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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this page. I can not wait to meet my class mates. I have left a short bio, and I plan to be back to read those of my class mates. It is amazing how close strangers can become in classes like this. I am surprised how we can come together and help one another without ever seeing one face.

Thank you for all you do here at WDC.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Have found this to be true from taking other classes. Creating the character first makes for a foundation for the story. The better you know your people the easier you can write about them. The story seems to build its self around them gracefully. This page is full of great advice that is worth following.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida


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678
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really studying this page.I think that I will find so many useful help to grow as a writing. I am happy to be here. I can see that this is another serious class. I am ready to learn. I have read the prompt. I think that th lessons that I learned during Act One class.


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I cannot wait to work with you again. I truly enjoyed the class Act One. This is a well planned page, and I think that I really feel that forums such as this one is helpful for everyone who crosses paths with it. I hope that some time I will be as beneficial as people like those who teach are.

Thank you for giving me an opportunity to learn more.
Ida


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Review of The Third Child  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this item. It was very creative. The words were well chosen, and the picture was painted well. The story was fluent. It was an amazing read. You used dialog well. I find this a hard trait to be able to use to the best. I would like to welcome you to our writing.com family.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of a poem of mind  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Though I did see mistakes. I feel that they made the peice more believable. As I read the lines, I felt a little worried about the subject. I wondered if this was such as a good bye letter.

but ibwant god to come.
my last words i speak,
from my heart to my lips

Should this be

but i want God to come.
my last words I speak,
from my heart to my lips

I enjoyed the read, and it brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you for sharing this with us. Welcome to the Writting.com family.

Ida


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Review of Planet collector  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a message that many can relate to. I too know the feelings of seeing my heart with another woman. The flow was easy to read, and you painted a picture of the situation very vivid. It was one that I enjoyed, and was able to feel your pain.

I found some grammar mistakes, but the message was too well conveyed that I over looked them.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Bound by Her Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful. I wish that I could have found this type of love. I find the words inspired. The flow smooth. And the verses well written. I have enjoyed this read. I really think that you were able to warm my doubting heart. I am proud to have found this item.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting story. I enjoyed the read. Your words are chosen well. I find it hard to write in slang. I stumble with grammar when it comes to writing on acents of other lingo. This was a read that I would tell others to read. The picture of the swamp fight was very visual.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of The Right Path  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the way you told the story. I almost expected the person watching to have been a jealous female, and you took me by surprise. This was a well written story that was truly short, sweet, most of all complete. The words were well chosen, and the message came through loud and clear.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida
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Review of Daft  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this poem. The flow and the rhyme kept me reading. This is a message is one that I have felt before myself, and so has most everyone I know. This is a poem that would be words from any waiting heart,. and I am glad that you have chosen to become apart of the Writing.com family.

Thank you for sharing this for you.
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this idea. I will need to brush up on my gramar before I come back. I would love to tkae this on as a chellenge. However, I have been out of school for a while, and feel that I have to bone up on my vocabulary. I will be back after I have done so, and studdied the information above.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this Christian contest. I think that I will look through my port and see if I can find a poem suitable for such a wonderful oppertunity. I am happy to have found it. I can see that you have some serious members of our Writing.com family there with you.

Thank you for sharing this with me.
Ida
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Review of Follow the Leader  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful idea. I know that writing everyday our thoughts, feelings, or just things to get off our chest, can relieve and teach us so much. I like the way this page is set up. The way we get inspired off one another. I am going to think about entering this, but I have to consider that fact that everytme that I have tried, I have failed.

Thank you for sharing this with me.
Ida
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Review of Non-Humans R Us  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great place. Would this be a good place for someone who is learning to write about the subjects that are here. I have written a novel for last year's NaNoWriMo project last year. The story was about an alien who became king. The title is King Thomas. This is the only thing that I have written like this.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of The Pen  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The flow of this item is smooth. I love the way you are able to draw me a picture of your story. I have been there myself. Except by doing the NaNoWriMo novel challenge, I have killed a few (characters of course). This is a very nice read that everyone can relate to in one time or another.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida
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Review of God is in my life  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love this. I have seen many wonderful acts of GOd in my life. I was not susposed to the, Doctors said, have children. NOw I am fighting with my seventeen year old son to do his algerbra. I have two other children. ONe is eighteen, and she lives in another state. The other is in Middle school. God has blessed.

Thank you for sharing these words of testimony with us.
Ida
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Review of A Quarter To Six  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is well written. I get a little lost when it comes to milatary time and such. That being said, this was a great action packed item that drew me into the words . I was taken into watch the events unfold. The story flowed well, and it made an easy read to follow.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the flow. The rhyming is great but a little rocky at the end. I loved the message, and this is why I rated you a five. THe passion was in the words. I was brought back into another time in my life that was a painful place to remember. I think that this is a poem written from somewhere that every one has been at one time or another.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved the flow, and adored the attitude. I kind of read quickly through the G word, but replaced it with darn. Sorry it is a peeve of mine. You were able to take me into the story as I read it. The adult twist gave it a newness that was refreshing,

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the way you leave us wondering with questions about the body. Is it a real body? Was the body her agent that betrayed her? A lover that did? was the body really there in the first place?

The fun thing is that the answers can be anything that we want them to be. I love the flow of the events. I thinkg that this is a story well written.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida
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Review of List of Contests  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this idea. I wish that I would have thought of it, and I hope that you don't mind if I use the idea to format a page to reminders for contests. I love how organized the information is. The subtitles are a wonderful tool to see at first glance where you should be.

Could you send me an e-mail with the bitem for this item so that I wont get busy and forget it.

Thank yoIdau for sharing this with us.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am sorry that I got excited about your work, and forgot to write a review. I really think that I will enter more now that I know that it is not against the rules. I enjoyed thinking aobut the troops, and what they have done for us. I think that this is a great activity.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this idea of keep working under obligations. I would like to know if it is too late to begin in the activities. I have nearly lost my membership for lack of gps. If it weren't for other writing.com family members, I would not be still here.

Thank you for this opportunity.
Ida
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the way you wrote the love in all caps. I really enjoyed the read. This is a story was one that mose people could relate to. I have lost pets that still hold my heart hostage with many wonderful memories. This was a treat to read even with a head ache.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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