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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think this is a well written story. The message is strong. I really found this to be a well descriptive. I find this has well formatted paragraphs. I found this to be a wonderful read.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
Horror/Scary

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527
Review of Conscience  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
THis was well written. The flow was one that created a smooth read. The story line was sad I can see someone being that crazy in love. I know that it isn't as much as in the old days. I know that I have loved that strong, and all that saved me from going that direction is the help of God. And the distance that he moved the ex husband.

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Horror/Scary

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528
Review of The Blind Date  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think that you did a great job. This is a catchy story. I really think that it is both funny and fluent. I am happy to have found this. I have entered this contest once. However, I have problems allowing dialog to flow with the story.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
Comedy
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529
Review of Trip To Pavandong  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First i want to welcome you to the writing.com family. As you continue here you will indeed see that this is a family of encouraging writers and poets. I enjoyed the flow, and the paragraphs were well formed. I noticed that you have a handle on the verb tense following through your work. This is a skill that I am having problems with.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Secret Doors & Passageways

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530
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the color coding of the stanz. The flow was smooth, and the message is one that can be related by the reader. I wonder if the form without capitalzation and punction is called. I really enjoyed this poem. I am glad that I found me.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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531
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the rhyme. I think that the flow is second to none. The story line was cute. I like the mention of West Virgina. I am from Kentucky. I love the description that you chose to use. I found this to be a good read with no errors. I was able to picture every statement in this poem.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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532
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Rated: E | (4.5)
THis is a cute story in poem form. I found it well written. I liked the beat. The flow created a easy read. The message was one that made me smile. I like a good dig on the man in our lives for all the little ones that they give us. I am glad that I have found thi poem.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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533
Review of White Horses  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem. I love the rhyme. I loved the flow. I really enjoyed the story line.. I think that you were free of mistakes.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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534
Review of I Saw a Dragon  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story in a poem format. I love this my husband out of law loves dragons. He collects all kinds of dragon pictures and figurines. This was a smooth read, and the rhyme was good. I think this is one of my favorite that I have read about the dragon.

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IDa


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535
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is beautiful. I think that memories of being together are what life and love are made of. My ideal valentine would be to snuggle and watch a movie., any movie. I love just being held.

That being said, you poem has as smooth flow. The message is well received.

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536
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the poem. The flow was smooth. THe rhyme was such that it created an easy read. This I find more than true. I like the introduction with advice. I think that this is well written, and I love the little self reflection on how the flowers makes the giver look at his wife's work.

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537
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful rhyme. I love the story. It made me smile. I live in the sunny Sarasota Florida. Here we don't really know when the groundhog sees his shadow. I love this because it gave the character that I have know since childhood a personality.

I found this in a newsletter.

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538
Review of The Gift  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good of a well written third point of view story. The paragraphs were well formed. I found no spelling errors or grammar. This is a good story that kept my attention. I like the comparison of living to existion. I think that the statemtn is one that needs to be though about.

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Short Stories: Finding Your Passion
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539
Review of Routine  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
First I want to welcome you to the Writing.com family. I see that you haven't been on here long. First thing that I can suggest for those of us that have a hard time reading is that you create a larger font and put a line between paragraphs.

Speaking of paragraphs you have created well formated sentences. The flow was smooth.

I found this item in a news letter that I suscribe to:

Short Stories: Finding Your Passion
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540
Review of Too  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to rate this a five. I know that we have all been there. Not only other people judging us but we have a bad habbit of doing the same. I like how the poem ends even though it is a type of judging. I am glad that you covered a subject that a lot of us have experienced from childhood.

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IDa


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541
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I found this in a newsletter:

Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

The emotion was strong. The characters were interesting. Paragraphs were well written. I loved reading about found treasures so to speek. I have found so many things at my mom's that could supply me with memories for years.

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Ida


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542
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting story. The dialog worked well with the message in the story. The characters were introducted well to us. I like the conversation with Annie. She seemed to be the anchor in this story. She knew what to say, and she did so in a way that was just conversation.

I found you story in the newsletter Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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543
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I know how hard it is to start. Shoot I am still starting out. I had one book published by Publish America, and I still have no sales. Right now I am having a problem with even doing a contest called Please Make Me Laugh. NO one seems interested. This story really touched the struggling writer inside.

I found this item in the news letter Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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544
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The characters were well introduced. Alex was a surprise to me. The story is frightening. To think about someone hating you so much or just having a reality where money is more important than your own mother. I do love the calm deminer (forgive my spelling). I'd like to think she did find paece, and that we can too.

I found this item at Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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Ida


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545
Review of Remediation  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is well written. You have a great a smooth flow even with dialog. This carries a good message. The paragraphs were well formed. The characters were relatable, and the events were easily imagined from your description. I enjoyed this read. I found this in a newsletter:

Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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IDa


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Review of My Place  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This has a nice rhyme. The flow was smooth, and the story line was excellent. I could see (in my eyes) a child brought over here. They are unable to see if they are better off here. All they know is that this is not home. They miss their friends and family.

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547
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Find that this is the hardest kind of poem to write for me. That being said, I admire those who have a talent for writing such poems. Here is snapping to you. I would love to go to a performance reading. I have never been. I think that this has a smooth flow.

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Ida

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548
Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this to be informative. I am glad that you have become a part of the writing.com family. The only problems that I picked up on are those that are just issues for those of us who have problems reading. I think that you should double space between the paragraphs.

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Ida

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549
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a wonderful peice. I found a place where you did not capitalize an I, but other than that I did not see any errors. I think that the story is hard to put into such a few words. I like the futurelistic storyline. I am happy to have found this in the newbie page.

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Ida

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550
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
THis is a good play. The Subject and the characters were all well described and formed. I think that what I like the most is that you have great stage direction. I find this skill hard when writting a play. You make the task seem effortless. I have taken a class called One Act Play. I loved the class.

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Ida

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