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Review of Need  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This poem is well written. The flow is great, and the message is well conveyed. You have chosen the words that captures the readers attention. The lines are deep with thought. We have to take notice of the world around us. We pay closer attention not to be the deaf, blind, or dirty.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am laughing as I realize that you are one of my competion. I am loving this. The story is vivid. The words are well chosen. Unlike me, you actually caught the and in "in the begining AND the end". I didn't start my work off with the phrase. I can see that you did a great job.

Thanks for sharing this with us, and entering competions on WDC.
Ida.


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Review of You and I  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The best thing about this poem is that I can make the "You" anyone in my life. My mother, my spouce, a stranger that I am observing could be the focus of this poem. The flow was great. The lines were short and kept attention on the words. To me this brings my exhusband into my focus.

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Ida


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Review of Saved  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First I want to apoligize. I can feel that this is not a well written fictional poem. If so, you deserve an nobel prize. I have been in God's will so many times, and unfortantelly I have seen so many that seek God be left on their own by the leaders of the church. I hate that this is a message that is in the world, but it is. So many stories we here about our leaders of country and church foresaking us. However, the creator will not. He will send some one true across your path.

As you can see by the length of my review that I have enjoyed your work. I find it well written. It screams its message loud and clear.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Who Is The One?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. I have had its words to grow in my heart many times. I tried to be the perfect wife. I made every mistake myown. It was my fault that he kept going for younger women that loved to party instead of caring for home, children, and have a full time job. This was well written. The flow was smooth. Beautiful.

Thank you for shariing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The Storm  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this item. I think that the story was very visual. You were able to bring us into your story. I did not see any mistakes. You were able to keep my attention. You were able to create your pain in our face as I see you look into the mirror. I am happy have read your work.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Quiet  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very written item. The lines were well formed and the flow was smooth. I am not one that has symbol counts down yet, but I had a very easy time reading your words. The item was short while getting its message through clearly. I am glad that I found it.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is very informative. I usually don't read items with titles that are much like those of a newspaper story, but I found this interesting. I really think that this is well written, and the information is the sort that I had to stop and think. I have three children. What will be left for them.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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659
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved the flow of this peice. I can relate to the admiration of the parents of the acomplishment of their child. The lesson of a life short lived was well told in a simple and nonharmful way. THis story had character, and is one that I can see grow into a chapter in a childrens collection.

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Ida


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Review of PE #1 for EWW  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice to meet your character. I just finished mine. I am a little nervous about how I did. It seems effortless for you. THis looks as if I am looking over someone's questioniar. I like the picture that you have chosen, and the discription is excellent. I am glad that we are classmates.


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Review of Amanda  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I absalutly love this. It reminds me of the kind of stories that my grand mother and mom used to tell me. I hope that I can come up with one that is half as chilling. I love the twist. You painted the picture so well. This is an exciting read. I will be checking you out again.

THank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a sweet and sorrowful tale told so delicatly. I loved the vision that you were able to show the reader. The poem made me stop and think about how short that this life is. I think that you chose your words well, and that this is a work well done.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of What is Love?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. The way you wrote it with questions is great. I wrote one. I found it hard to do, but it paid off in the long run. THis has well chosen words. The flow was smooth. The message is one that we all can relate to. I am glad to see you here with the writing.com family.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is well written. I enjoyed the read. The rhyme was excellent. It moved smoothly. This is a message that any one can relate to at one time or another. This is situation that I have awaken my self with. I really think that this is a great entry. I really think that the last verse first letter should not be capital because of the others are not.

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Ida


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Review of Can't let go  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the way you rhyme the second and fourth lines. This is one of my favorite ways to work a poem. The message is well conveyed. They flow made the poem easy to read. You held the readers attention. I think that the words were well chosen. I enjoyed this poem.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida


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Review of LSHS, LLC  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the idea. I am not a fan of the bas... one, but I understand it. I think this would be a fun and attention getting way to wittness to a very messed up world. Are you seriously going to create this line? I hope so. I would not know how to start, but I would love to be able to get one.

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Ida


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Review of The Fight  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Unfortionately, I have been there done that. You have captured the emotion perfectly. I found this a easy read that reached out to me as one who has had failed realationships. I found this item to be relatable. The rhyme was great. Over all this was a wonderful read.

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Ida


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Review of My Grandpa...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. I love thinking about how it might have been if I did get to know either of my grandfathers. I picture it much as the picture that you have painted with your words. The flow of the tale went smooth. It was easy to read. I love the family connection that was captured wonderfully in this story.

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Ida


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Review of Jonathan  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a great poem I think that you have done a great poem. I enjoyed it. The flow was nice. I found it easy to read, and the message was very relatable. I am glad that you have found our Writing.com Family. I hope that you have found some great friends here.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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670
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the story. There are some grammar mistakes such as capitalizations and such. It shows that any pet is capable of loving those who care and love them. I had a boa. He would watch television with us. I loved the way you introduced a creature to use in a different way than we would expect.

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Ida


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671
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. It is very well written. The rhyme is great. The flow is easy. The message catches my attention better than most. I love that you have allow us to see that there are temptations out there no matter how much we love someone, and that our love can keep us safe from major mistakes.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting tale that I found entertaining. YOu have a talent for telling a story with dialog. THere is a contest that you only use dialog to tell a story. I entered once, but I didn't win. I am not the best at the skill of writting dialog. I found this a fun item to read.

Thank you for sharing this withus.
IDa


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Review of Bloody  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The story runs smoothly. I found no mistakes. YOur words brought me into the item. I enjoyed your use of dialog. I always have a problem with this skill. THere is a lot of realism in your work that makes it even more believable. That is the one thing that you want. You reader to believe.

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Ida


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Review of Alphabet Animals  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. It is well written, and fun to read. I find it smooth. It catches my attention. I could see myself reading this to a young child. I love that some of the passages could even be used to correct speech problems. A child that has problems with the a sound could be asked to repeat the passage that has that letter until he/she has prefected the sound.

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Ida


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Review of Angry Elk Attack  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I visited your port, and my son would love to do the same. He loves anything to do with animals. I think that this is well written, and I like the way you were able to bring the reader into your work. You painted a picture that was very vivid. A job well done.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida


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