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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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Very nice picture. Thank you for showing us who you are.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
N/A

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found in the bit of writing with this picture.

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None.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
I have to say that I can understand how you felt. I still don't like being out in the dark. Nice write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw one spelling error: shrivles=shrivels, the rest are well done.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem.

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Review of Hurricane Katrina  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Nice write poet. Many people suffered and still are from Katrina. They say time heals all wounds, if there enough time to get through this?

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are fine, no errors found.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No mistakes in this poem.

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None for this piece.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It is nice to think that a fountain of love can give us back our youth. Nice write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw one spelling error: metaphore=metaphor. The rest is all fine.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem.

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Rated: E | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This was an interesting look at the relation between the sun and moon. Nice write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I do feel the form and meter need a bit of work. It doesn't flow as well as it could.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I did notice a few errors here. Your second stanza needs editing. There are a few spelling errors and the last line needs to be re-written and it doen't make sense.

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None other than what has already been mentioned.

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Review of It's Wierd  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
None of us want to think about how much time we have left but this poem tells us we need to start enjoying it. Nice write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All of these are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I did notice a few errors that could be correct with spell check.

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None for this piece.

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Review of Justice  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Very nice write. Your representation of justice is quite unique but easily understood.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none.

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Review of Highway to Hell  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This is really very sad. I am happy that you made it home safe and sound. Good write friend.

*Bullet*Form & Meter
These are well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I didn't see any errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I don't have any for this piece.

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Review of Stained  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
More work inspired by CSI. The concept of the poem is certainly unique. Nice write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are all well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw one error for spelling: staine=stained. The rest is fine.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I don't have any for this poem.

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Review of Golden Ghost  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
I can't say that this is a bad poem but it doesn't seem like somehting I would write for children. The act of seeing one's brother or sister be killed I think would be quite traumatic.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are all ok.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I did see a few spelling errors: Untill=until, carful=careful.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None other than correcting the errors.

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Review of Never Leave  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Bullet*Overall Impression
Interesting concept for coping with death. Your perspective is quite unique. This is well written and your message is very clear.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I saw no problems with these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw no errors.

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I have none for this piece.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Bullet*Overall Impression
With this poem you have given me a look into a life that is unknown to me. The perspective in which you wrote it in is quite unique. Great write!

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
No rhyme pattern exists, but the form and meter are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I didn't see any errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none.


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Review of John  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
There are no words to describe how this story made me feel. My cousins husband also dies of Leukemia, which may not have been found if he had not injured his shoulder at work. It's tragic that this has to happen to such gifted young man. My heart goes out to you. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Damiana
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Review of Escape from hell  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is really a great story. Your characterization is wonderful, the flow and meter are well done too. I enjoyed reading this and my heart was racing as Rebecca was running. I would not want to have lived this for anything. I hope things work out for her. Great write, keep up the good work.
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Review of Hope  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Remarkable... really makes you think. This line for me says it all: Cost of life is always death,
live we do till our last breath.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I found no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem


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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
A touching poem that encourages us to be greatful for the things we have no matter how big or small. Nothing is more important than family. If you have that your life is full and truly blessed.

*Bullet*Form & Meter
Both are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I saw no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this piece.


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Review of Dreaming  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This is terrific. It really made me stop and think about life and the things we can do to change it. Thanks for inspiring me.

*Bullet*Form & Meter
Well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I don't have any for this piece.


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Review of Emptiness  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
This is very deep and sad. It's well written and evokes a strong emotion in the reader. At least it did with me.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I saw no problems with these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No mistakes were found in this piece.

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I have none for this poem.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
How true this is. I agree with you whole heartedly about loving them because before you know it they will be gone. I have 4 and it seems like just yesterday they were babies. I wish I could have those days back.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
What a lovely poem. It made me laugh and brightened my evening. I love coffee too, although it's not an addiction. Great write.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are fine.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I found no errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I would suggest changing the content rating. The use of the word wh**e, is definately not "E".


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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
What a beautiful poem. Looking at death the way you have in this poem, doesn't make it seem so final. Great work.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
I saw no problems with these.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this poem.


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Review of Old Man  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Wonderful poem that encourages us to slow down and enjoy life while we have it. What are we in a hurry for anyway? Great write poet.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
All are well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I like this poem as is.



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Review of Struggle  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Great work. I think more of us have struggles to keep faith than we are willing to admit. I think my favorite line in this poem is: my willingness to sin still remains

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
Fine

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
I didn't come across any errors.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None for this poem.


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Review of Awake  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
Simply beautiful! I agree that we need to take more time to see all the beauty that surrounds us. Thanks for reminding me.

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
Wonderful.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
One spelling error: yoru=your. The rest is fine.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
None.


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Review of Dream's Reality  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Bullet*Overall Impression
I really like what you have to say in this piece. It sparks one's mind into thinking. It's deep and for me; profound. Great write!

*Bullet*Form, Rhyme & Meter
These are all well done.

*Bullet*Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation
No errors were found.

*Bullet*Ideas & Suggestions
I have none for this piece.


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