thank you for the opportunity to be part of your class. I think that it is going to be very helpful. I know that there is alot that I have forgotten since I was in school. English was my favorate class every year. I really feel like I have lost so much over the years, and would truly like to regain my skills of yester year.
So many people suffer from this disorder, and I am not totally sure that I am not one of them. I know that those around me are. This is a good way to help others to understand bipolar more.
This is well written, and the message was really a wonderful to point across.
Your stories ran smooth, and you were able to bring the reader into the your poems. I think that you are a very talented addition to the Writing.com family. This is a family. It is so cool how you can put alot feeling in the words of this story.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This is a very good song. I think that it is a song that can touch the hearts of many. The ending brought tears. I could see the story as if I were watching a video. I enjoyed this song, and the rhyme was entertaining to the same point as CMT.
I love this page. It is so informative, and it will certainly help me with problems that I ahve been facing. Could I copy this page for futher use? I am thankful for this page, and I am planning to follow the links that are pasted her. I like that you ask the reader for any suggestions.
I love this poem. It has painted the story so that I was there. I stood and watched the little girl hiding in the attic. I felt as if I could not leave her. I could not save her family, but she need me to stay by her side. I could see this story unfold as if watching a movie.
This is one of the most beautiful poems that I have read in a long time. The rhyme is smoothe. The words are very well chosen, and the flow is easy to read. I feel that this well written with a message that I can truly relate to. I am glad that you have found wdc. Welcome to the family.
I love the rhyme. It is so great to see the flow. I am happy to have read it. The poem is so cool. I found it to be entertaining and enjoyable. I think that the message that most of us can relate to. The flow really kept my attention. I am so happy to have found it.
This is a very good poem. It has a good flow, and it has a smoothe flow. We all can relate to the message. There are many things in my life that I would like to be ablet o redo. This is why I do my best not to make those regrets everyday. I hate feeling guilty or that I have missed something.
I find that this is a challenge. I have problems making dialog in plays. This contest can horn my skills in writing conversations. I tind this is a great chance to keep the writing traits up to what they should be. I really think that this is truly an opportunity. This is one challenge that I am going to tackle.
Thank you for taking me back to times of doubt in my life. It was well written, and a message that a lot of us can relate to. The stanz is smoothe. I loved the emotion that you are able to convey in your work.
Before I can be found by someone else, I must find myself.
Excellent. This poem is so up beat, and the message is so true. I love the rhyme. I find that this is well written. I love the way it almost screams out to those of us that are downers. The message is inspiring, and it is an encouragement.
It was a pleasure to read your words.
Ida
The rhyme is very smoothe. The message very clear, and I felt that it is a very important. However, no is a problem to me. I have the problem of allowing others to walk on me. I usually don't know how to say no.
The funny thing is that I don't use yes correctly. I don't use it for self esteem. This is a very inspiring poem.
I love this poem. It is very relatable. I have a person in my life that shared my thoughts and dreams. We were friends and lovers. Well, after a break of about three years, we found ourselves back together again. The sad thing is that (though we live together) we are not as close as we were then. I still have a lover, but I miss my friend.
I think that this is beautiful. The flow is smoothe, and the message was clear. I found the words to be well chosen and touching. You painted a wonderful picture with your words. You were able to keep my attention and draw me into you lines.
We all can relate to these words. I mean I am really touched by t he message that you are displaying. I had an anxiety attact last night, and I found your words describing the emotions that I felt during the night that never seened to end. I enjoyed the read.
This has a very good poem. I love the message it shows. The flow was smothe, and the rhyme made the poem an easy read. I found it to be true. it gives the reader insight into the mind of the poet.
Thank you for writing this and sharing this with us.
Ida
I really can relate to this poem. It is the way I feel right now. Things should not be the way it is right, but it is. I am in love with my soul mate that has forgotton how to love. Maybe he just don't realize what danger he is in about loosing what he isn't sure that he does have.
I love him too much. Every thought of my day is how to make him happy. This sometimes is too much for a person, and he finds no challenge in the relationship. It wont be long until I ask him to go, and I will remember his love. Then I will find myself in an empty room.
First of all my fav teacher and the people that has been mentors to me was the English teacher. I would like to tell you that I am sure that you have made a difference in a lot of lives.
I feel intemadated reviewing your work. Due to my spelling skills and rusty Language Arts skills, I feel unworthy.
However, I do love the cheer. I found it inspiration to my frightening new adventure of novel writing.
Thank you for making a difference in the lives of many, and for sharing this with us.
Ida
With the world what it is now, relationships are so hard to keep going. I think that this is a way to keep our eyes on what keeps us going. That is love.
We are so focused on money, work, and pokitics that we no longer spend the time needed to show the attention that is needed to keep our families together.
I think I may have a poem or two that I can enter (at different times. of course).
I love the way that you used the time line. It made it so easy to read. That being said, I think that this could bring in readers from school age to adults into the story. The flow was simple and calm. I found myself being a part of the work, and that is how things should be.
I enjoyed the read. It is something that could keep the attention of anyone from the grades 4 until adult. It is nice to read something that is universal for the readers. I love the dialog because that is a skill that I truly find hard to hone in. This is a wonderful story.
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