This was fun. I would like to come back and read it a couple times a month. I think that it would be fun to see how it changes the story all together. I entered my three words, and found this to be fun.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a wonderful. It was well written, and the emotions in it were easily felt. I have times that I must do things over and over by habbit due to a compulsion. The paragraphs are developed without mistakes and flow well.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
The story is great. The flow was perfect. I find that you had wonderful use of dialog that helped the story line make since and flow smooth. The descriptions were written well, and the characters were introduced in such a way that we feel that we got to know them.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a great story. The paragraphs are well formed. I was taken into the story by your imagery. I really found that your dialoghelps the flow move smooth well. I have a problem with dialog from time to time so I notice good dialog easily. I think that this is a well written story that made an enjoyable read.
If I am not mistaken, I feel anger in these words. The poem is well written with a smooth flow. I enjoyed the emotions in teh item. The only thing is that you give me a larger font. However, the line spacing made it so much easier to read the smaller font.
I think this is a very interesting. The flow was smooth. and the beat was easy to read. The stanz flow off the eyes. I did not find any mistakes. I just would suggest that you use a larger font to make it easier on the eyes. The message was on that a lot of us can relate to.
This is so cute. I was looking for contests and such for children or about children to review. I miss having my children being small. I hope that this is not a trick question. I will answer the question from Nick.
Very well written story in the form of poetry. The rhyme is good and the flow is excellent. I loved the imagery that you captured. I enjoyed this poem. I was brought into the read by an interesting title. I was kept reading with a beautiful poem.
I am sorry for bonbarding you with all these reviews, but they are listed one after the other. I can see real talent and poetry skills. I can vision this story. I know people in these situations since I moved to FLorida four years ago. I didn't see any in Kentucky. I find that they are some of the kindest people i could ask to know.
I have seen you everywhere here on Writing.com. I have one question, that is how did I miss this one. I have added it to my favorites. I am going to come back and work the lesson. I think that you are one of the most helpful persons on this site. I am happy to have found it.
This is well written. I love the way you have used letters to tell part of your story. It was a smooth read, and the message was one that I enjoyed. The paragraphs were well formatted. I think that this is a story that I would turn into a book. It was enjoyable.
I thik that the story should have a larger font, and the paragraphs maybe be easier for me to read with a space between each.
My eyes are not so good. This is a well written story. I love the way you used description. I enjoyed the read, and the flow was smooth.
First I wanted to tell you that the introduction paragraph is a little hard to read. I might suggest a different color and a larger font. That being said I really enjoyed the story. It has a smooth flow, and I could see that it is a great example of your lessons.
This is another wonderfully usefull page. I am glad that I am using the news letters to do reviews now because it is how I found this. Is there a way that you can send me alerts when you have a lesson entered. I would like to see one on verb tense. I am having such a problem following the same one through out one item.
I love your pictures. This story in a poem form was fluent and smooth. I find it hard to write a story in poetry form, but you made it look easy. The story line kept my interest, and the words rolled from my eyes without stumbling. I think that it is interesting where we get our inspirations.
This is well written. The story unfolded flawlessly. If there were any mistakes, I did no notice them for being caught up in the story. Your paragraphs were well formed, and the story could become a great mook, possibly a sitcom. I know that my sons would love it they are fans of the Fantacy story.
This is so cute to have the twist of the spaceship. I like to think of the beings on the planet as humans. This story is very vivid. I could feel the observer's pitty to the natives of the Earth. YOu captured the emotions well. I find my self feeling for the people on the planet that are about to loose it all.
The most beautiful picture of an angel. I like to draw angels. That being said, This is a good story told in poem form. The flow made the read easier (once I took my eyes off the picture.) I found myself lost in the story. I would like to see a fictional short story using the story behind this poem.
I think that this is a story told wonderfully. I loved the vivid decriptions that you chose to use. I love birds, and you captured them nicely while talking about a woman. I can see your character's confusion in the story. The length of the item makes me want to know the rest of the story.
This is a good story, but I don't understand where I found it. I must be missing something. I read it twice and missed an animal. Don't get me wrong this is a vivid and wonderful but this is where I found your item.
This is well written. The story runs smooth. The paragraphs are well formed. I did not find any mistakes, and I try to notice verb tense because I have been having problems with this skill. I see that you are able to capture it. Your description is a plus.
I love this story. I lived in an area like you described. Though your story was good, I think that I like your description best. I can see your dog protesting going out for his very early walk. I love the passion in the last paragraph. Though it is of warning, I find it nearly funny.
I loved this story. It should be one of this sitcoms. It would fit in well on a show like the Dark Sides. I found it to be descriptive. YOu chose a catchy title and introduction that would call in nearly every possible reader. This is well written. My only complaint is that I wish that the font was a little bigger.
I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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We have something in colmon. I love to read the Poet Edgar Allen Poe. I can see his enfluence in your poem. I love the flow. The rhyme is second to none. I can feel a little of the Raven in your words. This is well written, and a great read for the Poe fans.
I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
Horror/Scary
This week: Horror As The Alter-Ego of Love
Edited by: Kate~Rune Writes & Reads (207)
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