I love how you created a mix of story and poem. This created a read that kept my attention. YOur decription brought me into the story. I love the how well you introduced your characters.
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This is an interesting story that was told well. I enjoyed the descriptive wording, and the story unfolded before my eyes. The only things that I found to be a problem for me is the font and spacing. This is because I have times that I can barely see. I felt that the font of three with a line between each paragraph would make it an easier read for me.
Today I live there beside you. I have struggled with that enemy on and off my entire life. The only thing that keeps me breathing sometimes is wondering what is going to happen tomorrow. I feel at times that I can not change anything. I do the best that I want to scream, but for what another reason for those around me to complain.
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I remember. I love this poem. IT helps us to learn who we really are. We recognize heros now more than we ever had, and we are more aware of what is going on around us than we ever were. You did a wonderful job capturing the event emotions.
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Nicely written. I think that this has all the elements of a great book. The chapters are began and ended well and at the best possible point. I found this to be a great read.
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Interesting story. I loved the dialog. I really wish that I could find something that I am totally afraid of to do to release some of this pent up emotions that I feel on days like today.
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You wrote a wonderful story. I miss those holidays with my grandmother and all those relatives. Would it not be wonderful to be able to go back and stay there.
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I love everything about this story. I like the childhood feeling that it brought, the way it was written was so easy to read. I like the font because it is easy on the eyes. This was a fun story.
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This is well written. I like the way you were able to give the reader the feelings of Zena. We felt her pride, her longing, her strength, and her defeat. I am glad that we got to know her.
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I feel the female scorned in this item. I have felt this feeling myself at times. I felt the emotions in this story. The roller coaster of emotions could drive anyone to revenge.
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