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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is hard to tell a story in such a few words. You have chosen the right words to get the job done. I can see the woman. I too am a child of July. I like the use of the mirror in this poem. I mean that is the one thing that I am afraid to focus on.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this story. I think that I will show it to my sons. THey love this kind of story line. I did not find any real errors, and I really found it entertaining. The flow was one that kept me reading. I was done reading before I realized that I had began.

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Ida


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Review of My Cat Tigger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I like this story. I have two cats at my house. Chopper rode under a milk crate with my two sons sitting on it from Kentucky to Florida. He is a Blue Russian. He is truly family. Morticea, is an Britch Tabby short hair. She is a year old. Chopper was fixed by the vet, but he still dose the deed with her. They run and play at the most inabt times. (when I want to sleep).

Anyway, this story is about to receive a thousand word review talking about my little friends and children.

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IDa


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the this item. I can relate to the question of what makes us happy. This itme created me thinking about deep issues like what do make us more content in life. What are the things that are truly important, and what is just things to stress us more.

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IDa


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Rated: E | (5.0)
THis is well written.THe message is one that is important to all. I find that there are no apparent errors. This has a smooth flow, and the words that you chose to use brought me into your story. One of the best lines in the item is "We live to learn."

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IDa


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Review of Dragons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The is a very cool poem. The males in my house are dragon obessed. They have all kinds of trinkets and pictures. I am going to let my fourteen year son read this. He draws well, and I think that he would love to draw it from the discription above. I will try to get it placed in my port.

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Ida


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
THis is a great well written. I like how it began, and I remember listening over and over to an answering mechine to hear the voice of the one that I loved. My attention was kept throughout the story. The story had a great flow, and the dialog was smoothe.

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Ida


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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I have tried to review many of these stories but this is the first one that allowed me into it. This is well written, and I can not wait for more. Sounds like Mike is going to have a challenging life soon. I don't know yet what the title has to dd with this entry, but I guess I shall soon know.

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Ida
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Review of Trapped  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is such a well written poem. The story showed the message about survival. The lines were well formed. There is such vivid picture of the bird fighting for its life that I could almost reach into the story to help it out. I am happy that Ole MR CAT down the road didn't find him.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the vivid world that you created for the Writing.com family. I like that we have a vitural world to interact with each other. I love the way you have the other members acting and greeting the newbies. You described the feel of first becoming a member of the family.

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Ida
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Review of I Wonder  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this poem. The lines are fluent. The rhythem is wonderful. I really love the emotion. I could feel the pain of being afraid of the connection and getting hurt from another who got to close. Then you feel the pain of self guilt for what another does. You told the so well that I was able to see the events unfold. I wanted to be there to say, "Its not your fault."

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BTW. You have a beautiful port. It is well put together, and the graphics are awesome.

Ida
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this article. I agree that sometimes the world tries to make us see who we are as unworthy of being one of them. If we do not meet with their perceptions of what a person should look and act like we begin to be an out cast. THen we begin to see our selves as less than we are.

I am a very over weight woman from a very skinny family. Even my children look anerexic (for give my spelling). NOw I love with a man who he and all his family are slim except his children. All girls ten, fourteen, and seventeen.

Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
THis is well written. you have brought me into your work. The flow of the story is smooth,and you were very vivid discribed. I am glad that I have found this. YOur dialog kept the story moving along from one paragraph to another without any glitches.

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IDa


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Review of The Sound  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was cute. The only thing is that I have to re-read to figure where the fire in the box come from. I loved the twist in the ending.It made me question if he had found the sound or if there was going to be another sound adventure. I found no mistakes. The flow of the story was excellent.

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Ida


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Review of Empty days  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this poem. We all have been here at one time or another. YOu were able to tell an interesting love story in a few lines. The flow was smooth, and the beat was fluent. I enjoyed seeing the image of love being found in the well chosen words. This was a very nice poem.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The more I read the more I like it. The dialog is moving the story smooth. The flow of the events are nice. The one thing that I did notice (since I have been having problems of my own in this area) is that you were able to keep a constant verbe tense. You do not go from past to present and so forth.

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Ida


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Review of The Wooden Pen  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was an interesting story. I loved the twist at the end. I have one question, however. The people in the end are dead that gets to relive the last day of the living? The story could be longer, and I would love more detail. This is a great thriller. This did belong in the news letter.

Thank you for a wonderful read.
Ida


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Rated: E | (3.5)
you have a mis-spell in the title. I like the poll. This is a very well written poll.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
First I am so glad that I found this in a newsletter, and the title really got my attertion. I could not keep from smiling. First thing is that I felt as though this was going to envolve three people. It seems as though you have one with you, and referring to another.

I love how you tactfully described the departments of the store and how items could be used.


Thank you for making me smile.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. It reminds me that all aging people don't just lay around waiting in saddness to die. Some live to the point that if Death is going to get them he will have to work out first. YOur dialog was smooth. You were able to carry your message through clearly.

Thank you for sharing this. I am glad that I found it on a news letter.

Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I will not comment on how I feel about the re-election. I only hope that he does have plans to create a better America. Children are dying, USA is broke, and right now we are a house devided. If someone doesn't see that, then we are not going to be the best country in the world.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the way that you brought me in with the discripitive question after the interesting title. I love the ghostliness of the poems. I would love to read this in a bigger story. For such a few words I really noticed the spiritial hue to it. I really think that this is one of my favorite shorts.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love stories like this. You were able to create the story right before our eyes. I could see Manny and Kelly. YOu were able to have us feel and be apart of the event that make up this story. It is well written. My favorite part is the way that you are able to discribe your characters.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very pretty poem, and I think that you did a great job. I love the morning sky. The colors are so beautiful. It doesn't matter what all is going on around us, the beauty of the sunrise dose not change. The beautiful colors helps us forget the pain that the world gives us for a moment.

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IDa


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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. It is hard to review short poems, but all I can say is that it is well written. I have problems writing good poetry in few lines. I admire those who can. Your poem has a great message. I love the way you chose to end the poem. It was visual and tied the end up well.

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Ida


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