I like this poem. Your flow was nice, and you were able to keep my attention. I can see the love for the fossils, and I could see the wonder for them in your words. This is a great poem to share with us. The rthym was just great. I hope to read more of your work.
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Ida
I love this poem. I love the message. I love the vision. I can see a woman crying, and I have been in every situation mentioned in you words. I believe that there will not be one reader that these words could not have been taken right out of their heart.
THis poem is full of vision. I like the depth. The flow is easy and creates a great read. I like that you used a larger font. It is important for the reader to be able to read your work even those (like me) who have vision problems. I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and welcome to the WDC family.
Ida
This is a nicely written item. I enjoyed the way it was written. The rhyme was great and the flow really kept my attention. I love the message. I believe that the emotion and story will catch most reader's eyes due to the experiences that we all have.
A great item to write during the Valentine's season. I love that it covers an emotion that we all can relate to. I too have a soul mate, and feel your words. I think that you have a nice rhyme, and the flow makes this a good read. I do not really review for mistakes. I review for the story, and I am glad that I found this item.
This is a story told in poem form. The words brings the reader into the piece. It is the best way to tell the stories. It had a nice flow that made the item easy to read. The story is deep with a message that shows strong emotion. People can relate to your words.
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I wanted to take a look at the images here, but I see that there is some changes being made. I would have liked to share in viewing them. I am going to try to go to your port and see what else that we can share.
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I love the poem. The lines flow very well. The rhyme kept my interest. And the message was one that most of us can relate with at one time or another. I found this to be a enjoyable read that pulled me into the story that you captured in such few words.
I love the aged look of this picture. The message really is encouraging. I wonder how much of our country is made of workers such as these. Now, things are hard. I know that many people would be happy to have any job. Our for fathers worked the skin from their fingers to have what we are fighting to keep now.
This story pulls at the heart. I really enjoyed your work greatly. The story of the angle taking the man home after he had the chance to complete his life was amazing. I think that this would be a story that any one could write. We all will leave something undone. When the time comes we all hope that we will be given the chance, we hope to be given the chance to make the ending to our lives complete.
This poem is written at an great time. We are all happy to see our men come home. They have som many people that are waiting for them. I love the flow of your words, and the twist that you introduced at the end. I am happy to see such strong emotion brought to the reader.
You have a great poem. I am 43 and I took your words to heart. The rhyme is good, and flow is great. The message is one that touches many people. I think that this is one that is an investment to any reader. I would like to welcome you to the writing. com family.
So many people suffer from this disorder, and I am not totally sure that I am not one of them. I know that those around me are. This is a good way to help others to understand bipolar more.
This is well written, and the message was really a wonderful to point across.
Your stories ran smooth, and you were able to bring the reader into the your poems. I think that you are a very talented addition to the Writing.com family. This is a family. It is so cool how you can put alot feeling in the words of this story.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This is a very good song. I think that it is a song that can touch the hearts of many. The ending brought tears. I could see the story as if I were watching a video. I enjoyed this song, and the rhyme was entertaining to the same point as CMT.
I love this page. It is so informative, and it will certainly help me with problems that I ahve been facing. Could I copy this page for futher use? I am thankful for this page, and I am planning to follow the links that are pasted her. I like that you ask the reader for any suggestions.
I love this poem. It has painted the story so that I was there. I stood and watched the little girl hiding in the attic. I felt as if I could not leave her. I could not save her family, but she need me to stay by her side. I could see this story unfold as if watching a movie.
This is one of the most beautiful poems that I have read in a long time. The rhyme is smoothe. The words are very well chosen, and the flow is easy to read. I feel that this well written with a message that I can truly relate to. I am glad that you have found wdc. Welcome to the family.
I love the rhyme. It is so great to see the flow. I am happy to have read it. The poem is so cool. I found it to be entertaining and enjoyable. I think that the message that most of us can relate to. The flow really kept my attention. I am so happy to have found it.
This is a very good poem. It has a good flow, and it has a smoothe flow. We all can relate to the message. There are many things in my life that I would like to be ablet o redo. This is why I do my best not to make those regrets everyday. I hate feeling guilty or that I have missed something.
I find that this is a challenge. I have problems making dialog in plays. This contest can horn my skills in writing conversations. I tind this is a great chance to keep the writing traits up to what they should be. I really think that this is truly an opportunity. This is one challenge that I am going to tackle.
Thank you for taking me back to times of doubt in my life. It was well written, and a message that a lot of us can relate to. The stanz is smoothe. I loved the emotion that you are able to convey in your work.
Before I can be found by someone else, I must find myself.
Excellent. This poem is so up beat, and the message is so true. I love the rhyme. I find that this is well written. I love the way it almost screams out to those of us that are downers. The message is inspiring, and it is an encouragement.
It was a pleasure to read your words.
Ida
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