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Review of Amanda  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I absalutly love this. It reminds me of the kind of stories that my grand mother and mom used to tell me. I hope that I can come up with one that is half as chilling. I love the twist. You painted the picture so well. This is an exciting read. I will be checking you out again.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a sweet and sorrowful tale told so delicatly. I loved the vision that you were able to show the reader. The poem made me stop and think about how short that this life is. I think that you chose your words well, and that this is a work well done.

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Ida


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Review of What is Love?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. The way you wrote it with questions is great. I wrote one. I found it hard to do, but it paid off in the long run. THis has well chosen words. The flow was smooth. The message is one that we all can relate to. I am glad to see you here with the writing.com family.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is well written. I enjoyed the read. The rhyme was excellent. It moved smoothly. This is a message that any one can relate to at one time or another. This is situation that I have awaken my self with. I really think that this is a great entry. I really think that the last verse first letter should not be capital because of the others are not.

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Ida


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Review of Can't let go  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the way you rhyme the second and fourth lines. This is one of my favorite ways to work a poem. The message is well conveyed. They flow made the poem easy to read. You held the readers attention. I think that the words were well chosen. I enjoyed this poem.

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Ida


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Review of The Fight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Unfortionately, I have been there done that. You have captured the emotion perfectly. I found this a easy read that reached out to me as one who has had failed realationships. I found this item to be relatable. The rhyme was great. Over all this was a wonderful read.

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Ida


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Review of My Grandpa...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. I love thinking about how it might have been if I did get to know either of my grandfathers. I picture it much as the picture that you have painted with your words. The flow of the tale went smooth. It was easy to read. I love the family connection that was captured wonderfully in this story.

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Ida


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Review of Jonathan  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a great poem I think that you have done a great poem. I enjoyed it. The flow was nice. I found it easy to read, and the message was very relatable. I am glad that you have found our Writing.com Family. I hope that you have found some great friends here.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the story. There are some grammar mistakes such as capitalizations and such. It shows that any pet is capable of loving those who care and love them. I had a boa. He would watch television with us. I loved the way you introduced a creature to use in a different way than we would expect.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. It is very well written. The rhyme is great. The flow is easy. The message catches my attention better than most. I love that you have allow us to see that there are temptations out there no matter how much we love someone, and that our love can keep us safe from major mistakes.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting tale that I found entertaining. YOu have a talent for telling a story with dialog. THere is a contest that you only use dialog to tell a story. I entered once, but I didn't win. I am not the best at the skill of writting dialog. I found this a fun item to read.

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IDa


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Review of Bloody  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The story runs smoothly. I found no mistakes. YOur words brought me into the item. I enjoyed your use of dialog. I always have a problem with this skill. THere is a lot of realism in your work that makes it even more believable. That is the one thing that you want. You reader to believe.

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Ida


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Review of Alphabet Animals  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. It is well written, and fun to read. I find it smooth. It catches my attention. I could see myself reading this to a young child. I love that some of the passages could even be used to correct speech problems. A child that has problems with the a sound could be asked to repeat the passage that has that letter until he/she has prefected the sound.

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Ida


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Review of Angry Elk Attack  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I visited your port, and my son would love to do the same. He loves anything to do with animals. I think that this is well written, and I like the way you were able to bring the reader into your work. You painted a picture that was very vivid. A job well done.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this page. I can not wait to meet my class mates. I have left a short bio, and I plan to be back to read those of my class mates. It is amazing how close strangers can become in classes like this. I am surprised how we can come together and help one another without ever seeing one face.

Thank you for all you do here at WDC.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Have found this to be true from taking other classes. Creating the character first makes for a foundation for the story. The better you know your people the easier you can write about them. The story seems to build its self around them gracefully. This page is full of great advice that is worth following.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really studying this page.I think that I will find so many useful help to grow as a writing. I am happy to be here. I can see that this is another serious class. I am ready to learn. I have read the prompt. I think that th lessons that I learned during Act One class.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I cannot wait to work with you again. I truly enjoyed the class Act One. This is a well planned page, and I think that I really feel that forums such as this one is helpful for everyone who crosses paths with it. I hope that some time I will be as beneficial as people like those who teach are.

Thank you for giving me an opportunity to learn more.
Ida


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Review of The Third Child  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this item. It was very creative. The words were well chosen, and the picture was painted well. The story was fluent. It was an amazing read. You used dialog well. I find this a hard trait to be able to use to the best. I would like to welcome you to our writing.com family.

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Ida


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Review of a poem of mind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Though I did see mistakes. I feel that they made the peice more believable. As I read the lines, I felt a little worried about the subject. I wondered if this was such as a good bye letter.

but ibwant god to come.
my last words i speak,
from my heart to my lips

Should this be

but i want God to come.
my last words I speak,
from my heart to my lips

I enjoyed the read, and it brought tears to my eyes.

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Ida


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Review of Planet collector  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a message that many can relate to. I too know the feelings of seeing my heart with another woman. The flow was easy to read, and you painted a picture of the situation very vivid. It was one that I enjoyed, and was able to feel your pain.

I found some grammar mistakes, but the message was too well conveyed that I over looked them.

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Ida


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Review of Bound by Her Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful. I wish that I could have found this type of love. I find the words inspired. The flow smooth. And the verses well written. I have enjoyed this read. I really think that you were able to warm my doubting heart. I am proud to have found this item.

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Ida
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting story. I enjoyed the read. Your words are chosen well. I find it hard to write in slang. I stumble with grammar when it comes to writing on acents of other lingo. This was a read that I would tell others to read. The picture of the swamp fight was very visual.

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Ida
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Review of The Right Path  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the way you told the story. I almost expected the person watching to have been a jealous female, and you took me by surprise. This was a well written story that was truly short, sweet, most of all complete. The words were well chosen, and the message came through loud and clear.

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Ida
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Review of Daft  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this poem. The flow and the rhyme kept me reading. This is a message is one that I have felt before myself, and so has most everyone I know. This is a poem that would be words from any waiting heart,. and I am glad that you have chosen to become apart of the Writing.com family.

Thank you for sharing this for you.
Ida
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