I think that thisis a well written. You have written the story that we were able to see the story unfold. The dialog kept the story flowing well and created a smooth rhymthem.
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When looking at the updates on my page, I saw that my name was tagged in your item. I was all most in tears as I read your kind words. I know that most people do throw away the newsletters, but I like reviewing and telling others that they have been featured in the letters.
This time this one is on me. I am so happy to see my name here.
I have never seen a story told so well with this much dialog. I have problems with conversation, but you use nearly dialog alone to tell the story. This is a well done story.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This was interesting. The changing of font, the size, and the spacing helps me to be able to see the words better. The flow was great, but the story was better.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is well written. The flow was smooth. I love the way you leave us hanging. We all think that someone else needs us more than we need them. This is a story that most can relate to.
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As a mother, I have to give this a five. I seem to never solve any of the things that go on in this house. This is missing, but no one did it. That broke, but no one touched it. THis is a relatable story for anyone who is raising children.
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Wow. I just learned something about WDC. I did not know that a person could add video. THis is an entertaining page. It has a little bit of everything. It was as if I was attending a party in your lobby.
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I can always use a laugh. The title of this blog got my attention, and the relatable events kept me reading. I have to love this ongoing slam on what life hands us. I am glad that it made the down things worth laughting at. I loved it.
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This is so much fun. It is different than other in and out story. This one has a cool twist. Like the mean genni that allows you to wish for anything, and he gives it to you with strings attacted.
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I still love to gaze at the clouds. This was so beautiful that I teared up. I love the format, the flow, and the rythem, but I love the picture that you described about the mother and daughter looking up at the sky the most. I did not see any mistakes. All that I did see I loved.
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First I want to tell you how much I like the picture. I love that it shows death as a dark spirit. It looks almost inviting. The poem was great. I love the format, and the story was well told with the words chosen.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
Story is well written. The conversations are really easy due to your dialog skills. I found my self taken into the story by the way you were able to describe.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is well written, and the story line touches me in many ways. I can see the hand clutching the bloody heart in it. I could feel the sorrow that drove the events that occurred.
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This stands true to the title. It is one that I would like to see turned into a book possibly a novel. The story is well written, and it invites the reader to stroll in the events of the story.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
You have a real talent for dialog. You moved the story along with spoken word. I find that this would be easier for me to read if the font was a little bigger.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
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