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551
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This has caught my attention. The introduction has my mind wanting more. I see that you are new to Writing.com family. I am happy to have you joining us here. Your paragraphs were well formed. You kept the same verb tense throughout the introduction. I will be back around to read more.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida

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552
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is being reviewed because I found it in my contest. I feel that this is a wonderful start to my contest. The flow was smooth. The rhyme was excellent. And most of all, you made me smile. This is a funny story written in poem. I always love that. A read in rhyme is so much fun.

Thank you for entering my contest.
Ida


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553
553
Review of Who Am I?  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this item. I think that this is something that I would like to discuss in person to person email. I am forty four, and it nice to meet you. I am happy to read survival in your words. I want to ask you questions about your research of witchcraft.


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Ida


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554
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I found this an interesting story. I did not know that withness was a word. I enjoyed the story in such a good story in such a few words. I like that this is showing a testomny. I really think that this is well put together with formated paragraphs.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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555
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Happy birthday. I know that you have been on here for two years now. I hope that you have found it as a family. This review is to say happy birthday. I love the message that you have offered for us to read. I know that writing and drawing are the loves of my love of my life.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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556
In affiliation with  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a wonderful piece. I loved the poem and the flow. I am one of those who need to remember the message that you have shared with us. I know that I really need it sometimes. Thank you for the inspiration to keep our chins up.

I found this in a news letter.
"Spiritual Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

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Ida


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557
Review of Fleeting  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this read. I love the descriptive wording of all the things in the story. YOu were able to share with me the decription of the atmosphere, the emotions, the family, and the flow. I found this an easy read that was able to bring me into the family dinner.

I found this in a news letter:
"Short Stories Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

Thank you for sharing this with us.
IDa


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558
Review of A Fish Tale  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was so sad. I find it in the same catagory as the Titantic. I enjoyed the read. I really found the flow of these well formed paragraphs. THe read was smooth. The story line was a true tear jerking experience. I felt the emotions that you creativly convey to your reader.

I found this in a news letter.

"Short Stories Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

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Ida


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559
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is well written. I love that this is written as a letter. This makes this more intamate to the reader. YOu were able to chower the reader with the emotions of the central character. This was a fun read. I found it in a Valentine News letter.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
IDa


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560
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a well written story. It kept my attention. I could not find any errors. The paragraphs were well formed, and your choice of words brought the reader into the read. The characters were clear. This is a great story with well formed letter formats with in it.

I found this in a news letter:
From: Writing.Com Newsletter Service <newsletters@Writing.Com>
Reply-To: sybaritescribe <sybaritescribe@Writing.Com>
Subject: *Reading* Noticing Newbies: How Much Is Enough?

Thank you for sharing this with us.
IDa


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561
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I found this in my email box as part of a news letter:
From: Writing.Com Newsletter Service <newsletters@Writing.Com>
Reply-To: sybaritescribe <sybaritescribe@Writing.Com>
Subject: *Reading* Noticing Newbies: How Much Is Enough?

I found this to be more true than we would like it to be. THis is well written. I think that we could lump things like computers in the mix. Yes we as Americans have it easy. Most of our lives are spent sitting down. A lot of jobs for both genders require a lot of sitting. Then we entertain our selves in front of a screen.

Thank you for sharing this with.
Ida


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562
Review of The White Mare  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this is a news letter that was sent to my email box. I loved this. The story was vivid, and it welcomed the reader into it with easy reading paragraphs. I found no mistakes, and the emotions were strong. I could feel the anger, love, and fear in this story.

From: Writing.Com Newsletter Service <newsletters@Writing.Com>
Reply-To: sybaritescribe <sybaritescribe@Writing.Com>
Subject: *Reading* Noticing Newbies: How Much Is Enough?

Thank you for sharing this with us.
IDa


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563
Review of The beach  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You are right this is a well written tear jerker. I found it easy to read until toward the end. There were no lines between the paragraphs. This made it a little hard for my eyes to read and keep the line of vision straight. That being said, this is a very well written piece. I did not notice any mistakes.

I found your item in this news letter:
From: Writing.Com Newsletter Service <newsletters@Writing.Com>
Reply-To: sybaritescribe <sybaritescribe@Writing.Com>
Subject: *Reading* Noticing Newbies: How Much Is Enough?

