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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. It reminds me that all aging people don't just lay around waiting in saddness to die. Some live to the point that if Death is going to get them he will have to work out first. YOur dialog was smooth. You were able to carry your message through clearly.

Thank you for sharing this. I am glad that I found it on a news letter.

Ida


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602
Review of CLASH!  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think that this is a wonderful idea. I am going to check out some of the entries to get a feel of how the contestants think and work. I am very interested in working on my character building. This looks like a great place to wrok them out, and I would get the feed back at the same time. The compition will encourage me to do my best.

Thank you for the opportunity.
Ida
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603
Rated: E | (5.0)
I will not comment on how I feel about the re-election. I only hope that he does have plans to create a better America. Children are dying, USA is broke, and right now we are a house devided. If someone doesn't see that, then we are not going to be the best country in the world.

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Ida


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604
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the way that you brought me in with the discripitive question after the interesting title. I love the ghostliness of the poems. I would love to read this in a bigger story. For such a few words I really noticed the spiritial hue to it. I really think that this is one of my favorite shorts.

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Ida


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605
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love stories like this. You were able to create the story right before our eyes. I could see Manny and Kelly. YOu were able to have us feel and be apart of the event that make up this story. It is well written. My favorite part is the way that you are able to discribe your characters.

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Ida


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606
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very pretty poem, and I think that you did a great job. I love the morning sky. The colors are so beautiful. It doesn't matter what all is going on around us, the beauty of the sunrise dose not change. The beautiful colors helps us forget the pain that the world gives us for a moment.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
IDa


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607
Review of Untitled  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. It is hard to review short poems, but all I can say is that it is well written. I have problems writing good poetry in few lines. I admire those who can. Your poem has a great message. I love the way you chose to end the poem. It was visual and tied the end up well.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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608
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. IT is well written. I feel the emotion and I feel the testamony in the words that you have choosen. I enjoyed the read. I am so glad to be able to read something that is not about all the evil stuff that the world has to offer us.

I know that if everyone took the time to notice the goodness in all we would be able to reach more people for God.

Thank you
Ida


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609
Review of The Quilt Block  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This story was wonderful. The emotion was raw and sensational. I loved how the grandmother had not seperated her grand daughter on the block. I was left wondering if the blond woman was Angle's mother since this was her grandmother's house. I think that maybe the mother came to say good bye to her own mother.

THank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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610
Review of The date  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this story. It has the twists and turns that make for a great story. I was shocked that I was able to know who those people were. I re-read it to make sure. I loved how she talked to the pack as if they were people in her family instead of her selves that have been hindering her life.

Great Job..

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Ida


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611
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I do not know if you have any mistakes, because I was nearly in tears. The story was told with such reality that I could see the two on the phone. I could see around one the brightness of heaven. I find that you were able to keep my attention and brought me deep into your story.

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Ida


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Review of Miseducation  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a well written poem. The flow creates a smooth read. The message is one that we know in one way or another. I loved the last stanz. I think that it was bold and brought the message to a complete close. This poem did not leave us hanging, and it created a deep emotion in me as I read it.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Family Matters  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is one of the most touching stories that I have read. I hate that families are torn a part by the memories that they have created. Some of the real, but others are rooted in jealously or anger. I loved the end. The way the mother had closed the chapters with her children to allow them peace was so sweet.

I could imaging being in that kitchen. To hear my mother talk to a sibling would be a bundle of mixed emotions. You covered this subject with beauty and tact. You were able to make me feel grief and pride at the same time.

Thank you for sharing this wtih us.
Ida


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Review of My dear husband  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the decending pattern of the lines. I miss the message in my life. I was married for sixteen years, but now I am divorced living with someone who I have now known for over ten years. We are soulmates that sometimes I wish the connections would be severed. I know that we will be together forever. I am surprised that I still believe in forever.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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615
Review of Starstruck  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is well written. I love the picture, and find that you did it justice with your poem. I was taken into your story by the words that you have chosen to use. You were able to keep my attention and focus on the lines of your work. THis is one that I would not have like to miss.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of HATRED  
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is well written. The message is strong, and I can feel the pashion. The words are well chosen. The poem flows well, and I could see that these words mean a lot to you. I am so happy to have found this. I enjoyed the read, and I do agree that hate is the one thing that destroys the entire world.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Grouchy Badger  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this story. I would love to see it in print. I love children stories that show emotions. You were able to show that sometimes when we see someone one way or they act one way, they may be another underneath. The story had a nice flow. I found no mistakes, and I loved reading it.

Thank you for sharing this for us.
Ida


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618
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Rated: E | (4.0)
THis has a good flow and the message is one that everyone can relate to if we tell the truth. I know that this is nearly an everyday event in my life. I can not find the keys to my house. Sometimes I loose them while we are visiting, and the trying to find them creats a delay for us to come home.

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Ida


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Review of Mr. Prendergast  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This story is well told. The message is one that I enjoyed reading about. I think that you are able to bring your reader into your work with well chosen words. I love ghost stories, and I attempt to write some myself. I find them a little hard to do. I loved the flow of this story, and I loved the way it was written.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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620
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this. It is so cute, colorful, and funny. The only thing that I would do different is make the font bigger do to us that have bad vision. I think this page should get more attention now. There is so much going on right that this should be turned to a posting or blogging page so that we all can discus the news.

Thank you
Ida
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Review of PE #2  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Are you going to turn this in to a novel or long work? I am really interested in reading more. I am glad to have you in class with me. You have been encouraging to me. THe assignments seem to come effortless for you. I would find it so hard to write about magic, but I love to read about it.

Ida


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622
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. I want to save it to my documents to help me create a wonderfull and functional writing protfolio. I find a lot of information here that I can not find anywhere else. This covers so much that I think you could create a class for this item.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Mother Superior  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well written and I found it intregreting. I was brought into your words. I think that this would make a good. This shows that this is one chapter that intices me to read more. I want to know more about the characters. I have enjoyed the read.

Thank you for sharing this with.
Ida


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624
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this is a great story. It is informative of something that has been a part of us for a while. I like the cause and effect of the story line. You were able to discribe the events vividly to your readers. Your words kept my attention. This is one of my favorite reads of the night.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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625
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The story is great, and it deserves to be a winner. I think that it is a well written item. It runs smooth. Your dialog helped the storyline to flow well. The discription drew me into your words. My attention was kept, and I enjoyed this story. NOthing that I can say can touch the winnings that it has already had.

Congratulations.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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