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Review of INTO THE BONEYARD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story. The paragraphs are well formed. I was taken into the story by your imagery. I really found that your dialoghelps the flow move smooth well. I have a problem with dialog from time to time so I notice good dialog easily. I think that this is a well written story that made an enjoyable read.

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Ida


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Review of Birth  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
If I am not mistaken, I feel anger in these words. The poem is well written with a smooth flow. I enjoyed the emotions in teh item. The only thing is that you give me a larger font. However, the line spacing made it so much easier to read the smaller font.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think this is a very interesting. The flow was smooth. and the beat was easy to read. The stanz flow off the eyes. I did not find any mistakes. I just would suggest that you use a larger font to make it easier on the eyes. The message was on that a lot of us can relate to.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so cute. I was looking for contests and such for children or about children to review. I miss having my children being small. I hope that this is not a trick question. I will answer the question from Nick.

THank you for the fun of this page.
Ida
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Review of Dark Horses  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written story in the form of poetry. The rhyme is good and the flow is excellent. I loved the imagery that you captured. I enjoyed this poem. I was brought into the read by an interesting title. I was kept reading with a beautiful poem.

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Ida


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Review of The Silver Fox  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am sorry for bonbarding you with all these reviews, but they are listed one after the other. I can see real talent and poetry skills. I can vision this story. I know people in these situations since I moved to FLorida four years ago. I didn't see any in Kentucky. I find that they are some of the kindest people i could ask to know.

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Ida


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I have seen you everywhere here on Writing.com. I have one question, that is how did I miss this one. I have added it to my favorites. I am going to come back and work the lesson. I think that you are one of the most helpful persons on this site. I am happy to have found it.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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For Authors
 This week: Step 5 to Be a Better Writer
  Edited by: Vivian: publisher, author (335)
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Review of The Mahogany Box  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well written. I love the way you have used letters to tell part of your story. It was a smooth read, and the message was one that I enjoyed. The paragraphs were well formatted. I think that this is a story that I would turn into a book. It was enjoyable.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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For Authors
 This week: Step 5 to Be a Better Writer
  Edited by: Vivian: publisher, author (335)
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I thik that the story should have a larger font, and the paragraphs maybe be easier for me to read with a space between each.
My eyes are not so good. This is a well written story. I love the way you used description. I enjoyed the read, and the flow was smooth.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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 This week: Step 5 to Be a Better Writer
  Edited by: Vivian: publisher, author (335)
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In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
First I wanted to tell you that the introduction paragraph is a little hard to read. I might suggest a different color and a larger font. That being said I really enjoyed the story. It has a smooth flow, and I could see that it is a great example of your lessons.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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 This week: Step 5 to Be a Better Writer
  Edited by: Vivian: publisher, author (335)
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is another wonderfully usefull page. I am glad that I am using the news letters to do reviews now because it is how I found this. Is there a way that you can send me alerts when you have a lesson entered. I would like to see one on verb tense. I am having such a problem following the same one through out one item.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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For Authors
 This week: Step 5 to Be a Better Writer
  Edited by: Vivian: publisher, author (335)
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In affiliation with The Sisterhood of Mom's  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I love your pictures. This story in a poem form was fluent and smooth. I find it hard to write a story in poetry form, but you made it look easy. The story line kept my interest, and the words rolled from my eyes without stumbling. I think that it is interesting where we get our inspirations.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
"Fantasy Newsletter (February 12, 2013)" Open in new Window.

Fantasy

 This week: Going Under
  Edited by: Lost in February Waltz (225)
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Review of Soul Searching  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is well written. The story unfolded flawlessly. If there were any mistakes, I did no notice them for being caught up in the story. Your paragraphs were well formed, and the story could become a great mook, possibly a sitcom. I know that my sons would love it they are fans of the Fantacy story.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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Fantasy

 This week: Going Under
  Edited by: Lost in February Waltz (225)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is so cute to have the twist of the spaceship. I like to think of the beings on the planet as humans. This story is very vivid. I could feel the observer's pitty to the natives of the Earth. YOu captured the emotions well. I find my self feeling for the people on the planet that are about to loose it all.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
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Fantasy

 This week: Going Under
  Edited by: Lost in February Waltz (225)
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Review of Fallen Angel  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
The most beautiful picture of an angel. I like to draw angels. That being said, This is a good story told in poem form. The flow made the read easier (once I took my eyes off the picture.) I found myself lost in the story. I would like to see a fictional short story using the story behind this poem.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
"Drama Newsletter (February 12, 2013)" Open in new Window.

Drama

 This week: Animals in the Drama Genre
  Edited by: Kittiara - is an Auntie! (244)
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Review of Reflection  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+
I think that this is a story told wonderfully. I loved the vivid decriptions that you chose to use. I love birds, and you captured them nicely while talking about a woman. I can see your character's confusion in the story. The length of the item makes me want to know the rest of the story.

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Drama

 This week: Animals in the Drama Genre
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good story, but I don't understand where I found it. I must be missing something. I read it twice and missed an animal. Don't get me wrong this is a vivid and wonderful but this is where I found your item.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story. I lived in an area like you described. Though your story was good, I think that I like your description best. I can see your dog protesting going out for his very early walk. I love the passion in the last paragraph. Though it is of warning, I find it nearly funny.

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Review of Book Bites  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved this story. It should be one of this sitcoms. It would fit in well on a show like the Dark Sides. I found it to be descriptive. YOu chose a catchy title and introduction that would call in nearly every possible reader. This is well written. My only complaint is that I wish that the font was a little bigger.

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Horror/Scary

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  Edited by: Kate~Rune Writes & Reads (207)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We have something in colmon. I love to read the Poet Edgar Allen Poe. I can see his enfluence in your poem. I love the flow. The rhyme is second to none. I can feel a little of the Raven in your words. This is well written, and a great read for the Poe fans.

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Horror/Scary

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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think this is a well written story. The message is strong. I really found this to be a well descriptive. I find this has well formatted paragraphs. I found this to be a wonderful read.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
Horror/Scary

 This week: Horror As The Alter-Ego of Love
  Edited by: Kate~Rune Writes & Reads (207)
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Review of Conscience  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
THis was well written. The flow was one that created a smooth read. The story line was sad I can see someone being that crazy in love. I know that it isn't as much as in the old days. I know that I have loved that strong, and all that saved me from going that direction is the help of God. And the distance that he moved the ex husband.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.
Horror/Scary

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Review of The Blind Date  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think that you did a great job. This is a catchy story. I really think that it is both funny and fluent. I am happy to have found this. I have entered this contest once. However, I have problems allowing dialog to flow with the story.

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Comedy
 This week: Comedy As A Genre
  Edited by: SoCalScribe is almost 10! (509)
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Review of Trip To Pavandong  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First i want to welcome you to the writing.com family. As you continue here you will indeed see that this is a family of encouraging writers and poets. I enjoyed the flow, and the paragraphs were well formed. I noticed that you have a handle on the verb tense following through your work. This is a skill that I am having problems with.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Secret Doors & Passageways

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the color coding of the stanz. The flow was smooth, and the message is one that can be related by the reader. I wonder if the form without capitalzation and punction is called. I really enjoyed this poem. I am glad that I found me.

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I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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