Nice write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I saw no problems with any of these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this poem.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Great concept you have used for this poem. I like the message you bring forth in this piece. Nice Work!

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
The form and meter are fine. No rhyme pattern present.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I do feel some work needs to be done here. Since you have used punctuation I think each line need to start with a capital letter. I think "darkgodly" should be seperated. This: graceful&delicate needs to be spaced.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None other than those already listed.


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Review of Midnight Walk  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
The simplistic style in which you have this written makes it a joy to read. The message of love you are sending is conveyed beautifully.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
No problems with any of these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this poem.


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Review of Moonbeams  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Nice, simple, sweet and honest expression of love.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
This is sweet and to the point, no need for change.


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Review of A Path Decided  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This is certainly an interesting story. I find the concept behind it a bit odd, but nonetheless it's unique.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
Form and meter are ok but could use a bit of polishing.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
There are one or two errors I found. I would recommend spell check or MS Word.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None other than what is listed above.


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