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Review of Lovers Qurrel  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Happy writing.com birthday. This is a very nicely written poem. When I read the title, I had to read the rest. This is a fluent poem that creates a picture of a relationship falling a part.

I could see the relationshipa falling as we do not know what to do to help. I been on both ends of the story.

Thank you for sharing this with us, and I am sending you a happy BIrthday.

Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to the writing.com family. This is a place to be inspired, encouraged, and working as a family.

That being said this is a very good begining of a good book. The characters are introduced well while leaving more to learn as the story developes.

I love the spacing. It helps me to be able to read it with tired eyes.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Ida

Gift to help your gift points to grow.


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Review of Starr  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
First welcome to the writing.com family. This has been a place of encouragement and friendship. I have found a home here.

I love the story line here. Your characters were introduced well, and the flow of the story was smooth. I only find one thing that would make it easier for me to read. That is to place a space between each of the paragraphs.

Here is a gift of encouragement. I know how hard it is to build your points when you are new.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
for entry "Bedouin" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It amazes me when authors live in today, but yet do not stray from the story of the past. Not using today's language holding fast to the descriptions of the day of his/her character. I admire this trait.

I would like to know what the secret is to being able to sepetrate the two times.

Thank you again.
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
for entry "King Zimrilim" 
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the family element in this chapter. It was well constructed, and a nice rest after the action

The only suggestion that I can bring to any thing that I have read so far is to hace a glossary or some way of describing the uncommon words used in the time of the story. I think that if you have no knowledge of the time and it lingo, it would be a little hard to read.

The flow is excellent as always.

Thank you again.
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think that this chapter begins to really show the character's development. The dialog is smoth, and the important changes in the conversation is seperated to draw attention.

The action is more intense in this chapter than I noticed in the others. I am becoming more inspired to take another look at the bible for inspiration for my National Novel Writing More project.

THank you
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
for entry "Marduk Answers" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is another great chapter.

I can see the story growing. I can see the research that has been done. In my past reviews, I was a little nervous about suggestion that you intenionally used the Bible in it due to perhaps being wrong. I m interested in how you came up with the names. I do notice that some are from the Bible, but I wish that I am able to research.

Thank you for another good chapter. Hey, question when you publish this, could you send me a copy. I have a hard time buying books that encourage and inspires me due to my encome.

Ida


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Review of Do What You Like.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

http://writinglife.wix.com/ida_matilda_wright_port...!


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Review of The Spy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think that this is a very good story.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Dad  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This short poem holding the long and emotion story of the memory thief. My own Dad suffers with this illness, and I can relate to the words of this work.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The format is nice to the eye. I like the form. The flow is great, and I love the message.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Missing  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful poem. I really would like to understand forms of poetry. I really enjoyed the flow and the message.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I have added this to my favorites so that I can come back to this so that I can refer to it when I need to. I really love the information, and it is really something that can help me while writing my novel.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

http://writinglife.wix.com/ida_


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story. I would love to welcome you to the writing.com family. This is one of the best places to find the support a person needs as a writer and a person.

You have a real talent for dialog. Your conversation was one that helped the story along fluently.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

http://writinglife.wix.com/ida_matilda_wright


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is great story. I enjoyed the flow and the characters.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

http://writinglife.wix.com/ida_matilda_wright_port...!


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Review of A Day in the Life  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an exciting read. It is well formatted and a story that kept my attention in the entire story.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

http://writinglife.wix.com/ida_matilda_wright_port...!


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Review of Possession  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story. I found that you have a great skill for dialog. The emotion was exceptional. I can see the event unfold right in front of my eyes.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a deep and interesting story. The emotion is raw and captures the reader's attention.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of The Clock Tower  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think that this is a well written story. I really enjoyed the flow and the emotions that you conveyed to us.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

http://writinglife.wix.com/ida_matilda_wright_port...!


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Review of Breaking News  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really think that this gives even more emotion to the stituation. I am so worried about my children's future due to all the terrible things that are going on. Now we have the West Texas situation.

I had the news on all last night.

Thank you for sharing this with us.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of The Ice Lake  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story. The description of some parts about broke my heart. The chains pulling the character into the darkness was a shuttering image.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this story. I really like the explanation that you gave in the beginning. This makes this story easier to read.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Magic Wars  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This story is one that I enjoyed to read. It had action and dialog that kept the story interesting. I only wished that you put a space between every paragraph and use a larger font to make it easier on the eyes.

Job well done.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of sEek  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I love the story line. The characters worked with the story. The only thing that I had a problem with is my eyes. I would have liked the font to be a little larger.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am not sure how to review this story. I loved it. It had a great beginning. By using the verses at the very top of the work, it made me want to read more. The characters were introduced in a manner that reading this story was much like watching an episode on the television. The action was wonderful. You even added the Bible. This is a great work.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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