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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. IT is well written. I feel the emotion and I feel the testamony in the words that you have choosen. I enjoyed the read. I am so glad to be able to read something that is not about all the evil stuff that the world has to offer us.

I know that if everyone took the time to notice the goodness in all we would be able to reach more people for God.

Thank you
Ida


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Review of The Quilt Block  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This story was wonderful. The emotion was raw and sensational. I loved how the grandmother had not seperated her grand daughter on the block. I was left wondering if the blond woman was Angle's mother since this was her grandmother's house. I think that maybe the mother came to say good bye to her own mother.

THank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The date  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this story. It has the twists and turns that make for a great story. I was shocked that I was able to know who those people were. I re-read it to make sure. I loved how she talked to the pack as if they were people in her family instead of her selves that have been hindering her life.

Great Job..

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I do not know if you have any mistakes, because I was nearly in tears. The story was told with such reality that I could see the two on the phone. I could see around one the brightness of heaven. I find that you were able to keep my attention and brought me deep into your story.

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Ida


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Review of Miseducation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a well written poem. The flow creates a smooth read. The message is one that we know in one way or another. I loved the last stanz. I think that it was bold and brought the message to a complete close. This poem did not leave us hanging, and it created a deep emotion in me as I read it.

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Ida


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Review of Family Matters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is one of the most touching stories that I have read. I hate that families are torn a part by the memories that they have created. Some of the real, but others are rooted in jealously or anger. I loved the end. The way the mother had closed the chapters with her children to allow them peace was so sweet.

I could imaging being in that kitchen. To hear my mother talk to a sibling would be a bundle of mixed emotions. You covered this subject with beauty and tact. You were able to make me feel grief and pride at the same time.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida


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Review of Starstruck  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is well written. I love the picture, and find that you did it justice with your poem. I was taken into your story by the words that you have chosen to use. You were able to keep my attention and focus on the lines of your work. THis is one that I would not have like to miss.

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Ida


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Review of HATRED  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is well written. The message is strong, and I can feel the pashion. The words are well chosen. The poem flows well, and I could see that these words mean a lot to you. I am so happy to have found this. I enjoyed the read, and I do agree that hate is the one thing that destroys the entire world.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.0)
THis has a good flow and the message is one that everyone can relate to if we tell the truth. I know that this is nearly an everyday event in my life. I can not find the keys to my house. Sometimes I loose them while we are visiting, and the trying to find them creats a delay for us to come home.

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Ida


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Review of Mr. Prendergast  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This story is well told. The message is one that I enjoyed reading about. I think that you are able to bring your reader into your work with well chosen words. I love ghost stories, and I attempt to write some myself. I find them a little hard to do. I loved the flow of this story, and I loved the way it was written.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this. It is so cute, colorful, and funny. The only thing that I would do different is make the font bigger do to us that have bad vision. I think this page should get more attention now. There is so much going on right that this should be turned to a posting or blogging page so that we all can discus the news.

Thank you
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. I want to save it to my documents to help me create a wonderfull and functional writing protfolio. I find a lot of information here that I can not find anywhere else. This covers so much that I think you could create a class for this item.

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Ida
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Review of Mother Superior  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well written and I found it intregreting. I was brought into your words. I think that this would make a good. This shows that this is one chapter that intices me to read more. I want to know more about the characters. I have enjoyed the read.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
The story is great, and it deserves to be a winner. I think that it is a well written item. It runs smooth. Your dialog helped the storyline to flow well. The discription drew me into your words. My attention was kept, and I enjoyed this story. NOthing that I can say can touch the winnings that it has already had.

Congratulations.

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Ida


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Review of Secret Pal cNotes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so beautiful. I have signed up for the seceret pal group. I have not found out from them yet on who is my paw. I see that you have a cnote for anything or anything time. I love them. You are a very creative person. I will one day learn to do things like this.

Thank you for sharing this with me.
Ida
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The title stopped me in my tracks. I had to read it. I thought about how my son used to play with his shadow as a child. When I found that it was an adventure story, I promised myself that I would be back to read more. This was a greatly written introduction, and I hope to be back around soon.

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Ida


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Review of Knock Knock  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think that this is a well written story. Is it wrtten from a prompt? I would have liked for it to be longer. The flow was smooth. The story was very interesting. I liked the ending. It would have been great to tell us a little history about the cercumstances.

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Ida


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Review of The Fog  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember those really foggy nights in Kentucky where I was raised. You could not see the road in front of you. I hated to see those wooden croses on the sides of the roads that were caused from the lack of vision.

Well, by the end of the story I was nearly in tears. It was a beautiful story of true love. It was moving and emotional. The traits that create a wonderful well written story.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
GIrl, I can feel the DOWN HOME personality in you . I miss that most. Here in Florida it is beautiful, but you never seem to find anyone really enjoying the out doors. I think that is why I seem to appreicate this state more than the natives. In the hills, our culture was God, Family, nature, and country. Nature is one thing that seems to be ignored here.

Thank you again for give me another taste of home.

Ida


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Review of The Ancient Hills  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh My GOD, you would not believe this. As I read this I began to picture my home in Kentucky. I was borned and raised in the area of Paintsville, Ashland, Prestonsburg, Pikeville, and Salyersville. So I decided to scroll up to the discription under the static item title. There I saw it. Kentucky. I was so happy. I guess all I can say is that you took me home from Florida over the miles north to my home. Great read.

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Ida


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Review of The Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. Don't you just love those prompts? There are time that they bring out our best , as it has here. Or it can serve as a confusion. I like prompts because it is more like a skills exercize. I felt the emotion in this peice, and I could almost see the admiration on the woman's face.

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Ida


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Review of Drawing a Diagram  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this page. It is very helpful not only for the class but for all writing endeavers. I have copied this so that I can use it in the future. This form can be used in short stories as well as novels. I could use it in plays as well as other writing.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
THis is well written and the story makes me laugh. The words that have chosen paints the picture and brings me into the story. Your message is one that we all could benefit from. I would love to see this in print with illustrations. I think that my son would love to read it.

Thank you for sharing such a nice smile.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
THis is a form of poetry that I am not found reading much. The lines are longer with each one. This is new to me. I love the message. It is one that I can relate to. The flow was smooth. YOu story was told with well chosen words that brought the reader into it and kept my attention. Oh, have I been there.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Escape?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think that you got your message across wonderfully. I think that there are so many people are in such a situation. They stay together long after the flames of love are smoothered by hate, anger, jealously, or neglect. THese turn into someone getting hurt.

I can relate to so many things in this story. ONe of the things is not driving for years.

Thank you for sharinf this with us.
Ida


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