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
IDa


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564
Review of Greed  
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
First off I want to tell you that your popularity is so growing. I see a lot of you lately. I know the name and that I am going to be reading quality work when I see it. This poem is too true. We have gotten to where we are emotional savages. We no longer care or even acknowledge the other person.

I found this in this news letter:

From: Writing.Com Newsletter Service <newsletters@Writing.Com>
Reply-To: sybaritescribe <sybaritescribe@Writing.Com>
Subject: *Reading* Noticing Newbies: How Much Is Enough?

Thank you for sharing yet another great item with us.
Ida


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565
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved the read. The paragraphs were well written. YOu brought the reader into your work. I loved how easy dialog seemed to come to you. YOur dialog helped the story run smooth. This is a skill that I find hard at times. I hope that you find writing.com as much of a family as I do.

I found you item in a news letter sent to me in my email box.

From: Writing.Com Newsletter Service <newsletters@Writing.Com>
Reply-To: sybaritescribe <sybaritescribe@Writing.Com>
Subject: *Reading* Noticing Newbies: How Much Is Enough?

Thank you for sharing this with us.
IDa


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566
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
THis was very interesting. I love the twist. The incent phycopath being born. This was written well and the flow was excellent. IF there were any mistakes, the quality of the read covered them. I felt as though I was watching the events happening before my eyes.

Thank you for sharing this with us.'
Ida


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567
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have got to say this was a lovely picture painted with sweet centimental words. I loved the family connection that is covered in this story. It reminds me of how I used to tell storys to my little sisters. I wish that my children and I bonded over tales like this.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Ida


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568
568
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is so interesting. The emotions are easy to feel. I think that you wrote very well formed paragraphs. The choise of names are also interesing. Such as Sally. Sally is my sister's name. This created a attactment to the item. I find that this has a smooth flow.

I found this in the news paper sent to my email box.
Horror/Scary: January 08, 2013 Issue [#5455]

Thank you for writing this with us.
Ida


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569
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am adding you to my favorites so that I can follow the links that you have on your news letter. This page is well formatted so that I can see at a glance that I want to read. I think that this is a great way to get others noticed, and this is what the Writing.com family is all about.

I found this in a news letter that came to my email.
From: Writing.Com Newsletter Service <newsletters@Writing.Com>
Reply-To: amalthea <amalthea@Writing.Com>
Subject: *Reading* Fantasy: Chapter Length & an Opportunity

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Ida


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570
Review of Captive audience  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I found this in this newsletter:

Subject: *Reading* Drama: Creating Drama in Fiction

"Drama Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

I found this an interesting story line. The paragraphs were well formed. The scenes were well deloveped. I found the fantasy in this item.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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571
Review of Calypso  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I found this in a newsletter.

Subject: *Reading* Drama: Creating Drama in Fiction

"Drama Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

I really think that this is a well written. I was brought into the story with your well chosen words. I really found this to be discriptive. I think that you deserve being shown in the newsletter.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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572
Review of Sovereignty  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! I am glad that I found this in a newsletter.

Subject: *Reading* Drama: Creating Drama in Fiction

"Drama Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

I found that you have a great story line. Your discriptive vividness of your words was a shock for me. I could see it all. I think that the scene that caught my eyes and heart was when he mulated himself and seen his reflection in the bloody knife.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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573
Review of Wednesday  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this in a newsletter:

Subject: *Reading* Drama: Creating Drama in Fiction

"Drama Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

I found this a great story line. The dialog is smooth and fluent. I really think that this has a lot of well developed scene discriptions. THe read was one that I enjoyed.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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574
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this item on this news letter:

Subject: *Reading* Drama: Creating Drama in Fiction

"Drama Newsletter (February 5, 2013)" 

I found this easy to read. I didn't find a place that I stumbled over poor chosen words. The dialog made since, and it went smoothly with the rest of the story.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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575
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I was just going to rate this, but I found these pictures so beautiful that I could not just send you stars. The mother and children are heart warming images. I love each one more than the next. I am not sure how to use the c-notes to send to others other than the writiting.com family.

Thank you for sharing such beauty with us.
IDa
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